1. Is the story interesting?
2. Did I write a show-not-tell story, especially these recent chapters?
3. What do you expect from this? A bad ending or a satisfying one?
4. Am I fit to write a story?
5. What is the best and worst thing about the MNPOTS?
6. Is my grammar still shitty?
Any answer will be greatly appreciated, I know I'm not good enough but I'm trying my best. Anyway, I'll check this tomorrow since it's already late here in my country.
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Yes. Votes: 68 70.8%
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No, now fuck off and write more chapters. Votes: 13 13.5%
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Can you do mass release. Votes: 15 15.6%
Personall opinion
1: Yes it is interesting, one of the reasons why I always enjoy reading it while eating breakfast, you literally post most of the time when I have to wake up for work and I still think about the chapter at work.
2: not entirely sure, since I really don’t know what you mean with it?
3: Not really sure about the ending, never really thought about it. Am more interested in where the story is hedging. But would prefer a happy ending, where Mikael has a happy life with his harem.
4: Yes, you f*cking are. You have a lot of dedication for this story and would the story really be so popular if you weren’t a good writer.
5: I love the world and the characters and the fact that the Mc is not literally Jesus. Worst: that the chapters are short. Getting really hooked into the chapter and then suddenly end of the chapter. But you are posting 6 Chapters a Week so it’s fine.
6: can‘t really recall how the grammar was at the beginning of the story, but there are still a few mistakes here and there. Like a misspelled word here, or a forgotten word there, but nothing to major. And trust me it will take some time to get over these, hell I am going through the same sh*t with my story, which is why I can really relate to the problem.
All in all keep up the good work.
Thanks, since Attack on Titan end, I started thinking if I should make the ending sad too, such as Mikael dying.
@Pujimaki how about reincarnated as a bird too?
@Broman haha, yeah, we can do that! Haha,
@Pujimaki That awesome I just remind Resident Evil 8 ending Mc Ethan Winters die protect his Family as True hero