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Last call for Great Sage Readers to take the survey here. I'll be closing it by Sunday evening PST (23rd) so take it while you can. Thanks again for the participation and support!
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I miss this story!
Hello, just posting a comment to encourage Orange Rain that his readers are still patiently waiting for the new version of the story to come out, and see where the future takes Soar and harem
Para empezar sigue mi consejo y pongas mucho relleno por algunas veces aburre leer todo si no ayuda en la historia y sobre los actos sexuales no lo hagas largo por qué se te nota que no tienes experiencia en esa parte cuando trataste con la parte de las hadas, ahora me despido y que pronto comience la novela
Honestly, I loved Sarise as a character. Her whole demon culture added to the plot in that it showed MCs will to achieve his objective. If you are to add familiars then make it later in his late teens. Cause I sure as hell know I couldn't resist her fine ass at my best for more than a month. Maybe, a little less on the obvious I'm down to f*ck culture and perversions. I just mean that your story was amazing before the summons. Obvious inuendos to the lewdness of the fairies but never focusing on it when it took away from the progression of the story, but after the summons it was every chapter and a half focused on sexual aspects and hardly any progression of the story. Sarise was a testament of will to resist; obvious endearment, willingness to obey, unshakeable loyalty and dedication, exotic appearance and culture, and experienced warrior. All without making MC look useless. Honestly, she was number 1 girl. If I were to say anything further, it would be that you tried to throw to many permanent elements into the story and i'd suggest splitting these elements into different stories. I'm sorry if this came off as rude, I like your story and I'd like to see how it progresses. Cheers!
No problem, thanks for the comment! I do believe these elements would be better off in a different story that's more entirely focused on Familiars. I'd like to bring Sarise and Melody back into a story like that someday, but for this story, I'd like to put more focus on characterizing Soar's Fairies like the title implies.
@Orange_Rain
Sounds awesome! I'll definitely be looking forward to the novels you put out! Thanks for your hard work!
@Orange_Rain
Hey, just want to drop this comment for the Authors!
Apparently, there's a site trying to steal novels from ScribbleHub!
Recommend all Authors to check this out, and jump on these bastards if they stole your works!
https://www.royalroad.com/forums/thread/115351
@IllOmened I'll keep an eye on this. Thanks for the warning.