When I woke up again I couldn't feel any pain in my body. In fact, I couldn't feel my body at all.
I down on at myself, and realized I was but naked. But it was hard to notice even that. It was as if my body was transparent, you could barely see the outline of it. I tried to move my limbs and felt that they worked just as fine as they did before.
But when I tried to clasp my hands together they just passed through each other, as if they weren't there.
I stopped trying to figure out what happened to my body and looked around trying to get a feel for my surroundings. But all around me as far as the eye could see was white. I was just floating in an endless space of white and I didn't have a clue what to do next.
I floated around for a few minutes trying to process the situation that I was in. I was stuck in the middle of nowhere with literally nothing around me.
And that when I started to panic. I tried to float around looking for anything that could help in this predicament. A hidden exit, an explanation as to what was going on.
Just as I was starting to give up hope a bright shining ball suddenly appeared in front of me. I tried to block the light with my hand, but because they were transparent, it didn't quite work.
Suddenly a deep voice sounded from the shinning orb in front of me, " Welcome Reidan, you have been chosen. You shall be judged on your actions and your fate shall be chosen."
Huh, what's going on, is this the afterlife? So I really did die when during the car crash.
"You are indeed correct you did indeed lose your life during the car crash," wow so the glowing orb could even read my thoughts now, just great.
"But that was not the only life taken! You have been judged and have been deemed to deserve punishment. With your foolishness, you cost another their life and you shall now pay by living one of struggle and misfortune ."
What, what do you mean I cost another their life? What pain and suffering? What's going on?
I moved my mouth to ask questions, but nothing came out of my transparent vocal cords.
Then the shining bright light grew and grew and soon consumed everything including me as my vision start to go black.
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"WAAAA WAAAAA," I felt a small tap in my butt as I couldn't help but start to cry. I tried opening my eyes but all I could manage was a small squint which let me see the figures of a man, a woman, and other smaller figures standing over me. Then I felt my vision dim as sleep overtook me once again.
When I woke up again I felt less sleepy this time and was wrapped around in something really warm. I tried to move my hands but they were stuck under what I think is a blanket.
I tried to open my eyes again and this time I managed to fully open them. I tried to look around but realized I didn't even have the energy to turn my head fully. But what I could manage to see was that I was in the arms of who looked to be a slightly chubby middle-aged woman, who was looking down on me with a smile on her face.
"Come Feitan, your son had just opened his eyes for the first time, come quickly." I heard heavy footsteps approaching quickly as I saw the figure of a well built also middle-aged man come into my vision.
"Ahh, he has your eyes darling," I heard him say as sleep overtook me once again.
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I drifted in and out of sleep for a few days trying to get the energy to actually figure out what had happened to me. What was going on? The shinning bright ball said that I was going to be punished but this just seemed like another chance at life after I had wasted my last one.
After a few days of trying to look around every time, I woke up I finally had a sense of what my new home kind of looked like. It was an old wooden house with a small living room, attached kitchen, and one bedroom. I could see a large bed in the middle of the living room with a small tv in the corner. I had a small crib in the bedroom next to another bed that was already there. I had seen a little girl sleeping there, she looked like he was 5 or 6 years old, she would occasionally carry me around the house.
Of course, as a growing baby, I had to get fed too. As much as it felt embarrassing to get breastfed when mentally I was already 15 years old. But strangely it felt a little natural also, I guess that's because of my new body.
I was starting to think my punishment was to live a life of being poor, but I wasn't too sure. While my new family wasn't very well off, they could even be called broke compared to what I was used to, we still had a roof above our heads and food to eat every day. So far I wasn't really seeing the struggle or suffering that was promised.
Life went on and months passed as I continued to live life as a baby. After about six months I had started to crawl around the house, I was trying to find any books or other information that I could find out about my new life. So far I had gathered that my dad, whose name was Feitan, was a farmer. He was out on the fields every day, but now that winter was approaching I'm not sure what he would do. My mom, whose name was Marie, was a housewife. She looked after me, and my sister Alice. O yea, I almost forgot, my name in this life was the same as it was in my last life, Raiden.
Life continued to be easy and comfortable for another few weeks when on a certain winter day my dad burst through the house door.
"Marie take the children to their rooms, a herd of triceratops is nearby. They already trampled over Betir's fields," he said through ragged breaths, he had probably run back to the house.
I didn't think much of it as mom picked me up and placed me in my crib when I realized, did he just say triceratops?!
Lol at being reborn in DBZ being a punishment. Makes a lot more sense then it being a reward when you think about it.
Well he could make wishes for power from the dragon balls or learn magic personally would love him to explore more of the magic aspect
@Surfing_Cipher Or he wish for summon the Omnipotence relic Tri-force from Zelda II: The Adventure of Link i hear from other that Tri force has been use many times by different king save to his kingdom plus can increase your wisdom, power, courage by Tri force I wonder why no one ever try this wish
He can wish for complete form of Master Sword gold form with combine power of Four sword from The Legend of Zelda: A Link to the Past and Four Swords Game boy advance or he can wish all divine magic of Goddess Belldandy make him Overpowered and ability time travel to past, present, future, Teleport, plus dimensional traveler can back to his Original world reality prepare to enemy attack
https://omniversal-battlefield.fandom.com/wiki/Belldandy
@salvationhope mah I think making something like that is too much especially the latter part unless he is from namek for the first part and for the latter time travel is forbidden remember but he could ask to awaken his potential magic of course and while gohan and others fight on namik he could learn for guru no to mention kai or supreme kai
@Surfing_Cipher Indeed nice plan but i remember did Yamcha did that to in alternate story dragon ball, but if Mc fear death and don't want accident meet Overpowered enemy he can wish to had all had Divine magic with Immortality from of Goddess Belldandy for best survival and later wish summon Omnipotence relic Tri-force
Same here i looking for Mc starter being weak Struggling to Survive ! Price is wish Order get what he want from wish, Yea if he go planet namek first meet Grand Elder Guru he cannot ask for wish that being rude same happen to Yamcha ask Guru to read his mind Guru was shock he from parallel world and know what gonna happen from future them Guru unlock his potential
@salvationhope nai man just make him a good boy who trains in magical power slowly but surely and some action too but not that much as he is not a main character of dbz I want to replace him with kirrilin with the excuse he would take care of the kid he could stop growing old with magic but summoning alternate universe goddess sounds too much bs as I want him to make some imp actions and not be the actual hero of the kinds like mob in naruto universe story
@Surfing_Cipher Indeed BS That if he wish for goddess magic power is Godly power make Isekai Mc steal glory Other Original Mc i see why you choose make Mc hard work in hard way to respect Others Original Mc in Story i respect that your decision
But other Isekai fanfiction i read most Bs is Isekai Restaurant other world Mc is Chinese can access to his original world reality and others parallel world anime with Naruto, Dragon ball, Avengers movie, Resident evil Movie, Date A Live, Fate/Grand Order, Gabriel DropOut, Mc mission rescue Others Original Mc and Reward is They powers and stats plus you can invite them in Isekai Restaurant
@salvationhope I really don't like the infinity genre in general not only they break the immersion of your favorite story but they also sh*t on the stories by breaking its law using bs power that doesnt exist i mean really even if he could summon the goddess will zeno tolerate that I mean he is the god of everything so the goddess must obey this universes rules kinda like the one u mention I mean really ask yourself can a shut actually save the world or go through life threatening situations without a mental breakdown boi they can't even talk to someone across the street yet they somehow can befriend everyone and all girls fell for him (sorry for the rant) I hope author does this a job and finish this till super instead of letting go like naruto story his story is interesting
@Surfing_Cipher Indeed
DBZ universe is dangerous i would never wanna go there, there is always some thing or someone that tries to rule while destroying the world. Hell if you regard space-time continuum you may be born in world where goku head wasn't hurt during landing making him conquer the earth or you could be in timeline where goku died of virus, some of the timeline thingies can be very f*cked up.
So if you believe infinite world theory which i certainly do DBZ is one of the riskiest world unless u have cheats and hold on enough to get dragon balls, then namek dragon balls and somehow avoid dark dragon balls future(Dragon Ball Gt) and last long & Strong enough to get wish from Super Dragon Balls (which i have no doubt will be difficult without knowing the divine language, & champ has 6 of them) whose creator is op enough to create dozen universes.
the one who can accomplish this is a either a full cheating bastard of OP wishes or a chad of epic multiversal proportions/(those without Op wishes will be include in THE Chads)
@HellBlazeBlue yea agreed especially if u include those insane universes the best fanfics novels are the ones who knows the (anime universe ) rules making unique powers and handles him self instead of wishfullment where harem of every girl with mc making best possible solution I mean future/meta knowledge is op by itself
@HellBlazeBlue That why 50/50 chance lottery not all people got Isekai had happy life
I just remember some thing there similar to your said There some Chinese novel That Side Character got thunder in Sky he not get dead instead he develop portal Gate another world fiction he accidentally go Dragon ball world by mistake touch portal he most shock he in World that Goku got die in Heart virus most scary he almost die by Android 17 and 18 by stray blast but Kid Trunks help him If Trunks not there he already dead
When he wake up Bulma and Trunks there they said are you ok them he remember I must thanks back them helping them and he said I not from this world I came from what you call parallel world and I know your all story and about Time Machine, Bulma and Trunks was shock They learn the one gonna destroy they world not Android but Name Zamasu the one hate all mortal being
Side Character bring them his Original world by his ability portal gate prove his not from they world and he started to plan tell this two we create time machine faster go in past warning Goku team with Kami and Namekian when they go past they use normal 7 Dragon ball wish teleport us in Planet Namek and he go with Kami The Side Character he let Guru read his mind and let 7 Dragon ball use and wish for God language and second wish for Heart Medicine for Goku cure Virus Heart for Third wish he wish for food 1 year and he stay in Planet Namek wait for 7 Dragon ball charge again them later He combine 3 wish That Kill Zamasu gonna wish for Super Dragon ball and Teleport him where is Super Dragon Ball in alternate time and last wish he had Iron Mark 50 he can flight and Breath in space by protection by armor later he wish for Super Shenron make Mini Super Dragon ball same size by home normal home With Mini Super Shenron same Level of wish of Original Super Shenron bring them in my original reality in his real world he gonna use this help Future Trunks When Zeno erase Zamasu along with Multiverse, He use his Own Mini Super Dragon ball restore 12 Multiverse and Future thanks the Side Character the one save them
@salvationhope the first half was interesting not gonna lie while the second half was bs like I thought db universe is op abusable if one has slightest meta knowledge
@Surfing_Cipher Indeed BS, But If this happen to you and your life in danger u don't had choose but use your knowledge order survive for sure you will use Dragon ball or other wish relic in your Advantage order save the world and those trust you Even against your pride
I was surprised Side Character use that wish create own version Super Dragon Ball in his real world but Mini version same size of normal home, He Make wish his own Super Dragon that Earth avoid the end the word forever by turning Earth into Omnipresent exist both Past, Present, Future to be everywhere auto avoid Dying Universe that wish very clever
Be honest I was shock again he kill Zamasu second time make wish turn his own Mini Super Dragon ball into 3 wish That idea is smart move
@salvationhope actually I pretty sure u can't wish for more dragon balls u need namekians for that and if we are talking about wish aspect dragon can't grant something equal for above it ,hence another set of dragon balls = to present dragon ball thus need namekians for it I think I broke the plot
@Surfing_Cipher Indeed, I think Super Dragon The Owner not show up in story yet we don't know if he alive or death
There Debate That Super Dragon Ball Even Owner is death will not perish Even don't had Owner can survive is own We know there no Proof of it yet
That Dragon ball had weakness I discover from Jump force If Owner Namekian not go new world that Dragon ball go I mean Dragon Ball go real reality will stop function if Owner not there I mean The Owner is Power source, Both Owner and Dragon Ball same world order for Dragon ball go Activate
Here another I discover That Omnipotence and Omniscience Tri-force relic even go another dimension Parallel world the Lorule world even with no Power source of Owner The Omnipotence Tri-Force had own Power source can charge own wish even with no help from Original creator 3 Goddess
If I gonna wish from Super Shenron both had Omnipotence Tri-Force from Hyrule and Lorule from The Legend of Zelda A Link Between Worlds game bring them from reality and Go use time travel use Super Shenron again for second wish Both Omnipotence Tri-Force had 3 wish and another time travel again that make another alternate time line the third time Wish for Super Shenron both Tri-Force each 1 month auto charge the wish
The Side Character from Novel Chinese not has been think why not wish for Both Tri-Force from game 100% safely
There cool Story, The Marvelous Dragon Balls novel update to bad get cancelled because of covid 19
Mc got die in real word and reincarnation in Marvel Cinematic Universe, He been Reincarnated as Human with Mini Dragon Ball and he Power source of it even he not Namekian, If Human Owner die The Mini Dragon Ball will stop function
It is, the dbz earth is a death world if you look at it.