Chapter 18 – While One is picking up girls…
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Eli, now dressed in a light blue skin-tight buttoned shirt, showing off his toned body, black leather jacket on top, light blue jeans as well as black boat shoes. He had cologne and deodorant on, and also a $200 silver watch on his wrist. After checking himself in the mirror, making sure his clothes and hair were fine, He nodded and left the hotel.

It was now 9:00 pm, the time where the nightlife starts. Eli relaxedly walked towards a place just a few minutes from him. Mott haven bar & grills. He was already 24 and had little interest in clubbing. But to pick up girls? A local bar was more than enough. Besides, he was hungry.

When he arrived at the place, it was absolutely jam-packed! While the place had its fair share of dudes in it, the number of women actually exceeded it!

Looking around, he saw a table with 3 good looking girls and an open chair, so he went there and asked with a smile, "Hi, can I sit here? The place is absolutely packed, and you seem like a fun group."1A very generic and genuine opener. It will not make you look like a total creep, And it really works. At most, they will politely refuse by saying that the seat is taken

The three girls looked at the guy and saw he was an absolute hottie. They immediately smiled and one of them said, "Sure, come join us! We were just about to order."

Eli smiled and sat on the chair and offered a handshake, "I'm Eli, What are your names by the way?"

The left girl, that was black with a moderate figure, looked like a 7.5, and wore casual clothes, shook his hand first with a smile, "Alaia, nice to meet you, handsome." When she shook his hand, she was rubbing the back of his hand with her thumb, obviously hitting on him.

The girl on the right was a Thicc Latina and wore a blue one-piece and was a 7.5, winked at him and shook his hand next, "I'm Fatima darling. But you can call me anything you want."

The girl in the center, an Asian girl wearing a long green skirt, who looked like a slim doll and looked like an 8,  shook his hand last with a light smile, "Please call me Kailey." Unlike her two friends, she was more reserved, but the faint blush and fidgeting couldn't hide from Eli.

Eli laughed to himself internally, "Looks really do make things easier..." It really was easier than in the past. Usually, it took a lot more effort to achieve the same result, but it fell to his lap just like that! If it wasn't for the fact that he was right now desperate, he would even attempt to try and hit on the best looking girls in the bar, but this will do.

What Eli did not realize, however, was that his looks could now be easily classified as a 9.5 male model/celebrity. Vitality changed Eli not just in terms of looks, but even made the hormones he let out more attractive to women! Also, the confidence he let out was attractive, and he looks masculine with all the muscle he has. In terms of 'Value', he outstripped all three girls. For the girls, he was a catch that was supposed to be outside their range!

After ordering food and drinks, they chatted together. It turned out that the three girls were 21 years old college graduates who lived together, and Fatima was celebrating her 21st birthday, so her two friends went with her to have a drink.

After the group finished eating, they started drinking Jameson shots. The girls actually encouraged Eli to drink more, and he ended up drinking 6 shots of creamy whiskey, although it barely budged him. In the end, Eli paid 200$ for the food and drinks + tip as a birthday gift for Fatima. The girls invited Eli to their shared apartment, and so they hailed a taxi and drove there. Kailey was in the front seat, while Alaia and Fatima sat on both sides with Eli in between. The two girls giggled as they rubbed his inner thighs and chest, half drunk.

While Eli was picking up girls, Another group was dealing with something else...

 

 

 

10:30 pm In the 40th precinct police station.

The deputy chief of police just arrived at the scene.

Investigator Nick greeted him and started the briefing, "Just like the two previous times, we found dead MS-13 gangsters, 44 of them in total. But this time, all of them were shot to death with little to no resistance whatsoever. There were no cameras here, so we cant know what was happening. However, we found a smuggling tunnel down in the basement, leading to under the bridge, along with a tied up and gagged gangster. The said gangster seemed to be in shock. He was moved to the station."

The deputy chief nodded, "Alright, Like last time, I want a gag order on this case, and we will take credit for it. Let me first question the guy you brought in, where is he?"

"This way, follow me."

They walked for a minute before they reached a closed interrogation room, with a one-sided transparent glass where the gangster was sitting inside the room, cuffed and waiting.

The chief signaled to the operating guy to turn off the camera and audio, and he walked inside and sat down in front of the guy.

The gangster and police stared at each other for 20 seconds, before the deputy asked, "Name?"

"Facundo Mancebo."

"Age?"

"33."

"Occupation?"

"MS-13 gangster underling."

The deputy chief raised an eyebrow, before continuing, "Do you know why you are here?"

"No sir. I was too knocked out to know anything."

"When we arrived, 44 dead gangsters were found upstairs. You are the sole survivor in the whole smuggling racket of yours, congratulations."

"I don't feel like I am that lucky though..."

"Now, I would like to ask you, why were you tied up on the floor? Did you hear or see anything while you were tied? And where are the goods you were smuggling?"

"I want a promise before I answer you that."

"And that is?"

"I want to enter a protection program. I'm tired of being a gangster, but I couldn't pull out. I want a fresh start."

The deputy chief contemplated for a moment, before nodding, and he agreed, "Alright, it can be done. But you will need to also provide information about your gang. And also, I want you to keep silent about this case."

"Alright, deal. I will be frank, I think I saw a ghost! I was knocked out in a completely impossible manner since I had a visual of the entire room and the entrances but received a hit on the back of my head. After I woke up, I witnessed the crates in front of me disappearing into thin air, as if they did not exist! I know this sounds crazy, but you gotta believe me! Those crates contained a lot of weapons, many of them even military-grade!"

The deputy chief sighed and said in a resigned manner, "I wish I didn't believe you, I really do. But what you say...Is most likely true. You probably know about the two other places, right? They were raided the same way as this time by an invisible entity, just that there were no survivors. That's why I am saying you're lucky. I have a question, did you do anything, and I mean, ANYTHING, that could lead to the pity of whoever, or whatever, did this?"

Facundo contemplated for a full 30 seconds before he remembered something, "I think I do know something! One of the newbies cried about the gang being too dangerous and needing to support his family, so I offered to cover for him so he can leave! That's right! Is the kid alive?! If so, I want you to extend the protection program to him too! I can't cover for him now, and he is in danger!"

The deputy chief nodded and asked for the name and address of the guy, or perhaps phone number, before leaving the room.

After he exited the room, he talked to a colleague and asked him to pick up the young gangster. After that, he talked with Nick, "Seems like our killer has a conscience! Or at the very least, a twisted sense of morality. And also, he is now a heavily armed invisible killer. I think this is getting beyond us. You go find the young gangster he talked about, I will go talk with the higher-ups."

 

 

 

11:14 pm at the girls' apartment...

Fatima asked, "Wanna play truth or dare?"

1-2 chapter foursome up next!

Also, do you think I should have described the girls more? This is pretty much cum and dump, with no main heroine or anything. Do they deserve anything more than a simple introduction?

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