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Not a Chapter but fun fact #9
Welcome to NaCB#9!
The reverie arc was short but dear god is it full of words.
I really had a lot of fun writing it. While the first chapter was difficult to write as I wanted to play on the unknown of Viola status regarding Rick and Robin, the others were not.
True the second one is practically just a retold of the events of the fic, just for Vivi and while it was the least fun of the chapters to write. It’s the one I took the most pleasure to read.
Here are the fun facts:
- Vivi should have not reacted like she did at all.
- Instead a long sex scene would have happened. I decided otherwise, because Vivi would have been so OOC… I couldn’t stand it. Besides we already have Hancock and Kaza on the crazy lusty side which is more than enough.
- Kaza and Tsuru both would have been present as a witness for the fight with Shiki.
- The fight with Shiki would have been shown and not just a footnote. I decided otherwise because well… Shiki is just a footnote. Nobody really cares for him.
- Eri should have tried to fight Rick.
- Kaza was originally supposed to be very aggressive with her words towards Rick. But that would have been OOC for her, and would have been counterproductive to the bit of character development single motherhood brought her (mainly patience). She found out that being a single mother was better than being second in command of Garp.
- Eri has always been supposed to have her mother’s “madness”. I turned it down a lot though and just showed a glimpse at the end of the revelation chapter. I did turn up to eleven Kaza’s in the next though.Her fans ( if she has any), would have been pleased I think.
- Hancock was not supposed to appear at all as a trip to Amazon Lily wasn’t planned.
- Hancock's appearance will have “important” repercussions later.
- Tsuru was not supposed to turn her coat here, but further along in the story. It would have been even more radical, but I decided otherwise and to bring her possible involvement with the R.A slowly.
- I toyed with the idea of Rick meeting Nojiko, but decided against it. Perhaps in the alternate Fan Fic where Rick stays in the Marines, if such a fan fic ever comes to the light of day.
Now the chapters:
- Chapter 105: Altered quote from the Broly episode of DBZA
- Chapter 106/107: Quote from Avatar Roku ( Avatar the last airbender)
- Chapter 108: Star Wars Empire Strikes back
- Chapter 109: Famous latin idiom.
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Just wondering... are there any plans for little Eri to ask Papa for his D?
That's a secret
If there is it's far ine the future as Eri is just twelve.
Age is just a number.
Jail is just a room.
Oyakodon-😏🤌
Yo, loved how the chapters did come out.
Also, what happened to raiju? I figured she would board the rick train before he was all taken.
I hope that Eri gets along with her siblings. Yes she needs 12 years of daddy time, but his other daughter needs him too. So Hancock is pregnant, I'm surprised robin or nami isn't yet.
Reiju will have her moment after Wano.
Eri is ten years apart from Lynda, so ti may be difficult for her to get along but she's as much Rick daughter than she is Kaza's, soooo...
Hancock is pregnant again yes, because we see saw little of her. She will have her own part to play and perhaps a chapter or two dedicated to her.
I'm actually surprised at my decision, I'm not a very big fan of her and I added her to the harem because well... I was hesitated at the time and some readers wanted her in the harem. She was supposed to just be note on Rick bet post with her obessive personnality and all but the more I write about her the more I had ideas to actually make her relevant. Not THAT much relevant (at least for now) but relevant none the less, be it as a plot devise or just as a tool to develop characters.
As for Nami and Robin... It's been months since he saw the later three weeks, the former. Nami had s*x once at the fishman island before her jealousy marathon on their way to Big Mom, she had plenty of times to get on birth control.
On the other hand Robin which has zero s*x drive and didn't expect to ever have s*x again didn't need to, so who knows?
I did gave a more or less explicit hint about Robin at the end of a chapter.
@Hrist_Waltz Oooh a pregnant robin would be so interesting to see how overprotective he gets.
They actually have birth control? I figured they were a few hundred years from that point.
I actually like Hancock, I hope she can be more than just a plot point.
Honestly the more I thought about it, I'm ready for luffy to be done with his journey. I'm looking forward to rick taking over the government, and the slice of life chapters, with sex, kids, and weddings.