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As I added to authors note: Break until ~15th, I'm rewriting older chapters, getting them profesionally edited for the betterment of the story.

But this is going to be the only time I rewrite this novel, as such I want to make sure it is right. And to do that, while I might have my own opinions, I want to also know what you- readers liked/hated the most, so that I can improve on the bad parts, and keep the good ones.

I obviously prefer comments, but I know many of you are too lazy to do that so I also included an extensive poll! Yey!

Changes you want to be made
  • Start the story in the future, when snek is stronger, and then include flashbacks Votes: 5 7.6%
  • Keep the story from weak to strong Votes: 48 72.7%
  • Increase the action/plot density Votes: 6 9.1%
  • I like current plot density Votes: 26 39.4%
  • Increase the number of normal life events Votes: 14 21.2%
  • Side story with more human characters that will meet MC Votes: 15 22.7%
  • MC should get stronger faster Votes: 20 30.3%
  • More mystical stuff, like prologue judgment and old snake story Votes: 4 6.1%
  • Less mystical stuff, more snek Votes: 27 40.9%
  • More lore (but more interwoven to the story) Votes: 13 19.7%
  • Less lore Votes: 3 4.5%
  • Current lore levels are okay Votes: 34 51.5%
  • MC should be more proactive Votes: 15 22.7%
  • I want to understand MC motivations more Votes: 13 19.7%
  • More snek family Votes: 28 42.4%
  • More dream-mind infiltrations Votes: 22 33.3%
  • More fights Votes: 5 7.6%
  • Less fights Votes: 3 4.5%
  • More split personalities Votes: 16 24.2%
  • Less split personalities Votes: 23 34.8%
  • Improve your writing style Votes: 18 27.3%
  • Current writing style is okay Votes: 15 22.7%
  • Moving and sad parts (brother goodbye, mother) more Votes: 6 9.1%
  • Some philosopical questions maybe? Morality of jacking minds? Votes: 6 9.1%
Total voters: 66
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