“-however, a point of concern is likely the fact that Amin, as well as the two human priestesses Yannie and Cara who came with him, all have either assassin or spy classes. As none of these three have fought with demons, it is clear that they obtained these classes from means that we would consider despicable. Therefore-” (Aleesha)
“Murderers. That’s what you’re telling us that they are.” (Vhau Vamellen)
Aleesha frowned as she was interrupted. “Therefore, it is natural to draw the assumption that the humans are murderers. But I’d like to reiterate that humans are weak, and their inherent weakness is what I believe to be the reason for why they fight among themselves.”
“How so? The centauri are weak as well, but they don’t fight.” (Vhau Heyleene)
Aleesha moved her gaze to councilor Heyleene. “How would our society be different if we had no druids? Would we have enough food to feed everyone? And if there was a drought, what would happen?”
“Spare us your hypotheticals, Shau.” (Vhau Vamellen)
Aleesha’s eye twitched before she let out a sigh to calm herself. “Humans fight over resources: fertile land being one of the greatest. Because they are weak, they have fought each other when they had to in order to obtain the necessary resources to survive.”
Vamellen snorted. “Ridiculous.”
“If they lacked food, they could simply grow more, no?” Councilor Heyleene asked curiously.
Aleesha resisted the urge to pinch the bridge of her nose. …We’re not as different from humans as I thought.
She had understood from her conversations with Amin, Campbell and Andrew that the human leaders, the so called nobles, were often detached from the reality of the lives of their people - which was another factor why they were willing to start wars on short notice. And in a way, Aleesha had realized that the councilors were similar; trapped in their own perception of the world.
But the difference between the humans and elves was that no single elf could lead their people to disaster. It required a majority of wise elders to make the same choice - though Aleesha occasionally wondered whether their supposed wisdom had been lost.
“Yes, they can try to grow more.” Aleesha let out a sigh. “But frankly, when compared to the life on Whildernae, the plants and trees on Teyrin seem sickly. Like the life that was about to be swallowed by the desolation. And without druids to maintain them…”
“As long as there’s enough of them, it should be fine, right?” (Vhau Heyleene)
“Not if there’s a drought, or some other kind of disaster.” Aleesha replied. “Their world has large seas, which seems to make the weather quite extreme.”
The councilors discussed amongst themselves for a while, until Councilor Vamellen’s voice broke through the murmurs. “Are you saying that we should accept humans, as they are, as our allies? They eat flesh!”
“Are you suggesting we intervene?” (Vhau Heyleene)
“That’s exactly what I’m suggesting!” Vamellen exclaimed. “If we must move soldiers to Teyrin sooner or later, we might as well do that now, and save the lives from the fate of being eaten!”
“With all due respect!” Aleesha exclaimed as she rose from her seat. “As I understand it, the races on Teyrin do not eat flesh merely because they desire to, but because it’s necessary for their survival! Even if we were to invade and try to stop them, they’d merely end up starving!”
“Then our druids can help them grow more food!” (Vhau Vamellen)
“Isn’t that exactly what Amara is asking us to do?” Councilor Heyleene asked as she cocked her head with faint amusement. “If we were to do what Amara requests of us, then we can indeed help them make food. If we help them so there is no shortage of food, they won’t be eating flesh out of necessity, no?”
Aleesha nodded in agreement to echo her words. “Exactly!”
Although that wasn’t the reason for why Amara suggested we send druids, it still aligns.
“Are you suggesting we surrender to the will of an outsider, Amara? A human?” Vamellen snarled.
“I’m suggesting that we review her request not based on what she is, but on what her request is.” (Vhau Heyleene)
“Then you’re suggesting the same as granting Amara a seat at this council?!” Vamellen exclaimed. “It’s an outrageous suggestion!”
The conversation was brought to a halt by the rumbling interjection of the sapling. The sapling, who normally stood silently with its eyes closed, had been acting strangely ever since Aleesha brought the news that they found Teyrin; with its glowing eyes fixed on her, and slowly moving the tendrils on its arms, it seemed restless. [This one recalls how your race consumed flesh when your kind first arrived on Whildernae.]
Several jaws fell open at the sapling’s declaration, and Aleesha soon realized she numbered among them. …We used to eat flesh?
Vamellen fell back into his seat with a shocked expression as he muttered. “...Impossible…”
[It took many generations for your race to adapt. It was not a forced change, but rather a choice the elves made one by one, after living alongside us and the centauri.] (S)
The room was silent for a long while, before Aleesha hesitantly decided to use the opportunity. “Since the wise elder says so, then it is evidence that we can make humans change as well. Without forcing them.”
“““Hear!””” (Vhau Heyleene)(?)(??)
Vamellen let out a sigh as he looked over at the other councilors. “Then, what about Amara? Are we to give her an equal voice in this council?”
The councilors looked at each other thoughtfully, before Aleesha’s father suddenly spoke. “Why do we not speak with Amara first? The prophet is waiting outside, is he not?”
Murmurs of agreement sounded through the chamber, and Aleesha left to bring Amin. Before letting him enter, Aleesha cast a translation spell on him so he would be able to converse with the councilors.
When Amin stood before the councilors, he surprised several of the councilors with his strange mannerism by bending an arm over his chest with a respectful bow. “Well met, respected elders of the elves. I am Amin, the prophet of Amara. For what it’s worth, I’m also a prince of the Alarice Kingdom, though I may have been disavowed.”
“Well met, Amin of Teyrin.” Aleesha’s father, Feynhil returned his greeting on behalf of the councilors. “For the sake of clarity, may I ask what exactly does the title ‘prince’ mean?”
“...It means that I am of a royal bloodline. The royal families are those who rule the kingdoms on Teyrin.” Amin explained after a moment of thinking.
“From what we understand, your next generation of rulers are not chosen based on merit.” Feynhil cocked his head. “Is that true?”
Amin frowned for a moment. “...It depends on the kingdom in question. In some kingdoms, the next ruler is simply the firstborn child of the king or queen, while in kingdoms such as the one I’m from, the crown is passed on based on both merit and blood.”
Whispers were heard between the councilors. Aleesha was suddenly reminded how she had felt during her first hearing with them, and stepped closer to Amin and told him a quiet warning. “Don’t take offense if they suddenly say outrageous things. The councilors have a habit of…airing their thoughts, no matter what they are. They don’t mean anything unless they are voting on something. And you don’t have to answer things you don’t want to.”
Amin glanced at her and nodded with a faint smile. “I’ll keep that in mind.”
“From what we’ve heard, you are an assassin that hasn’t fought the demons. Is it true that you have commited murder? That you have killed your own kind in cold blood?” Vhau Vamellen suddenly asked in a sharp tone.
…I was afraid of that. Aleesha suppressed as sigh. Though, I’m also curious about it.
Amin’s eyes widened momentarily in surprise. With a faint smile, he nodded. “I have.”
Murmurs erupted among the councilors. Amin merely stood as if he was unaffected by the reaction, until Vhau Heyleene raised a question. “Who did you kill and why?”
Amin frowned and was silent for a while. “...A noble who had become an obstacle for the good of the Alarice Kingdom. He was preventing a trade agreement between the kingdom and the naga from being carried out.”
“Why was that a cause to kill him? Are your people not allowed to choose who they want to trade with?” Vamellen asked harshly.
“They are.” Amin replied with a faint smile. “However, the nagas weren’t trading with him, but with the kingdom. All he needed to do was let them use his port, but he kept making excuses that the presence of nagas would spread fear. In the end he was judged to be more trouble than he was worth.”
Aleesha furrowed her brow. The nagas have no qualms about eating humans, right? I can understand why the noble was afraid.
“But why-”(Vhau Vamellen)
Aleesha’s father suddenly cleared his throat to interrupt the councilor. “I believe this subject will be lengthy and require a hearing of its own, where we learn more about how human society operates.” After the councilors muttered murmurs of agreement, Feynhil turned his gaze to Amin. “We’d like to speak with Amara. Would that be possible?”
Amin nodded. “One moment.”
Aleesha watched how Amin stared at the floor with a distant look. She had noticed that Amin did so whenever he spoke with the goddess, likely because he didn’t want to offend anyone by staring at them without seeing them.
Amin suddenly looked up at the councilors. “Amara says hello.”
[This one greets our new goddess.] (S)
The councilors suddenly seemed awkward as the sapling had spoken to Amin without hesitation. Heyleene was the first to speak, once they settled down. “I believe I’m not the only one who is wondering about this, but is Amara able to hear what we’re saying?”
Amin glanced at the sapling. “Not if it's telepathic. In that case I need to relay the words myself.”
[This one can pray to the goddess to be heard.] (S)
Amin frowned and was silent for a moment. “Amara says it’s difficult to discern an individual voice from all the prayers she’s receiving. So she apologizes, but your prayer might be lost among the crowd of voices.”
The sapling was silent for a while before its rumbling voice once again sounded in Aleesha’s mind. [This one believes the goddess has yet to understand how prayers work. This one greets the goddess Amara, and hopes to stand with her on the field of battle.]
Aleesha’s mind went blank by the force behind the sapling’s words. Judging by the reaction of everyone else, and how Amin flinched as he almost lost his balance, she wasn’t the only one who thought it had been excessive.
Everyone were silent before Amin looked at the sapling with surprise. “...She heard you. Amara asks how you did that.”
[This one imbued its voice with mana.] (S)
You can imbue your voice with mana? I mean, wardens do that to draw the attention of their enemies, but you can strengthen your telepathic voice as well? Aleesha looked at the sapling curiously. “Can we learn to do something like that too?”
[This one knows learning it is the same as learning telepathy.] (S)
Aleesha fell in thought as the councilors erupted into murmurs. Telepathy is notoriously difficult to learn. For saplings it's easier than for us, but…
Maybe we could create a spell for it? After all, Amara can create new spells that-
A loud banging was heard on the doors that led to the chamber. As everyone turned their gazes to the door, an elf peeked its head in. “The sapling Zenon is about to arrive.”
Everyone had surprised expressions on their faces. Aleesha’s father was the first to recollect himself. “Let it in.”
There was a tense silence as they waited. To Aleesha’s knowledge, no sapling had ever requested to take part in a meeting.
As a result, when the pale sapling entered the chamber all the elves in the room rose and bowed their heads. Amin, who didn’t have the same kind of reverence for saplings, didn’t do so immediately, but rather did as everyone else did when he realized he stood before a notable individual that even the elven leaders were showing respect to.
“We welcome you, wise elder. May we ask what brings you here?” (Feynhil)
It has to be because of Amara. Word seems to travel fast between the saplings.
Zenon stopped in front of Amin and looked at him wordlessly with its glowing, yellow eyes. After a long while, it spoke with a force that was even stronger than its comrade. [This one greets the goddess Amara and her prophet. This one is Zenon, and was once known as the prophet of Alarice.]
Everyone was shocked, not only by the force of Zenon’s telepathic words, but also their meaning.
…Prophet of Alarice?
“...Well met, Zenon. I am Amin. Amara greets you as well.” (Amin)
Aleesha looked at Zenon with a furrowed brow as she felt complicated over the revelation. “Why didn’t you tell me that you were the prophet of Alarice?”
[This one recalls you never asked.] Zenon was silent for a while, seemingly realizing that the explanation was poor before the sapling elaborated. [This one was a prophet a long time ago. This one still holds the title, but has not heard from Alarice since before your race arrived on Whildernae. This one’s title is now meaningless.]
Everyone was silent, unsure of how to react before Amin broke the silence. “Amara asks if you’re here because you have a request.”
A safe assumption.
[This one, and those like this one are at Amara’s disposal.] Zenon replied. [This one asks Amara to tell us how we can help her.]
“Hold on!” Vamellen exclaimed. “Are you going to make yourselves subservient to Amara? She is human!”
[Amara is our goddess.] Zenon replied without hesitation, as if the statement somehow explained why. [This one asks Amara to tell us how we can help her.]
“That’s not a sufficient reason, is it?” Heyleene asked with a raised eyebrow.
Everything was silent as they waited for the sapling’s response. Aleesha could hear when Zenon’s eyes moved in the cavities of the sapling's face when it turned its gaze from Amin for the first time since entering, and looked at the councilors.
A moment later, the yellow light in Zenon's eyes seemed to glow brighter, which made a chill run down Aleesha’s spine. Her intuition told her that the change was akin to a silent warning - a prelude to whatever would happen next.
And her intuition was correct, because immediately after a deafening creaking was heard as the world tree seemed to be twisting, making the floor underneath Aleesha’s feet move and make her bend her knees for balance.
Several of the councilors let out gasps or yelps in surprise. But it was clear that the world tree had somehow responded, as if expressing the faint anger that laced Zenon’s voice when the sapling spoke moments later. [This one remembers the heavenly war. This one remembers who saved us. This one remembers who taught us how to protect ourselves. This one does not need to explain its reasons to you any further.]
As Zenon’s voice faded from their minds, everything seemed to calm down as the light in the sapling’s eyes returned to its usual dim light. As if its outburst had never happened, Zenon returned its eyes to Amin and repeated its request. [This one asks Amara to tell us how we can help her.]
None of the councilors dared to speak after the sapling's outburst. Aleesha, who had spent a lot of time with Zenon during her investigation of their records, was even more shocked.
Did Zenon really have this kind of side? And how did the world tree act according to Zenon’s will?
Noone actually knew much about the world tree, other than that it was precious. Aleesha had found out that Alarice had helped the saplings create it, but she knew nothing more than that. She didn’t even know if it had a will of its own, or was an extension of the mobile saplings.
Amin cleared his throat awkwardly as he broke the silence. “Amara says she’ll need help in collecting natural resources and processing them, such as all different kinds of metals. She will also need to…create tools as well as mass produce things such as paper. Which means…that she’ll need to fell a lot of trees.”
Aleesha wasn’t sure whether it was Amara who hesitated or Amin, but the reason for the pause was evident. The saplings were much akin to trees, and making the assumption that a sapling would be offended by such a request was not a wasted caution. The councilors, who knew what a sapling would think of such a request were unsettled, and several of them opened their mouths to object.
However, Zenon surprised them both by how quickly he responded, as well as what he responded. [This one and its peers will help if that is what Amara needs. This one regrets felling our younger cousins, but we will do what is necessary to bring victory. This one and its peers will take on the task so it is done with little suffering and little impact on Whildernae as a whole.]
“Amara is grateful for your understanding and help.” Amin replied. “She will also need craftsmen and researchers - people that are willing to create the things she requests, or study the knowledge she provides. Once we have both resources and manpower, Amara will give us instructions on what we should create and study.”
Zenon was silent for a while. [This one believes this one’s kind will be of poor help with such tasks. This one’s kind has slumberous minds, that makes learning new knowledge take a long time. This one’s kind does not have any experience in creating items either. This one belives the centauri or the elves would be of greater assistance.] Zenon turned his gaze to Aleesha. [This one wonders if you can help gather those that can help Amara with these matters.]
“...Of course.” Aleesha nodded. She knew that she was acting without the council’s permission by agreeing, but her intuition told her it was the right thing to do. Both in order to maintain the relationship with the saplings, who had just shown that they too could get emotional when pushed, but also because she believed that the council would eventually agree regardless. They just had to debate about it for a day or two, in order to vent their concerns.
The light in Zenon’s eyes vanished for a moment, before it returned. Without replying, the sapling turned towards the door and walked out. Aleesha suspected that Zenon was satisfied with her response, but she still thought it strange that he suddenly chose to leave.
“Where are you going?” Aleesha asked curiously.
[This one is going to fulfill Amara’s request.] (Zenon)
As the sapling went out of sight, Amin spoke quietly to Aleesha. “...Not the best at socializing, are they?”
Aleesha shrugged with a faint smile. “Saplings live solitary lives. Communication isn’t their strong point.”
As Vamellen cleared his throat behind them, it reminded Aleesha of the councilors’ presence. Several of them had angry or annoyed expressions on their faces, and clearly weren’t willing to let Aleesha’s insubordination slide.
Aleesha smiled at the councilors. “I’d like to finish this meeting so I can fulfill the wise elder’s request. Unless the council disapproves?”
The councilors exchanged conflicted glances. It was Vamellen who eventually spoke while giving Aleesha a harsh glare. “Volunteers only, until we’ve discussed this further and made an official decision. Understand?”
Aleesha returned his glare with a smile. “Of course, Vhau.” But even when you’ve discussed it, it would still be limited to volunteers. We have never forced our people to do anything, other than when we’re at war. You’re just saying that because you want to express your dissatisfaction.
…Perhaps I could convince Zenon to visit our meetings more often?
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Almost immediately after they left the meeting, Aleesha heard the news that the world tree’s branches were swaying. It had caused a small wave of panic among the public, as nobody knew why. And the few saplings who had been present at the world tree, who were the only ones who would know with certainty, had all suddenly uprooted themselves and left for an unknown purpose without saying a word.
But once the news spread that the prophet of Amara had arrived, and that the world tree reacted during the meeting between a sapling and the prophet, the centauri were quick to jump to conclusions. And the conclusion that had dominated the discourse for days was that the world tree was celebrating.
Aleesha disagreed with that conclusion, but she had no better explanation either. She would have thought that the world tree was angry, as if echoing Zenon’s outburst during the meeting, but when she witnessed the swaying branches herself, they didn’t seem threatening. Rather, it was if the world tree had merely…woken up.
But Aleesha found that explanation equally unlikely. Why would the world tree wake up at a time like this, rather than when the demons were invading?
Whatever the reason for the world tree’s actions and what those actions actually were, Aleesha had little time to think about it. Because people were now returning to the world tree in numbers they hadn’t done since the war.
Aleesha held speeches a few times a day to inform the new arrivals on what had happened and what could be done. The centauri had been delighted that they now had contact with their goddess, and had wholeheartedly thrown themselves onto the task of helping; Aleesha didn’t even have to ask for volunteers, they simply volunteered themselves, or began helping in what manner they could without even listening to what needed doing.
The elves were the ones who were the most hesitant in helping. That was the largest problem for Aleesha. She needed people to do research and crafting, for which the elves were the best choice, as they didn’t have a short attention span like the centauri or saplings. While the centauri were curious, they also tended to consider everything a game. The saplings on the other hand, had the right mentality for performing research, but they would often get distracted by their own thoughts.
Aleesha was relieved when Amin told her that Andrew was willing to send a smith and an enchanter with the next batch of migrators to Whildernae. Both were few and far between on Whildernae, and Aleesha knew that she would need competent people in every branch of crafting.
Is this why Amara suggested that everyone gets general education? That way, you would know that everyone has at least the same basic knowledge and skills. Now…I have no idea what people can do, unless I ask them.
The matter of introducing public education had also become one of the things of highest priority for Aleesha. She knew that even if they began now, it would take several seasons before the effects began to show.
Fortunately, the council didn’t seem as reluctant to introduce it as she expected. The issue of finding competent individuals had always been a problem, especially during the war. Thus they managed to decide merely in a few days that after one season, education of the first batch of elves that would become the teachers would begin. Leading up to the start, they had time to decide what should be taught, as well as find teachers.
Amara proved instrumental for the curriculum, as she seemed to have an endless supply of knowledge for them to choose from. She even had clear, specified suggestions on what should be taught, most of which Aleesha had never even heard of. And when Aleesha asked Amin, he turned out not to know anything about what Amara was talking about either.
It all made Aleesha feel awe and somehow understand how Amara had been chosen to become a goddess. She was a being that truly had a wealth of knowledge that was simply beyond their comprehension. Amara had sternly disagreed with that statement, saying that the knowledge could be obtained as long as they were willing to spend the time learning.
And time was one of the problems when it came to educating the centauri. The large centauri had lifespans comparable to humans, but the smaller ones didn’t live for longer than five or six seasons. The fact that the centauri lacked proper leadership was an issue as well, but they eventually drew the conclusion that it was best to simply educate all the races together, and those with shorter lifespans would not be required to spend as long learning as those with longer lifespans.
But despite all troubles and questions that arose with the sudden changes, Aleesha felt invigorated. Because she realized that in the end, she was witnessing a time when they were changing the course of history. And everyone else seemed to know it as well, for even though the city under the world tree's branches was less populated than it had been during the height of the war, it was bustling like it never had before. For Aleesha couldn't remember if she had ever seen her people celebrate without the lingering presence of death on their minds.
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[Bang!]
“Aleeshaaaa!!” (Fawn)
Aleesha looked at the centauri that broke into her office as she was in the middle of a meeting with Amin. Before she had time to rise from her seat, Fawn had already darted through the room - which involved slipping and skidding on the floor - and planted her face against Aleesha’s neck.
Glancing at the door, Aleesha saw how Zanadell stood with a helpless expression and shrugged her shoulders.
Willful as always. Aleesha realized a smile had spread on her face when she patted Fawn’s head. “It’s good to see you again, Fawn.”
Aleesha felt how the cloth that covered her shoulder seemed to get wet as Fawn sobbed. “I knew you’d be back!”
“Of course I’d be back.” Aleesha replied with a smile. “Whildernae is my home. I was just going on a trip.”
Fawn smiled with a tearful face as she eventually separated from Aleesha’s shoulder. “I heard you found They-...Teirun? …Turin?”
“Teyrin. We did.” Aleesha smiled and gestured towards Amin. “In fact, Amin here is a human from there.”
Fawn’s head flew from side to side as her gaze darted between the elf and the human. Suddenly, a large grin spread on her face. “Oh, I see!” Fawn turned her eyes to Aleesha with a teasing smile. “So you finally followed my suggestion!”
Aleesha tilted her head as she tried to remember. “What suggestion?”
“Oh, don’t pretend you don’t remember!” Fawn giggled and grinned as she hopped around the desk and took a closer look at Amin. From Amin’s reaction, it even seemed a little too close. “Ahuh, mysterious…dangerous…oh, how delightful! I should have expected that to be your taste! I approve! You brought home an excellent toy boy!”
Aleesha blinked in confusion. However, Amin seemingly understood what Fawn meant, as his face reddened before he replied. “We’re not-”
“Oh, please! That’s exactly what a toy boy would say!” Fawn said with a grin before she backed away from the human and grinned at Aleesha. “Really, I’m so happy you followed my advice! I always thought you seemed stiff, and…well, you still seem stiff. Maybe it wasn’t enough? Yes, you probably need more than one! That must be it! Do you want me to help you find more? I have excellent connections, and-”
“Fawn, I have no idea what you’re talking about.” Aleesha said as she let out a sigh. “What’s a toy boy?”
Fawn blinked repeatedly. “Oh, you forgot?” After glancing at Amin, she pointed at him. “What he is. After all, he knows what he is.”
“I’m not a toy boy!” Amin retorted.
“That’s what they all say! Really, why do they always deny it? At least, that’s what all of mine have said-oh!” Fawn gasped as she seemed to realize something. “I have to let you meet my kids! You’ve been gone so long you never had time to meet them and-”
“You have kids?” Aleesha asked as her eyes widened in surprise.
“Three!” Fawn declared proudly. “They’re adorable! Though, the last one seems a bit dumb, but maybe he’ll grow out of it - I hope he does, anyway. I wonder why he’s stupid though, because his father seemed smart. It makes me wonder how those things work, you know? Because he has spots that are exactly like mine, and-”
“I’d love to meet them, Fawn.” Aleesha said with a smile.
“Of course! Oh, I forgot, will you be their godmother?” Fawn moved back around the table and grabbed Aleesha’s arm. “Please? You will, won’t you?”
Aleesha couldn’t help but feel a little bit troubled, as she knew that her duties would make it difficult to spend time on helping Fawn to raise her children. But she also realized that if she didn’t agree to it now - for the only person who was a friend that she didn’t make through her duties - then she likely never would in the future.
Actually, isn’t it just a sign that I need more hands to help me? Let’s add that to the top of the list. After all, the number of things I need to do keeps growing faster than I can-
“Aleesha?” Fawn suddenly asked with a broken voice.
Ah. Aleesha smiled and patted the back of the centauri's small hands. “Of course. Sorry, I just realized that-”
“Great! I knew you were a good person!” Fawn exclaimed with a grin. “I’ll get out of your hair! Speaking of hair, could I have some more of yours? I’d like to…no? Okay! Anyway, I should go! After all, I need to tell everyone! You finally got yourself a toy boy, and that we can soon expect baby-Aleeshas-”
Aleesha blinked repeatedly as she heard the last word. Baby-Aleeshas?
Turning her eyes to Amin, who was pinching the bridge of his nose with a red face, Aleesha suddenly felt reluctant to ask him. Instead, she looked to the door, where Zanadell met her confused gaze with a strange expression.
“Zanadell, what is a toy boy?” Aleesha asked.
Zanadell let out a long sigh as she began explaining.
Moments later, Aleesha darted after the centauri with a boiling face. “Fawn! FAWN!”
Thanks for the chapter !
Before letting him enter, Aleesha cast a translation spell on him so he would be able to converse with the councilors.
==> casted?
Everything was silent as they waited for the sapling’s response.
==> "Everything" or "Everyone"?
None of the councilors dared to speak after the saplings outburst.
==> sapling's?
who just had shown
==> Maybe "who had just shown" would be better?
That was the largest problem for Aleesha, as she needed people to do research and crafting, for which the elves were the best choice. They didn’t have a short attention span like the centauri or saplings.
==> Maybe: "That was the largest problem for Aleesha. She needed people to do research and crafting, for which the elves were the best choice as they didn’t have a short attention span like the centauri or saplings."?
This one is Zenon, and was once known as the prophet of Alarice.
==> Ooooooooooh!
Why do I feel like Fawn's younger child will be an important character in the future? hmmmmmm
Nice chapter! More more more more more!!!
"Thank you for your suggestions! Corrected!" (Ezme)
We'll see about Fawn's children...though you did just give me an idea. Thank you!
You should probably do another proofread of this one, I noticed two glaring issues but there may be others.
1: [This one recalls how your race consumed flesh when your kind first arrived on Teyrin.]
2: While saplings were curious, they also tended to consider everything a game. The saplings on the other hand, had the right mentality for performing research, but they would often get distracted by their own thoughts.
So the question the chapter clearly wants me to ask is 'what purpose does the world tree serve?' but the questions I'm going to ask are:-
1: How would Zenon have reacted if Amara had suggested sustainable tree farming?
2: How can the 'wise' elders of the Elven council be so apparently stupid?
3a: How much of Elven history is known to the Saplings? And 3b: Would they be willing to teach if Aleesha asked?
"Really, how could the author miss such obvious mistakes? It really makes one wonder how-" (Fawn)
Ahem. Thank you for spotting those!
To answer your questions:
1. If Amara wants to continue farming trees, then it will likely be taxing for the saplings - sustainable or not. Amara does however suspect that it won't be appreciated in the long run, but until she can get their civilization to the digital level, she will have little choice. The saplings aren't quite that fanatic however, as they do understand the big picture. A lot of their reluctance has to do with vanity rather than kinship for non-sentient trees.
2. A lot of the elven elder's stupidity has to do with that they can't imagine a society without druids. They expect the life on Teyrin to be as 'strong' as life on Whildernae as a result, which are able to provide fruits regardless of season.
Essentially, it is like trying a make a human of a modern, prosperous country understand how society would work without electricity. It's so deeply nested into our society, that grasping the full extent of how different society would be is difficult - even more so if you don't have the knowledge granted by history.
Another reason for their why they are stubborn, is because they tend to be quite conservative and prideful. This is partly because the elven leaders undergo a 'mentorship' before becoming councilors. It's essentially a bunch of ideas, values and guidelines that is passed down from mentor to student, and is different for each family line.
And despite their claims that elven leaders are selected on merit, by default, they are all descendants of different lines of elven leaders. When a new councilor is needed, it is normally the former councilor's offspring that takes up the mantle - because they have been taught for the position. The position is not guaranteed for them, but few elves wish to become leaders, as it means they need to dedicate their lives for their position and people. Thus the competition is more or less non-existent. And that especially means that stupid people can become rulers.
3a. The saplings know about the elven history all the way back to from when they set foot on Whildernae. They also know what they have been told, or what they have been able to surmise. Such as how the fact that Alarice and her brother stopped coming, during the same period as elves showed up, feeling from a fallen world. And said elves may or may not have approved of the divine twins.
3b. The saplings might be willing to teach. However, few of them are as good at communicating as Zenon or the sapling inside the World tree. Essentially, the saplings are willing to do almost anything if Amara asks them, and most things if Aleesha asks them.
@hauntedwritings I suppose I shouldn't be that surprised about the saplings and trees given Elves and meat, which itself is an interesting (but in no way bad) break from tradition, here's hoping that someone (preferably a certain elf with influence) takes an interest in their history.
I could also imagine it being great fun to just sit with a sapling and talk Whildernae history and philosophy over tea for hours but maybe I'm just strange. It's also a bit of a shame about the dwarves, assuming they are as good at engineering and construction as their typical fantasy kin are, they would be an excellent asset if it were possible to manage reconciliation with the elves. To close out my rather random collection of thoughts here, how do the bows of Whildernae compare to modern metal based bows? Not that I expect they'll still be in service by the end of the century.
@Adam_Kafei I've been plannin a scene where Amin and Zenon have some time as prophet-to-prophet, in which we might learn a few things about both the saplings and their relation to the gods.
As for the dwarves, I'm not entirely certain yet what they would be like. I suppose since they have been mentioned, a natural choice would follow the usual engineering trope. A lot of the races in my story are based on what already exists in other works, but with some form of twist.
To answer your question regarding bows: the presence of mana on a world can have some unforseen sideeffects. More of this will be revealed throughout the story, but for the purpose of making a bow, one could say that the greatest quality bows are far superior to any modern bows (regardless of material or design). This is because all life can grow stronger by being exposed to mana, and this includes non-sentient life.
And that is without the influence of druids. Druids can amplify those effects further. Depending on what type of tree we're talking about, it can make the wood stronger, more durable or lightweight compared to its Earthen counterparts (the elves use wood as armor for a reason).
With all of that in mind, the bow would still be unenchanted. Depending on the craftmanship and the enchantment, a bow could border on being able of launching an arrow like a rifle fires a bullet. However, such bows are rare and take a long time to make. But the standard level of a bow used during the war with the demons was still, at least, comparable to the best modern bows.
@hauntedwritings Note to self: Never agree to arm wrestle a Whildernae elf.
I suppose the best questions I have now then would be to ask what effect mana has on non-organic materials? Do you get mana soaked metals or perhaps even condensed or crystalised mana? And what kind of effects would they have?
@Adam_Kafei Mana influences all matter, be it organic or non-organic. But the further up it is on the scale of sentience, the faster and more profoundly those effects can be seen when it gets exposed to mana. However, mana does not manifest itself on the material plane, but could be considered to exist on a parallel plane, where matter and mana excert forces on each other through the dimensional membrane.
It does however lead to things such as mana-soaked metals, if they are left in a mana rich environment over VERY long periods of time. In fact, that is what the strange metals Amara has seen are. In short, mana can make unstable elements stable, strengthen atomic and molecular bonds and support molecular structures that would otherwise be fragile. It can even help two different elements bind and stay together, similar to what occurs in stars, though that is a sensitive process that can easily be disrupted, which is why certain metals are so rare and precious.
@hauntedwritings Interesting. Is it theoretically possible, perhaps using magic, to artificially reproduce the effect?
@Adam_Kafei Imbuing a material with mana like an enchanter does is an artifical method of reproducing that effect. However, imbuing without purpose would yield mediocre effects at best, if one doesn't have the knowledge of what imbuing actually does to the item.
In the case where one wants to make a specific kind of metal, such as some of the ones Amara has seen, it requires further steps - as some of those aren't merely formed by being exposed to mana, but also to things such as high temperature and/or pressure while being exposed to mana.
@hauntedwritings Lots of science to be done then.
@Adam_Kafei "SCIENCE!!" (Amara)
"Yes! Science! ...What was science exactly again?" (Ezme)
@hauntedwritings Its a bit late of a response but seeing the comment on bows have you seen Joerg Sprave's "Instant Legolas" device which is an attachable mechanism which when added to any bow serves to drastically augment its combat effectiveness makings a bow effectively into a semi automatic weapon.
That coupled with bows use of elastic potential energy also means that the strength of the materials(both the arrows and the load bearing components of the bow themselves means if you have super materials then you are far less limited than ballistics which are limited by the amount of chemical potential energy within a given round of ammunition.
With an assisted loading mechanism you can reinvest much of the energy needed to draw and release the bow so it can partially overcome the higher strength criteria to use making it potentially far more versatile and deadly as a weapon. Would change the look of the bow quite a bit if implemented and incorporated into the weapon design rather than just an attachment. Also note that without legal constraints (i.e. regulatory laws on crossbows and firearms in Germany) it could be improved more in terms of combat potential.
Interestingly the tools and materials needed to make one were actually available during the Medieval period, it is just a matter of no one thinking to do such a thing as it applies many principals that were developed to improve firearms and applies them to a bow instead so without the prerequisite experience designing a similar ranged weapon it is unlikely for them to come up with the idea on their own.
This sounds like exactly the sort of thing Amara would be able to rapidly utilize to great effect given it has been demonstrated IRL and really does bring most of modern fire arms advantages to an existing period bow for example it was tested with a replica English longbow (see the test Shad did of this on his YouTube channel Shadiversity ) and even if memory serves the bows used by Mongol horsemen meaning yes it can be used effectively mounted. The ability to add it to any bow (given the bows correct dimensions of course means much of their preexisting weaponry could be rapidly modernized to compete with military assault rifles. And that isn't even considering how with magically enhanced wood there wouldn't even need to upgraded to metal based designs. Again it would be unenchanted. It really is that amazing of an upgrade with a shockingly simple device. ;)
Honestly the addition of the target reticle and the device itself guiding the arrows automatically into the optimal firing position would probably have the most impact as they remove much of the need for trial and error to get the positioning correct and by allowing smaller narrower arrows with higher draw weights you greatly increase the range by cutting the amount you need to overshoot to hit the target.
Also can they perhaps grow trees into desired forms? That was done IRL for some applications by limiting the direction a tree could grow in. There is a lot which can be done with wood beyond just planting and cutting down a tree. Trees are a lot more complicated than most people think in general as plants do appear to actually have a rudimentary nervous system analog capable of forming memories and learning. It is only comparable to a nerve net of more basal bilaterians and cnidarians in terms of action potential signaling rates and organization but yes plants do effectively have a "brain" in their root systems.
Really plants do most of their important biological functions within their roots the vegetative part of a plant for most species is more analogous to our arms and legs while the roots carry out functions analogous to our heads and torsos i.e. behavior, memory, respiration chemical and even soil adapted acoustic wave signaling. And that is just the plant itself as the mycorrhizae associations plants form with fungi add a whole otehr level of complexity as the complex symbiotic associations constantly manage trade exchanges with both the plant and fungus working to optimize their transactional benefits.
Turns out plants and fungi beat us to the internet by about 450+ million years. As a general rule thus evidence is strongly building towards plants being sentient in the similar sense as jellyfish and flat worms they just live at a much slower pace than we do. The dynamic active nature of plants and fungi can be only really seen in its full sophistication under time-lapse. To them a season is experienced more like how we experience days even the slowest animals move at a breakneck pace to plants.
So yes it is bad news for vegans looking to escape worry about consuming other creatures yes plants have an analogous pain response. Also plants can be absolutely ruthless in their pursuit of resources in competition plants will even strangle and or attack each other it just takes place slowly and primarily below the ground. Probably the coolest discovery regarding plant behavior is one of their big defense mechanisms of literally sending specific S.O.S. signals corresponding to a perceived animal attacker to signal to that attackers predators. For example the freshly cut grass smell is a chemical signal sent to parasitoid wasps to come and kill the presumed insect attackers. If you live near still relatively intact natural environments you can see this in action in person as the wasps come and swarm the cut grass clippings it is fascinating to watch. Nature is f*cking metal it is a shame many of the S.O.S. defenses are broken as they signal to predators that no longer are there to hear the call, dial a wolf to repel deer doesn't work if their are no more wolves to call.
@Dragrath "...Amazing..." (Ezme)
Thank you very much for your added insight! I've actually come across both JoergSparve and Shadiversity during my research, and I agree with what you've said.
Now, regarding bows and other projetile weapons, most of the technology on Whildernae is 'simple' because they don't need it. As is being implied by their use of druids, they have more than enough food, it means that they have no need to develop advanced weapons, other than for subjugating the occacional monster (or the demons, when they invaded). The reason why their weaponry hasn't advanced much in that field, is because most of the people on Whildernae essentially create their own weapons - and when they go to war, they have the numbers to overcome the demons anyway. The only problem for them are the high-level demons and the demon lords, for which projectile weapons, regardless of how advanced, have limited effectiveness.
On Teyrin, it's all down to one thing: cost. Most of the combatants are drafted civilians in the wars between the kingdoms, and the people in power see no point in putting excessive resources in equiping them with better-than-average weapons (nor researching such either). Just like we had on Earth - even if it was possible, it didn't become mainstream.
However, Amara might indeed push for her people to develop such weapons. We'll see - she might just be focused on making them create firearms straight off.
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The druids can indeed make trees grow in the shape they desire, to an even greater extent than we can. In fact, that's how the elves build their homes - it's trees shaped to give shelter against wind and rain.
However, in order for them to grow things such as items, they first need a 'model' so to speak. And most of the wood Amara needs is for firewood and paper, as well as making specific tools. But I suppose the druids would start growing what they can, rather than cutting down trees when possible, and will raise that point to Amara when they see that they can do it to fulfill Amara's requests.
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Regarding how plants essentially 'exist' in the roots is something I considered when writing the saplings. It's why they don't have a mouth, since they get nutrition through the roots and the air. Without lungs like those mamals have, there's no way for them to speak through vocal cords either - which is why they communicate through telepathy. And they might have other ways to communicate as well, just like your example with cut grass, that us fleshlings don't realize.
"Damn. Nature is scary." (Amara)
@hauntedwritings Thanks for the reply glad to see you have taken things into consideration.
Also thinking about it why does Amara need wood as a source of paper? What really matters is the pith of the plant for example the Egyptians used Papyrus a species of wetland sedge for their paper. Frankly the use of trees as a source of paper is rather inefficient.
She could also probably substitute the use of fire wood for other dried vegetation you would need to be careful what plants you use but the same is true for wood hence why you should never burn pine or Eucalyptus unless you *want* to burn your house down or trigger an explosive fireball/firestorm.
After all many Gymnosperms including a lot of pines fight back against angiosperms through arson to the degree which many species can't reproduce without fires as their seeds need fire to germinate. Many conifers when mature self prune their lower branches and grow thick protective bark to insulate their living tissues allowing them to survive ground fires which in turn can be started via all their old shed needles allowing them to regularly clear out younger plants not adapted to take the heat. It gets even more intense competition wise however as in Scientific American some years back there was even an article talking about a species of pine that has evolved to counter the ground fire promotion evolutionary strategy by evolving to induce crown fires to wipe out the canopy. This then ensures its own progeny dormant as fire resistant seeds in the ground will be able to germinate under open sunlight. Eucalyptus and some species in the birch family like quaking aspen likewise have their own fire strategy by fortifying their roots against fire they can ensure they will be able to spring back in the face of a fire. . This general reliance of fire among conifers is also why Christmas trees are an enormous fire hazard.
Flora are capable of remarkable levels of both cooperation and competition. I imagine a sapient conifer or eucalyptus would be a huge pyromaniac. Really much of the flora from the American Southwest, South Africa or Australia would be hard core pyromaniacs. The point is that plants likely would be a bit more ruthless given increased agency than most people assume.
@Dragrath Amara mostly wants paper made out of wood because she is trying to reproduce the 'quality' of modern paper. The main purpose she needs it for is printing - which is touched on in the following chapters. With some concerns over things such as how ink gets absorbed, all she knows (like myself) is how that with modern ink and paper it works well. So she is going the safest route she knows, which is to get something that works, rather than researching the best possible option. That, she intends to leave to her fellow mortals to figure out for themselves.
In a lot of ways, Amara is an engineer rather than a scientist. Things just need to be good enough to work, and shell be satisfied and move on.
Although I'm not sure whether I'll go that much into detail on it, you can assume that at some point, the mortals (elves, humans and centauri on Whildernae in particular) that work on providing Amara with paper for her purposes, come up with better solutions for both fueling fire and creating paper. This is true for other things that Amara will request her people to do for her.
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Nature is indeed quite amazing. A while back I learned how oaktrees have a habit of producing large amounts of acorns every five or so years, the reason being that they need to be transported away from the parent tree - for which they employ squirrels, who are natural hoarders and forgetful. Whom forget about a significant portion of the acorns they bury.
By producing low amounts of acorns for several years, they are able to keep the squirrel population at a level where the acorns during the boomyear are essentially guaranteed to be buried and forgotten by the squirrels. It's nuts.
@hauntedwritings Yeah speaking on oak masting years there actually had been a species of dove in North America known as the Passenger Pidgeon which had evolved to take advantage of oak masting years since different species mast at different times thus by migrating from one area when the masting year ends to another where oaks would be masting the next season they were able to reap the bounty of the oak trees evolutionary efforts to keep acorn caching animals in check allowing them to reach populations in the billions. Alas humans put an end to them through a combination of mass deforestation of the forests they relied on across the continent, the introduction of poultry diseases and yes the industrial scale harvesting of the birds as cheap meat without regulation. Sigh humanity for all that we are capable of when we put the effort into it we as a species are also prone to shortsighted actions at the expense of ourselves. >_<
@Dragrath Ah, nature.
Though it's a shame regarding the damage we do, least we can be certain it will find it way even if we've f*cked ourselves over. ^^