Sitting by the beach and recalling the memories and dumb stuff we did, I couldn't believe myself to have befriended these guys.
Rose might be the first person to have connected me to the world but these guys had been by my side since I stepped into society.
Jude, the pathetic guy whom at first got dragged into my side and slowly becoming my best friend.
Mark, the smart one out of the group and the most calm out of all of us who always been someone to depend on when it counts.
And Edgar, the hopeless romantic who joined our group due to blackmail-I mean a friendly invitation to our gang.
The four of us are kinda stuck on each other and they had all been centered around me which is kinda stupid since I've only been helpful for them.
I never had any proper friends since as a kid but seeing that I bonded strongly with them, I kinda feel... peace with these crazy guys.
"Jude.... Do you think me and Kathie..." - Zekie
Out of all the friends I have, Jude is the person who once I've kinda trusted before we parted and this guy.... he is like a caring brother I never had....
So, saying my feelings towards my girlfriend and trying to straighten up my mind, I want to ask him how should I proceed this.
"..... and thats the gist of it man. I love her but I always feel that I'm not good enough for her...." - Zekie
After explaining my conflicted mind, he just stood there motionlessly as he drank while looking at the can in contemplation.
He then turns to me and....
"D-dude! What the hel-" - Zekie
"You Dense Motherfu-" - Jude
He glares at me and pours the contents of the alchohol into my face as his face is a bit flushed.
"Zekie, do you still want to continue running away, even after all this time?!" - Jude
".....!" - Zekie
He threw the can into the ground as he felt a bit lightheaded as the alchohol in his system had kicked in on him.
"Ugh.....Listen man. Just remember that you can't run away from your problems everytime. Did you even forgot the promise we made at that time?" - Jude
".... Yeah...." - Zekie
To what he said, even if I'm a bit flushed, I still was sober to realize what he meant as I took out my wallet and taken out a piece of paper which was old and tattered but still retained a drawing from the past.
'Look at this big bro! This guy go woosh and that guy got boosh into the ground. I saw that in the TV, those superheroes can do cool stuff.' - Zekie
'Cartoons? Thats what they are called? Cool! I wish I could do that as well! Draw one, write my own script and even build so many stories for me to share!' - Zekie
'Video Games? I could do that since I also be a Video Game Maker as well! Be playing as a superhero and whatnot!' - Zekie
"Ziks, you still want to be a Game Designer? Animator or whatnot?" - Jude
"........" - Zekie
I just stood there in silence, glancing at the paper I held in my hands while Jude stares at me before looking at his emptied can on the ground.
"Meh. It tasted like crap anyway, I'll head back and get myself sober aight man." - Jude
"..... sure...." - Zekie
Then, Jude had left while I lowered the paper and glance at the ocean and contemplated on everything that had transpired, even when I first met Kathie.
I'll be honest with you, I'm not really good at gathering proper thoughts.
I just landed myself a girlfriend while still trying to get through my life and everything went so fast that I couldn't keep up.
Looking at both of our perspectives, I realized that I only saw things in the present and never really touched on the future as I'm afraid of not knowing where I'll be heading towards.
I just started to fall in love with someone and she's already thinking of her second child with me that I couldn't process which is which and thats why I slowly felt we aren't compatible.
While people already felt envious of what I have right now, I always been jealous of people who actually don't have troubles in life.
I am not smart, given that I just barely passed in highschool and only worked hard to get myself into college.
Social connections? Does talking to a shadow count? Then, It comes to no suprise that I am just barely keeping up what people are saying and its already bad enough that I get misunderstood.
Most of all, I am not really right in the head and mostly agree due to peer pressure and my mental state isn't quite good. Being a mother who had just died on a birthday and an adulterous father, whose to say what my relationship with girls be then.
Kathie, Trish, Ceci and the other girls I've met, they are all beautiful but compared to me who isn't deserving of them, I always fear that I might made them miserable being with me.
I want to make them happy and thats basically it, even if it hurts me. They aren't bad and good people that I'll just be a plague and make them miserable if they stayed with me.
For Now, I'll just have to focus on being better and....
"No, Jude is kinda right." - Zekie
I've always been running away. From the moment I was caught by Kathie, I thought that maybe I could break out of my fear. No, It only made me lock myself out with others.
Just like love with no imperfections, It will slowly developed into a hidden error in place without knowing.
Two mentally unstable couple might seem to fit but in time, imperfections would arise.
Only one needs to break out from the stalemate of the two to create a new path.
And....
"....." - Zekie
I turned to my old drawing once more and found a new resolution.
I was afraid of taking of failing myself anymore since I failed to make my own mother happy, I failed to be a good man like what my uncle had said and....
"I failed to cure my yandere Girlfriend...." - Kathie
Kathie.... the first girl who liked me. At first, I thought that I didn't deserved someone to like me since I am a horrible guy. But, while it might be just her being not right in the head.....
I was happy. Even with just that.
It means that I am getting a bit better at myself and changing bit by bit.
I only need to continue improving myself that...
"To be worthy of love.... Sorry mom, it seems that your worry really did get forgotten." - Zekie
Standing up and staring at the sea, a new found resolve got into me....
*Growl*
"Nope, thats not resolve. Thats just the hangover I kinda forgot last nigh..... hurp." - Zekie
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"Hey, I just saw Jude vomitting and smelling a bit drunk. Forgetting that we kinda.... Nevermind." - Edgar
*Vomit*
Drinking a bit early in the morning, forgetting we were a bit hungover last night. Mine just kicked in a bit later for some reason but I felt a bit lightheadedness and sick before eventually leaning on the chair and started to question my birth and what is my name.
"Bro. did you guys really drink after we just down some bottles last night?" - Edgar
"N-nuu....of course no.... *Vomits*.......... sorry. help me." - Zekie
I tried to lie to him but after vomitting my lunch, I instantly regretted having a drinking bout with Jude. Firstly to curse having to drink with an alchoholic like Jude before starting to beg Edgar for help like a child.
"Ugh....it hurts so much... help me...." - Zekie
".... Fortunately, I called in your girlfriend since it would be a hassle to take care of you while taking care of the other problem." - Edgar
"Darling!" - Kathie
"Neil?!" - Trish
Behind Edgar, Kathie and Trish came running as Kathie quickly held me close to her chest.
"Darling. Please be fine...." - Kathie
"........." - Zekie
......... To be honest, enduring this pain in my stomach isn't so bad after all.... hehehe....
"Hey, is it just me or is Neil.... acting weird?" - Trish
Trish sense something disturbing as she was looking at me suspiciously but my reason basically is fighting against the pain in my stomach from vomitting on Kathie as I let my instinct kick in and.....
Instinct: Don't worry bro. I'll keep myself busy with these soft peaks here....
Brain: ............
"K-kathie. Is it just me or is Zekie...." - Trish
"K-kuh.... I-i think he is really.... Ahh.... pain..... right.... Ahn.... now...." - Kathie
".........." - Trish
'........ Zekie my bro....' - Edgar
After sometime passes, I fell unconscious from enduring the pain and woke up later to find that the girls looked at me weird while the guys raises their thumbs at me.
So uhh.... I think the milk in the fridge got expired and I ran out of cigs. I'll head out to buy some of it at the store so.... See ya guys.
Dad?
The D goes brrrrrrrr
If you publicly give the criteria that will make you drop a project (the project doesn’t matter, a novel or curing cancer), and that criteria is in the hands of random people on the internet, a certain percentage of those rando’s will do the thing you mentioned just to see whether or not you’ll do what you said.
So write what you want to write or don’t write it. Don’t gaslight the people who enjoy the story.
Well, the only reason why I kinda gave that criteria is because I KNOW those randos would act and FOLLOW the reverse psychology method and downvote my novel. Its mainly because I kinda want to stop writing and made some baseless reason for it. However, the more people began to like it, the more I would feel bad stopping which is why I kinda force myself to downvote and make it so such that I can give reason to drop it.
Plus, I scare myself since I got so many ideas for this novel and I can't stop pumping out chapters. That by the time I realise it, I'm stuck in an endless loop of updating chapters while not being able to relax anymore.
@ArcadiaBlade have you considered writing and not releasing it until your finished?
That way even if there were criticisms it wouldn’t be so off putting that you’d get discouraged from releasing it (or worse, having comments change the direction of the story you wanted to tell). Reversely, if there was a ton of love, you wouldn’t feel pressured into putting more and more hours into writing it.
At the end of the day, I like your work, but do what you got to do.
@ArcadiaBlade Take your time bro, relax. We have tons of novel to read. Your health is more important
@Mandark I don't think so. I just made them out on the spot and kinda release it blantantly. Writing is basically to a spare time for me to do and planning is the horrible trait of mine, being completely helpless if one thing goes wrong.
To be honest, I only write out of boredom and just wanted to vent out creativity on the spot. I would usually draw since its actually my main hobby than writing but considering I don't have any proper tools to do so, I just stuck myself to writing.
My most pressing issue I have is that I have a very low motivation to write and even if I can come up with many ways to make the novel interesting, my motivation is so low that I would easily abandon one thing if nothing goes right.