There is absolutely no truth whatsoever to the tabloid news stories that a girl has been captured by a slime. Slimes are non-aggressive and do not trap or capture people.
The images that were circulated are but mere fakes, and bad ones at that. Even the headline "Little Girl Kidnapped by a Slime! Held Captive for Three Day (sic) by a Monster!" has a typo on it.
It was merely a plot by an unscrupulous marketer to sell slime traps.
Here are some ideas for the cover when I eventually publish this story on Amazon. Do you think I need to change the title?
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1 Votes: 154 74.0%
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2 Votes: 11 5.3%
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3 Votes: 38 18.3%
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None of them (please leave a comment) Votes: 0 0.0%
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I like one but... (please leave a comment) Votes: 5 2.4%
Gotta agree with everyone saying first or third cover art. Third title is probably the best
Some other options I thought up: "The Villain’s Guardian Angel”, "To Save a Seraph", "Per Aspera Ad Asteria", and "Two-Timer: Help the Hero, Defend the Demon Lord [or something to that effect...]"
thanks for the feedback
Some people might not like the first title since it’s too long, but y’know what? That’s precisely why I love it. It just screams “Japanese Light Novel”, also known as “I accidentally put the plot synopsis as the title when publishing my story” syndrome.
Great!
Obviously super late, but i like the picture framing in 1, and the name in 3. The name in 1 is pretty good though.
Thanks for the feedback.
The first title is way too long. It's really hard to talk about the title to others and stuff
True. Thanks for the input.
Use the first or second title but the font and cover of the third one look nice.
Thanks for the feedback!
Lol it's so funny to see all these people comment about the title being too long. That's the "In" thing with light novels right now, especially for this genre
I like long titles!
1. The title name is too long - but I like this one the best
2. I hate covers with human face/image on them, I like drawing one
3. The font looks too si-fi for this novel
Thanks.
Asteria wasn’t kidnapped by slimes, but it was a near thing. She barely got away with her life.
Definitely first cover, but maybe not first title. Seems too long for a book cover. Maybe something like the first cover style, but the third title? Could have a subtitle/little line blurb song the lines of “Saving the world? I’ll leave there to the hero. I’m just here to save the villain.” ?
It's so hard to pick a cover! Thanks for the feedback.
@meili second cover is nice, but doesn’t fit the comedy tone of the series. Seems more like a cover for a mystery or a drama
@MarkofWisdom I got feedback from people who really love the second cover!
@LinMeili LOVE it’s look. May not fit with this story since it’s very LN but def keep it for some future work. It’d probably fit with your darker original story (given by your comments for the first chapters)
@Shadeymankey Maybe one day I'll write a story that fits with the second cover.