I know the story is all over the place, and the way I wrote it as well as the characters really make no sense. It is my first story after all and I had literally no idea where I wanted it to go.
Indeed there is no plot, and I only realized that until around chapters 15-20.
I had no plan on taking it anywhere and just wanted to write something cool.
Anyway, the point of this 'not a chapter' chapter was to say that I plan on ending it fairly soon, maybe in the next 2-5 chapters, so expect it to be all over the place and rushed.
I want to try rewriting it, but in a completely different direction with a much more consistent system and with an actual plot, though it won't be great, it'll be there.
Thank you all for reading, if indeed you still are, and have a great day
I like the story, but I did notice a slight drop off recently. As you said, first time writing and all.
Looking forward to the rewrite!
(When rewrite releases, put another chapter here as a notification, more people will see it that way
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ok cool, I will look forward to the rewrite
Wonderful
sad, i really liked the element of chaos added to it but oh well
They'll still have the element in the rewrite, as I've already been writing about it's counterpart in my other story
@tls123 i mean the lack of plot as a writing element, sorry
Ahhh man I enjoyed this story I'm gonna buy some tissues for the end
Looking forward to the rewrite in the future! Maybe it'll go by slower this time in the rewrite, maybe not depends. It's a great read but it felt like they were making so much progress so fast, maybe you also felt like it was making progress fast.
I wonder what'll happen at the start of the rewrite, like when they were in the facility with Six and all the other xenomorphs. Or perhaps you'd have changed that into something more different or it's somewhat similar. I've loved reading this, I just can't get enough of Xenomorph stories. (Is Re:Xenomorph the rewrite? Or am I wrong? Is it a separate story?)
Edit: Ah so it is the rewrite as i've found out in the next chapter