Yrret was not like the previous two. Those had been a beginner and a regular Marauder while Yrret could be considered an elite Marauder. Erik had 3 major things against him when facing Yrret.
Experience, armour and a shield. The experience was largely mitigated by Erik’s 200 Proficiency, making them roughly equally matched in skill. However, Erik’s Greatsword was ill suited for dealing with an armoured opponent.
The steel plates made cuts and slashes lose their effectiveness, only causing bruises to the body underneath. The tip could potentially be used to penetrate the gaps in the plate armour by stabbing into the unprotected joints, but this required an opportunity. And the shield made these opportunities rare and incredibly difficult to exploit.
‘The shield has to go first, otherwise I simply can’t get to him.’ –That was Erik’s first plan.
‘And considering the difference in armour between us, I should be able to drain his stamina if I don’t let him crowd around and control me movement.’ – Erik was wearing only medium armour that weighed considerably less than Yrret’s full plated armour. He hoped to exploit the difference in stamina exertion to gain an advantage over time.
‘The problem is that he knows this too and will try to settle this quickly by rushing me… is what I would do if I were him…’ – Logically speaking, Yrret should know the weakness of his own equipment and act to minimise this by aggressively pressuring Erik.
Wearing such heavy armour, Yrret could almost neglect all defence in favour of a continuous, reckless attack. And Erik felt like he was David facing Goliath, except this time Goliath wouldn’t go down from a single stone.
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When the drums started beating, Erik jumped across from the tower to the stage. And as expected, using the jump as an initial boost, Yrret came barrelling towards him with his sword raised high.
Erik also ran towards him, both hands on the Greatsword but keeping the blade low and pointing behind him. When they were within reach of each other however, Erik did not meet Yrret’s blade head on and instead made a dive-roll, dodging under his opponent’s swordarm and coming up behind him.
Moving his right hand towards the pommel of the sword, Erik moved his left hand up the blade where he had blunted a part of the edge and wrapped it in leather to create a ricasso. This way the Greatsword could now be wielded like a short spear, improving the manoeuvrability of the sword due to reduced inertia when swinging and increasing the accuracy when stabbing.
And as Yrret tried to turn around, Erik tried to stab the back of his knee to bring the steel Goliath down in one fell swoop.
But suddenly Yrret increased his movement in an inhuman manner. One moment facing his back towards Erik, knee open for attack, the next, Erik’s sword was met with the solid steel of front-facing greaves as the fighters now stood face-to-face once more. A wisp of pale purple mist oozing out between the plates of his armour.
Upon seeing this, Erik’s mind felt numb.
“You’ve made a pact with a Daemon of Slaanesh!” –He softly muttered, loud enough for Yrret to hear but not for those standing below the stage.
Within the open faced helmet, Yrret now showed a savage smile as he confirmed Erik’s statement.
“Why yes, when I saw you being led away by Sven and coming back out with Sigrun, I decided to accept his offer.”
And as he continued talking, Yrret started swinging his blade again, forcing Erik to step back and dodge.
“You see, I tried to court her once but was rebuffed. I was very sincere you know, especially considering I am the most promising of ALL Marauders. She shouldn’t have had any reason to refuse! To refuse ME! “
Another swing, Erik dodged again but this time Yrret swung his shield in a follow up, catching Erik full on the side and blowing him across the platform. Still, Yrret continued talking as if none of this really mattered or was a foregone conclusion.
“Just a nice face and a good pair of tits, and she thinks she’s too good for ME? When I take your head off, do you think she’ll cry? I would like that!”
Before Erik could get up, Yrret once again moved incredibly quickly and more purple mist spread out, more visible this time. No, it wasn’t really moving, Yrret seemed to blink next to Erik from across the stage. And without pause, he slashed down at the half-kneeling Erik.
“Argh!”
A large gash opened up on his back, the leather armour parting like paper as Erik started bleeding profusely.
Not satisfied, Yrret continued attacking, opening wound after wound on Erik’s body. He could have finished it already, but Yrret seemed determined to inflict as much pain and torture as possible on Erik.
Then Yrret stabbed his sword deep into Erik’s thigh and leaned in close, whispering in his ear.
“Hey, hey, how long do you think she’ll continue crying when I mount her tonight?”
He paused to look Erik in the eye and seeing Erik’s eyes full of hatred, he chuckled before casually continuing.
“I don’t think she’ll struggle much actually. After all, she gets to be pleasured by ME!”
Drawing out the blade and throwing Erik flat on his back, Yrret stomped on his chest, hard enough to crack ribs but not enough to shatter them. Fully intent on inflicting as much pain as possible.
“Though of course, I’ll first need to get her alone tonight first before bringing her to MY bed. Meh, bribing a servant should do it.”
Grabbing him by the throat, Yrret started talking about what he intended to do with Sigrun later tha evening and the days after.
“Sadly she’s used goods by now, right? You’re a man too after all. A shame. A shame because it means she’ll only be worth that much then.
I will just use her till I get bored of her before throwing her to those shit-shovelling thralls… No, I don’t like sharing something of mine with those things.
Would the hounds perhaps like her? When I am done with her, she’ll have become a nice, obedient bitch so I guess she wouldn’t mind? Hehehe.”
All this time Yrret had been talking in low voices so only Erik could hear. He wasn’t just physically torturing him, but also inflicting psychological torment.
At this time, Erik was consumed in an all-consuming rage. His eyes bulging from their sockets as he wished to rip Yrret’s throat out, consume his heart and shit in the hole it left. But alas, while his rage was all-encompassing, it was impotent.
Bleeding all over his body and drawing shallow breaths that pushed against his fractured ribs, Erik lay powerless.
“Good, good! I like the look in your eyes! Hate ME, envy ME! Feed ME with more power!”
For a split second, Erik regained a bit of clarity and in that moment he spent all his Khornite Favour for STR stats, spending 90 out of 163 Favour to instantly go to 30 STR before being unable to purchase more. He used the trump card he had prepared.
Feeling an incredible surge of power infuse his limbs, Erik sprung up with a roar. Pushing Yrret off of him, he started wailing his Greatsword in powerful swings, connecting with Yrret’s armour and showering them in sparks.
*Thud, cling, thud, thud, clang!
Surprised by the sudden increase in power, Yrret was slow to react and allowed Erik to hit him rapidly and multiple times in succession, even forcing him back a few steps.
However, the incredulity was quickly replaced with anger as the two continued their fight in earnest. They exchanged mighty blows, hacking, slashing and crushing as they went.
But Erik’s wounds were to grave and he had lost too much blood so he was once more steadily suppressed by Yrret. He wasn’t unscathed either, with large parts of his armour dented in or torn away, Yrret now also bled from multiple large cuts on the exposed areas.
Determined to end it this time, Yrret swung his shield. Erik dodged, but before he could recover, Yrret blinked once more to the side, cut off Erik’s right arm at the shoulder and stabbed him straight through the chest, blood dripping from the blade on both sides of Erik’s torso.
*Thud – squelch
“There, just go lie there and die!” –Yrret said as he used his foot to kick Erik off the blade.
Erik’s body, completely broken, slumped to the ground as his vision began to darken.
He was unresigned. What the hell was this?! He didn’t want to die! Not a second time after only enjoying this new life for 9 weeks!
But he simply could not move. Erik could only vaguely distinguish Yrret’s shadowy figure as he posed in victory.
In a desperate but futile attempt at final resistance, Erik raised his remaining hand. And touched a sudden notification.
~Bleep! –Player Erik earned Favour! Nurgle, God of Perseverance, admires your desperate struggle before death!
~Bleep! – Player Erik meets all requirements; increase all Player stats to 30 by spending accumulated Favour?
Not understanding what showed up in front of him, Erik swiped at the blue box.
~Bleep! – Spending Favour to increase all stats to 30!
~Bleep! – Transaction completed, stats raised!
~Bleep! – Player Erik has reached 30 stats in all relevant categories, unlocking additional features. Favour can now be spent at a higher ratio for stat points or for boons from your chosen deity or patron.
Erik had stopped listening to the continuously ringing notifications. In fact, he couldn’t hear anything at all over the sound of blood rushing through his veins, flesh and muscle repeatedly mending & tearing while his bones audibly cracked & popped. And a bestial desire for blood tried to bury his rationale as a beastly roar escaped from his throat.
mate this was dumb. He waited until he lost his mind to rage and was half-dead to spend his points?? the f*ck.
not going to lie this kind of ruined the story for me. He was supposed to be a wise (wisdom stat separately) guy who while not accustomed to the Norsca life just yet always acted in creative and logical ways.
But he relies on a complete f*cking asspull in a fight he SHOULD have been able to win (with a stat point spend)??? Whack.
The asspull would have been solid on a battlefield/raid. Perhaps sh*t went sideways and he had to just pump all his remaining points in a fit of madness to win the day. Solid. But here, in a cushy setting when he has all the time in the world to think, plan, and execute his goals? MADNESS.
sorry mate but I'm out, good luck with it and keep following your passion
Fair enough. It WAS intended as an asspull. Who told him to sit on his Favour? And he was fighting one of THE best warriors in the Tribe, besides the Jarl, his bodyguards and some other thanes who was ALSO juiced up on Daemon magic.
Can't really blame him for the late point-spending either, even the 1 second it would take to click the button might've seen his head lopped off.
Thanks, no problem. I plan to see this through since I just enjoy the writing activity.
@Macrendil-Ysmir it just went contrary to all good sense though. He could've slowly put up his points over the weeks to get used to it, and if he went mad then there were thralls to sate his bloodlust. but in the middle of a completely unfair life/death fight? just felt unearned and lazy my dude
@Macrendil-Ysmir You should add the fact that all that destruction of his moral and body happened in 5 seconds makes a lot more sense that he had only time to focus on dodging and resisting
In my opinion there is no logical reason for the mc to not spend his points to increase his chances of winning a fight he knows he will lose without spending his points other than he is ret*rded or author will make him selectively stupid for plot reasons which is a terrible thing to do as an author and drastically drops the quality of the story. He had enough time to realize he was facing a thane raid boss with armor to pump his stats before the fight and if he permanently loses that arm I'm dropping because of his idiocy.
Spending points felt uncomfortable to Erik. And being uncomfortable in a very alien environment usually means people avoid additional uncomfortability = not spending points. Does he learn he shouldn't be hoarding points? Absolutely. And I believe its important that I show him learning stuff rather than have him instantly understand everything about his new reality. I could have made Erik mr. Perfect from the get go but instead I want him to make mistakes like people do. Mistakes he can learn and develop from.
@Macrendil-Ysmir If that's the reason and not just him wanting to hoard stupidly that's somewhat fair but I don't think you showed that enough so to me he just looked like an idiot risking his life for no reason. I'm definitely not perfect and would make mistakes but I wouldn't make the mistake of hoarding points in a extremely deadly situation where spending points would make my situation better but thanks for replying.
Man 🤔... That was tough to read. Bu biggest question reading was why he didn't just use the halberd? The spike would've been more than enough to send the fight and the axe head on those are made to cleave armor. Then he also didn't spend his points? He didn't even think about the jealously prompt. Lots of mistakes made, but he learned his lesson I suppose.
Halberds aren't particularly designed to deal with armour. They deal with cavalry (& monsters) and while the longer pole would give some more power, a regular Halberd would be too light to go through meaningful armour. Well, it'd break bones under f.e. chainmail but it still wouldn't cut through. For that you need something heavier or with a thicker spike, like a Warhammer, mace, polaxe or bec de corbin.
Ofcourse, that's historically speaking. With enough weight, durability and strength anything is possible.
@Macrendil-Ysmir
Nope. Not even worth arguing over that one. They were literally used in formation against knights in armor. Only the poleaxe is better.
http://m.medieval-life-and-times.info/medieval-weapons/halberd.htm
Good luck though, man. Just not for me.
@Ouroboros
Halberds in formation? Absolutely, packed tight & 8+ ranks deep w/ crossbow or arquebus support. Used against armoured knights? Yes, though pikes did it better. And even though the combination of pike&shot definitevely ended the supremacy of plate-wearing knights, it would still be exceedingly hard & rare for a halberd to get through plate. A lucky stab could skewer 'm, sure, but there's no way in hell an edged weapon is cutting through plate armour.
(Not to mention that many sets of plate armour were actually shot at w/ firearms in a bullet-proof, however the validity & usefulnes of such tests is contested due to lack of standardised ranges & calibres the tests were conducted with)
Dents, bruises & bone fractures? Absolutely, bad enough to take a knight out of the fight. But to kill him? Rarely and even then it'd be an accident because killing a wealthy knight is like throwing gold down the shitter.
Also that website doesn't seem very reliable. It makes it sound like swords are a knight's go-to weapon, while it really was a last-ditch emergency back up. And just by reading through a couple articles, it doesn't improve my opinion: the First Crusade was called by Pope Urban II and even English Longbows at 180lbs or even higher have been tested to not be able to penetrate plate armour at 30 paces, let alone 250. (The English won by throwing thousands of arrows at plated knights which resulted in enough of the arrows finding weakpoints like the neck or armpits.)
( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBxdTkddHaE&t=1148s here's the longbow test by Tod)
Hulk Smash.
And time for super Saiyan chaos edition!
Kamehame... oh no wait, wrong thing. Ehum, "GRUAAAGH RAARGH RUAAAA!!!"
I like the emphasis on "ME".
If Slaanesh existed in our world, he would love social network.
Now its time to show the fith his place BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD !!!!!
Also,his armor is gonna resemble archeon maybe ?And thanks for this great work
Glad you like it!
Haven't really decided on Erik's armour yet. The enormous pauldrons/shoulderguards Chaos/Norsca is portrayed with clashes heavily with my perception of how realistic armour works. Thos things must weigh a ton on their own and very restrictive of movement to boot.
Luckily, him getting his proper armour is still a while away.