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Artwork by Aryko update:
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the picture of the elf hands kinda look creep ngl
I like the picture here. Some things are off though. Vel's left hand is beautiful but what's up with her right? Eliana's armor around her waist...umm, wouldn't it need connected and overlapping plates here? For pure flexibility issues. Also, a bit more form fitting...at least, I imagine--with what you've described, in my mind, and I could be mistaken--Eliana to have like an hour glass figure shape...at least to around her hips? So, like 3/4 hourglass figure, lol.
Haven't yet caught up to recent works, so take my comment as is. An out of date comment. I appreciate your hard work for this novel and enjoy VelxEl slow romance, adventure, comedy, and pure craziness.
@illomened this is old WIP artwork, the completed version is found in the glossary. I just updated the new cover as well. I'll post high res version next time I publish :)
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I like the 1st one but think that it would be better to mix it with 5th (with some corrections). 5th synopsis would nicely compliment or replace second paragraph of the 1st one. That’s my thoughts on this.
i think 1 is good.
really descriptive and compact. but make you question how the f*ck it reach that point.
Wow these are really good, better than most i've seen on sh tbh
I like the first paragraph of 1, but I think the second one should be altered. It seems too specific and in the moment.
@divinus I personally agree with what you said there. the author of that also mentioned it may be giving away a bit too much.
1, 3, and 5 are pretty good imo
I prefer 1