Well, that was four Thieves killed.
They seem to have been the only ones who survived after being hunted down and exiled, it’s to be expected that they were high leveled; it’s also likely that their bounties are very high.
Light Ball!
As I cast the spell, a small ball of light floats above my head--about the size of a Tennis Ball, and as bright as a 60 watt light bulb; it lasts either until I cancel the spell, or cast another.
It’s one of the Mid-Grade Non-Elemental Magic Spells.
Because I don’t want to stay here for very long, the headless corpses and blood pooling on the stone floor is making me sick.
I perform the necessary work, tearing their clothing to make cloth wrappings--then I cut off, and collect the four left hands, wrapping them up. I also collect their four copper swords, and leather armour. All I had was a shield, so I needed leather armour. One of the Thieves were near my size, and his armour had a minor size adjustment.
Now, I had a full set of leather armour: Breastplate, Gauntlets, Grieves, Gloves, Boots.
I wonder if they hid any treasure anywhere?
Well, I don’t have to tell the people where the hideout is, so I can search it some other time.
Fireball!
Fireball!
It only takes two Fireballs to incinerate all four corpses, and boil the blood off the floor.
First, I Warp to one of the rivers and wash off the blood.
Then I Warp to the Inn, getting my key, I head up to my room; Tirihi is laying asleep on the bed, I lay down next to her. She murmurs in her sleep, quickly wrapping herself around me like an octopus; nuzzling into my neck. The feeling of sickness, from killing the Thieves, began to fade--her warmth seeming to soak into me, pushing out the coldness.
It doesn’t take me long to fall asleep; for some reason, it’s much easier to sleep with Tirihi in the bed than it was a few days ago. But, I still stay awake for a short time--excitement flooding through me…Tomorrow, I buy Roxanne.
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The sun rose and I woke up, Tirihi snoring lightly in my ear.
I sat up.
I had slept very well, and I was in high spirits; but I think my sense of relief was even even bigger--I had eliminated the danger of revenge, and I had the money to purchase Roxanne.
“Oh, you’re awake? Good morning, Alex.” Tirihi sat up, she rubbed her eyes a few times.
“Good morning.” I can't help but smile as I greet her--I also take the Intelligence Cards out of my Ring, showing her that the danger of the Thieves is gone, "You don't have to worry about Somalia being destroyed anymore."
“You took care of the Thieves?” She asked with a raised eyebrow, “It seems that the danger is gone. Can you return me to my home? Don’t forget to visit--get me when you get a house. I won’t interrupt your plan for a slave harem.” She giggled.
I stroked her hair, without thinking, “Well, you don’t have to go, if you don’t want to.”
“I would only be interrupting--” She smiled, “Don’t worry about me.”
“If you’re sure.” I smiled.
Warp!
The wall went dark, and I gently took her hand; she followed along behind me. We walked through the Warp and arrived in her living room, she pulled me against her--and gave me a kiss.
“Thank you.” She grinned and waved goodbye to me, gently pushing my back, pushing me back through the pitch-black wall.
I appeared back in my room at the Vale Pavilion.
So, should I turn in the Intelligence Cards at the Vale’s Knight’s Order, or should I take them to another town?
Because I had exchanged Intelligence Cards in Vale only 10 days ago, if I bring in these bounties as well--it was likely that someone would have an eye on me. The Knight Order was linked to the Thieves in the slums; Thieves who wouldn’t appreciate a new Bounty Hunter.
Even if it is the extermination of Thieves that they are hostile to.
But thinking about how it is likely that the Knight’s Order were the ones who set up the Bounties, so it’s possible I can’t get a bounty in another town--of course, I can get Roxanne either way.
Well, I have the Capital available to Warp to, so worst-comes-to-worst, I just take Roxanne and go there.
I quickly leave the inn and go to the nearby building; however, when I peek inside, I can’t see the beautiful female knight; however, I do see the helpful Apprentice Knight.
“Hello.” I call out to him.
“Hello. Do you require any assistance?”
“Well, last nigh, some odd guys picked a fight with me, and seemed to be Thieves.” As I speak, I take out the Thieves’ Intelligence Cards and give them to the Apprentice Knight.
“Thieves?”
“Yep.” I grin at him.
“Well, just in case, can you show me your Intelligence Card?”
“Sure.” I hold out my left arm to him.
After he confirms my Intelligence Card, he goes into the office, saying that he will look them up.
Before long, he returns with a small bag, “I was able to confirm it, the four Thieves were the comrades of the ones who attacked Somalia. There are no more members of that group left, so there shouldn’t be any more danger of them looking for revenge.”
“Thank you.”
I receive the bag and depart after thanking him, and waving goodbye.
Looking into the bag, I see that there are 30 silver coins…and 10 gold coins.
Walking quickly, and filled with excitement, I return to the road and walk to the Slave Dealer’s shop…it was a long 10 days, and there is just one more step.
I feel an unintentional grin pulling at my mouth.
“Hello.” I arrive at the Slave Dealer’s shop and knocked on the door.
“Please wait here.” The man who met me at the door lead me into the room with the couch.
I take out Excalibur and lay it across my lap--just in case.
Since he knows I have around 43 gold, I hope he doesn’t think that my precautions are overboard. Of course, I don’t need Excalibur--I could launch a Fireball or two.
“Alex, sorry for keeping you waiting.” Alan entered the room.
“It’s fine.”
“Have you prepared the funds?”
“Yep.”
“Then, please. Come to this room.”
He leads me to another room.
When I sit on the sofa a slave, who isn’t Roxanne, serves me some tea. I drink the tea, turning and subtly eating an Antidote…just as a precaution.
“Alright, here is the money.” I hand him the 43 gold coins.
He quickly counts them, and then nods, “Thank you. The money has been received; I will bring her soon, please wait a moment.”
Getting up, he nods to me, and then leaves the room.
A few seconds later he returns with Roxanne.
She is the same as when I first saw her, she was standing partially behind the Slave Dealer. Wearing a very tight, light green tunic, and green hot pants.
Her face is incredibly beautiful--I had thought that since I had been anticipating buying her for so long, I may have imagined her better looking than she really was…I didn’t.
“Thank you.” She sees me and bows, her tight shirt still somehow showing off an incredible valley. Her ears twitch cutely, tilting towards me, before lowering.
Those ears are incredibly cute.
“You’re welcome.” I don’t think that was the right response…both Alan, and the other slave are grinning. Roxanne just cutely tilts her head.
Alan smiled, he gestured to his apprentice who left, and soon returned with a leather collar. The collar had a clear gem set in the front, and strange black letters drawn on it.
“Well then, to begin the Contract, let me take out your Intelligence Cards.” Alan steps forwards.
“Okay.” I extend my left hand.
“Yes.” Roxanne holds out her hand as well.
With a quick recitation of the incantation, the Intelligence Cards float out of our hands.
He then holds the leather collar, moving it so that the clear gem touches first my Intelligence Card--then touches it to Roxanne’s Intelligence Card, making the gem turn green.
Roxanne straightens up, pulling her hair out of the way as Alan gives me the collar. I carefully place it around her neck, clipping it up. She blushes as my fingertips brush her incredibly soft, pliant, pale skin.
Then the letters light up and she shudders slightly, I suddenly feel a strange connection form between us; I had the intuitive knowledge that I could order her to do anything and she would obey--but I also knew that I could will her dead.
I would never do that.
“Alright, the Contract is complete, please take a look at your Intelligence Cards.”
Alex Conner, Male, 17, Wizard -- Free
Slaves: Roxanne
There had been a new section added to my Intelligence Card.
Roxanne had her eyes shut, her adorable ears twitching.
Alan snaps his fingers, “Show your master your Intelligence Card
Roxanne, Female, 14, Beast Soldier -- Slave :: Owner: Alex Conner
I show Roxanne my Intelligence Card, in case she was curious.
“Err…is it alright?” She asks with a tilted head, her beautiful eyes peeking up at me--using a dangerous female tactic...the upturned eyes.
I smile reassuringly, “Why wouldn’t it be alright?”
“Thank you, master.” She quickly read it.
“It seems that the contract is completed.” I smile at Roxanne as I speak to Alan, who nods at my words.
“With this, you are now her owner. You have the obligation to provide a residence, meals, and have to pay a tax when entering a town or city. If you badly mistreat your slave, or kill them for no reason--you will be fined double their initial cost.” Alan explains plainly.
“Understood.” I nodded to Alan.
I hand him the 43 gold coins.
This... doesn't seem remotely right? Wasn't Roxane only 10 gold? Also, shouldn't he have just a bit (or less) over 20 gold? I haven't been keeping track exactly but this seems all kinds of wrong.
The MC was 10 gold short of buying Roxanne, which is why he needed the 10 days.
@Tek Ah, right now I remember. He had a bunch of gold from the bounty. This is why I shouldn't read while sleep deprived. Apologies.
I feel like there is a sentence missing here since he just says good morning and then she somehow knows he defeated the thieves without him saying anything
Oh, you’re awake? Good morning, Alex.” Tirihi sat up, she rubbed her eyes a few times.
“Good morning.”
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“You took care of the Thieves?” She asked with a raised eyebrow, “It seems that the danger is gone. Can you return me to my home? Don’t forget to visit--get me when you get a house. I won’t interrupt your plan for a slave harem.” She giggled
Ahh, it seems it didn't copy over correctly, thanks for pointing that out.
Thanks for all the chapters. I kinda feel like the levels of the enemies are scaling a bit too rapidly, unless you are reducing the number of total floors (previously, enemies scaled at 1 level per floor, and also increased number of enemies that could end up in a single grouping at a certain pace as well). Still, at this pace by floor 30 he'll be facing over level 100 enemies. Of course there are many solutions to this aside from levels going up, like increasing the quality of enemies (like elite monsters, 1 star -> 5 star enemies). Aside from bosses, the original didn't really have enemies that were of increased quality, but with your idea of scaling the levels differently we can have a single higher level enemy almost like a miniboss instead of simply just having more enemies.
In addition, I suppose with all the floor climbing and slice of life it's easy to identify major plot points (which are primarily auctions and where he participates in that raid against a duke or whatever) and skip a lot of the grinding or just tweak the narrative a bit, but it feels like the MC is gaining power a bit too rapidly - though I guess with the end being some form of godhood you have raised the power ceiling quite high. I thought the webnovel "Weycorus" (found here on scribblehub) had an interesting concept where it was clearly based off this same story, except the goal at the bottom of the dungeons was gathering some type of immortality fruit, or fruit that once you ate enough of them you'd obtain immortality. The author abandoned their story eventually, but I thought some of the ideas were interesting enough.
I plan on adding roaming elites/rares.
The scaling is a little wonky--thanks for pointing that out. But the levels are also different: the first stage classes level very quickly to 30, then the second stages level slower to 50, then the advanced classes level even slower to 100. On reaching 100, the person can't level any more, but they get a special skill. The reason Vale is like that is because it's in the beginning area, the capital will have level 50 second stages (The elite soldiers, king, and royal guardian) -- each of which can kill tens of level 40 second stages (Power has to be balanced, scaling damage and difficulty leveling.)
Once someone gets a special skill to a certain (level? comprehension?) they can become deities (which is were I plan on the MC ending up).
There will be more events planned, like a war between kingdoms, appearance of True Demons (a species, the origins of the Demon, Monsters, and the Dungeons.)
Well. This is the basic plan. I will be fleshing it out and changing as needed.
@Tek And the Demons in the Vale Dungeon are also first stage, but require to reach 50 (So the strongest enemies fought will be level 50). Once they reach second stage (they gain slight intelligence) but level up slower.
The MC and his party will level a bit more quickly, but 30 levels in a first stage class, is about equal to 10 - 12 levels in a second stage class, experience wise. I need to tweak the scale, but that's the basic idea.
It will start fast, and slow down.
@Tek Well, glad to hear you got a plan, I didn't think it was a huge issue anyway. So far this rewrite is definitely better than the original and I am looking forward to more and what you come up with when you pass the original plot of the story. Would you do a "pass the torch" or "rewrite" of an amateur story? I really enjoyed this royal road story called "Virago" as the premise was somewhat unique in my opinion. It was a cultivation portal fantasy, but the story is centered around party based fighting/adventuring (unlike most xianxia) and a group of girls (natives) and the guy who gets transferred into the middle of their forest not even able to understand the language at first. Unfortunately the author stopped posting and blocked all messages, but I think it'd be awesome if someone took on the torch and continued it/rewrote it and spruced it up. It's not as though the story was perfect, or anything, but I thought it was quite unique and a shame it stopped.
@bilinear When I pass the original--I will try to continue with my plan, though it will slow down.
As for Virago, I might have a look at it; but doing 3 stories currently is a bit stressful (trying to get a reasonable amount of chapters out), so I probably won't add another until one of these are finished.
@Tek Definitely. No need to get burnt out on it, I was just curious if you'd consider it. I've only seen/heard of such a thing a couple of times, and the only one I remember was that "Master of all" on royalroad where the person took over and ended up going past a few million words past the original. I never read it really beyond a few hundred pages at most, but still.
@bilinear Well, one of my first fanfics that got readers (fanfiction.net "Spooky Scary Skeletons") Started out as a fanfiction--but I passed what had been written by quite a bit (and ended up writing an original story with that as a base, but I haven't posted it anywhere--yet.)
So, it can happen.