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this is the part where some of you guys might not like my choice

As 2 anbu guards brought Naruto to the hokage house as  Kushina opened the door then screamed as they brought a bloody boy to them then set him on the sofa there stood 6 figures watching as he layed there kushina ran up to him and started to cry on his chest 

“W-w-ho did t-h-is to my baby…” she said as she was crying then minato looked to the anbu to seek  the answer

“Hokage we found him in the forest of death with multiple animal corpses on the ground..” he said while his head down

“What?!” 

“Hokage we believe those scars were already there as they don’t look new but rather old and as for the blood On him it’s from the animals not from his” said the anbu 

“I mean why was he there!” Minato said angrily

“We don’t know sorry Hokage”

“Okay you may leave” minato said while rubbing his temples

Swish! Swish!

“Kushina why was he there he should’ve been here for his birth….” Tusande was saying but looked at the banner to finally realize there are only 2 names

“Why didn’t you put his name on there?” Tsuande asked with a frown on her face

“I don’t know I guess we forgot…” minato said while his head down 

“What do you mean You forgot?you forgot you own dam child?!” Tsuande said while screaming 

“No I guess we didn’t know…” 

“Do you even know what he does, where he goes, what he even likes!” Tsuande said angrily 

“No I guess we don’t know even the simple stuff about him…” 

Slap!

The one who slapped him wasn’t an angrily Tsuande but a disappointed jiraiya

“Minato…how could you forget your own child” jiraiya looked at him with a frown on his face

“I d-di-didn’t forget him” kushina finally said while still crying 

2 hours passed as tsuande started to heal him

Naruto soon wakes up to see 6 people looking at him some with worrying look and some with tears as Kushina was about to tackle him to hug him and ask him what happen Naruto raised his hand to signal her not to

As he got up he started to cover his body with his black robe without saying anything then soon started to leave but got stopped as someone pulled his arm

“Sunshine  wh-where are you going?”

Sunshine Naruto laughed as he heard that 

“I’m going back home…” he said with a cold and dead voice as to sound like a senior junini 

“What do you mean home? This is your home” minato said 

“No not anymore”

“What?”

“Hokage you must’ve forgotten that you made my 2 sisters heirs to the clans” he said that while looking him in his eyes everyone stood there quiet without saying a word people stood there with a surprise look on their faces as his own son didn’t call him father

“So what does that mean?  and call me father”

“You must’ve forgotten Hokage-sama that when you make someone else the leader of the clan instead of the oldest one is that he gets kicked out and fend for himself” he said with a cold voice 

While he was trying to remember something about that tsuande spoke up

“Hey kid I know you been forgotten on your birthday but that doesn't give you an excuse to be jerk”

“Im sorry Tsuande-sama but if I had to ask you only know about it now and never talked to me so how would you know this is my only first time” he said with a firm tone

She looked surprised as someone who was years younger than her can talk back to an S-rank ninja before she could speak he continued 

“Have your even had to fend for yourself at 3 years old, have your ever cried yourself to sleep in a dark alley way street or a room wishing for someone to come to you but to have no one, have you ever broke your leg but to find out that you couldn’t find your mother, have you ever had to eat out of a trash can, HAVE YOU EVER HAD TO FIGHT FOR YOUR LIFE AT 3 YEARS OLD JUST TO FIND A PLACE TO SLEEP!, HAVE YOU EVER TRIED TO KILL YOURSELF JUST TO THINK THAT YOU DONT BELONG” he said with a sharp  tongue she stood there with her lips sealed 

But kushina just cried harder and louder once she heard what naruto said he started to turn around and leave but got stopped again as kushina spoke 

“W-wa-w-wait na-ru-to I’m your mother I never neglected you I swear I-I-I-I swear” she said trying to speak

“Your not my Mother and I don’t have A family as of today we’re nothing than strangers” he said while he looked at her with 2 dead eyes and a voice that sounded like to a dead man

“Now if you excuse me I have to go back and prepare for school coming up and Hokage please take out my last name in the school schedule as I do not have a family anymore” he said as he walked out 

“Naruto! Wait come back here im talking to you!” 

“Dont-dont go please! I’m begging you I’m sorry….”

But he didn’t listen he  walked slowly to the door open it and closed it as it felt like seeing your son of to die as he left kakashi,jiraiya,Tsuande,Zena,Zoey and Minato got out of their trance and looked at what happened 

“Minato-san he’s right I read the rules about the clan and  he is without a family” says Tsuande, what she didn’t get was if what he all said was true then how could they not notice

“We’re a failure of parents” minato said as he sat down with his head down Zena and Zoey just stood there quiet 

‘I won’t let him go down the same path as me I will save him like Minato save me...obito….’ Kakashi said in his mind 

‘I can’t blame them as I ignored him as well because I thought his parents will cheer him up but what a fool I was…’ tsuande said in her mind

_________

A figure running toward the woods as he was running across house roofs a person felt something on top of their head 

“Huh? Is it raining?” Said a man as he looked up but couldn’t find any clouds

_________

1 year passed by in a blink of an eye he started to train with the one eye mask man some people even got suspicious as to why he went there every single day but no one found out as they could’ve never find him, there were even sometimes where kushina waited all day there just to wait for Naruto but he didn’t come at all he watch her standing there he didn’t feel bad as he no longer hold feelings for anyone then his sensei

It’s been one year sense sensei Yogan Uchihia (made him up)  he’s a wanted  uchiha because he agreed to overthrown the hokage but I don’t care because he began teaching me and I surprised him as I had an affinity for all elements and huge chakra, he’s been teaching me stuff that I never considered and new ninjutsu, I also surprised him as I made a black first form susasnoo in his “training ground” or wherever we were, he even brought “bad people” as he called them to fight me in a battle for life he said I had to get experience even though I was 7 years old he praised me as he said I could take on a S-level and a high level juini without using  my trump card he also said that it did she my trump card I'll match up to a kage lvl but he told me to never use it as a last resort he was kind, caring and he let me stay in his house 

(Flashback)

It was after I showed him my black susasnoo and told me to tell him what powers I had in my eyes as mine were mutated and not normal 

As he saw what my abilities are he told me “naruto I believe you have one of the most powerful abilitys in those 2 eyes, well let me tell your power of the right eye, you said that you wanted  everything to be sucked away and to wanted to be alone when you felt that you got “Blackhole” as you can summon black balls that can suck up anything within a certain range and it can also release pressure to your enemies now for your 2nd ability honestly I'm surprised again as what you used against me not only did genjutsu but also ninjutsu didn't work, but as you not only got a powerful offense but a power defense to, you felt that you were not cared for and protected so you got Daedric shield which could protect you against a small beast bomb but only 1 time, but that can also be improved if we train more and more” he said a with a smile 

(flashback end)

He coughed then straighten his face “Naruo although the anbus are looking for me I want you spread your name around the world once your out of school, you will also not mention about our training to anyone got it?” He said in a serious tone although he knew what Naruto does in his life when he’s not in here he still wanted to hear it from him

“Yes sensei even if they torture me I will never reveal anything about you because your the only one who hasn’t abandoned me!” He said with a firm tone 

“Okay since I won’t see you for while I’m giving you 3 presents for the surprises you gave me” he says as he hands him a black robe that covers him at his knees, covers his neck and also covers his arms then he took out a ring from his pockets with a black gem in the middle and finally he hands him a mask covered in all black with 2 black x in front of eyes and a zipper covered shut on the mouth 


The mask


“From now on when your name is no longer Naruto in the outside world but Black Phantom as you kill your enemies quick and swift and as they see you leave they only see a phantom...also take care of these presents I gave them to you but all of it was made from a meteorite the material is light as it also can block weapons made of steel but not ninjutsu, also I have only made ten of them so there  special so don't tell anyone and don't ever take it off” he said the last part in a serious face

“No worries I will never let them find out!”

“Good... I'll see you naru- black phantom in 9 years... remember to spread your name”

He said as they both came out of a portal into a building he waved him goodbye and he soon disappeared, he stood there alone in his house this was also his first day in the ninja academy, he also felt powerful as he looked in the mirror all he could see  was a boy covered in black with silver hair(if I could draw I would draw it but I can't draw for shit) 

‘It's only 9 years I could do this 4 years in school then 5 years trying to make a name for myself’ he said in his mind

______

As naruto left Yogan skin started to get out of control as it transformed into a new figure that was all white, had green hair and had 1 goldeneye


“Black zestsu is this gonna work?

“Yes and if it works like I plan to then we will get a powerful new member so tell the other guys to lay low and to not let our organization name out there”

A black figure said as he came out of the ground and left quickly

__________

Soon it became morning as he came out of the house and started to walk he took his time because he wanted to see if anyone could recognize him, as he saw the view of the front of the school he saw a woman there with silky red hair and a nice attire as if she was waiting for a date, he started to enter the school as he passed the women he didn't say anything as she didn't say anything back to him, he entered the school and went to his classroom he was the first one there as he was early to get a good seat as he was about to take a seat in the back corner he went to the teacher to ask him something 

“Hello sir” he said with a firm voice

The man behind the desk looked up and then jumped back as he was scared looking at the person before him why wouldn't he? He's all in black with a creepy face mask

“Umm... Hello you are?

“I would like to ask if my name on there is spelled Naruto Uzumaki?” he said 

“Umm..... No it only says naruto” he said carefully as he didn't know him yet 

“Good... Well thank you for answering my question good day” he said in a cold voice 

‘Looks like sensei did take my last name as he promised, sensei I will live up to your expectations’ he said in his mind as he went to the furthest seat in the back corner 

Soon kids started to walk in he saw some similar faces as some new ones as he was inspecting them they also inspected him and they all suggested that he look dangerous and also weird as the only color he had was black and a silver hair and that's all, students started to take their seats as the one beside him was hinata, she still didn’t know that under all the blackness was the boy who once rescued her

“Hello class I'm Iruka sensei and I will be teaching you for the next 5 years to make you strong shinobis for this country, so let's go around introducing us my name is Iruka I love to teach and help kids and I dislike criminals and my hobbies are teaching”

Soon everyone started to introduce themselves from the front to the back but the only ones he listen to we're 4 people

“Hello my name is Zoey Uzumaki-Namikaze I like my family and friends I dislike people who are criminals and people who hurt my family” she said while looking around trying to find someone “my hobbies are to cook and study

“Hello my name Zena Uzumaki-Namikaze I also agree with my sister” she said 

“Hi my name is sauske I like my clan, I dislike people who are mean to my family and weakness, I also wish to be a powerful ninja” he said with a firm tone

“H-hi my name Hinata I like my family and a boy who once saved me, I dislike mean people and my hobbies are gardening and my wish is to start a family” she said while blushing 

Then everyone looked at the next person watching him  as he was the most mysterious and the creepiest 

“My name is Naruto but I like to be called black, I hate groups, talking to people and people I do not have a wish” he said with a voice that sounded like he didn't want to live as it also contained coldness 

The only people to react like they been hit by a thunder was zena, zoey and hinata 

Zoey because he didn't feel like a family member but more of a stranger, zena because she once looked up to her brother but never played with him or talked to him because he might think she was weird yet he here is cold, dead, and worst of all she couldn't reach out to him even though she was below him and hinata because he knew what the boy was called as the hyuga family keep records of clans child's but what he saw wasn't the kind boy with yellow hair but a boy who didn't want to be in this world with silver hair what made her feel bad was that her chance with him got closer to  0 or close to none at all, she could only think about how she could  never be with him.....

“Okay.... Thanks black and everyone for sharing now let's get into class”

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