Prologue:
I pick up the phone that has been ringing for quite some time now. I pick it up to hear an apologetic voice.
"I'm sorry Mr.Hudson, We can't deliver your ordered food today. We have some problems at delivering today" said the voice. I recognized it immediately. It was Mr.Gustaf, the manager of the Swedish restaurant. I usually order my food there. I sighed. I've been ordering in this restaurant for 15 long years and never have they done this. So I can't exactly complain. I said "It's fine Gustaf, I'll come and pick it up" as I searched for my wallet. I hung the phone as I stepped out of the house. It's been 15 years since I stepped out of my house. My name is Jared Hudson. I'm a 37-year-old author more specifically a web novelist. That's my only source of income. My parents died when I was 21 and my relatives abandoned me but I wasn't sad after all I can throw my responsibilities to them away. So for everything I ordered online, from medicines to food and rent. I had just enough to live a satisfying life until today, "Oh God, why is the shop so far?" I screamed in frustration while everyone saw me strangely.
A million years or so later, I reached his shop and got my lunch. Now I have to go back. Shit. I was walking slowly in my thoughts. I didn't give enough attention to my surroundings. Suddenly I felt a sharp pain below my ribs as breathing became hard. It was so sudden that I was startled and went into the roadway. I didn't have enough time to look at the person who stabbed me as a truck was coming my way with bold letters at its front 'Truck-kun'. "Are you kidding m-" It hit me as I said as I fell dead on the spot.
It was black. I didn't know how to describe this sensation, I felt hot at the same time cold. Is it death? Is it finally coming to me? "Yes, you are dead." I heard a squeaky voice. "Who is it?" I asked doubting it was my conscience. "Open your eyes idiot," the same squeaky voice said. I opened my eyes to see a girl. She was about 170 cm tall with black flowing hair and dark mesmerizing eyes. She also had C cup breasts with a proportional body to support them. She is my type. "Welcome to my realm, Jared. I'm Eris. I'm an Evil God" she said in a squeaky voice. I stood in silence. "Hello, Are you still here?" she said. I nodded. "Are you not sad that you died?" she asked. "Nope, I have no lingering relations to that place," I said indifferently. She frowned. She wished for me to say the opposite but I won't. From her gothic outfit and makeup, I can see that she is a cliche sadistic goddess. She shook her head and said, "Jared, I'll reincarnate you in a different world than earth. It is a fantasy world called Tellus-". " Wait" I interrupted her. She frowned again. "Tellus means Earth. Do you Gods have any naming sense" I complained. I know I was arrogant but seriously? She ignored me and continued, "As I was saying Tellus is a fantasy world which has systems like games that you playing. But every person gets a different system. No one can guess what system a baby has and no one can determine someone's system except us Gods. So what I'm saying is that I'm going to give you a system and send you to Tellus" she said to annoy me.
I thought for a moment and said, "Okay." Again she didn't get the response she wanted. She sighed and I waited. Suddenly she smiled maniacally and said, "Ok, I'll tell you what system you'll get. I'll give you a gacha system and it purely depends on your luck. If someone's luck is lesser than 150, then even if they had a legendary ticket, they'll still only get a normal card. And I have to tell you, a person's luck had never shot past 120. That's why the gacha system is regarded as trash. So enjoy with the trashy system." I indifferently nodded my consent. She looked utterly shocked. Haha, that's what you get when you seek entertainment through me. She grits her teeth and formed a magic circle under my feet. I was sucked into the circle and traveled to a dark place.
In Eris' Realm:
Eris' POV
"What did you do Idiot?" an annoying voice came ringing through my ears. It was Lisa. She is also a fellow goddess that always annoys me. "Why the Fuck did you give him a fucking gacha system?" she shouted in my ears. "Listen, Lisa, He is too arrogant," I said. "No, he's not. He just didn't entertain you right?" she said getting as correct as ever. "Eris, you know it too right. The Gods of Earth only gave us permission for a single soul. You wasted that one precious soul giving him a trash system. The only one who can save Tellus is him. If Tellus dies, we'll perish with it dammit" she shouted at me. "Don't worry I gave him my blessing and a legendary ticke-" I started but she cut me. "Do you think your blessing will help? It just multiplies exp gained by 2 times. She needs to get to at least level 9950 by the age of 25. Do you think it's possible with a gacha system and your blessing? No. So, Lucius-sama gave his blessing to him. But if he isn't able to save Tellus, you'll die before we perish." She shouted as I almost cried. Damn, I think I screwed up today if Lucius-sama's involved. After all, he is our King.
Why is MC the pawn of the evil god when they got the king of god's blessing too....
Plus the MC is their only hope so shouldn't the evil god be his pawn?
The Evil God's involvement in this will be more than the king. As per my plan, his entry will be after 2 arcs.
1st Arc - Early Days
2nd Arc - Haven't decided the name
3rd Arc - Dark Reign
if tag is bi-s*x we have relation both or only Yuri ?
I planned to have both.
@Diana33 Girlslove and biseksula confuse bite
@Ryuujisan Don't worry. I'll give the easiest explanation and if it doesn't work we won't need both as I don't have any plans for harem
One very quick thing I noticed is that you gotta work on your paragraphs, they're too jumbled together making readers having to read big blocks of text, not to mention you didn't even make a paragraph for each person speaking it's just jumbled together.
Word of advice from a published author I found on the forums for every action within motion to other action that should be your paragraph, in other words end the paragraph when action or scene switch so as not to confuse reader's.
Thank you for your feedback. Hope you give me more in the coming chapters
Chapter title misspelled.
Thank you for noticing it, will change it
Thank you for this chapter!
Hope you'll come to like it more and more as the story starts