The scene opens up to the Xiao Long house. We go over to the backyard where we see Yang and Zwei the dog walking out from inside.
Yang: "Ruby said he was working on his car so he'll be in his garage." She looks down at Zwei "Come on Zwei let's go find him". He barks in response.
Yang looks out and sees said garage and starts walking over to it as she gets closer she starts to hear what sounds like a crank wrench from the inside.
Yang: "Sounds like she was right." She walks up to the door and opens it "Hey, Asher!"
The camera turns to look inside, you can't see the car yet, and what we see is a teenage boy with gold hair like his father but red tips like his mother. He is also wearing a white cloak that has some holes near the end of it. Hearing ang and he stops and turns his head. We see that he has silver eyes.
Asher: as he is standing up "Yeah, Yang? You need something?" Now that he is at his full height he is just a couple inches taller than Ruby.
Yang: "I came to ask if you can take a look at bumblebee? She's been having some engine issues."
Asher: "I can take a look soon as I'm done. I'm just putting the finishing touches on the car."
Yang:"Thanks and also Ruby wanted to ask if you would go to the store with her tomorrow there's a new copy of a magazine she wants."
Asher: "I guess I can go after school tomorrow. Also do you want to stay and see if it works."
Yang: "I guess I can. And why are you building it you can't even drive yet?"
Asher:"Don't question me."
Time Skip by 20 mins.
Asher is seen outside the garage waving his hands towards him. The car is heard inside running.
Asher:"Okay Bring her out."
The car is drove out.
The car parks and Zwei hops out of the driver seat.
Asher: "Good job Zwei." He kneels down and puts his hand up in a high five motion. Zwei runs up to him and give him a high five. Then Yang says behind him.
Yang: "Wow it runs. And to believe you built it from scratch." She says in a surprised voice.
Asher: looks over in fake hurt. "Do you have no faith in your dear younger brother?"
Yang:"Well I mean it is you, and you're not exactly the most responsible." She points out.
Asher: "Fair enough. Ok now lets see if the radio works." He walks over to the radio and turns it on.
(Play red vs blue warthog music.)
Asher looks impressed. "Looks like everything works." He hits the off button on the radio but the music does not stops. He tries it again.
Yang: "Is everything ok over there?"
Asher Is repeatedly pushing the off button. "Yes. Everything. Is. Fine. Ah screw this." Turns off the car. "See it works."
Yang looks at him in suspicion. "Okay then. Well see ya later Asher." Yang walks back towards the house.
Asher: "Yeah, see you later." Looks down at Zwei. "Don't give me that look." Zwei barks.
(There did it. I know its not very long but its the best I can do. So sorry. I might release the first episode tonight or tomorrow morning)
The scene opens up to the Xiao long house. We go over to the backyard where we see yang and zwei the dog walking out from inside.
Xiao long --> Xiao Long / yang and zwei --> Yang and Zwei
Yang:"Ruby said he was working on his car so he will be in his garage." she looks down to the dog "Come on zwei lets go find him".
Yang:"Ruby --> Yang: "Ruby / car so he will --> car, so he'll / she --> She / to the dog --> at Zwei / zwei lets --> Zwei let's
Yang:"Sounds like she was right." She walks up to the door and opens it "Hey Asher."
Yang:"Sounds --> Yang: "Sounds / it "Hey Asher." --> it. "Hey, Asher!"
The camera turns to look inside you cant see the car yet and what
inside you cant --> inside, you can't / yet and --> yet, and
Hear yang he stops and turns his head.
Hear yang --> Hearing Yang,
"yeah yang need something."
yeah yang --> Yeah Yang, / . --> ?
she's been having some engine issues."
she's --> She's
Asher:"I guess I can go after school tomorrow.
Asher:"I --> Asher: "I
Yang:"I guess I can. And why are you building it you cant even drive yet?"
Yang:"I --> Yang: "I / cant --> can't
Asher:"Don't question me."
Asher:"Don't--> Asher: "Don't
Asher:"ok Bring her out."
Asher:"ok Bring --> Asher: "Okay bring
Asher:"good job zwei."
--> Asher: "Good job Zwei."
Zwei runs up to him and give him a high five. Then yang is heard behind him.
give --> gives / --> Yang / heard --> says
Yang:"wow it runs.
Yang:"wow --> Yang: "wow,
She says in a surprised voice
. at the end
Asher: looks over in fake hurt. "do you have no faith in your dear younger brother."
remove : / do --> Do / ." --> ?"
Yang:"Well I mean it is you and your not exactly the most responsable."
Yang: "Well / you and your --> you, and you're / responsible --> responsible
Asher:looks impressed. "looks like everything works."
replace : with a space / looks --> Looks
Yang:"is everything ok over there."
Yang:"is --> Yang: "Is / . --> ?
Asher:Is repeatedly pushing the off button.
Asher:Is --> Asher is
ah screw this."
ah --> Ah
"see it works."
see --> See,
Yang:looks at him in suspicion. "okay then.
remove : / okay --> Okay
Asher:"ya see you later." Looks down at zwei. "don't give me that look." Zwei bark.
Asher:"ya --> Asher: "Yeah, / zwei --> Zwei / don't --> Don't / bark --> barks
If any future chapters have this many errors, I will instead copy and paste the entire chapter and put corrections into it in the comments. I will also remove the paragraph line things if there are no errors in them. Also, I really enjoy your RVB and Konosuba novels, although those two are the only ones that I've read, I really like them. I want to see if this is also as good. I haven't watched RWBY in years, last I remember was Ruby asking the genie lady about Oz's past, Yang meeting Ruby's mom (Is she also Yang's mom?), and their uncle guy fangirling over a lady who he made his scythe weapon modeled after.
Yeah, they will, these we're my first stories.
But it does get better, It's mainly the first three volumes.
Actually, removing the lines for me will be too forgettable, I'll just leave those. Is the next chapter the Ruby trailer video that I've only seen clips of? I only watched Yang's trailer video due to it having a reference in another novel I was reading.
@Pyrothium The next chapter is the first episode of volume 1. On Wattpad I have a separate book for my RWBY trailers.