“I accept the path you offer for me.” I faintly nodded my head, having trouble controlling my body under the outpouring of mana around me.
“I hoped you would say that. I know it is a difficult one that I offer you, but it is one with a noble cause. Your new name will be heralded for ages to come, should you succeed.” Inza placed her hands on my cheeks and spoke softly. “For now though, all you should focus on is this moment. This moment will bridge the gap between your old life and your new one.”
Inza moved one of her hands down my side, causing me to shiver from the unexpected stimulation. “This might cause you some discomfort, but you will feel no pain.” Inza guided me further down into the pool in front of us. As my waist touched the water, the vines and leaves that had made up a makeshift pair of underwear dissolved away into particles of light. They floated up for a moment before aiming behind me and melted into Inza’s flesh.
I moved to cover myself, but could only do so sluggishly. I was so tired of having so little control over my body.
“Don’t be shy, I’ve seen you in your barest state numerous times now. Both your body and soul are clear as day to me. I only require that you open yourself up to me.” Looking back, I could see Inza smiling pleasantly. Her expression was genuine and kind.
Reluctantly, I removed the arms that I had used to cover myself. My face flushed red and I shut my eyes tight. I couldn’t bring myself to look at her as she examined my naked form.
“Good, now let us find a more comfortable position.” Inza purred into my ear as my eyes stayed shut, causing goosebumps to run down my neck. She leaned me forward and slid herself in against my back. It was quite familiar, just the way that she had held me while I recovered previously.
I could tell by the soft squishiness pressing into me that her nature-given garments had also evaporated away. “You know, there are some cultures from across the eons that have referred to climax during sex as the ‘little death.’ In your case today, that will be quite literal. To connect your soul to mine, you will give yourself over to me completely. When I feel that connection take root, I will be able to lead your soul through the cycle without causing any harm to your body.”
While saying this, Inza has been running her hands over my body. In some places just barely brushing against my skin, where in others she would lightly squeeze. I could feel her breath on my neck. My own breathing became heavier and my face flushed deeper. “But, I- Ah!” I tried to say something, but a sudden deep kiss to my neck replaced my words with a surprised yelp.
Removing her lips from me, Inza spoke again before I had the chance. “It’s such a shame. A beautiful young lady like yourself should be able to live her life free of all this conflict. Now, I must drag you away for the sake of the bigger picture. I ask forgiveness for what I am going to put you through after this.” Regret hanged from her words. A tug of sympathy wrapped at my heartstrings and I started to forget the lesser feelings of shame and embarrassment. I let myself sink into her.
Inza felt me lean against her and intensified her exploration of me. She found her way to my inner thigh and caressed it gently. Her other hand moved under my breast and playfully bounced it up and down. I let out a deep and pleasant sigh, feeling heat rising in my chest. The first hand moved in closer to me traced back and forth over the slit between my legs. For just a moment, her hands lingered higher, circling the nub at the top. I tried to hold in a groan, not used to this kind of feeling.
My reluctance to be heard was not something that I could hold long. I gasped loudly as I felt Inza’s fingers move down and enter me, and at the same time her other hand firmly kneaded my breast. All of the previously weak muscles in my body sprang to life again under Inza’s movements. My hands reached to find plump thighs on either side of me, which I grabbed ahold of.
Inza retorted by leaning in to nibble on my ear. I had never considered that such a thing could feel good, but the slight pressure coupled with her soft lips as she moaned softly proved that it could be done. By this point, I had given up the notion that I could hold my voice in. I let my own groans of delight join Inza’s.
She released my ear from her lips and moved back down to my neck. She kissed into me deeply, and then her mouth tenderly sucked the flesh of my neck. This new sensation caused me to whine out loudly, feeling overwhelmed by the various pleasing feelings coming at me at once.
I hadn’t noticed, but the hand that played with my breast had inched down to meet with her other hand. Before I had time to think what she might be planning, she pinned the nub above where she penetrated against me with a finger. I inhaled sharply, digging my fingers into the supple thighs that stretched alongside me.
A very tense moment passed before she moved again, plunging the fingers of one of her hands deeper into me. The other hand rubbed slowly back and forth into me, filling my body with an immense heat. The motion changed to circling around, then to lightly tugging, then kneading. I could feel something building in me. It had been quite a long time since I felt something similar to this, but this only kept growing.
I loudly moaned, no longer at all concerned with how much noise I made. My legs spread themselves further apart, allowing the fingers churning through me to move even deeper. I couldn’t stand to keep my eyes closed any longer. I longed to see Inza’s face as she kissed my neck. Turning to look, I opened my eyes and was met with the gorgeous face I saw earlier curled into a smugly lewd grin. She paused her actions momentarily, and raised her head from my neck and studied my face briefly, then leaned into my lips and kissed me.
I quickly took to her advance and found our tongues meet each other’s. Our tongues swirled around each other, making sloppy sounds to mix with the slight splashing of water in front of me and the moans that I now directed into Inza’s mouth. My head was becoming very fuzzy. I could hardly discern anything besides the contact between us.
The pace we took quickened. My hips rocked against her hands seeking further build up. My toes curled up strongly as I felt an incredible tightness accumulate in me. In just seconds I found myself at a peak, every muscle contracting rhythmically. My eyes snapped shut again, unable to keep track of sight with pleasure rocking through me.
After much joyous time that seemed to drag on forever, the enrapturing pleasure faded away leaving a sense of satisfaction. Inza pulled her hands from my lower body and used them to steady my weakening figure being slumped against her. The strength that previously gripped her thighs was gone, a drained and content smile was all that I could muster.
“Now I can get to work.” Inza whispered into my ear. My body shifted slightly, and then suddenly I was gone. I couldn’t see, hear, or smell anything anymore. But I could feel, I could feel everything. There was so much around me, so much life. This place felt completely otherworldly.
A strange thing came into my senses. A deep darkness. It felt familiar somehow, like I had felt it in a dream.
There was no time to ponder further, as I felt a pulling on my very being. I could feel a rush around me, going faster than I could process. Then, another familiar feeling found its way to me. A slight vibration. It took time, not that I could tell how much was passing, but eventually the vibration became sound. It was humming. Next, feeling returned and I felt a hand running through my hair. Something sweet met my nose, an aroma unlike any I had ever encountered.
My eyes slowly pried themselves open, eager to see what lay before me. Inza was above me, my head resting on her lap.
“You’ve made it back.” A wide and joyful smile grew on her lips, her eyes glittering with pride.
“So, does that mean it worked?” I meekly responded, surprising even myself with how little sound came from me when I spoke.
“It does, and that means it is about time for you to accept a new name. A name that will carve itself into your soul and burn a path forward through all the hardships that you may face. Would you do me the honor of allowing me to bestow one upon you?” An open palm nuzzled against my cheek.
“You may. I trust my fate in your hands.” I attempted to nod, but could barely budge a single muscle into moving.
“Then I will grant you a name taken from an old blade. Its use in rituals signified the importance it held to the people of that land. The blade weaved back and forth like a winding road, much like the path that you will soon find yourself on. Though its purpose is noble at first, any blade can be turned into a weapon. A weapon that can either bring great victory and honor when wielded well, or fade away into the dust of history. You will be the blade that follows the winding path to victory, and save this world from its doom.”
As the words met my ears, I could feel deep within me an etching. The meaning of the name burned its presence into me.
“From this day forward, your name will be…” Inza placed her fingertips into my forehead. A white hot ray of light shot from the very depths of my soul, blasting the room with brilliant light. Just before my consciousness faded into white, I heard the name I would bear along this great journey of life. Not with my ears, but with my spirit. The name engraved into me.
Keris.
Will she be regretting the trust she has placed in Inza?
I have this really strange feeling that maybe crap is going to hit the fan......
Fans are rather finicky creatures, always at risk of being hit lol
@MegaSuperKami Lol gd work on the series atm I rlly enjoy this kind of novels but nvr rlly adventured into reading those written in english but normally read those translated from japanese
@CT7567 I very much take inspiration from Japanese works. There will be a lot of parallels just because that is the kind of material that I have enjoyed, and have adapted to my own style. English is my first language, so incorporating the Japanese-style work into my existing methodology creates an interesting combo. At least I think so.
"Now, I can get to work." Inza whispered into my ear. -> Now I can get to work,"
My eyes slowly pried themselves open, eager to see what lies before me. -> what lay
"I know it is a difficult one that I offer you, but it is one with a noble cause. Your new name will be heralded for ages to come, should you succeed."
Oh, just openly admit Malora is a sacrificial pawn of yours to try and reach some goal. No matter how "noble" that goal may be, she's still just a sacrificial pawn. Expendable, replaceable.
"I was so tired of having so little control over my body."
Inza certainly isn't helping things either with her manipulating of Malora, especially given Inza's choice of "method" to "help" Malora be killed and reborn via sex...
"Don't be shy, I've seen you in your barest state numerous times now. Both your body and soul are clear as day to me. I only require that you open yourself up to me."
And that makes it better?! That just makes it worse! You're trying to get Malora to submit to the wrong actions you've already done and say "well, it's already too late" and just accept being taken advantage of by you in a sexual manner. In addition to everything else and literally killing her and then reviving and rebranding her for your goals!!!
"To connect your soul to mine, you will give yourself over to me completely. When I feel that connection take root, I will be able to lead your soul through the cycle without causing any harm to your body."
"Now, I must drag you away for the sake of the bigger picture. I ask forgiveness for what I am going to put you through after this."
"It does, and that means it is about time for you to accept a new name. A name that will carve itself into your soul and burn a path forward through all the hardships that you may face."
"A weapon that can either bring great victory and honor when wielded well, or fade away into the dust of history. You will be the blade that follows the winding path to victory, and save this world from its doom."
I hope you're proud of yourself Inza. You've twisted, tricked, and manipulated an abused and abandoned woman into literally dying for you so you could remold her as you see fit so you can literally turn her into a living weapon. You've cut off all ties she had in the past so she had no one else to count on, made her give up her own name when she clearly didn't have to, and have turned her into a sacrificial pawn to do your bidding.
"You may. I trust my fate in your hands."
And it was a mistake for Malora, now Keris, to trust Inza like that. Keris may eventually forgive Inza for her transgressions, sin, and manipulations, but I honestly hope she doesn't. Inza doesn't deserve it, especially for turning Keris into a living weapon-that name Inza chose for her is of a sword for a reason. Inza has now turned Keris into a living weapon-Inza's metaphorical, and literal, blade to be wielded against her enemies.
Thank you for finding another round of typos for me! I’ll correct them when I get home to my computer this evening.
Inza’s intentions are becoming clearer now, but what thoughts remain unspoken? Find out next time on I Dumped the Hero!
@MegaSuperKami I mean, some "unspoken thoughts" are very obvious. I'll give Inza at least the minimal amount of credit in that she probably does feel genuine remorse/regret for what she's doing/done to Keris, especially since she went through something similar herself, but she wasn't betrayed and manipulated into her role like Keris has been. But even with her feeling that regret, she went and did it anyways and turned Keris into a literal living weapon to be used against her enemies, made even worse because she did it using s*x as the means to do it despite knowing full well how abused Keris was as Malora, physically, sexually, and emotionally.
Inza is the kind of character where while I don't quite wish for her brutal death, I very much eagerly await for her to be permanently ejected from the story and never return and inflict her presence on us or Keris
@FallingLeaf Keris is in need of some real positive influence and growth. While the initial darkness has been drawn away, a shadow still looms overhead. Soon, daybreak will find our heroine.
@MegaSuperKami The daybreak I think Keris needs most is friends (and lovers) that are entirely unconnected to either Lorn or Inza. People that will get to know Keris for who she is and value her for that, rather than what she is or what she can do for them
@FallingLeaf And she will find her way there. Don’t worry, I have no intention of making a forever-depressing sadness quest.