For the time being, it seems most reasonable to make chapters a weekly thing. It will take a lot of unaccounted stress off of me. So, that being said, I think Saturdays will be new chapter days until otherwise noted. Or until I spiral into another funk. Whichever comes first.
I wish the best to everyone for this new year. I wonder where I Dumped the Hero might end up in 2022. At any rate, love you all and let us get to the story!
After a filling breakfast, Inza led me back out to the courtyard we had trained in the day before. The sun was just above the eastern wall, so the day was still quite young. To occupy me this morning Inza tasked me with better controlling the urge to draw the mana in from the plants when I tried to manipulate them. To be safer for the plant life in the area, we started back in the center of the black ring I created yesterday and Inza brought me smaller samples to practice on.
Several shriveled husks later, I finally found some success. The tall potted flower in front of me bent to the side as I was trying to will it to do. I was met with a small round of applause from the onlooking Inza. “Wonderful darling! Keep it up. I have more pots prepared if need be, so give it your best!”
Behind Inza and outside the circle of dead grass was a line of potted plants. A couple of treants occasionally came with another and put it in the group. It was almost a battalion of potted plants at this point. I could see that Inza didn’t expect this to be a painless process.
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Hours later, when the sun looked down on us from its highest point, all that could be seen around me was a veritable graveyard of potted plants. This did not come without its gains though, as with sweat on my brow I caused the plant in front of me to wiggle around and grow beyond its current proportions. It was around my own height now, which compared to its initial size of hardly bigger than my hand was a huge change.
I focused hard and strained my control to the most that I could muster, and the plant under my power weaved its stems around how I wanted it to. It was a bit clumsy, and my precision was lacking, but I could control it for the most part.
I let slip my influence over the mana in the plant and it steadily shrank back down to its original form. I fell to my knees and took a deep breath. This had been extremely tiring.
Inza walked up behind me and placed a hand on my shoulder. “You have done brilliantly today. Let us go get some lunch and rest a bit.” Inza pulled me up as I grabbed her outstretched hand and she lead me back to the dining hall for lunch.
After a brief lunch and some teasing from Inza, I felt surprisingly well rested despite this morning’s exertions. We walked back out to the courtyard and Inza stood next to me in front of the plant graveyard.
“Your task for this afternoon will be to revive each and every plant that you sucked the life out of. With this, you will get a crash course in healing magic,” Inza stated frankly, as if it were the easiest thing in the world.
I was shocked again at the expectations of my teacher. “You…what?” I stared at her blankly, hardly able to process what she even thought I could do.
“You have become somewhat familiar with the art of manipulating mana. You have also experienced many instances of siphoning mana. I expect you to now attempt to reverse that process and imbue new life into the plants around us.” Inza let out a sly grin.
“You want me to bring back the dead?” I was revolted at the implications of such a thing.
“Not exactly. I want you to repair the damage done to the plants. It isn’t bringing back the dead, because they were without souls in the first place. There is nothing to bring back, only damage to repair. This magic can mend wounds and revitalize the mana of a person, but if their wounds had already gone far enough to remove the soul from their body then they will not be able to return even if the wounds are mended.”
“I… think I understand.” I gazed down at the ground, burdened with the weight that came along with the words Inza had spoken.
“Good, now I have matters to attend to. You will guide your training today from here while I am away. If there is even a single plant left in such a pitiable state when I return at sunset, then I will personally reprimand you.” Inza turned away and waved a hand at me. She walked through a different entrance than we had normally used and disappeared from sight.
What have I gotten myself into?
I looked at a few of the nearest pots to myself. They seemed just as lifeless as they had been before. Nothing new about that. All I had to do was inject some mana into them, right?
I put my hand on one of the black and lifeless plants. I couldn’t feel any mana at all from it. It was dry as a bone. Well, technically it still had water in it. But without mana, it was nothing more than a husk.
I had felt many times now the act of sucking mana out of these plants recently. It couldn’t be that hard to reverse the flow the other way could it? Imagining a channel connecting me to the plant in my hand, I tried to flow some mana through it. I didn’t know how much it was going to take to revitalize this plant, so I tried to pinch the flow tightly. I didn’t know what would happen exactly if I used too much mana, and I was not keen to find out.
After a few moments, nothing much happened. I could feel the equivalent of a few drops of mana go into the plant. Nothing seemed to change, so I tried to increase the flow a little bit.
Slowly and gently. Focus on keeping the flow limited. Don’t allow myself to lose control. It was surprisingly easy to not worry about draining energy when I was focused on doing the exact opposite.
The black husk started to react. Green pigment appeared in the depths of the black. The stem started to stand itself upright. Color returned to the petals, now a deep, velvety purple ring that surrounded a lavender center.
Once the flower seemed to be returned to its original state I cut off the flow of mana. I wasn’t very familiar with how much mana was used for certain things, but I was glad to find that this did not tire me out at all. Maybe I really could heal these plants.
Removing myself from my thoughts, I looked around for a moment. There were at least a few dozen of these left. My confidence faltered a little. I really shouldn't get ahead of myself after only doing one of these.
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I had a few mishaps along the way, but I did eventually get all of the plants healed. I somehow didn’t even feel tired at all from the whole ordeal. The couple of times my concentration broke all that happened was the flow of mana expanded and instantly fixed the plants. I cut off the connection immediately when that happened. I still didn’t want to see any kind of overload if such a thing were even possible.
The sun was dipping down in the sky, only the top half was visible over the walls of the courtyard that I was in. The last thing that needed to be fixed was the grass, or what used to be grass anyways. It would be phenomenally tedious to do each blade one by one, so I had to try something else.
Inza had said that the way mana can travel from your body to its target was through the air. I still wasn’t too sure about the air being anything but empty, but I had done something similar before. It might be worth a shot to try doing something similar to that.
Imagining every single blade of grass seemed impossible, so instead I tried to imagine the mana spreading out over the ground around me. I held my hands out to my sides with my palms facing the ground, channeling my mana out and down towards the earth.
A gentle blue glow settled in the air, which helped me know that something was happening at least. I put all of my willpower into dispersing the mana into a thin layer over the blackened strands that used to be grass. The glow successfully aligned itself with the black circle I stood in. I gave the mana one final push downward, and hoped that the mana would find its way into the grass.
For a moment, the glow faded away. Then, the ground started to glitter. The grass that until now had been blackened and dead started to grow lively and green again.
And it kept growing. Oh no. The grass grew and weaved around alarmingly fast. I stumbled to quickly get away from whatever was happening. By the time I reached the edge of the circle, the grass was already waist high. With a final push, I made it out of the ring.
I didn’t stop running until I was quite the distance away from the wildly flailing grass that was now taller that I was. I didn’t know what I was seeing now, but I had definitely done something that I shouldn’t have.
The grass thankfully stopped growing, but just as worryingly it started to condense all of the blades of grass back down. It seemed like it was trying to form some kind of shape. As the grass compacted upon itself more and more, I noticed a light that was forming in the center of the mass. It was rather familiar, though I couldn’t tell why that was.
A worried look on my face almost turned to tears. Would Inza be angry? I had done something wrong again. Flashes of the pain I had felt before when Lorn would strike me when I had done something wrong blew through my head. I no longer held back the tears. I could not turn my gaze from the event unfolding in front of me, but I fell to my knees and wept.
The light grew brighter to combat the setting sun, but it did not seem to illuminate the area around it. The grass finally condensed enough to form some kind of shape. It seemed to be something around seven feet tall and was vaguely shaped like a human. Though it was made of grass, it came across as burly, though its face was gaunt and sunken in where its eyes and mouth should be.
I waited there, tears streaming down my face, unsure what I should do. Should I go and find Inza? Could I even find her in this massive place? Should I just wait? The grass doesn’t seem to be doing anything else now.
My thoughts were halted in an instant when I saw the grass figure start to stir. My eyes shot wide open and my chest felt like it was locked in a vise. It moved like a lumbering giant. One leg of grass rose, then the other. Then the crude steps started making progress. Very soon, the creature was charging at me at an alarming speed.
I didn’t have the time or the presence of mind to even try running away. I was at the mercy of the thing I had created. The grassy arms of the creature were spread wide, making the already large figure even more imposing. Just as I was about to be run over, the creature bent down and I braced myself for whatever was to come. I shut my eyes tightly.
I could still see the flow of mana around me even with my eyes shut. The large arms wrapped around me and lifted me off the ground. I thought I would be crushed by such a being, but… nothing else happened.
Many seconds passed, and I opened my eyes. My head was right next to the face of the creature. It stared into me with its empty, grassy eye sockets. It was a scary face, no matter how one looked at it. I was suspended in the air, being seemingly bear hugged by a giant grass monster. I couldn’t struggle for fear that it would break me on principle. All I could do was keep looking at it.
Minutes felt like hours. Only a handful of minutes came and went, but it felt like an eternity.
Our strange staring contest was finally interrupted by the startling exclamation of Inza, who had approached unbeknownst to me. “You really do get yourself into trouble when left unattended, don’t you?” I jolted in place as much as I could while held off of the ground in the embrace of a giant. “Will you be getting down from there so we can go get some dinner?”
“Wh-What do you mean? I can’t exactly get down from here. Save me from this thing, please!” With backup nearby, I started to struggle in the arms that held me.
“Oh dear, don’t call her a thing. You are going to hurt her feelings. Have you tried asking her to put you down?” Inza practically sounded snide in her remark, as if it should have been obvious that I should have just asked this giant lumbering thing to let me down.
I looked back at the face of the grass giant, and with a small voice pleaded to my captor. “Would you… let me down… please?” Immediately betraying my expectations, the lumbering creature went to set me down while making a strange groaning noise. “Uh, thank you…” The creature responded with another strange groaning sound that sounded almost happy.
Inza broke the silence again after a moment of me staring in awe. “It has been quite some time since I have seen a greater treant formed. You really must have put a lot into your work today, haven’t you?”
I turned to Inza questioningly. “I don’t really know what I did. How did I cause this thing to appear?”
Inza tutted and waged her finger at me. “I already told you she isn’t a thing. She may not have a name, but you can certainly refer to her as something much more affectionately than ‘thing’ can’t you?”
I withdrew a bit at her scolding. “Sorry,” I said to nobody in particular. “So, what is she and why did she appear when I was trying to fix the plants?” I glanced back at it - or rather her - and saw her swaying back and forth and doing nothing in particular.
Inza crossed her arms at me and pouted a little. “You are usually so receptive. I don’t like having to repeat myself so many times. She is a greater treant, and no doubt she was created when you infused plants with too much mana. A dense enough concentration of mana in a plant will act as a beacon and a soul will find its way to the new vessel offered to it. To have created a greater treant, it must have been quite a lot of mana that you used.”
That was strange. Inza spoke as if it was some great feat to create something like this, but it didn’t seem like I had used that much mana. I didn’t feel any fatigue, and I didn’t feel like I had used much of any mana. Maybe it was just a coincidence.
“I don’t think I really did all that much. I just used what felt like enough to bring the plants back to health.”
“You may have to learn moderation in the future, but I do not have the time to teach you now. Ask your new treant friend to join us coming to the dining hall. We should get you a meal and a good night of sleep to prepare you for the start of your journey tomorrow.” Inza turned and started toward the entrance that would lead us back inside.
We ate the usual assortment of nature’s bounty with a couple new additions. All the while, the smaller treants that I had seen up to this point were clinging to the body of the new greater treant. Two of them were even swinging from the outstretched arms of the greater treant like a swingset and making gleeful chirping sounds.
Without much more conversation or remark, Inza guided me back to the room I had been sleeping in for another night. “Good night Keris, be sure to rest well for tomorrow.” Inza gave a little wave and walked away.
Despite the fact that I hadn’t felt fatigued from the mana usage today, I had gone through a lot and was quite mentally exhausted. Just about as soon as I had gone to lie down in the hammock that awaited me, I had started falling asleep. I knew that whatever came tomorrow, I could only hope to follow Inza’s guidance and do as much as I could.
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The army had made camp a few hundred meters from the edge of the forest. It wasn’t quite a full day to get from the village of Hefka to the forest’s edge, but Lorn assured that every soldier should be well rested before they tackled the foe before them. An army doesn’t make quick ground over roots anyway.
Lorn himself sat against a tree stump. His eyes were bloodshot and his grimace kept the soldiers away from his chosen rest spot. That said, he hadn’t slept since they got to Hefka. And he didn’t seem like he was going to be sleeping now either. The only communication that he had made with the soldiers was a quick order to make camp. Any further questioning would only earn a soldier a vicious look, or maybe worse.
As he leaned his back against the stump, he stared daggers at the tree line in front of him. The next day, they would fight a being far beyond what could be beaten by normal means. He would have to take drastic measures. He knew that it was unlikely that anyone in his company would be alive this time tomorrow.
He didn’t care.
All that mattered to him was getting back what was his. He knew somewhere deep down that he could no longer find what he was looking for, but his pride could not be stopped that easily. He would cut the world in two if it meant he could get what he wanted.
Thanks for the chapter! One a week is a pretty standard thing really so it's good you're setting a reasonable pace, and hopefully we don't get any spirals anytime soon... though they are unpredictable and a bit*h and a half with their timing....
On to the chapter! Keris is clearly outperforming what Inza either expected, or *wanted*, based on her reaction to the treant.... grassant? So that's good news for Keris... maybe probably... that she can slip the collar/noose Inza wanted to fashion her...
Her flashbacks to Lorn when she messed up really does emphasize that even if her soul is new the mental scars still remain, and I think it's interesting that she would *expect* Inza to berate her for failure, despite her best attempts to be welcoming and calming.... sucked in, Inza... ya big meanie!
Lorn is Lorn... too much to hope Inza kills him though... as a certain super mutant once said, "we all have our own destinies... I would not rob you of that"... even if it would have been the best for everyone....
Anyway that's a tangent, the writing, pacing, and everything else was superb as always~ looking forward to seeing you every saturday~
@RaelDeer Your words are kind as always Thank you for joining today!
Keris has gone through a lot, and as long as she lives will bear the scars of the past. Her soul and mana have strengthened significantly, but truly her mind may be her greatest challenge. Inza, despite her "methods" at work, can't heal the pain inside Keris. Though her actions, motivations aside, have created an environment where it may be possible with time for Keris to find her own way.
Lorn is such a troublesome character to write. He can't just be a one-dimensional plot jockey. Even in his rattled head there are things going on. It is very hard to piece together a person out of that mess of a man. Unfortunately,
he won't be gone any time soon.
Also, every time I think about him now I can practically smell his B.O.
I am very excited for the next part coming up. Not the next chapter probably, but the one after that has got me really motivated. Not to say that the next chapter isn't also important, but I am just fangirling over what I came up with when I sat down to get some more details planned. Not to leave you hanging for two weeks or anything, but I really hope it comes together well!
See you next Saturday!
Ugh, that Fallout 3 nonsense at the end in the vanilla game…
It was especially stupid if you brought Charon with you instead of Fawkes since Charon regards himself as pretty close to your servant since you bought his mercenary contract, and this would literally be one of the few/only orders he would refuse, and for no reason at all. The sanctimonious epilogue cutscene crap “You didn’t do the stupid thing and commit unneeded suicide when there were other options (including one that should be obvious since Fawkes literally did the same thing for you before to get the GECK!), so you’re a bad person and a coward.” was especially grating.
At least the Broken Steel DLC fixed it…sort of, even if they didn’t actually fix the ending credits cutscene with the narrator calling you a coward. And Fawkes and Charon still kind of insulted you or were passive aggressive about it despite them going into the lethally radioactive area being the far smarter option since they’re both immune to radiation. But at least the option to use the smart decisions was included, instead of having to be stupid and suicidal or sent in Sarah Lyons to sacrifice herself instead
@FallingLeaf It has been a long time since I have thought about Fallout 3. That whole scene was a mess. I first played it on PS3 before the DLC and then didn't play the DLC until years later on PC. It was a much better game when I went back to play it on PC with all the DLC. I am sad at how dated it is starting to feel. A lot like Skyrim. I just wanna play it for hundreds of hours again, but all I can do is install a dozen mods which takes like three hours to find and then install the ones I want. And then I play for an hour or two before I get bored because the game doesn't hold up to the nostalgia that I remember playing it for the first time. Shame on me.
@MegaSuperKami yeah, it's hard to want to try and mod the game a bunch and then get too tired/burnt out from getting all the mods set up and working to actually play the game after that. I still enjoy playing FO New Vegas though, even vanilla/barely modded, and even after several hundred hours and playthroughs including ones that are about as close to %100 as I could manage (all areas explored, as many quests as possible done, trying to get most/all unique weapons, etc.), but it is often years between playing FONV, so the time between playthroughs helps
@FallingLeaf Last year I did a play-along with a friend where we each played New Vegas and streamed to each other. It was a fun and silly thing where we tried to do things like DLCs together and stuff but went about them very differently from each other. Gotta spice it up
@MegaSuperKami sounds like a lot of fun. I know I've had fun a few times doing low level runs of Lonesome Road with a new character, like running straight there after goodsprings, and just going through (most of) Lonesome Road and seeing how I did, and power leveling the whole way and skipping a lot of early game/low level dullness (only most of the way so I could get the better perks/boss dialogue at the end of the DLC later after doing more of the main game). Old World Blues can be fun after that so I have a easily accessible house from anywhere in the map, and I'll usually be high enough level after doing most/all of Lonesome road to be able to get the high skill checks needed for various things in the OWB quests and stuff. Honest Hearts can be fun at that point too since I'll have enough strength and perks to be able to carry more stuff there and to not be screwed while I'm stuck in Zion Canyon (since I don't like doing the quick exit method of "Chaos in Zion Canyon" where you pretty much kill everyone just to get out quicker) ...Dead Money can suck it though, that is easily the least fun DLC. The whole "kidnapped, captured, and forced to do the bidding of a lunatic" scenario is one that I *loathe* with a passion. I hate it when those scenarios pop up in stories, let alone having to actually play through it myself.
It is fun at least to give the game the middle finger and cheat a bit with console commands to give extra carry weight and just grab all the gold at the end instead of having to leave it behind as intended . I did it the legit way once and managed to get out with all the loot without cheating, and after that I just use console commands for it, then leaving the huge piles of gold in either the Lucky 38 apartment or the Sink home
@FallingLeaf Oh, the memories
@MegaSuperKami Kinda makes me want to play it again and do a new run. I've been kinda wondering what I should do next since I'm kinda burnt out on the game I was playing before, though maybe I'll pivot into something like playing a Dark Souls type game again since it's been a while since I played any of them. Also looking forward to tomorrow and the new chapter :D
@FallingLeaf Dangit guys! Now I'M gonna have to go play NV again to satisfy the craving you've given me
@RaelDeer mission accomplished
@FallingLeaf I was gifted Remnant: From the Ashes for Christmas, so that is the next game on my list... after I spend too much time playing the winter Dota 2 event. So soulslike sounds good to me Also, I spent some extra time today editing and proofreading the next chapter so there shouldn't be quite as many mistakes to catch... I hope
@RaelDeer Good. Goooooooood. Succumb to the desire to play old Bethesda games. It will be great. You will look back at the classics and then be filled with regret that there isn't a new one coming for a while. Elder Scrolls VI is still a far away fairy tale that I dearly hope lives up to at least some of its buildup. There is no way it could possibly fulfill the expectations of being the next 'Skyrim' like we all want. Skyrim hit in a very particular environment for success that I don't think they will be privy to with their next installment.
@MegaSuperKami OBSIDIAN!
Bethesda is dookie (I will give them skyrim but only because I can mod it to be enjoyable, fallout 4 is still boring even with mods)
Though new obsidian isn't very good... outer worlds was *supremely* disappointing
@RaelDeer Very agreed. Fallout 4 was so clunky and halfhearted. Outer Worlds I can't even with the ending. Most of the game studios of yore have fallen to shame from their previous success.
(Also, I realized I posted my last reply before I was done typing so I fixed that lol)
@MegaSuperKami @FallingLeaf I blame both of you for my wifi-adapter dying when I tried to download F:NV...
gotta go buy a replacement now so I can resume using my desktop
@RaelDeer I plead the fifth
This is the price one must pay to play a Fallout/Elder Scrolls game. There will always be something that breaks.
@RaelDeer Sacrifices must be made for greatness.
More seriously-wow, that sucks. Hopefully you can find a good replacement that isn't too expensive and get to FONV before you lose interest in it
small update: everything is fine now, wifi adapter decided to work again
Cleared out goodsprings, got to primm and theeen... got bored
@RaelDeer Great news! Go challenge Lonesome Road! Should make for a decent challenge if you go in at low level. But remember, the goal is fun! So feel free to use a console command to increase carry weight by 10000 if you want to grab literally everything in sight and cart it around with you until you can offload it onto some poor unsuspecting shopkeeper. Best part of Lonesome Road is you can leave at any time, so you don't have to do everything all at once like you do in the other 3 DLC campaigns
@RaelDeer Glad to hear! I knew it would all work out! Totally! For sure! New Vegas would never hurt you like that. Leave you wanting, sure, but never hurt you