I found myself both happy and unhappy that I had to leave the little girl. If I was going through the things that I was going through, I feared for what the girl was going through.
I was scared of myself. I could have killed that girl and probably would have if I had stayed in that room any longer.
I hated myself. I hated the people who had locked up the girl even more. How could they?
I nearly lost it when I saw Avery again like I had in the girl's room. He had a smile plastered on his face that I wanted to beat off of him.
Instead I sat on the bed and stared at him.
"Trial two was extremely successful. Not in the ways one would expect, however. You showed different results than what we suspected. I congragulate you."
Don't congratulate me, you monster, I thought.
With that, he turned around. "Try to get some rest. There's more trials coming tomorrow. And food will be here shortly if you get hungry." He walked out, the cell door closing behind him.
You should add this to another chapter. There isn't enough for this to be by itself.
Meh...
I agree
I don't understand why people write reincarnation stories only to make the MC lose his memories. There is no point, should have just written a character that was already in that universe. The whole point of reincarnation is the memories.
Not in this one :D
Reincarnation doesn't allow for memories to be brought to your next life, that's how the cycle works. Ofcourse if your referring to the novel version of reincarnation, it's either you have to specify that you want your memories to stay or have some kind of cheat that is able to bypass that.
@IWantToBeAGoodAuthor Could have just given said cheat to the character you created that already existed in the universe. Would have made a way better story and not piss people off by taking away memories which is the whole point of the reincarnation trope for novels. There is a reason why amnesia stories are not popular.
@BreezyNovels
Though there been time that someone supposed have reincarnated And remembered their past life however that person persona at the age of 7 forgot those memories but at the age of 5 he proved that he knew these that only an elderly man and his wife knew the man had die 5 years before
@IWantToBeAGoodAuthor what cycle? In a story you determine how reincarnation works for yourself.