Inside a room lit only by a low-light lamp and natural light intruding from the curtains, an 18-year-old woman lay on a bed, eyes closed. A slumber that seems so peaceful had overtaken her, with her there sleeping like an angel, it gave their room a serene feeling.
Her eyelids slowly opened, revealing her violet eyes. Lily Adiel eh? I like that name. She smiled.
She sits up then stretches her arms in the air and takes a look at her shoulder where some silky white hair lay, Ooo~ I like white. Then gets up off the bed and walks toward the grand mirror attached to the wall and stands in front of it.
Looking at herself naked, she can't help but compare herself to her mother, Lilith. I look a lot different Is all she could say, although, she loved how she looked. She was milky-white and had long wavy white hair which she styled into a ponytail with a hairband she found on the desk next to her, beautiful violet eyes that had a black eyeliner applied to emphasise her bright violet iris, these eyes were paired with plump dark red lips and an enchanting face.
Her body was just as enchanting. She had an entrancing lithe outline, large breasts although not as big as her mother's cow tits, her hips were wide and her ass was probably her biggest feature. On her abdomen, a Fuschia pink Succubus mark resided, marking her forever as a sex demon. She was definitely slimmer than her mother but she loved it no less.
If I had a dick right now I'd be hard as a rock, drooling in public. She thought while caressing her mark.
Snapping out of her inspection she thought, Got one more thing to check, mother said something about a system.
She thought, Status
| STATUS | |
| Name: | Lily Adiel |
| Race: | Demon |
| Sub-race: | Lilin Succubus |
| Class: | Seductress |
| Bloodline: | Mother Lilith's |
| Level: | 1 (0%) |
| HP1Health Points/MP2Mana Points/AP3Arousal Points | 100/1004Average Standard at Level One, 200/2005Super High for Level One, 23/1006High Arousal Capacity |
| Strength: | 157Above Average |
| Magic Power: | 508Insanely High |
| Agility: | 209High |
| Charm: | 10010Astonishingly Beautiful |
| Skills: | Charm/Arousing Touch/Grow Cock/Shrink Cock/Demonise/Succubus' Whip/ Inventory |
That's a nice status design... and the starting stats and skills are great, thank you, mother. She knew this was only possible because of her mother's power, if all succubi received such stats and abilities from level one then it certainly wouldn't be a human-dominated world.
She even gave me the ability to grow a cock if I missed my days as a man... She smiled slightly then activated the skill.
[ Grow Cock activated ]
Her pussy disappeared and what replaced it was a massive 10-inch cock, she could feel that she could increase the size if she wanted to, however she felt this was for the best. It was rock hard the moment she grew it, probably an effect of the skill.
She gave it a few loving strokes before deactivating the skill, reverting her genitalia back to her constantly wet pussy.
[ Grow Cock deactivated ]
Even though she had only been her daughter for mere minutes, she had bestowed such blessings. Lily thought only of love for her mother, an effect of the bloodline she guesses.
Done inspecting herself and her status, she sits back down onto the comfortable bed and looks around her room, it was a cosy room with simple features you could find in any bedroom; a bed, wardrobe, mirror, desk, etc. Although it seemed as if the room was a bit bare-bones for an 18-year-old girl, the quality of these items was nothing to scoff at. The bed was the most comfortable thing she had ever laid in, the desk was massive and grand, her wardrobe and mirrors the same as the desk, not to mention the artwork on the wall, although a bit sexualised, seemed very expensive.
Damn, are my parents rich or something? She thought it uncanny that this was her room.
*Ding!*
She turned her attention to the interface hovering in the air.
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Lily Adiel - The mysterious succubus of the predominantly human Adiel Family. Lily Adiel was a baby succubus abandoned on the streets in the middle of Winter when the Adiel Family's Patriarch, Darius, found her on the street, the Patriarch was luckily a rare human who never discriminated against other races and pitied the young girl who was surely going to die if left alone in the freezing cold. So, he picked up the girl and brought her into his mansion where he cared for her. Later that day, he inspected her with a skill of his and noticed that she had unbelievable potential. This made him decide to bring her into the family even though he knew those of the family would bully her for being a succubus, a sub-race of demons that are usually too weak to do anything but get fucked and look pretty for a living, few succubi are useful and even less for being powerful; they were naturally victims within this strength-based social ladder that this world has. And she was, for the most part, bullied. She was constantly called a "slut" even though she was a virgin because of the restrictions put on her by the Patriarch, she was tripped up in hallways, sexually harassed often and was even beat up sometimes. The only person who didn't bully her was the Patriarch, whom she saw as her father figure. She admired and respected the Patriarch who often encouraged and comforted her saying things like, "Don't pay them your attention, in the future, you'll be the one discriminating." with a smile since he knew how great her potential was when compared to those hedonistic young masters. As such, 18-years passed. To help you understand and integrate yourself into her life, I have installed her feelings into you, along with the knowledge of the old Lily Adiel. |
When Lily read the last part, knowledge started filling gaps in her brain; the family members, the bullying and suffering, the Patriarch, social system, old Lily's education and knowledge, and the general knowledge of her surroundings.
Although a bit overwhelming, it was still manageable. I see... what a poor girl. Although I can't fully empathise, I can partially.
In her old life as Lewis, he was bullied in high school for being a nerdy pervert, although he was shameless, it still hurt when he got bullied. He has no regrets of being a pervert as he believed in being true to himself, however, he did hate those who tried to make him ashamed.
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Lily Adiel had led a restricted life of regret and discrimination, however now that she is 18-years-old, her restrictions have been lifted and her journey through magic and power has finally started. In this world, anyone who is 18 and has magical capabilities has to go to an academy to learn how to use their abilities, explore features of the world safely, and grow into fully-fledged adventurers within this impossibly large world. The Adiel academy's entrance performance test is later today, with your newfound knowledge of your surroundings, you should be able to make it there however if you get lost there is a map in your Inventory skill. Good luck and make mother proud! - Lilith |
I promise to right the wrongs done to you, old me... She thought with conviction.
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Make target into a slave Votes: 10 18.2%
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Make target into a loyal friend with benefits (less subservient than slaves but still obedient) Votes: 12 21.8%
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Make target into a family member (decides whether the incest tag stays or not) Votes: 31 56.4%
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Something else... (Say in comments) Votes: 2 3.6%
I think it should be a combination of the second and third options. The target should be transformed into a sexy succubus but as a loyal friend/servant (not slave) instead of a family member (though they will still have higher stats compared to other succubae, don't want weaklings dragging our MC down), that way the incest can be avoided. Incest among succubae doesn't really carry the negative connotations it does with other races so it's not a real turnoff for me in that case but I would still prefer to not have it if given the choice.
I understand what you're saying, however, this poll is mainly to decide whether or not the incest tag will stay and it's looking like people want incest so that's what I'm most likely going to happen. My original idea was to not do it but then I started reading another novel and it looked really fun to write. I'm sorry if it's just not for you friend.
@CynicWizard It's okay, like I said before if it's among succubae incest isn't that big a deal to me. Have you heard of the novel "I Am Succubus!"? It also stars a guy turned succubus and she has an incestuous relationship with her older sister. Despite that I enjoy the novel very much and it's looking like I'll enjoy this one too.
@CynicWizard Why not all 3? If Lily's got all this potential then her Demonize ability could give her the choice of how to handle it. Meaning that if people bully her, she would just make them her slaves (similar to a slave-master contract that I recall from another novel on here). If they're true friends, turn them into family as a "reward"; it doesn't even have to be consented, she could just do it. If they're somewhere in between, well, she just makes them into friends with benefits. That could even have the potential to be changed depending on the actions taken by the friends.
They could (potentially) never move up, but the friends could be turned into slaves if they use their free will to knowingly work against Lily. Just an interesting take on it, I think, because the slaves could lose all of their former status and connections (e.g. if they were part of the Adiel family from birth, then they lose all claim to that when she makes them her slaves, it also takes out some of that non-succubae incest that could have turned up without making it completely exclusive to extended relations who could end up as the "loyal friend").
@miyoga I like this! You have good ideas miiyoga. When I finished the chapter and wrote the poll, it was late at night at like half 4am and my brain was shutting down so I clearly wasn't in the idea creation mood
@CynicWizard Following the previous comment, I leave you some ideas:
* A younger brother / sister who always made fun of Lily is turned into a succubus by her. In this way, a kind of revenge would be generated. It could be the "consider him as a familiar" type, perhaps the "onee-sama".
* A childhood friend, who when Lily sees her for the first time thinks "I want her for me!", And could be of the "friends with rights" type.
* Someone random whom she turns into a succubus because he needs subordinates. The "slave" type.
As I say, they are just ideas. Anyway, I expect great corruption scenes !! For the moment, the story looks very good.
@Yuusha_Fuyuno Awesome suggestions! The first one I definitely like, the second one may have to wait for a bit because Lily Adiel didn't have friends so it'll be in the academy when option 2 arrives and 3 I'm pretty sure I'm going to do but a bit differently. I'll announce what I'll do next chapter but thank you for the suggestions they really do help.
As long as I take my time and don't rush I don't see why it can't be a good story, plus I'm doing it solely for fun and I'm enjoying it.
@CynicWizard Also, another possibility is that the brother or sister is older than Lily and that, by becoming a succubus, they rejuvenate by acquiring a younger appearance and becoming the little sister.
@CynicWizard If you're interested, I remembered where I saw that demonization skill used the way that you're thinking, as well as another story where it's "Humans VS all" (urls in the spoiler).
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/193622/the-rising-of-the-fallen-warlord/
The MC isn't a succubus, but they do have the [Demonize] ability and use it exactly 1 time (that we know of) and build a harem where the "slaves" are more like loyal friends but with a slave-master contract.
Also, here's that 2nd story I mentioned before the spoiler:
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/207438/the-lesbian-demon-lord-conquers-the-world/
@miyoga Thanks for the links, probs going to check out how they did it before I finalise the skill.