System loading...
Loading modules....
others gifted you blessings
Loading new module....
Module vitality mutating due to conditions being met...
New module made, yang...
Advanced module lava made due to conditions being met....
All modules loaded...
Rolling race...
Race mutating due to affinities
error...cannot fully mutate...base material is too weak...
Mutating to appropriate race that base material...
Successful...
Extra 300 points detected...
100 points used to improve living conditions...
100 points used to improve starting location...
100 points used to raise Luck stat...
Welcome to your new life, relax until you are born.
Your system will not be available until you are 10yrs old.
Your divine tube stream starts at that time as well, gotta cash in on the cuteness. Note during this time censoring will be applied when needed. We do not want to antagonize the loli police.
Alex snorted, well at least snorted in his head. He then relaxed while he waited to see this new world.
Alex suddenly awoke as she felt she was being moved. 'Is it time already?'
If you mean, is it time for you to poke your head into a new world? Yes, it is.
He heads bumped into something, then he was squeezed into a tight place suddenly. Going through the tight place took to long, then suddenly he felt a cool breeze on the top of his head. This sensation was replaced by something warm and soft. The warm and soft things wrapped around him and then pulled him out of the warm, tight and wet place he was in. This pulled him into a cold place he did not like and instinctively let out a wail, letting everyone nearby know his displeasure.
Something warm and dry was then rubbed on him, he then was set on something warm and soft. His nose picked up on something that smelled good, so he crawled towards it and started to suck on it. Some sort of divine liquid flowed into his mouth. After a bit of time Alex opened his eyes to find himself, on a beautiful woman, suckling on her breast. She has emerald green eyes with silted pupils, long black hair, pale skin and pointed ears. Alex hoped this is his mother, then his sister should be beautiful. He personally did not care what she looked like, he knew though it make her happy. He then looked across his mom, to his little sister suckling at their mom's other breast. He then started to nod off, feeling safe, full and warm.
He awoke to find himself being held in a massive man's hands, they where talking though he did not understand anything they are saying. Though they seem happy, I am also happy hoping this man is my father. I just hoped I was at least half the man he is, then I should be plenty big.
Time passed as Alex adjusted to his new life, he started to learn the language spoken by everyone. He soon heard something odd though that some of the others mentioned, they called him, she. Unable to figure out what was going on he shoved it into the back of his mind as he yawned. His mind might be mature however his body is still a baby.
He finally got an answer, His Mom was talking to someone when he overheard them talking about him, or as she should say, her. Apparently, she is a girl with both lower bits, not the rarest thing but not the most common thing ether. It was around this time I found out who all these other people where that are always around. My dad is apparently a bit of a stud, he has a harem. I have 4 moms, my birth mom is Sera a Salamander like dad, Molly a Holstaur, Cathrine a Lamia, Miu a Ratatoskr (squirrel girl).
He heard a sound and turned his...her head, she needs to get used to being a chick now. At least she still has her little brother. Anyway, she sees Cathrine coming over to her with a sleeping Liz in her arms.
Cathrine is almost as tall as dad when at her normal height, she is built in a body builder way. Her snake half has a similar pattern to an anaconda, her upper body has a mocha tone to it. Her hair is silver and is normally tied up in a braid.
Once she arrives in front of Alex, Alex holds out her arms. She picks up Alex with her free arm like she weighs nothing. “There you are, we are going shopping while the rest finish with some things.”
Alex just nods, she has a strong feeling that this is just a way to get us kids out of the house for a bit. The mom that takes us out rotates in a set order and the moms that stayed home always look satisfied when we get back.
Alex had a similar pattern for the first ten years, then the fated day came. Systems are a thing that everyone gets at 10 yrs old, so my entire family gathered together to see what we got on our status sheets.
System loading...
Showing status sheet, would you like to show those near you your status? Y/N
Alex selected yes, knowing her family is waiting to see.
NAME: ALEXANDRIA
RACE: LAVA SALAMANDER
BLOODLINE: NONE
SEX: FUTA
AGE:10
LEVEL:1
CLASS: CHILD
SUBCLASS: NONE
JOB: NONE
HEALTH: 50/50
ENERGY: 100/100
ATTRIBUTES
STR: 5
DEX: 5
CON: 5
INT: 10
WIS: 5
CHA: 5
LCK: 10
SKILLS
PASSIVE: NONE
ACTIVE: NONE
AFFINITIES
PRIMARY: FIRE, METAL, YANG, LAVA
SECONDARY: AIR, ACID
MAGIC
PASSIVE: NONE
ACTIVE: NONE
RACIAL ABILITES: Lava breath, enhanced physical stats
TITLES: REBORN WARRIOR(HIDDEN)
BLESSINGS: DEVI'S BLESSING, GEMINI'S BLESSING, ******** BLESSING
MODULES(HIDDEN): FIRE ELEMENTALIST, METAL ELEMENTALIST, BLADE MASTER, BLACKSMITH, YANG VITALITY, LAVA ELEMENTALIST
Before Alex could look into it at all her sister's popped up.
NAME: ELIZABETH
RACE: ICE SALAMANDER
BLOODLINE: NONE
SEX: FEMALE
AGE: 10
LEVEL: 1
CLASS: CHILD
SUBCLASS: NONE
JOB: NONE
HEALTH:50/50
ENERGY: 50/50
ATTRIBUTES
STR: 5
DEX: 5
CON: 5
INT: 5
WIS: 5
CHA: 5
LCK: 1
SKILLS
PASSIVE: NONE
ACTIVE: NONE
AFFINITIES
PRIMARY: ICE, YIN, LIGHTNING
SECONDARY: WIND
MAGIC
PASSIVE: NONE
ACTIVE: NONE
RACIAL ABILITES: Ice breath, enhanced physical stats
TITLES: NONE
BLESSINGS: GEMINI'S BLESSING, ******** BLESSING
Alex got distracted again as Sera dragged her into a hug with her sister. All the family joined in. “Both of you got strong races and blessings from divine beings already!”
Soon everything settled done so Alex could look at what she got, starting from the top.
LAVA SALAMANDER: a variant of a fire salamander, they are an evolved form of lizardkin that gained a strong elemental affinity.
CHILD: a class everyone starts as, will evolve once user reaches 16yrs old. Boosts learning ability and stat gain.
AFFINITIES: sorted by primary and secondary ones. For every two primary affinities someone has a secondary will show up. User cannot use secondaries on their own, can only use them in combination with at least one primary.
REBORN WARRIOR: Someone who has been a warrior of some find in a previous life, will boost the learning speed of any martial skill.
(HIDDEN): no one can see it unless they have a divine level skill.
DEVI'S BLESSING: adds 1 cha per level, will grow with level and as your relationship with Devi grows.
GEMINI'S BLESSING: boosts exp gain when near twin, can grow when conditions are met.
******** BLESSING: (LOCKED)
(LOCKED): unable to access at this time, grow stronger to see more.
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yes Votes: 43 23.5%
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no Votes: 63 34.4%
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don't care Votes: 77 42.1%
Wanted to give you a heads up that white text on a white background is pretty difficult to read… 😐
I thought the chapter was nearly empty before I saw this comment
Sounds like the author copied the text with formatting. Should clear those invisible markup tags before posting.
Dark mode is recommended
With the slavery question, I have been bouncing back and forth on bringing it in. If I do bring it in, it will be a punishment or something someone can opt into for some reason.
Sorry about the delay, needed to work on the power system and just get my thoughts in order.
next few chapters are going to be lore heavy, expect a slower upload schedule while I make sure I don't mess it up again.
You can do the usual, Slavery is regulated and legal on certain circustances like criminals BUT!, bad guys do bad thing and MC gets OP girl, etc.
With superhumans, not using free physical labor would be dumb worldbuilding wise unless you get a good reason for stopping it.
Edited chapter:
System loading...
Loading modules....
others gifted you blessings
Loading new module....
Module vitality mutating due to conditions being met...
New module made, yang...
Advanced module lava made due to conditions being met....
All modules loaded...
Rolling race...
Race mutating due to affinities
error...cannot fully mutate...base material is too weak...
Mutating to appropriate race that base material...
Successful...
Extra 300 points detected...
100 points used to improve living conditions...
100 points used to improve starting location...
100 points used to raise Luck stat...
Welcome to your new life, relax until you are born.
Your system will not be available until you are 10 years old.
Your divine tube stream starts at that time as well, gotta cash in on the cuteness. Note during this time censoring will be applied when needed. We do not want to antagonize the lolice.
Alex snorted, well at least snorted in his head. He then relaxed while he waited to see this new world.
Alex suddenly awoke as he felt he was being moved. 'Is it time already?'
If you mean, is it time for you to poke your head into a new world? Yes, it is.
His head bumped into something, then he was squeezed into a tight place suddenly. Going through the tight place took entirely too long, then suddenly he felt a cool breeze on the top of his head. This sensation was swiftly replaced by something warm and soft. The warm and soft thing wrapped around him and then pulled him out of the warm, tight and wet place he had been in. The new place he was pulled into was a cold place he did not like and he instinctively let out a wail, letting everyone nearby know his displeasure.
Something warm and dry was then rubbed all over him and then he was set on something warm and soft. His nose picked up on something that smelled good, so he crawled towards it and started to suck on it. Some sort of divine liquid flowed into his mouth. After a bit of time Alex opened his eyes to find himself on a beautiful woman, suckling on her breast. She had emerald green eyes with slited pupils, long black hair, pale skin and pointed ears. Alex hoped that this was his mother, then his sister should be beautiful. He personally did not care what he looked like, though it would likely make her happy. He then looked across his mom, to his little sister suckling at their mother's other breast. He then started to nod off, feeling safe, full and warm.
He awoke to find himself being held in a massive man's hands, they where talking though he did not understand anything they were saying. They seemed happy though. He was also happy hoping that this man was his father. I just hoped he would be at least half the man he was, then he should be plenty tall.
Time passed as Alex adjusted to his new life and he started to learn the language spoken by everyone. He soon noticed something odd though whenever someone mentioned him, they called him 'she'. Unable to figure out what was going on he shoved it into the back of his mind as he yawned. His mind might be mature, however his body was still infantile.
He finally got an answer; his mom was talking to someone when he overheard them talking about him, or—as she should say— her. Apparently, she was a girl with both lower bits, not the rarest thing but not the most common thing either apparently. It was around this time he found out who all these other people where that were always around. His dad was apparently a bit of a stud, he had a full-blown harem. Alex had 4 mothers, his birth mom was Sera a Salamander like his dad, Molly, a Holstaur (cow girl), Cathrine, a Lamia, and Miu, a Ratatoskr (squirrel girl).
He heard a sound and turned his—her—head, she needed to get used to being a chick now. At least she still had her little brother. Anyway, she saw Cathrine coming over to her with a sleeping Liz in her arms.
Cathrine was almost as tall as dad when at her normal height, she was built in a body builder way, too. Her snake half had a similar pattern to an anaconda and her upper body had a mocha tone to it. Her hair was silver and normally tied up in a braid.
Once she arrives in front of Alex, he—she—held out her arms. Cathrine picked up Alex with her free arm as if she weighed nothing. “There you are, we are going shopping while the rest finish with some things.”
Alex just nodded, she had a strong feeling that this was just a way to get us kids out of the house for a bit. The mom that took them out rotated in a set order and the moms that stayed home always looked satisfied when they got back.
This was the way Alex daily life was for the next ten years. Then the fated day came. The system was a thing everyone unlocked at 10 years old, so the entire family gathered together to see what they would get on their status sheets.
System loading...
Showing status sheet, would you like to show those near you your status? Y/N
Alex selected yes, knowing her family was anticpacting seeing it.
NAME: ALEXANDRIA
RACE: LAVA SALAMANDER
BLOODLINE: NONE
SEX: HERMAPHRODITE (EdNote: "futa" is short for "futanari" which is japanese for hermaphrodite. While I appreciate the use of "futa" in casual use, in formal settings the proper, English term "hermaphrodite" is the appropriate one.)
AGE: 10
LEVEL: 1
CLASS: CHILD
SUBCLASS: NONE
JOB: NONE
HEALTH: 50/50
ENERGY: 100/100
ATTRIBUTES
STR: 5
DEX: 5
CON: 5
INT: 10
WIS: 5
CHA: 5
LCK: 10
SKILLS
PASSIVE: NONE
ACTIVE: NONE
AFFINITIES
PRIMARY: FIRE, METAL, YANG, LAVA
SECONDARY: AIR, ACID
MAGIC
PASSIVE: NONE
ACTIVE: NONE
RACIAL ABILITIES: LAVE BREATH, ENHANCED PHYSICAL ATTRIBUTES
TITLES: REBORN WARRIOR(HIDDEN)
BLESSINGS: DEVI'S BLESSING, GEMINI'S BLESSING, ******** BLESSING
MODULES(HIDDEN): FIRE ELEMENTALIST, METAL ELEMENTALIST, BLADE MASTER, BLACKSMITH, YANG VITALITY, LAVA ELEMENTALIST
Before Alex could actually read her status at at all, her sister's popped up.
NAME: ELIZABETH
RACE: ICE SALAMANDER
BLOODLINE: NONE
SEX: FEMALE
AGE: 10
LEVEL: 1
CLASS: CHILD
SUBCLASS: NONE
JOB: NONE
HEALTH:50/50
ENERGY: 50/50
ATTRIBUTES
STR: 5
DEX: 5
CON: 5
INT: 5
WIS: 5
CHA: 5
LCK: 1
SKILLS
PASSIVE: NONE
ACTIVE: NONE
AFFINITIES
PRIMARY: ICE, YIN, LIGHTNING
SECONDARY: WIND (EdNote: This seems redundant to wind unless you plan a very in depth magic system (which I'm doubtful of), so I'd recommend changing this to AIR.)
MAGIC
PASSIVE: NONE
ACTIVE: NONE
RACIAL ABILITIES: ICE BREATH, ENHANCED PHYSICAL ATTRIBUTES
TITLES: NONE
BLESSINGS: GEMINI'S BLESSING, ******** BLESSING
Alex was distracted once more as Sera dragged her into a hug along with her sister. Then the rest of the family joined in as well. “Both of you got strong races and blessings from divine beings already!”
Soon everyone calmed down so Alex could take an actual look at what she got, starting from the top.
LAVA SALAMANDER: A variant of a fire salamander. It is an evolved form of lizardkin that has gained a strong elemental affinity.
CHILD: The class everyone starts as. Will evolve once user reaches 16 years of age. Boosts learning speed and attribute gain.
AFFINITIES: Sorted into primary and secondary categories. For every two primary affinities an entity possesses, a secondary affinity is added. Entities cannot use secondary affinities on their own; they must be used in combination with at least one primary affinity.
REBORN WARRIOR: A person who had been a warrior of some kind in a previous life. Will boost the learning speed of any martial skill.
(HIDDEN): None can see this information unless a divine level skill is used to access it.
DEVI'S BLESSING: Adds 1 CHA per level. Will grow with level and with relationship strength to Devi.
GEMINI'S BLESSING: Boosts exp gain when near twin. Can grow when conditions are met.
******** BLESSING: (LOCKED)
(LOCKED): Unable to access at this time. Grow stronger to see more.
I should probably go back to chapter 1 and edit that as well, though those would be far more in-depth.
On an unrelated note: The "Futanari" tag is missing from this story :Ü™
Oh, and keep in mind that while I've straight up edited the whole chapter, I do have inserted editor notes in there, so make sure to remove those if you intend to copy paste them :Ü™
Thanks for the chapter
We do not want to antagonize the loli police.
u n me both
Could the font be fixed? It makes it difficult to read
There are several missgendering typos throughout the chapter
The text color makes the story hard to read. But, it's still good tho
Sorry for the long wait, the lore is taking longer than expected. Needed to distract myself from it for a bit so I did star tinkering with the reborn hero, never meant to post it. I found out I cannot hold my alcohol, and somehow, I made a new account and posted a rough draft of the project. Still not sure on how that happened, if you guys want, I can share it. Properly this time, it follows what would have happened if they were reborn in a cultivation world. It will have differences from the start though so do not expect a perfect clone.
I can not read anything