It has been some time, there are several reasons for that. some are personal and I won't get into and others will be mentioned later. The main thing is I am back, though this story will remain on haitus.
That Time I Got Reincarnated as a…. has been a learning experiance and is a story I want to do justice. I am still unhappy with it and how it is progressing. I feel like several ideas I had for it ended up completly differant then how people saw them. Over time this altered the story and how I wanted it to go. I do plan on doing a rewrite at some point, though it will be completly different in tone then what it was.
Lutum, for me at least. was a mistake. I added to many characters to the main cast to fast and got overwelmed. I will admit to mistakes when setting up the MC's status and weapons. At the time I was on the fence about what level I wanted the technology at. So that with other minor errors made me move on from it.
To help with everything I did take time to learn the site and how to do bubbles and the like. I have also been playing around with 1st and 3rd person, finding out that I prefer 1st person writing. this will mean all future stories will be in 1st person.
I am back to writing and am working on something that should go live soonish, this will be my main story for now. A big thank you to those who stuck around this long.
Thanks for the update. I enjoyed the story already, looking forward to what you make after the extra study and practice.
Maybe is my personal opinion, and I'm not aim to offend you so I'm sorry if you think it
But I think that a big problem of many isekai and fantasy stories, including yours, is missing in describe the background/details, and write happening many crazy things without explanation
I think that it was many incoherences in Lutum stories, and of course they would can be justified depending of the exact setting, but it must be well considered and planned