The road the van follows is bumpy as hell. Which tells me all I need to know to keep being frightened.
Xoxia may be a boiling cesspit where the poor and depraved gather, ruled by corrupt vagabonds and riddled with wannabe Heroes and Villains, but it’s anything if not strict with civilised infrastructure.
I’m not sure if the Mayor gets off on allocating huge funds towards repairing roads, constructing bridges and building dams but the city has it all.
Though, if I do think about it deeper, those funds could just be another excuse to embezzle more and more Federal credits, not that it matters in the end, the Villains, specifically Steve and his rivals, will keep wrecking the place with their gang wars.
Either way, the point remains that I am no longer in Xoxia. The city never leaves untarred or broken roads to get worse, certainly not this bad.
For half an hour of driving, I’ve been tossed between the metal doors of the van and the steaming bodies of the unreasonably cheery folk sardined with me.
It seems they still don’t understand enough to be afraid. This entire thing is sketchy yet all they can prattle about as they barely keep themselves from flopping about each other as the van traverses the land, is how large their pay is going to be.
Not that I doubt that it would be large if this operation was even slightly legitimate. The Vertigo Gang has long since nestled itself as one of the four major gangs in the city rivalling for total control.
The territories Steve and T.V have managed to snatch continue to baffle me as their powers aren’t really all that anyway, at least, not compared to the Lynx.
The Lynx leader possesses a rather terrifying power to transform into, you guessed it, a lynx, albeit a giant, ferocious one with strength beyond reasoning. The man-beasts lieutenant boastfully wields some sort of emission power.
I’m not sure what to call it other than blasting lasers out of his fingers.
Whereas Steve just makes people want to puke their guts out and T.V has X-ray vision. Neither are particularly cool or flashy powers but, I suppose in a brawl all that matters is immobilising your enemy.
And the urge to puke out your guts is as good a tool as any to achieve that, Lynx or laser firing creep be damned.
But, metas aside, the Gang can only maintain it’s status for so long like this. I suppose that’s why Steve has gather us metas with shitty powers.
Maybe he wants to make a new crew of expendables or sell us to an external, more widespread gang for protection and aid. I honestly wouldn’t put it past the blubbery man.
Still, these are all speculations. The truth could be worse, I know he’s desperate for a change, the gang has been losing territory to the other three, two of which have come to work together in some fashion.
I don’t even need to be an official member to know that’s bad news for Vertigo. Normal humans with pistols and rifles can only do so much against metas with proper powers, powers that most of the time render them invincible to a mere human.
My head is tossed about like a ragdoll as the van comes to a halting stop and I’m not the only one groaning in discomfort once things slightly settle down. The front door slams shut, and I hear voices, some shouting and even some rustling.
I guess the driver must have come down to see what’s up.
The other schmucks and I stew in the van as we wait with bated breath, bated because there isn’t much in the way of ventilation at the back of a van with eight people sardined together.
“What do you think is happening?” A woman asks, she’s the only one whose been slightly sceptical about the nature of this ‘job’ the Veritgo Gang suddenly has in store for us less than mediocre metas
The man directly opposite to her snorts, he’s been the naïve antagonist the whole ride here, “I’ve told you; I’ve done this kind of jobs before. Chances are we just need to carry out some crates or in a worst-case scenario, clean up after them when their done killing whoever it is they’re here to kill.”
“If that’s the case then why don’t they just say that?” She argues. And for the most part it is a firm argument. If it’s something as simple as manual labour or clean ups, why not just say so?
“Besides,” she continues, “I don’t think they’ll bring in children too for carrying crates and cleaning up corpses.” As she says this, I can feel the stare of everyone else in the back land on me.
“I’m Fourteen, basically Fifteen and technically Sixteen. I’m an adult.” I’m not sure why I bother arguing but the whelming feeling of indignation at being called a kid after all I’ve been through is rather hard to resist.
“You heard the kid.” Antagonist says with perk. Still feeling chipper about his prospects, “Either way, none of it matters, they’re going to be paying us far more than we could pull off on any of our jobs…if some of us even have any.”
That’s the driving force of this blinding ignorance. Financial insecurity. If any of them were even just a bit well-off, jumping into the back of a van and being driven to some far off, undisclosed location would ring alarm bells.
But desperation does things to a man.
The back doors swing open before anymore conversation can be had and we’re once again greeted by lights, although the snow and the dim glowing moonlight provide only a little.
“Get out.” The man at the door orders and sets himself to the side, moving off to mingle with T.V who’s standing in the middle of the rather empty and barren snow-covered plains of rocky road.
As we file out of the van, jumping off the back, I keep my eyes trained on T.V. Chances are the man has a lot to dude with whatever Steve has in store.
“Line up, all of you.” Another man barks loudly.
My set hears this and rather roughly gets in line.
My eyes are still on T.V, although the line of people more than a foot taller than me doesn’t help my view. He’s been looking forward, I can tell he’s using his powers; he’s got his sunglasses on.
Behind us is the source of all the smoke and noise that’s been prevalent since we passed a certain point in our journey to…nowhere.
Undoubtably it’s a factory, the smoke and sound of cogs and gears churning and chiming away will let anyone in on the fact. But it’s certainly more than that if T.V is staring at it with his X-ray vision.
I catch a glance of Steve meeting up with him, I’m too far away to get the gist of anything they’re saying but as soon as they’re done, Steve has a smile plastered on that dirty mug of his.
“Alright folk!” He claps. “Gather around, neatly, make sure not to go past T.V over there.” He chimes.
Like mindless drones, the temporary employees of the gang troop up together, organized as much as they can manage.
Shortie that I am, I’m pushed to the front with other people of similar stature, even that girl, Cynthia from before is on the first line with me; still chewing gum like an idiot though.
“Perfect!” Steve declares just as T.V approaches from behind, giving him a thumbs up. “Now, I’m sure you’re all wondering what job I, Vertigo, have in store for you lot.”
He huffs, his smile growing even wider as he thinks about it. He points at the factory behind us and heads turn to have a look, “That building has something we desperately want…and they know that we, as well as some thousand others want it, so it’s guarded behind a fat load of security systems.”
“None of which we can break through, given our powers.” T.V chirps in, his sunglasses off. Which could either be a good or bad thing with him.
Sunglasses on, he’s actively trying not to kill people with the extremely cell degenerating rays that his eyes produce when he uses his powers. If they’re off, he’s resigned not to use his powers or to turn your brain matter to mush.
You can never really tell with the long man.
Steve nods, nonetheless agreeing with his lieutenant, “Just as T.V said.” He presents and open palm in which T.V deposits a remote with a single button on it.
Ah shit…what did they inject us with again?
“The drug we injected you with was a booster…a highly volatile booster for the meta-gene...” he shrugs, “Well, the speculated meta-gene. The point is that it works…a bit too well for us to take it.”
Finally, it’s begun to dawn on the fools around me what Steve was saying.
“What…what do you mean?” It’s the sceptic, “You’re going to…”
“Turn you into living weapons? Yes.”
“I’ll kill you!” Surprisingly, it’s the man from before the antagonist. He bursts out charging ahead like a bull with a large rock in hand, it’s purpose to smash Steve’s head in.
Withing a second of his mad charge the man, as well as everyone else gathered doubles over.
Ugh, fucking Steve. Vertigo…
Fortunately for me, I’ve come under the mans powers many times and have enough of a resistance not to puke up my lunch immediately. The others however, do not.
“Steve!” I call out desperately.
The man directs his green glowing eyes to me, raising an eyebrow, “Hello? Do you have any questions child?”
“Why are you doing this?” I manage to pull out. “I’ve worked for you for years!” Anymore and I’ll be endlessly puking.
With his head tilted he sneers, “Begrudgingly…plus, I’m getting tired of having Neil hum in my ears about that girl of yours. You’re a meta, I think you’ll do well here so why not add you to the bunch?”
I can’t come up with anymore words, it’s hard enough maintaining a sense of balance despite not even moving around.
“Now, T.V.” the pudgy man orders.
T.V pulls out a gun and fires out to the factory. The exploding sound of a gun making the effects of Steve’s powers even more unbearable.
The effect of his shot is plainly apparent though. The factory reacts. A large shimmering dome of light begins to descend at the same time the walls pop open with large turret guns, primed to fire at whatever moves.
Just before the dome covers us, Steve hits the button and I’m introduced to a world of sheer pain.
***
It’s a re-enactment of the battlefields Paige once described to me. A field of flowers and concrete stained with blood as the enemy nation released one of the first ever metas on them.
All around me, the thirty-one other metas with supposedly weak and useless powers went berserk. Some dying the instant their powers got boosted past the point their fragile bodies could handle.
Muscle growing and expanding until it tears through skin, weak pyromancers suddenly lit aflame by their own powers. Speedsters and flyers slamming into the ground with force unbound.
It’s not a complete suicide though. Steve does get what he wants. The most common powers are emission powers, and there are a lot of emission users here.
Cynthia, the girl I spoke to earlier, rapidly begins to cool the temperature around her, her body turning pale as she and I and everyone else trapped on this side of the barrier scream in pain and horror.
A cold and wicked frost blasts out of her arms, it’s powerful, very much so, but even I know that the output she’s dishing can’t be maintained. Powers have to be trained, and honed lest you burn yourself out.
But none of that matters, chances are all of us are going to die. Including me.
With her frost emission as well as several other emission users shooting out widely and frying the factory’s turrets and breaking down the walls, the next response to put us down from the people inside that building happens to be a march of Death Droids.
Where they got those highly illegal and deadly droids, I’m sure I’ll never know. They start firing.
Still in unparalleled pain I glare heatedly at Steve and T.V on the other side. They watch, content with letting us go wild with pain and panic as our own powers kill us.
Wait…are they blinking?
Through gritted teeth and a fading consciousness, I manage to take a round look about myself. True to my suspicions, there are many others around me who aren’t moving, not even a twitch.
There are some, a man’s powers of flight keeping them suspended in air with their faces etched in terror and even a bit of joy. But glancing at the ones on the ground with me, the ones with their hands and feet phasing through the very ground they’re seated on, I realize…it’s not that man’s powers keeping him suspended.
It’s mine.
For the first time I notice something new about my powers. They don’t freeze all of time, just the time of whatever is in my radius…How big that radius is I don’t know but I’m sure a limit exists because just outside it, there are other writhing metas moving about, completely undisturbed.
Then…that toaster that went off, it could have been out of my range of influence.
Immediately I think it I doubt it. I don’t know the beginnings of what my power actually is, I haven’t the slightest clue what exactly can move or what can’t move under my influence.
It could be just organics and not inorganics, like machines or more threateningly…the killer robots headed my way.
“Argahhh!!!”
My head whips up to look, that scream is much closer than I’d like. Running towards me is a man that’s half-solid, half-liquid and half-gas. Shit I’d run crazy too if that was me.
But that’s not the most concerning thing. He’s within my radius. I know for sure because he’s just run past a woman frozen midway through her body exploding from the inside.
Why isn’t he stopping? Why isn’t he frozen!
Fuck!
“Urgghhh.” I don’t have any more luxury to think as my mouth spews out a chunk of blood. I feel something slip away from me and in that moment the woman explodes, the flying man zooms off into the sky, the kid phases straight through the ground, nothing to stop him from falling deep into the earth, never to be seen again.
My power has been deactivated. Fortunately, or unfortunately, the screaming gas man gets blown to bits along with the woman doing the exploding.
The death droids keep moving forward though, their numbers thinned out but so have ours.
My head hits the ground, I see Steve and T.V panicking as the scenery before them undoubtedly becomes a completely foreign one compared to what they’d seen a mere second ago. They don’t hesitate for long though; their route to whatever it is the want to snatch is cleared.
The factory is burning, a result of some wild meta rampaging through no doubt.
I blink once and open my eyes just as soon as I close them, but the scene I’m staring at is not the same. Steve, T.V and their goons have barged into the factory, the Death Droids no more thanks to some meta or another.
I blink again and the factory is on fire. I’m still not sure how I’ve managed to make it out of this so unscathed. Steve and his men troop out, a lot less in number than when they went in, I suppose the place had more than enough security to thin their numbers.
I manage to get a glance at what they’re carrying, it’s soaked with blood and guts even as the kick past me, it’s long and silver in places not red. Whatever it is, Steve sure looks happy.
I blink again, this time my vision is blurred past the limit and I’m snorkelling in my own coughed up blood-when I coughed up so much, I don’t know- but before me and the smoking factory there stands a woman.
She’s cladded in a black, tight fitted dress with a slit by the side that gives no doubt to the curvaceous of her figure, even with my head feeling hazy and my eyes seeing double.
She touches my cheek, gently. Sound is all but a scrabbled muffle to my ears but her moving lips shows she’s saying something. There’s a soft blue-gold glow, and odd colour but….
It’s soothing.
***
When I wake up my head is no longer on the hard uneven surface of the ground, swimming in my own vomited blood.
Instead, it’s nestled gently between something soft, thick and beautifully scented. Peering my eyes open to find out exactly what I’m rested in is, I’m greeted to a familiar bubbly and rounded pair.
“Paige?” I croak, my voice sour and sore like I’ve been screaming for days. Given the pain I was in coupled with all that puking, I shouldn’t be so surprised.
Either way, my best-friends blue eyes glare down at me, although my view is beautifully obstructed by her bosom.
“What happened?” she chokes out.
For the first time I notice the twinkle at the sides of her eyes. Tears. “Why are you crying?” I ask, raising my hand to wipe off the offending tears.
“Why do you think.” She yells, pinching my sore side. “Where did you get all these wounds? Actually, never mind that, why did you get all these wounds?”
Wounds? I remember coming out unscathed. Why is my body full of sores and bruises?
Wait…How- “How did I get here?” I ask, panicked. “How long has it been?”
She scowls at me, tears completely absent now, “Seems like you’re just fine and dandy, asking me questions instead of answering them.” with that, she shoves me off her lap and struts off to the kitchen.
I just realize I’m back at our place.
“Seriously Paige, how did I get back here?” I manage through gritted teeth, somehow every single part of my body is either inflamed or sore to move without any clear injuries or memories of getting hit.
She marches back, whistling kettle and white cloth in hand. She slams said objects just a foot away from me and declares, “Take care of yourself then, don’t answer my questions, I don’t get to know why the hell my friend gets carried home by some sultry woman, bleeding from god know where and certainly half dead!”
A quiet falls as I take that in and she fumes. “I’m not sure what to say…” I murmur.
“Just tell me what happened to you.” She sniffs, crumpling down on the floor.
“Right.” Where do I even start?
Still she’s staring at me attentively and she did take care of me up to this point if the red stain cloths in the corner are anything to go on.
“It’s Steve. He gave us some drug that boosted our powers past the level our bodies could handle and unleashed us on some factory.” I start with resignation. Seeing this she begins to wet the cloth with the hot water, I’m ever surprised by how well she handles the heat but then again, she lived through the first meta wars.
Slowly she begins to dab at the most extensive bruises, which happen to be on my abs. “Go on, this might burn a bit so…”
I nod, “Thanks. A lot of them died. Either by the hands of each other’s powers, their own powers killing them or the Death Droids firing live rounds into their bodies.”
“Death Droids?” She gasps, “What were those doing here?”
I shrug, “I’m surprised I’m alive at all, especially given that the drug is meant to push your powers past the breaking limits and kill you.” I pause, remembering that soft, soothing glow, “I think that woman…where is she?”
Paige sighs, “I’m not sure, she just barged in with you I thought she was Neil trying something again. But it wasn’t she just said to take care of you until you’re fit to use your powers again…not sure why your powers matter.”
My powers. Now that I think about it…I was using them for far longer than just a few seconds. By the time I realized it…
“Do you know who she is?” Paige asks, dabbing away at the bruises studiously.
“No…no I don’t but I think I know what she meant by focusing on my powers and not my health.”
“What did she mean.”
With a grim look on I tell Paige, “Neil will be coming, and so will T.V and Steve. We have to move.”
Ok that argument is a bit strange. Is mc not a closeted trans girl? Kinda thought they would be
Okay so I gotta ask since I got at least a little curious, enough to try and read this, but. Why is this in the girls love genre when the main character seems to be most decidedly male, and that doesn't appear like it's going to change?
The 'girls-love subplot' tag does exist if you have some lesbian side-characters down the line you want to focus on, but it's a bit hard for me to see how this fits the "Lesbian fiction" genre that is Girls Love as it currently stands.
Two main characters as the synopsis tells. If you're here for the girls love you may have to wait a bit or read all the free chapters that are up on r/HFY and then get a membership to my BMAC where I have the adv chapters up cuz...this is just chapter 2(3&4 combined) and a whole lot more involving Paige, a main character, occurs.
Also, if you want to pin a specific genre to this then it'll be sci-fi, every other thing, action, adventure, crime and whatnot falls under the umbrella. Hope you're patient enough to read through.
@Tim_Saian the synopsis doesn't really specify a main character OR that they are both main characters of their own stories, or however you would like to define it, but what it does seem to, at least imply, and from reading these two chapters it felt solidified, is that Vern has feelings for Paige that are at least somewhat reciprocated, their relationship is ambiguous at this point but it certainly feels... well, hetero.
So I guess to reiterate my point. If it's not defined by a lesbian relationship, I don't see how this fits in the GL genre. GL subplot may fit down the line, but it's clearly not a defining trait or point of the story.
And that means my interest extends this far. Have a good one, maybe consider retagging it so others like me don't raise expectations that won't be met.
@RaelDeer You realize you've only read from Vern's perspective right? You must also realize that I'm the author of the story so I know what I have planned, not even planned since I've written it already. And in my first comment I've already confirmed that the tag is indeed there for a reason and I simply haven't posted the chapter that touches on it?
Iono how 'two chronokinetics' doesn't specify the main characters but alright. It is Hetero but it also is LGBTQ+, the entire story doesn't have to be LGBTQ+ to be LGBTQ+, do you get what I mean? It doesn't have to erase all straight characters to be LGBTQ+. Besides, like I said earlier, the genre of the story is Sci-fi, that's its main deal. Every other thing is defined by the characters actions and personalities.
If you need any of this to be spoon fed then I'm not sure I'm writing the story you wanna read.
@Tim_Saian I've spoken to all kinds of authors about this, both understanding and completely up themselves, looks like you fit the latter.
All I'm saying is that, fundamentally, the CORE of your story is not GL, therefore it does not belong in the GL genre. The GL subplot tag exists for authors like you, who want to include lesbians into your story without making them or their relationships central to the driving force of the plot. If that's somehow a hard concept for you to grasp, I am so sorry for you and anyone you know that your critical thinking is so damaged.
Have you even bothered to observe what is around you in each genre to know how well your story fits that category? You probably haven't, you probably just think you know better, some d*ckhead who got praised a little too much and thinks they can never be wrong.
See, I can be mean about it if I so choose, I'd prefer to be polite but I'm willing to stoop.
@RaelDeer No, you can go further, I've had my share of entitled readers refusing to listen to what I'm saying about my story.
T H E C HA P T E R S T H A T H A V E I T H A V E N ' T B E E N P O S T E D.
Can you read that now? Is it clear what I'm saying? Probably not but meh.
@Tim_Saian okay let me be perfectly, incredibly crystal clear
THE GIRLS LOVE TAG. IS A GENRE TAG. NOT A CONTENT TAG. YOU DISQUALIFIED YOURSELF THE MOMENT THAT A GIRL ON GIRL ROMANCE. WAS NOT THE PRIMARY, MAIN, DRIVING FEATURE OF YOUR STORY.
YOU, IDIOT AUTHOR WHO REFUSES TO LISTEN, SHOULD USE THE GIRLS LOVE SUBPLOT CONTENT TAG, BECAUSE THAT IS FOR C O N T E N T, INSTEAD OF THE GIRLS LOVE GENRE TAG, WHICH IS FOR G E N R E.
My god the willful ignorance just because you don't want to admit you're wrong and mis-labelled your story.
@RaelDeer Yeah, guess I won that bet.
- Reader determines they know everything about the story from chapter 2, goes on to decide what the core of the story is.
- Reader is blind to the fact that multiple tags are a tool on this site and are used by each and every author on the platform.
- Reader is a violent mess who can't simply drop a story and move on to the next because the author won't do what they want.
- Reader has been an amusement. An all star jester, a rare gem of living comedy that prances about on the internet every so often.
Thank you for this, I'll never forget how much my cheeks hurt at each comment, the light of joy that warmed within me at every comment notification from your continued display. You have truly been a treat, goodnight.
@Tim_Saian man you think you have a gotcha by saying "it's in later chapters" but that's exactly my point. It's not primary to the story, it's not the genre, it's a subplot in the grand scheme, you're a f*cking moron and I'm reporting this story for intentional mistagging. I'll also be blocking you so I no longer get notified of your braindead responses.
f*cking hell, most ignorant d*ckhead I've ever met.