Meeting the spirit of an ancient monk
Joe was sitting in front of an old and wise looking monk. She seemed surprised at his appearance in the spirit world. He stood up and bowed respectfully something which intrigued the wise monk as he was so composed even though he was just a child around the age of 8. Joe: "Hello, wise monk. I have come to you in seek of guidance". As he was saying this he tried his utmost at looking sincere which he undoubtedly failed at since the monk was smirking at him. She then replied, "Hello little one, why have you come to me seeking guidance?".
Joe's POV
It seems she at least want to hear me out. "I need a way out of the western air temple. As you can see I am too weak to climb away and is in need of another solution." She looks at me then ask me to stretch out my hand. She touches my hand and I feel strange energy circulate through my body. This energy I am feeling must be chi.
The wise female monk's POV
This child is extraordinary! He seems to have the power to be able to dual-bend both fire and air. I was not really thinking of helping him earlier, but this changes everything. I am willing teach him the art of air-bending and help him as I also will get the chance to impart my ideals onto him as he is just a impressionable child. "I will teach you air-bending and take you on as my apprentice. But you will have to follow strict training regiments do you accept?"
Joe's POV
The mysterious monk just asked me to be her apprentice!? But how will I even be able to learn how to get out of the air-temple before I starve to death? "I want to accept but I do not know if I can because my body would most likely starve and leave me behind in the spirit world." Luckily the monk seemed to have a solution to this as she immediately answered with "Time works differently here in the spirit world. When one year has passed here one minute has passed outside, but pay attention as this time difference is not static and changes over time. You do not need to keep attention to this as long I am here though." In that case I might as well accept the apprenticeship as I do not have any other solution. "I accept your proposal and will hereby call you master."
AYO, a diamond in the rough??? Keep it up, Author!
Alright, this ain't bad. In looking forward to young Joe's exploits.
This is much too short to have three POV changes, it'd be less jarring if this was just written in third person like the chapter started.
Not sure what others would think tho.
Probably true. This chapter was made very swiftly with little thought.
Id be quite sad if this never returned, i was really interested in it...
is not static and change
shouldnt change be plural?
Yes, you are correct. I am fixing it now.