Howdy my dear readers, it's me, Siegburn.
I want to tell you that this volume is almost filler.
Is that bad?
No, it isn't!
It's a quiet volume with important events that set an unexpected course for you.
As you could see these were.
- The death and appearance of one of the strongest enemies in the game.
- The truth of the most annoying criminal organization of all.
- That all the chaos and corruption is located in the palace and the lawless city.
- The demon king going to live in Eli's mansion and taking everyone hostage.
Isn't that unexpected?
Well, as a spoiler to get you in the mood to wait for volume 4.
The next arc is the lawless city!
We enter the first turning point in the life of Razel and his world.
As an aside, volume 4 will come after this surprise.
World Ixion/SAGA volume 5 is finally ready to be written!
Later this month, Rudel's troubled love life will begin.
Will there be Razel references in there?
We won't know, but the wait for vol. 5 has begun!
Don't miss it!
Hey vol 3 was a good change of Pace! U show the girls fighting, u introduced a New reincarnator, the demon king and even show a bonding time betwen MC and the 3 idiots looking foward vol 4
Thanks, and who you say that "hey"?
Vol 4 is the reason why you wil say "umm, i think you inspired in the spider-chan anime right?" and then will need more volumes
@Siegburn that hey is me not knowing(maybe to lazy) How to write. english is my Second language Xd
didnt read nor watch "spider Chan" anime btw
@Theirl ok, next week(this) I will try to upload until vol 5-6
Im going to give my review here becouse i don't want to bring your score down, i read up to chapter 3 its a 2/5 for me, sorry dude, i know what you're trying to do but its all too disjointed, just the first scenes of him meeting the villainess i barely undestand what is going on and what kind of characters are these people, placing infodumps between the dialogue made it worse.
Later on the times skips made it even more disjointed, he learned magic, monster hunting, weapon and armor manufacturing, grew strong enough to face a B class adventurer, adquired a fully furnished secret luxury mansion with a huge library plus security golems and some OP chick fell in love with him. Leaving aside how unrealistic it is for someone to acomplish all these (Becouse, whatever, its the protagonist's halo at work), completely skipping all of these made the story really dry and now i have no idea what the protagonist is capable or if its impresive or not.
The characters are also too dry and don't display a full array of emotions, the villainess barely even talked, her father didn't talked at all, MC's father has 3 lines and 2 of them were a variation of "Get the f*ck out of my house", mother and 2 sibblings have maybe 1 line each to remind us they exist and the busty half-elf is just there to suck cock, which i don't have a problem with but she also doesn't have a personality beyond "Sasuga Razel-sama!"
I skimmed chapter 4 and its more of the same, its just not for me.
I'm sorry to read that, but let me spoil you like in mushoku, a lot of things are like that on purpose, I mean certain dislikes.
MC has a transition that is counted by parts ◇◇◇ which separate and say what he did
the real thrill of the story comes at the end of volume 4 with the first turning point
Another thing, MC's family is not relevant, I'm sorry, but I'm one of those who believes the family is good for nothing more than to show if they are good or bad people and to carry the grandchildren (if you want to see a family has relevance, that only happens in my novel World Ixion/SAGA but they still don't have that moment of importance yet)
About the villainess and her father, well it shows that you have to read more chapters since it was only a slight introduction to them, when you see her again you will not say "dry".
Also, MC is clever since he doesn't like to talk about himself, he is reserved and quiet, that's why much later you will understand the name of the novel.
If you want a story of an MC that shows you he can do it all, I'm halfway through one.
About the elf, little by little you will understand that she is someone who can put her heel on Momonga, rimuru, shin, and that is why she hardly comes out of it, EVERYTHING would end in a snap if it were up to her.
That's why I ask for criticism or reviews, this is a WN, so mistakes and weird things can be removed in a future serialization
Have a good day and how give a second chance 🤗
(Yeah, dudes also put emojis)