Immediately after becoming aware of my newfound mobility, I thought to test it out.
Caught up in my excitement, which for some odd reason wasn’t suppressed, I attempted to take a step forward…only for my taut muscles to relax and my face crashing down into the petal below me.
Oh, right…forgot I was a snake. How embarrassing. Good thing there's no one here to see it. Well other than the tormented souls, but for some reason, I doubt they had much time to pay attention to me. Even if they did, it's not like they're going anywhere.
Musings aside, it was time for attempt number two. Now hmm. How do I do this?
During my previous life, I did a lot of things in an attempt to obtain the happiness that I had lost. One of these attempts was indulging in nature documentaries. At the time, it did little to help my mood, so it seemed rather pointless. Who would’ve thought they’d help me after death?
I’m sure that one of those documentaries was about snakes. Now, If I could just remember what they said about movement.
Hmm. Umhm.
Ah! I remember… it had something to do with their abs? Because every gym day is core day when you don't have arms or legs right?
Abs….so the muscles on my underbelly? As I asked myself that, I mentally reached towards the muscles, compelling them to contract.
Compiling to my command, I found that the muscles had a much wider range of motion than I had as a human. I could move them forward, backward, inwards, and outwards. I was totally a muscle helicopter.
I'm pretty sure snakes generally move by slithering? So that would probably be using the muscles outward and forward…swinging from side to side?
Worth a shot, I guess.
I contract the muscles, pushing forward and outwards on my left, and my body responded. As I felt the muscles on the left side reach their maximum, I switched to the right and my body cascaded forwards.
Not bad, I think I could use some practice, but I have all the time in the world to do so.
—⁕🎕⁕—
Whew. That was exhausting. Mentally at least. My physical body seems to not be fatigued at all. Which is pretty awesome.
Anyways, I feel confident enough with my slither to leave the tree. I kind of remember some other ways that snakes move, but I think that this is good enough for right now. The ice shouldn’t be that difficult to traverse.
Mind resolute, I began my journey down myself. Wow, that sounds really weird but whatever.
I slithered my way over to the edge of the nearest petal. Allowing my weight and gravity to do their job. As the pedal bent downwards, I reached out and sunk my fangs into the closet branch I could reach, ignoring the pain that followed. I then coiled around that branch, once again allowing gravity to pull me down further. I repeated that process until I got to the part of the trunk with no more branches.
Out of options, I decided to take a leap of faith for the trunk. Which…failed miserably. I succeeded in reaching the base of the tree…a bit too well. I overshot and hit it headfirst, then plummeted to the frozen lake dozens of feet below.
I landed with a thud as my body ungracefully embraced the ice. This is the part where I’d usually act tough and say it didn’t hurt, even though everyone knows it did. This time however, I’m not lying when I say I felt nothing. My new serpent body seemed to be surprisingly resilient.
Quickly regathering myself, I took in my surroundings again, from a height similar to that of the one I had as a flower. Interestingly enough, I could see a lot more then than I could now. I’d trade some of my eyesight for mobility anyways, so no complaints.
In order to appease my curiosity, I slither towards one of the people encased in ice, who happened to be relatively near the surface.
The person that I chose seemed to be a humanoid jellyfish woman. She had long tendrils in the place of her hair and her body was semi-transparent. Almost like a ghost.
Upon further inspection of the slimy substance that seemed to be taken from the poor souls, I noticed something interesting. That was the coloring of it. The jellyfish woman had a deep purple substance.
It seemed that diverse color slime was prevalent. Some people even seemed to have several different colors or a mix of some.
Also, the slime stinks. Really really really badly.
I surveyed several more of the living dead people, with a few sticking out to me. Other than the jellyfish lady, there was what I assume to be a starfish woman, a whale lady, and a turtle man.
The starfish lady felt like the exact opposite of the jellyfish but at the same time, they felt identical. Her slimy substance was a bright yellow.
The whale lady and the turtle man caught my fancy for another reason. Both of their goo gave me a sense of unfinishedness. Like they were only partially there.
I found it odd that all the beings that caught my attention were of aquatic origin. It almost felt like foreshadowing, but that only happens in literature. This is real life, even if everything that has happened thus far totally seems straight out of a fantasy novel.
A small sliver of my curiosity sated, I once again shoved the lingering thoughts into the background. I wanted to leave more than I wanted my questions answered, and so I increased my slithering pace, quickly gaining distance between my tree self.
After several minutes of sliding along the icy lake, I arrived at what seemed to be the end of the Juddeca circle. The only real indicators of the change in circles was the feeling in my gut, the slight change in elevation, and the ending of the lake. Eager to take my first true step towards leaving Hell, I barreled right toward the sloped hill. Only to crash headfirst into a force field.
Ouch.
I found myself at a loss, not able to understand why I was being held back, when I felt in my gut, I should be able to leave. Thankfully, I was once again grace by the presence of the Cute Ex Machina.
Go back to the tree. You missed something.
I missed something? Why didn’t you tell me before I left?
…
No answer? Well, whatever. I should just go check it out.
I quickly headed back to the tree me. Upon arrival, I felt the urge to facepalm, and would have done so if I had hands,
Under the frozen surface, tangled between my roots were three figures. I have no clue how I missed that.
But I still couldn’t comprehend why this was holding me back?
Wait, are those three…
So the snek had to go back to its roots.
Also using fangs to get down... Haven't you heard the expression "All bark, no bite?"
You’re too good at this. It’s getting ridiculous. If you keeping going I’m gonna have to call my mamba.
okay, .. so you are secretly Lucifer, or maybe Lucifer is the disembodied voice and they're pulling a really funny prank.
I do like the setup of telling us Lucifer is supposed to be holding three people a couple chapters earlier so you can make sure that people who haven't read the divine comedy will know what's going on when in this chapter you reveal that our protagonist is doing the same for some reason, truly who knows. haha
Perhaps…I won’t say much because spoilers but perhaps.
muscle helicopter
Ah, yes of course.
I wonder what kind of snake they are, perhaps a coldbra?
I'm not sure but, it might be rude to asssssume their ssssspeciesss.
Oooh. A hypothesis springs immediately to mind.
did a lot of things in an attempt to obtain the happiness that I had lost. -> reobtain
death?
I’m sure that one -> remove space before I’m
day is core day when you don't have arms or legs right? -> legs,
Compiling to my command, I found that the muscles had a much -> maybe “My muscles obeyed my command, and I found that they had” ?
not be fatigued at all. Which is pretty awesome. -> all, which
confident enough with my slither to leave the tree -> slithering
I kind of remember some other ways that snakes move, but I think that this is good enough for right -> snakes can move,
Wow, that sounds really weird but whatever. -> weird,
whatever.
I slithered my -> remove space before I
edge of the nearest petal. Allowing my weight and gravity to do their job. -> petal, allowing …jobs.
pain that followed. I then coiled around that -> remove extra space after period
landed with a thud as my body ungracefully embraced the ice. -> ungracefully impacted on the
and her body was semi-transparent. Almost like a ghost. -> transparent, almost
Really really really badly. -> Really, really, *really* (have last one in italics)
lady felt like the exact opposite of the jellyfish but at the same time, they felt identical. -> jellyfish, but at the same time they
gave me a sense of unfinishedness. Like they were only partially there. -> of being incomplete, like
seemed to be the end of the Juddeca circle. -> Juddeca round.
only real indicators of the change in circles was the feeling in -> in the rounds was
being held back, when I felt in my gut, I should be able to -> remove comma
I quickly headed back to the tree me. Upon arrival, I felt the urge to facepalm, and would have done so if I had hands, -> hands.
Under the frozen surface, tangled between my roots were three figures. -> roots,
But I still couldn’t comprehend why this was holding me back? -> I still…back. (Remove but)
“Caught up in my excitement, which for some odd reason wasn’t suppressed, I attempted to take a step forward…only for my taut muscles to relax and my face crashing down into the petal below me.”
“Is this a face plant? I think it is~”
“I dessspissse you right now…”
“I’m sure that one of those documentaries was about snakes. Now, If I could just remember what they said about movement.”
“You’ve forgotten an unknown number of things, but remember a random snek documentary?! Good lord, what are your memory priorities?!”
“I could move them forward, backward, inwards, and outwards. I was totally a muscle helicopter.”
“Whirlicopter flight is still on the table!”
“I kind of remember some other ways that snakes move, but I think that this is good enough for right now. The ice shouldn’t be that difficult to traverse.”
“…why do I feel like I’m forgetting something significant?”
“Should I tell them? Or let them bump into that whole “cold blooded” thing on their own?”
“I overshot and hit it headfirst, then plummeted to the frozen lake dozens of feet below.”
“Snake? Snake! Snaaake!”
“My new serpent body seemed to be surprisingly resilient.”
“A power snake huh? Sure to be lots of fun with your eventual wifey.”
“It almost felt like foreshadowing, but that only happens in literature. This is real life, even if everything that has happened thus far totally seems straight out of a fantasy novel.”
*Author looks around shiftily* “They’ll never guess my plans, Mauahahaha-gack!”
Slug-Chan-“Aha! I knew it! You’re the reason I kept choking while doing my evil laugh, and now that’s I’ve beaten it it’s gone back to you! Take that! Mauahaha!”
“Thankfully, I was once again grace by the presence of the Cute Ex Machina.
Go back to the tree. You missed something.
I missed something? Why didn’t you tell me before I left?”
“I thought it’d be funnier to see you bonk on the wall and faceplant. I was also a bit distracted. I do like the nickname though!”
“I quickly headed back to the tree me. Upon arrival, I felt the urge to facepalm, and would have done so if I had hands,”
“It’s ok, we know you’re cute but a bit slow. Not the brightest tree in the forest. It is cute seeing you faceplant though, and seeing you facepalm isn’t too bad either.”
“Wait, are those three…”
“Curly, Larry, and Mo? How did the 3 stooges end up here?!”
Thanks for the corrections!
"Caught up in my excitement, which for some odd reason wasn't suppressed, I attempted to take a step forward…only for my taut muscles to relax and my face crashing down into the petal below me."
"Is this a face plant? I think it is~"
"I dessspissse you right now…"
The feeling issss mutual.
"I'm sure that one of those documentaries was about snakes. Now, If I could just remember what they said about movement."
"You've forgotten an unknown number of things, but remember a random snek documentary?! Good lord, what are your memory priorities?!"
Whadda mean?! Snek is love, Snek is life!
"I could move them forward, backward, inwards, and outwards. I was totally a muscle helicopter."
"Whirlicopter flight is still on the table!"
YES! *Fist pump*
"I kind of remember some other ways that snakes move, but I think that this is good enough for right now. The ice shouldn't be that difficult to traverse."
"…why do I feel like I'm forgetting something significant?"
"Should I tell them? Or let them bump into that whole "cold blooded" thing on their own?"
Eh, it's fine...gotta learn some things on their own.
"I overshot and hit it headfirst, then plummeted to the frozen lake dozens of feet below."
"Snake? Snake! Snaaake!"
It's a bird! No, it's a plane! No it's a...snake.
"My new serpent body seemed to be surprisingly resilient."
"A power snake huh? Sure to be lots of fun with your eventual wifey."
Naughty.
"It almost felt like foreshadowing, but that only happens in literature. This is real life, even if everything that has happened thus far totally seems straight out of a fantasy novel."
*Author looks around shiftily* "They'll never guess my plans, Mauahahaha-gack!"
Slug-Chan-"Aha! I knew it! You're the reason I kept choking while doing my evil laugh, and now that's I've beaten it it's gone back to you! Take that! Mauahaha!"
... that's actually how I laugh. I feel attacked.
"Thankfully, I was once again grace by the presence of the Cute Ex Machina.
Go back to the tree. You missed something.
I missed something? Why didn't you tell me before I left?"
"I thought it'd be funnier to see you bonk on the wall and faceplant. I was also a bit distracted. I do like the nickname though!"
It was definitely funnier. I'm quite proud of the moniker.
"I quickly headed back to the tree me. Upon arrival, I felt the urge to facepalm, and would have done so if I had hands,"
"It's ok, we know you're cute but a bit slow. Not the brightest tree in the forest. It is cute seeing you faceplant though, and seeing you facepalm isn't too bad either."
Agreed!
"Wait, are those three…"
"Curly, Larry, and Mo? How did the 3 stooges end up here?!"
Dunno, but I can't say I disagree with the placement...
What I can think is, until now this place seems to correspond to a weird metaphorical Hell, but if everyone trapped in the frozen lake is aquatic, it could hint that this place is more ''real''. They're not damned souls, they got trapped in a frozen lake somehow.
An astute observation and quite an interesting theory. I don't want to spoil anything, but I'll say both yes and no to this theory.
There were mentions of winged creatures being stuck in the ice, so it isn’t just aquatic things