I just notice there's a part in the story where Austin feels pain but he has a skill that makes him feel no pain at all.....
(System doesn't work anymore as I couldn't deal with him getting anything for one year....)
Now what to do.....
I honestly wanna continue this story but I noticed there are SOME BIG mistakes and I wouldn't be able to fix them unless I start over again...which I will not do
So....... Let's run with it
No system but don't worry since he mesmerized the martial art style of deathstroke and considering he’s a speedster his healing factor is better than Wolverine
So….He’s a speedster with deathstroke martial art style. Some of you guys may think this is a buff
BUT Godspeed does have some cool abilities that Austin will discover and powerful
https://marvel-dc.fandom.com/wiki/Godspeed_(DC_Comics)
For the people who are to lazy(me) to search it up here:
Superhuman Speed, Intangibility, Electricity Manipulation, Phasing, Duplication, Time Travel, Precognition, Accelerated Healing, Flight, Vortex creations, Enhanced information processing.
- Electrokinesis: As a conduit of the Speed Force, Godspeed's body generates large amounts of electricity. This Speed Force lightning emanates off of him, especially when moving at superhuman speed.
- Electro-Blast: Godspeed is able to "use the Speed Force as a weapon", by hurling the lightning his body generates at victims.
- Healing: capable of healing other conduits of the Speed Force, through physical contact of his Speed Force energy.
- Intangibility: By vibrating his body at a specific frequency, Godspeed can become intangible, allowing object to pass directly through him.
- Phasing: Godspeed is able to vibrate his molecules to phase through objects. He also uses this as part of his fighting style,
- Speed Force Aura: a speedsters body is surrounded by a "friction cushion" which provides light protection from the nastier elements of their speed.
- Bio-Fission: Godspeed is able to clone himself, thus being able to be in two places at once.
- Energy Construct Creation: By focusing, Godspeed is capable of constructing his Godspeed costume out of pure Speed Force energy.
- Vortex Creations: is able to create strong vortexes of wind by rotating his arms at super-speed
So yeah….plus there’s also the fact that he can run at the speed of light which Austin would be able to do in the future….I honestly Wanna drop this book and work on my other one that has a (better and stronger) MC.
But idk so let me guys know what you think
Please keep working on this book I really like it and would hate to see it droped and dont be hard on yourself this is a really good book so please keep it up
and first
I agree the book is reading well. Good changes and the story flows. Being to hard on youself.
Throwing a story away whenever you realise you made a mistake would be a mistake. It’s better to view this as a learning experience and just see where it goes. It might end up as a train wreck, but if you really enjoy it then you can just rewrite it when you finish it. It’s much easier to see the mistakes when you have the bigger picture.
I'd say that you can still go with the "no pain", but! And this is an important but! His mind can still tell him that he SHOULD be feeling pain, so he convinces himself that he does.
This should solve your issue. Later he can realize that he really shouldn't be feeling pain and then he'll be good to go.
You think that's air you're breathing now? -https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fhrNgXJ__n8
Keep up the good work!