Hello there!
The first thing out of the way, I want a lot of feedback from you guys. There seems to be a lot of character level-system stories on this site. I love reading them; my inspiration for this was Tales of a Seductress and A Goblin's Evolution. Check them out. But what I noticed was the reader's main problem with stories that use level systems is consistency. An OP power is given, but the character/author forgets to use it in a situation, or they overlook a broken combo. And when it's life or death, any reasonable person would use every advantage they had. To hell with game balance or story pacing.
So what I would like to do is have you guys help me keep the plot hole'less. Let me know if any characters are being idiots or forgetting their abilities. But remember that they should only know what the character would know or do what a reasonable person with their intelligence would do. A big brain, 5d chess move doesn't make sense when a person with stated average intelligence is the one coming up with it.
Anyway, the following item is kinks. I will write for my kinks. Feel free to suggest stuff in the comments, but I can't promise to include it if it doesn't do anything for me or just grosses me out. For the more extreme kinks that I put in, I will post a warning at the start of the chapter and post a recap of the important plot points at the beginning of the next. That way, people can skip chapters that contain content they'd instead not read.
Pregnancy Fetish ? :)
I'll keep an eye on forgotten mechanics (if forgotten of course).
See you again if i don't forget to comment !
Hopefully there's no ntr in your likes,
A pity golins evolution npt updated for a long tine
I know, right. Probably my favourite story on this site.
I am giving this a try but I fully hope you are not thinking of including every element from goblins' evolution. ( it was good until chapter 13, that chapter was uncomfortable. ). What I mean is the NTR elements that Ellie had. The story did have a lot of polygamy which while I don't understand is not a letdown, but NTR is just uncomfortable and disgusting.