The wind blew across the gently rolling hills of the spawn lands as birds flew overhead, singing a merry tune. Roric stood with one leg up on a rock, looking into the distance as he considered the next phase of their adventure.
Jaina stood beside him, her arm around his back, hugging her master with compassion and love.
Evalynn lay in a heap behind them, her naked body covered in sweat as she tried to recover from the fucking Roric had given her. His cum still leaked out of her quivering pussy, creating a small pool beside her ass.
“So, are we keeping her?” Jaina asked.
“We can't,” Roric said. “The collar fades in twenty-four hours.”
“That’s a shame,” Jaina replied. “I loved watching you fuck her.”
“Don't worry, she's going to be fucking all night,” Roric said. “She will join you on the stage tonight so people can bid for her. Then she's going to fuck for me until she makes two hundred gold. After that, she will come to the room so you can watch me fuck her myself.”
“Hmmm,” Jaina hummed as she imagined the scene. “Can I eat her out when you’re done?”
“You really developed a taste for pussy, didn’t you?” Roric asked.
“I was nervous about eating Chandice, but you ordered me to, which made it exciting,” Jaina admitted. “I know it's weird to say, but having you choose my sexual preferences turns me on.”
“So if I said you were a lesbian, you would be one until I told you otherwise?” he asked.
“Completely,” Jaina replied.
“And if I said you preferred a pack of wolves?” he dared.
“I would get down on all fours and howl at the moon,” she said.
“Jaina,” Roric began and looked directly at her. “You're a lesbian, and you love to eat pussy. You would rather have a pussy to eat than a cock in your mouth.”
“I love pussy so much,” Jaina said as she started to get aroused that he had taken the opening and gone for it.
“Chandice is your girlfriend, and you eat her pussy every chance you get,” he added.
“I wish I was eating her pussy right now,” Jaina sighed with a knowing smile. Chandice had loved the last time Jaina had done that and would likely not hesitate to let Jaina do it again.
“When you see pretty girls, you dream about eating their hot sticky pussies,” Roric said in a seductive tone. “Sometimes, you can't help but fondle your own pussy when you see them. You coat your fingers, then lick them clean and imagine it’s their pussy your tasting.”
Jaina began to rub her body, stimulating her pussy before sticking her wet fingers in her mouth.
“You know, it would make your master so happy if you ate every pussy you could get. So even if I'm not around to see it, I want you to eat them for me.”
Jaina began to pant and looked at Evalynn to see her abused cum soaked pussy. She practically ran to the woman and threw open her legs before diving face-first into her folds. Evalynn groaned loudly as Jaina began to feast on her body, eager to prove to her master how much she loved pussy.
She expected Evalynn to protest, but the woman rolled to her back and spread her legs wider, giving Jaina more access to her tender flesh. Jaina took the invitation and dived in, hungrily lapping up the woman's cum soaked nectar. She didn't realize how much she loved the taste of pussy until her master pointed it out. It was her favorite food in the world, and she wanted to feast on it for hours.
Evalynn began to cry out, rocking her hips into Jaina's hungry mouth. She even reached down, cradling Jaina's head to hold her to her pussy. She was so eager to have an orgasm she was encouraging Jaina to keep going. Minutes later, she cried out, clutching her breasts as her body shook. Jaina tasted the sweet honey of a woman's orgasm and hummed in joy as she lapped it up. Her body also responded, the slave collar triggering a shared orgasm.
[lvl 2 Sex Slave Skill: Shared Orgasm] You always orgasm when your partner does.
“I guess collaring you to try and force you to prefer men hasn’t worked,” Roric said as he came up behind Jaina. “You orgasm just from eating pussy.”
Jaina smiled as he created a story around her new persuasion. He was now saying that he had collared her solely to try and cure a lesbian and make her prefer men. Well, Jaina could play this game too. After all, she was a lesbian now. If he wanted to rewrite her history to say she always had been one, then that's what it was.
“Sorry, master,” she said and looked up from her meal. “I can't help it. I love pussy so much.”
Roric squatted and put a hand on her rear with a thoughtful nod.
“I know, but I am going to keep sending you to fuck men until you change your mind,” he said.
“Promise?” Jaina laughed with a big smile.
“Get back to what you were doing,” he said, smacking her rear.
Jaina happily returned to her task, enjoying the taste of her favorite food. Roric sat on the rock and watched as Evalynn had another orgasm putting up no resistance as Jaina shared it with her. Jaina began to wonder if this was because of the collar and the changes Roric made. One of the first things Roric did was command her to strip. Then as she trembled in embarrassment, he ordered her character sheet opened. Poor Evalynn was a level thirty-two high-elven Glaive knight. With her primary class of Glaive knight overwritten by sex slave, a ton of unspent points were returned to her character sheet. Being the kind master he was, Roric spent these points where he wanted them. He went out of his way to adjust her skills so she got maximum pleasure from sex.
Then he made her watch as he took Jaina like he always did, pounding her from behind savagely. He looked at Evalynn and told her she was next, and she began to apologize profusely for what she did. Jaina remembered the horrified look on the woman's face when she saw the knot plop out of Jaina's pussy. Then Roric did something uncharacteristically gentle. He whispered to Jain and asked her to comfort Evalynn to try and reduce her anxiety. He wouldn't force himself on her if she was truly horrified by the idea. Jaina was all too happy to comply and crawled to the woman before taking her in a warm embrace.
“Shhh,” Jaina whispered as she began to rock the trembling high elf. “Master is very good to his slaves.” She then explained that she understood why the woman was nervous. She talked about how nervous she had been and how those feelings nearly paralyzed her with fear. Then she talked about how Roric helped her transition into a mindset of absolute obedience, where facing those fears made her aroused.
“You enjoy obeying him unquestioningly?” Evalynn asked.
Jaina explained the rush of having no control and how intoxicating the feeling was. She encouraged Evalynn to consider her own situation and how out of control it was. She then softly and subtly used her soothing touch ability to push some of that fear aside. She explained how Evalynn would never have a sexual encounter like this again. This was a crossing of the line into the world of lustful taboos. As such, it would be more powerful than anything she had ever done. For the rest of her life, she would look back on this moment, longing to experience it again. Jaina did her best to paint what was about to happen as an experience Evalynn would cherish afterward.
“If you want, I will hold you through the whole thing,” Jaina offered. “You can lean on me for support, and I will hold you tight.”
“Can he at least be gentle?” Evalynn pleaded.
Jaina smiled that the woman was starting to accept the inevitable and trying to bargain for terms on how it happened. Jaina explained that Roric liked it rough and always took his slaves that way. But she pointed out that Evalynn's anxiety over it being rough would make it more intense. Jaina assured her this experience would blow her mind because of how far outside her comfort zone it was.
“You do enjoy sex, don’t you?” Jaina asked.
“Yes,” Evalynn admitted as she shrunk into Jaina’s embrace.
“So do we,” Jaina said and explained how liberating coming to this world had been. She talked all about their hopes and dreams for a life full of sexual fantasy and exploration. Evalynn began to ask questions, nearly all of them circling around why Roric was a beast race.
“That's part of the fun,” Jaina insisted. “We wanted to get the most thrill out of our new lives that we could. It wouldn't have added anything to the thrill if Roric had played a human or something like it. Buuuuuuut,” she began with a smile before tapping Evalynn on the nose. “If he played something so obviously not human, he would be outside my comfort zone. Knowing that beast will breed me sends shivers down my spine. You can't appreciate how that shock to your sensibilities drives you to new places of sexual tension until you have tried it.”
Evalynn nodded in understanding and even dared to look at Roric, who was intently watching from where he sat on the rock. She looked away quickly and shut her eyes as she clung to Jaina.
“So, are you ready to have some fun?” Jaina asked and noticed something strange. Evalynn was trying not to smile, and her heart was racing. She was still trembling, but her submission and acceptance of this situation was far too eager. Even with Jaina’s soothing touch, the woman was too calm, as if this was what she wanted, and it excited her.
“Sweety, are you excited about this happening?” Jaina asked.
“What?” Evalynn replied and clung to her tightly. “I mean, maybe a little. I just. I mean, it will feel taboo?”
“Like you are doing something so naughty that you will never be the same,” Jaina replied, as she knew the woman was hungry to experience it herself. “But I am going to be perfectly honest with you. As much fun as it was to make you strip, Roric won't touch you if you are truly against the idea. I am sorry, love, but you aren't going to be raped. You have to want this to happen, so let me ask you again. Are you ready to know what it's like?”
“Tell him I'm ready,” Evalynn whispered as Jaina noticed her struggling not to smile again.
“Hmm,” Jaina said with a nod and went to Roric. She whispered in his ear that Evalynn was properly prepared. She was curious to know what it felt like to be taken by a beast, and her arousal was a little more eager than expected. She then returned to Evalynn and helped her get into position on her knees. Jaina knelt right before her, holding the woman tight as Roric arrived to pull Evalynn's arms behind her back. Evalynn started to breathe heavily, shaking so badly that Jaina had to hold her up.
“Shh, close your eyes and surrender. The more control you give up, the better it will feel,” Jaina urged.
Roric tied her wrists together and began as he always did, slowly working himself in as Evalynn trembled. Jaina stroked the back of the woman's head and smiled when she saw Roric make the final push to slip the knot in.
Evalynn began to thrash as the knot grew inside her, the pressure slowly building to surprising levels. She leaned into Jaina for support as Roric tested the readiness with a firm tug.
“Be gentle,” Jaina said sarcastically.
“Not a chance,” Roric replied and burst into motion.
Evalynn was crying out in rapid pants right from the get-go. Her body rocked into Jaina, who did her best to absorb the motion and hold her still. Roric didn't pull any punches, and his changes to her skills paid off almost immediately. Her easy-going skill had twelve points, and it rapidly went to work.
[lvl 6 Sex Slave skill: Easy going] [Boosted 12] You find orgasms much easier to have.
Evalynn cried out as her body shook from the sudden release. Jaina did her best to keep her steady at the front while Roric’s knot was the only thing holding up her rear. The sound of the impacts had changed to wet slaps as Evalynn's body oozed from her powerful climax. She struggled to breathe as the punishment went on, but just over a minute later, she choked, and another orgasm came rushing out. This one was even more powerful, driven by Roric's playful expenditure of points on sexual escalation.
[lvl 4 Sex Slave Skill: Sexual escalation] [Boosted 10] Every orgasm you have during a single bout of sex will be more powerful than the one before it.
Evalynn pressed into Jaina as she writhed in an orgasm kept alive by the constant hammering from behind. Evalynn's voice slowly got louder as the sex continued, every orgasm driving her to a new height. Eventually, it started to die off as she became exhausted, only rising when another mind-shattering orgasm rolled in.
Jaina counted twenty-two good orgasms before Roric finally thrust deep and had one of his own. Of course, this sent Evalynn's world into a tailspin as two abilities, one of which Jaina didn't have yet, went off at once.
[lvl 2 Sex Slave Skill: Shared Orgasm] You always orgasm when your partner does.
[lvl 17 sex slave skill: Climax] when a man cums inside you, you flush hot and are immediately cured of all negative status effects. Orgasms triggered by shared orgasm are doubled in effect for this one.
Twenty-two levels of boosted sexual escalation were multiplied into forty-four as Evalynn suddenly shot up, her back colliding with Roric's chest. Her eyes were wide as her mouth hung open, barely able to gasp for breath. Her stomach shook violently as an orgasm that couldn't be measured broke the poor woman's mind. Suddenly her eyes rolled back, and she went limp, forcing Jaina to catch her as she fell.
Jaina lay with her a while as she slept the overwhelming sensation away. Jaina was somewhat jealous of what just happened and begged Roric to spend her points the same way so she could have one like that.
When the woman finally awoke an hour later, her head was still in Jaina's lap. Jaina was petting her beautiful hair while gently shushing her to remain quiet and let the moment drift away. She went back to sleep, and Jaina let her rest as she crawled to Roric and took her place kneeling between his legs. She then pleasured her master, sucking on his warm cock as he held a hand to her head. She kept up a firm pace, using only her hand, lips, and tongue to pleasure him. Roric had such a long lovely cock that could reach into her throat. She pushed her lips to his knot, the collar's magic preventing her from choking. With half his cock down her throat, she bobbed back and forth, using her throat to fuck him. She delighted in how easy this was and looked up to meet his gaze and show her affection. A few minutes into the process, she felt him tense up and growl. Something throbbed in her throat as she suddenly shared the bliss of his orgasm. She held still, allowing him to empty directly into her stomach before slowly pulling away. She sucked firmly to get everything she could before her lips finally came away.
“I love you,” Roric said as their eyes met.
“I love you too, master,” Jaina replied and kissed the tip. “But I seem to recall I am fond of pussy, and I see one begging to be eaten.”
“Go,” Roric urged. “I want to see you pleasure her.”
Jaina crawled on hands and knees, swaying her rear for her master to watch. She made her way over to the sleeping woman and leaned low to begin licking her thighs. Evalynn moaned in her sleep and parted her legs a little. Jaina worked her way up, licking and kissing until she could finally reach Evalynn's cum soaked folds. She gently pulled the woman's legs apart a little wider, then reached in and tasted the milky flesh.
She hummed in delight as she began to eat, licking Evalynn’s pussy clean of Roric’s seed. Evalynn came awake almost instantly, her hands coming to Jaina’s head and holding her in place.
“Somebody like this,” Jaina teased and returned to her licking. She buried her face into the woman's body, reaching as deeply as she could to savor the flavor of their sex. She could taste Roric's seed mixed with the woman's fluids, forming a delightful cocktail. Evalynn moaned and thrashed, her body writhing in response to the pleasure. She called out as Jaina pushed her toward another orgasm as the collar made the build-up easy. It took just over a minute to get her there, and Evalynn arched her back as her body shook from its release. Jaina shared it with her, savoring both the orgasm and the sudden rush of juice in the woman's pussy. She hadn't realized how much she loved to eat a woman's orgasm and grew hungry to force Evalynn to have another.
She hooked Evalynn's legs with her arms, praying her body open wide so she could feast on all of her succulent flower. Evalynn shook as her body wasn't allowed to come down from the previous orgasm, her breath coming out in rapid pants. Jaina pushed her to have another, then another, savoring the flavor of every release.
“I can't take anymore!” Evalynn cried after her fourth orgasm. “Please, I need to rest!”
With a loving sigh, Jaina relented and crawled up the panting woman's body to plant a firm wet kiss. To her surprise Evalynn welcomed her affection, wrapping her arms around Jaina to trap her as the kiss ended. It was a genuinely warm embrace, with her head tucked into Jaina's shoulder. Jaina felt something new as she held the woman and felt those arms around her back. The moment made her realize just how much she wanted a slave sister to share things like this with.
“Did you manage to enjoy it?” Jaina asked.
Evalynn nodded into her shoulder and hung on as if needing Jaina for warmth.
“Are you ready to push yourself?” Jaina questioned, causing the woman to lean back so she could look into Jaina's eyes.
“How?” she asked.
“Do you see our master sitting over there on the rock?” Jaina pointed out as they both looked his way. “He loves it when his slaves crawl to him and suck his cock.”
Evalynn started to pant and looked at Jaina with a light shake of her head.
“You’re feeling the butterflies now, aren’t you?” Jaina asked with a smile. “That nervous panic is mixing with the taboo of arousal for something you shouldn't want but do. How could somebody like you crawl over there and suck that beast's cock?”
Evalynn let out a slight moan as the thought played out in her mind. Jaina pressed the point home, assuring her that if she didn't find out what it felt like, she would regret it for the rest of her life. A sexual opportunity like this would never come again and now was her once chance to act.
Evalynn slowly crawled out of Jaina's grasp and came to her hands and knees. Roric watched her intently as she crawled to him until her head was between his legs. She looked up to meet his gaze as her lips trembled in fear. Then without hesitation, she parted those lips and went to work pleasuring her master.
Jaina smiled proudly as their once-hated enemy sucked her master's cock with hungry passion. Evalynn was lost in the moment, the fear and taboo of what she was doing driving her wild. Of course, Evalynn was on her hands and knees, which meant a gooey pussy was on full display. Jaina couldn't help herself as she got behind Evalynn and feasted on the woman's body once more.
Orgasms were had by all, and Evalynn did a surprisingly good job of swallowing. Now the two women knelt between his legs with their heads on his thighs. Roric was stroking Evalynn’s head like a pet when he finally looked up and announced they needed to go back.
“Oh, so soon?” Jaina asked.
“The sun is about to move to twilight, and we still need to get back to buy Evalynn an outfit,” Roric said.
“Oh, the dance!” Jaina said excitedly and looked over to see Evalynn was confused. “You are going to be doing an erotic dance and striptease with me tonight before hundreds of men.” Evalynn gasped, but Jaina quickly took one of her hands and began to rub it.
“Don't worry,” Jaina said with a smile. “I will be there right beside you the whole time. I will even hold your hand if you want me to. If it helps, just close your eyes and imagine you're dancing for your master, and he is the only one in the room. That's how I got through my first couple of times.”
Evalynn nodded her understanding, but Roric looked down and got her attention.
Evalynn, I want you to understand something,” he began in an assertive voice. “You are my slave, and I am putting you on that stage so men can see your beautiful body. They will then bid on you for a moment's pleasure, and I intend to sell you to them until you have paid me two hundred gold in compensation for your attack.”
Evalynn shook her head, but Jaina was there in a flash to explain.
“I will be sleeping with them too, and it all happens in private where nobody can see,” she insisted.
“But I will be a whore,” she stammered.
“No,” Jaina said and leaned closer. “Close your eyes and let go. Remember, you have been taken as a slave, and this is your one opportunity to do something like this free of guilt. Now embrace that tension and realize that you have two choices. You could struggle against it all and hate the whole thing. Or you could throw yourself at it, letting the tension and arousal carry you away.
“You can do this?” Evalynn asked.
“I can because my master says I have to, so I see no reason to resist,” Jaina said. “Now, are you strong enough to pass the next test? Will fear get the better of you, or will you seek to find out just how far this twisting arousal can take you? If you're hungry to experience the next level, look your master in the eye, tell him to sell your body away, and promise you will please those who purchase you.
Evalynn looked up with wide eyes as she met Roric’s firm gaze.
“Please, sell my body,” she gasped. “I promise to please anyone you sell me to.”
Roric nodded and resumed petting her head. Then he got up and took her into his arms to carry her home as she trembled in fear. Jaina walked beside them, absentmindedly holding one of Evalynn's hands as the night's fun was about to begin.
The crowd was awestruck and nearly silent as two women took the stage. To help Evalynn with the transition, Roric had Jaina copy her appearance. Now two identical high-elven women of incredible beauty and muscular frame stood in short matching black dresses. When the music began, it was obvious who was who, as Jaina's seductive dance carried a power that Evalynns regular dancing couldn't hope to match. Still, the display sent the crowd wild, and coins started to rain. Gisley was on hand to do the collecting, and in less than a minute, she had ten gold. The two dancers held their arms high as Gisley pulled a dress up and off, exposing the lacy silk garments beneath. Once both dancers were stripped of their dresses, Gisley resumed her collection of coins.
It wasn't long before they had another ten, and Gisley plucked off their bras to the cheers of a thirsty crowd. To help things along, Jaina smiled and turned to Evalynn, taking her into a long passionate kiss before the audience. So many coins rained down that Gisley yanked their panties off while they were still kissing.
Naked and bare to the roaring crowd, they began the sensual dance of roving hands as the song took on a sultry drone. The two rocked and swung hips with a slow rhythm, ensuring the crowd saw absolutely everything.
Coins rained down, and Gisley was forced to give them the signal. With a firm squeeze on each, the women knew it was time to begin, and fingers started to wander lower as their stomachs rolled. People roared as twin elven maidens began to masturbate for their amusement. The dance lasted for several minutes until one of them began to groan loudly. This was Evalynn, as her easy going skill was boosted much higher, and her orgasm was coming fast. Not wanting to miss out, Jaina saw a decedent opportunity and stepped closer, so their bodies started to rub together. It wasn't long before they slid hands across to each other as the two started to make love.
This brought a hail of coins so profuse the clatter began to drown out the minstrels. Gisley was down on hands and knees, using her arms to rake the coins up. She held a hand sign out to Roric to let him know she already had enough coins to pay for nine orgasms. He nodded and waved to assure her they would pay out, then watched the two women kiss passionately.
It was impossible to tell which was which as they kissed and rubbed, their hands caressing one another in a wild display of lust. Eventually, the moans gave away that the time was close, and both women turned their rears to the crowd. They remained kissing as they bent over at the waist to present their pussies to the audience. Coins bounced off their asses as they masturbated each other to a thunderous climax, and because they were now making love, a shared orgasm triggered them both.
People went wild as both women's bodies trembled in the obvious throes of a powerful release. One of them sprayed a stream of fluid to create a puddle on the stage. Gisley told them they needed to start another immediately, so the two women went back to making love while dancing. The display had the audience enraptured and unable to look away. Five orgasms later, the two were still at it, making love with no regard for who was watching. Enough coins had landed to pay for ten more, and Roric had to call a stop to the rain, or the night would go on forever.
The box to collect offers was filled to overflowing, and the inn ran out of paper. Seeing an opportunity, he made a quick arrangement with the innkeeper, and the box was disregarded.
By the time the fourteenth orgasm splashes the stage with yet another puddle, the girls were hardly dancing. Instead, their slow sensual lovemaking quickly descended into raw sex, and before long, one of them dropped to her knees. She quickly buried her face between the legs of the other as the crowd threw more coins anyway. Roric suspected this was Jaina, but he honestly couldn't tell them apart anymore.
The standing woman tried to keep dancing, rocking, and writhing her hips on the face of the other. She screamed out moans as she thrashed with hair flying in her obvious ecstasy. When they finally came again, fluid dripped from the lower ones chin. The audience realized the dancer had sprayed into the other one's mouth, and things started to get rowdy.
People started approaching the stage, but Roric and the innkeeper were in the way in a moment. Roric let them know that tonight would be a special offer. The girls would service every man who wanted them, starting from those willing to pay the most. They would keep on all through the night until everyone was satisfied. This seemed to placate the crowd, who started to line up along the wall, eager to pay for a few minutes of heaven.
When Roric looked back, the dancers had collapsed and were lying on top of each other. They hungrily devoured one another while an over-aroused audience screamed for their turn. Roric had to break them up and, with the help of the innkeeper, carried the dazed women to a bed. They were laid on their backs side by side so they could keep kissing. Then, with legs pulled back and spread wide, the men were sent to begin satisfying the fire the dancers had built. Most only needed a few minutes, but some took longer. Regardless the line moved fast, and Roric was very grateful for the cleanse skill.
[lvl 5 Sex Slave skill: Cleanse] Instantly cleanse your body of all contaminants as if you had just taken a long hot bath.
Both girls had the skill and used it after every customer to be pristine and fresh. They lined up from dozens of races, and Roric was sure his girls were the most experienced on the server. He worried that Evalynn might not be up to the task, but before long, she was begging for more. They pleaded with the men to fuck them harder, screaming in joy every time one of them triggered an orgasm.
Over six hours later, the final man left the room. Now devoid of men to please, the two women rolled into one another's arms and started to kiss again. Roric had the innkeeper put the gold in a locked room so that he had his arms free when the end finally came. He put his decent strength to use and picked them both up. He carried them to a new room upstairs with a much larger bed. They were so tired he laid them face down and used one then the other for one last bestial breeding. Then they were finally allowed to rest, each clinging to his chest. He still couldn't tell which one was which, and he didn't care. They were both his slaves, and that was all that mattered.
When morning came, the two women were still on his chest, but both were awake. To his surprise, one of them leaned up to kiss him, allowing his tongue deep into her mouth with an almost longing need. Then the other followed suit, savoring the presence of her master's tongue just as much. It was only now that he remembered Evalynn's collar was redder and realized she had been the first to kiss him.
She laid her head back on his chest and, without being told, began to fondle his balls, gently running her hands through the warm fur. As his cock started to protrude from the sheath in arousal, she leaned down and began to suck. Roric laid his head back and allowed his slave to service him as the other leaned in close to whisper.
“That’s Evalynn,” Jaina said softly.
“I know,” Roric replied as the woman worked diligently to please him.
“I think she might enjoy being your slave,” Jaina said and ran a hand up his chest.
“I enjoy having her, but that collar will fade later today, and she will go free,” Roric said.
“Then you better make sure she has something to remember you with,” Jaina said. “I want you to fuck her exclusively today. Use all your stamina buffs and second winds on her. I want her to remember what her master's sex feels like for a long time to come.”
“You don’t mind?” he asked as Jaina shrugged.
“I am just happy to see her fully submitted and eager to please her master,” Jaina replied.
Roric nodded as his slave worshiped her master's cock. He eventually rewarded her for her devoted service and listened as she swallowed three times. He then decided to show her some extra attention and bent her over the side of the bed. He took her twice, first in the pussy, and then in the ass. He wanted to ensure that there was no part of her he hadn't conquered. Jaina spent some time cleaning her up, eager to savor the flavor of a freshly fucked pussy.
Later he leashed them both and took them through town naked and holding hands as people waived or thanked them for a good time. Jaina was still her mirror image, so nobody was quite sure which one they had been with. They went into the fields until they returned to the stone from the night before. Here Roric took her repeatedly, using her to start his buffs and special abilities. Then he left them in the grass to recover as he went out to hunt minor monsters.
Jaina took her chance to eat more of the woman's body, and by the time Roric got back, they had already had many delicious orgasms. Then, feeling refreshed, he fucked her once more as she screamed out for her master to take her. Then the hour came, and the collar suddenly vanished from her neck. She reached up to touch the bare skin as if missing its embrace.
“Your armor and gear are hidden behind the rock,” Roric said now that she was free.
She nodded and went to get her stuff, but a chance glance caught Jaina's eyes. She realized that Jaina had been right about it all, which sent a storm surging inside. Still, she felt that all this could be put behind her if she walked away now. Inside that idea didn't sit right, and she needed to prove to herself what she had become. So without a collar to provoke her actions, she dropped to her knees before his waist. She looked up with pleading eyes and gently asked the beast if she might service him one more time.
Roric nodded knowingly and answered with a firm voice.
“Service your master. Slave.”
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It might just be me but her initial dislike doesn't feel as strong as you'd have expected based on her disposition in the previous. It also feels bit quick of a change, but that might just be because it was all crammed into a 24 hr period in one chapter(Of course, the intensity might have just been caused by adrenaline and she doesn't feel as strongly as otherwise portrayed then). I do understand why, but a plausable reason for another 24 hrs or more could have been her trying to goad or lead Roric into enslaving her again. Maybe she lies to herself, maybe she doesn't but has too much pride to just submit after one go. But like I said, might just be me. Well, outside of these things, I love the chapter. Especially the part where Jaina explains and reassures her using personal experience as an example, as well as using Evalynn's current state as an excuse to let loose.
Speaking of let loose, reading the part where Jaina recounts her experience and just why she likes it, made me wonder how Heather would take to such a life. I understand Heather as someone both diligent and responsible, but also someone who wants to be able to relax. And I get the feeling she doesn't get to do it that much. Maybe she'd like it because someone else would be responsible for her, that there was no point in worrying therefore doesn't because she has no longer control?
Personal musings aside, thanks for the chapter.
I would love to do that with Heather. I have written test chapters where Blackbast (who is the slave master in that story) Actually slowly coaxes heather into being Franks slave. Before I was done he had all three women, and occasionally blackbast herself.
Also I didn't draw much attention to it but Heather was using soothing touch to "influence" Evalynn into being more receptive and willing to change her opinions.
@omnixius Wrong name buddy
@CrypticalFlint ha, I told you I wanted to bring heather into all of this.
@omnixius True. Also, I didn't know she used a skill. Might help readers get a more understanding what's going on if you mention if skills are used. Also, I think it could be more fun to read Roric's slaves' initiations into his slave from their perspective. If done right, it might also make it feel longer(maybe better feel for the pacing would be the word). Like, I would have loved to know how Evalynn felt as she changed into her dress before getting on stage. Did she feel demeaned? Nervously excited? Did she like it, or was she confused/conflicted about what she was feeling?
Btw, if you still want Frank to have f*cked all of them, and if the ogre was up to it, maybe Breanne would be up to the occsional switch with Frank. Or she could have been together with "co" before she met ogre but eventually decided to be with ogre after they met(and if ogre was fine with it, maybe occsionally hook up). It could create awkward tensions and emotional moments, but it could also be more trouble than worth it.
@CrypticalFlint
You are making me want to write all three of those women into a harem of franks mor and more. Now I want to reset frank so he can choose a slave master class. ORRRR. I can use a trick I had planned for Heather to get her an additional class to give frank one. It could even be the during the Jaina crossover. Heck it might be in that cross-over that Heather and Frank Learn what womb tattoos are and discover that if Heather is willing to get one frank will be gifted an extra class and he will pick Conqueror because he has met Roric.
@omnixius
Why not? You've got pen, desire, and inspiration. I won't exactly miss a guy I haven't even met yet if you want to write the ogre off or something. Unlike the current cast. Heck, you could turn turn the trick into a repeatable exploit if nothing else(Maybe only once though for each member, they could get overpowered or something otherwise(unfair and unbalanced maybe)) that the visitors don't mind them using because unlike many of new eden's inhabitant, they've good sportsmanship. Or maybe they let it slide because they approve of Heather and co's actions and goal. This way, if you want to, you could give some of them a s*x slave class, maybe seductress, I don't know, there's a lot of option and freedom with a system as open ended as yours.
Although I like latter option a lot more. Lewds alright.
@CrypticalFlint
So then Heather's tattoo becomes Passion pool, Cum Vampire, and necro. She has no mana pool anymore instead she replenishes her power by feeding on the cum of the undead that has become so addictive to her that she can no longer consume normal food. In order to maintain regular feedings she has created a massive BDSM dungeon where she holds powerful undead who are given orders to rape her if they can. After spending hours locked in bondage devices while ghouls, zombies and other beasts plunder her body she has lost the ability to orgasm for anything except the undead.
@omnixius
God, I love it. The only thing I'm hesitant about is passion pool because it could severely limit her potential for combat if she has to stop by the tower or f*ck for hrs in a dungeon to replenish her mana. Fun as a concept, not so sure about practicallity. Or does she not need to bang much? If she doesn't the not so sane me says go for it!
@CrypticalFlint Yeah, I really want to write this now.
@omnixius
You've got the pen. But ideally, I really hope the several hrs is for fun and not necessity. It'd be a nightmare to handle otherwise in conjuction with her quest and combat in general.
Also, depending on how much s*x you plan on and are writing, it might be best to switch to Scribblehub
@CrypticalFlint hmm. I will think about this. In other news I may not have to go back to work yet. There is a program that I do qualify for that actally pays more than I was getting. I am just waiting to hear back, If I had that kind of time I could do something crazy like write a scribble hub version of the story. Follow the same line but add in all the spicy stuff I took out.
@omnixius Do let me know if it happens.
Feel free to spoil me where the spicy happens too
@CrypticalFlint
I think I even wrote a scene where heather wakes up from nap to discover webster can change his size to a giant spider and hes webbed her to the bed. He then proceeds to breed her and then weaves her a set of chastity belts and bra made from his silk that she can't get off. Now when she wants s*x she has beg him for it because hes the only one who can get the webbing off.
@omnixius
You could turn it into a misunderstanding. Maybe he thought she would like it because she did it so often with her friend(s), or maybe because he witnessed several of her marathon s*x with undead in a bdsm dungeon(that's happened several times)?
Also, when you say think about it, do you only mean the scribblehub thing or the scene and Heather's predicament too?
Now that I think about it. Are you going to write Frank's Harem in both versions, or only one version(if you do end up going for it)?
@CrypticalFlint
I tell you one of my big dreams is actually to add all sorts of out of relationship s*x to the dragon knight prophecy. Including a whole storyline where Lilly wants to leave the relationship to marry another man and come back to it when he dies. (Because the characters are going to live for thousands of years. so she can spend 20 with this man to make him happy.
@omnixius
You could make them quarrel. She'll leave, and live with another man. At first because she was petty, but over time she began to feel for the man and felt that 20 years or 80 is nothing compared to eternity. Merely a moment against millenium. She could spend a moment with this man, and provide for him a life he will remember in his afterlife.
In fact, you could take a page out of the Author of Everbody Loves Big Chests and create an arc, or maybe several chapters, of your story without Lilly in it for some reason or another, and create a side novel featuring what she does in her absence. Once she comes back maybe she'll never mention what she did, or maybe she does. This way you create a storyline that has little impact in narration for your main story, and you could do your fun in another novel which those who are curious about what she was up to may read.
@CrypticalFlint
Let me explain how I was going to tackle it. Thayle who is one of the wives has a very active sexual past. Lilly is fascinated by this and asks about it a lot. Thayle tells her how she often slept with men who were hurting for one reason or another. Especially when they were good men but through bad luck or cruel fate never managed to find Love.
Lilly will find a man like this. One she admires and respects but who is getting old and never had a family. He shares his one regret with her and she decided that he deserves somebody to love him for his final years. so she talks to her family, explains how she wants to learn about love the way Thayle did and do some growing. when he has passed she will return and resume her duties as a wife, but with a new a whole bunch of new life lessons she couldn't have gotten otherwise.
@omnixius
If you want to do it then you shouldn't care or be afraid of backlash from your reader base. For many who aren't as open minded and accepting, this could be considered borderline cheating, adultery and NTR. This is especially so for people who did not see it coming. This may also be why you had such a big backlash in Heather for turning it harem and "sexy". Firstly, you never put a harem tag, you never even hinted at it becoming possibility. Romantic or sexual tension in story is one thing, genres and tags in homepage and table of content? That's another. If you don't have a harem tag you'll get a mix of readers who likes harem but doesn't mind the lack, guys who hate harems, and guys who doesn't care if there is a harem. You could probably guess where I stand.
@CrypticalFlint I think all my future stories will be harems and heavily sexual. I love writing it.
@omnixius And I look forward to reading them.
Speaking of steamy stories, is the old man in that storyline an unwed charismatic bard? I can so hear the dice rolling if he is.
I am tempted to write one as well, but sadly, I have no drive(excluding several documents and spreadsheets listing several ideas that shall die in a lonely grave).
@CrypticalFlint No, he is simply a good and honorable man. Lilly has a very innocent almost child-like view of the world and approaches everything she does with love. So seeing him suffering really touches a chord with her and she thinks of what Thayle would do in this situation. Since she can "solve" the problem she asked the question, why shouldn't she? Her family is against the idea in part but they also understand that Lilly has a lot of growing up to do and this might be the best way to let her do it. In exchange for her going they will take additional wives to fill in during her absence.
@omnixius She must have left big shoes to fill.
@CrypticalFlint let me ask your opinion on something. I have a chapter coming where Lilly is going to fly off on her own in an effort to learn about a rival kingdom they are at war with. This is lilly being to loving and kind but she discoveres these people revere dragons and welcome her in with open arms. She begins a dialog with them and it quickly becomes obvious that they have a very different culture. So she stays with them to learn about this culture hoping to avert a war. To make this story short. She learns of a way to end the war and save thousands but needs more time to bring it about. They have agreed to let her stay provided she honors their culture and way of life and Lilly accidentally offers herself up for marrriage. Men fight over her and blood is shed with the winner claiming her as his wife. When she realizes what shes done shes put in a bad spot. She can leave now and avoid the marriage but the war rages on, OR she can stay, and honor the marriage and potentially end the way. The thing is she only has to stay for like a week for her plan to unfold then the war ends and she can run away. But during that week she will be sleepign with another man. I have been tossing over this story line for months and the time to write it is fast approaching.
@omnixius
You shouldn't write it all in one chapter thats for sure. Has she slept with another man before, or have you hinted at the possibility? Depending on the answer, you're gonna have to focus some chapters on Lilly exploring the city and learning their culture. She could meet potential winners of this tournament in the city, and they build an infauntation or interest in her.
Build these guys character up. Make them relatable, and likable. You could make him a Just, Slightly Mischievious(Perversely or pranking), and Perhaps arrogant. If they do marry for one week, you could use these characteristics to make him secretely tease her in public, believing they won't get caught or that his dragon wife won't roast him as a result of his cocksure attitude. He could also protect her from those who wish her harm.
For her to learn, she must also be subjected to people who doesn't want her goodwill. Maybe some of the leaders of each side doesn't revere dragons, and instead hates them. Maybe there's a bunch of overzealous supporters whose actions would reignite the war if left as is post war. Of course if there is magic, she could potentially create a clone powered by her magic. It could be independent, remotely controlled, or telepathically linked(I find this one can have a lot more potential for sexual shennanigans). (Ex. She isn't conciously aware of what her clone is doing or thinking unless she focuses, but she can feel sensations felt by the clone at full power(like pain or pleasure), so she could orgasm right as she's making dinner, reading, or any other type of activities)).
She could also have the full memory of what the clone did so she won't be left out of the loop and still engaged with her family, she just may not mention her clone was married and f*cked a guy and she remembers every detail. You could follow on this thread on how the winner is distraught over the disappearance of his wife(maybe the shock of her suddenly divorcing made him forget why she left, or maybe she forgot to inform him) and has gone on a journey to find her and "save" her. The options then would be for Lilly to create and keep a clone for him indefinitively, lead him astray, find another wife, turn him into a wife, or something.
Actually, if you go with the clone route you could write the occasional paragraph on Lilly checking in on the clone to see whatever's going on.
Also, as a woman already in a relationship she'd definitely would have to talk with her family and discuss her options. Thayle could be the one to encourage her to accept the marriage since its would be the least violent and possibly the best option for there to be ling term peace without the presence of a dragon strongarming them into peace. This would also give the dialogue of describing the husband as conflicted, but ultimately accepting her decision for he knows she is compassionate and would blame herself for failing achieve peace despite literally having the ability to do it and choosing not to.
@CrypticalFlint Yeah this is a major story arc that will go over six chapter minimum. I intend for the guy she ends up with be very honorable and the kind of guy Lilly is actually attracted to. He will fight and kill to protect her honor several times and when she accidentally creates a conflict over who gets to marry her, he joins the conflict to save her from a cruel man.
But he is very much in love with her and treats her like gold.
I know deep inside I want Lilly to stay with this man and make love to him. I want her to regret when she has to leave and feel all those complex emotions relationships like this often bring. But I cant help but feel my readers want her to remain pure and untouched.
@omnixius
You'll have to make him a really popular character if you want to go through with it and want the majority of the readers to like it. Also try to have him show his awareness and respect of a dragon's strength.
Here are some suggestions for if she stays.
1. She goes all the way through it.
2. She has a clone do it.
3. She marries but never sleeps with him.
4. Never sleeps with him but does offer other alternatives.
5. She goes through it, but you give no or only vague details about what happened, then write what happens in another novel.
6. You have another character do it and Lilly is there to help and support.
Ex. Lilly mentions how she helped bring peace by facilitating marriage between two individuals who wished for peace.
Note: The good thing about backlash is that those who stay behind are more likely to stick with you and enjoy the sexual shenanigans you have in store. If you want to write what you want, then you should take more stock on what you want to write, not what they want to read. There are many stories for them to choose from. And not many you get to write yourself.
Though I guess there aren't many stories with a cheery and sunny female devil necromancer thats falling in love with a nice ghoul and is about to become part of a harem, and become highly addicted to undead semen.
@CrypticalFlint I just learned you can nest spoilers. Also what do you think about me writing the next chapter all about evalynn and her point of view on that last chapter?
@omnixius I'd like it. I did profess my interest on the first comment.
Im kinda curious if there is a spoiler limit now.
I just had an idea for a s*x class;
Deviant: This class allows to player to gain one skill per level from any s*x s*x class within its level. This means that a level 1 Deviant could gain the Level 1 Seductress skill; Erotic Dance, or Allure. But not a level 5+ s*x Slave skills like Easier Orgasm, or Escalation.
An Idea Im not so sure about: One Special class feature granted by the Deviant class is the ability to render a s*x curse partially, fully, or temporarily disabled, until otherwise desired through a skill gained at a certain level(If its even allowed in the first place)(Maybe only in combat? She'd still need to recharge through s*x outside of it)(This part was in consideration of Heather as a suggested option to turn off passion pool(Was also thinking it could be switched to restoring either stamina or health) become too problematic(It was also an idea for a s*x class that offers her weaker, but available s*x skills from a wide arrange of classes(you could arrange some drawbacks if its too powerful))).
Maybe the could merge or get modified by her curse and now her class skills works only on undead. Although that would be a useless feature because of necro. Maybe it could double the effects? Passion pool could maybe double her current mana pool as a bonus or something (which would make it easier to manage too). Your system really makes it easy to just put in a class it wouldn't be out of place or break rules.
I just made up a class, and I realised I am needlessly concerned. But, hmm, are there class rings? I just wondered if there were epic or mytic rarity rings that granted a temporary class slot at half the level of the primary class with half the points expected for its temporary level. I've got way too much free time.
@CrypticalFlint about class rings- I actually added one to Heather the necromacner. A ring Heather found when she first went into the dungeon to get Gwens kingdom heart back. She left the ring where she found it because it was spectral and thus couldn't be worn by somebody who was solid.
It was meant for Breanne who could turn into her banshee form, put it on and then when she returned to solid form it would return with her. But the purpose was simple, it was a ring of Necromancy. And I meant it to be the first "indication" that the necromancers had figured out how the class system worked and could bind create artifacts allowing one to add extra classes. I also wanted Breanne to become a necromancer and have her and heather marching side by side with armies of undad at their call.
I introduced the ring then never brought it up again. I had second thoughts about making the system so "easy" to manipulate. But I still have shown you can bind classes to items. Heather wears a crown that turns her into a whole new race complete with all its abilities. So the point has been made, I just did it more subtly. Still, I have considered bringing the ring back up, and making it a prominent part of the story.
@omnixius So that means monster players won't have to sacrifice their race class with these items, right? If you want to limit the possibility for abuse, you could make the levels fixed. To discourage people from making a profit of them, you could put in the limit that a player's class needs to be willingly taken, offered, and bound, forever losing it and forced to begin from the beginning. This would be a great alternative for players' who wants to reset, but still keep all their material progress, such as money, homes, and equipment. Another limit would be how many accessories could be worn. Though I can't remember if there already was one. Can't think off any other way to limit at this moment. Just had another. Player's could maybe offer the class, but lose no levels, or maybe they have a ghost level and levels 50% faster than normal, or their levels and points stored and they can choose to optimize. You could make it that player who offered had to write a geass contract or something, or maybe they're hiding their knowledge to avoid being implacated with necromancers and be hunted.
@CrypticalFlint In the early chapters I eluded to the fact that the necromancers were trying to find a way to prevent monster players from resetting. They did this because though most of them were hero players, many of the minions of their lands were monster players. Thus they were experimenting with how the buffer and respawn system worked and trying various angles to accomplish this task.
They found a way to imprint a class into an item, but it required a donator. This donator would transfer their current level and ability in one class into an item, and in the process, they would be reset and have to start over. The item would only convey the class and level that was used to create it. Thus it would never go any higher, but it created a unique opportunity. They knew Kevin wasn't going to stop until he reset them all, so they could hide their magic away, saving their class and power where Kevin would never find it.
These items were then hidden in the buffer itself, where only another necromancer could get them. Thus Kevin would discover they were already reset and playing as something else. And all they needed to do was wait for another necromancer to rise up and use that person to reclaim their rings and bam, the entire necromancer nation was restored even more powerful than before.
Of course, it didn't play out that way. Heather has asked this question before. If the necromancers reset, where are they? Nobody seems to know where the reset necromancers are, and nobody admits to once having been on. Something more is going on.
@omnixius That's such an elaborate scheme that shows of their total and combined knowledge to achieve a comeback. Its a pity it was never to be. I'm also surprised I managed to elude to the process through brainstormed ideas.
@CrypticalFlint one of Heather's main tasks will be to find the missing necromancers. Let's just say she has already discovered a hint as to how they are hidden away and her reaction to how this "hint" was accidentally used is part of the secret. A memory of a previous tragedy and something she lost.
@omnixius Oh. That's sad. I hope she'll regain whatever she lost. Tragedy with lost just makes it seem like it was something or someone important.
@CrypticalFlint To bad Kevin knows she will come looking for the memory some day. He's hidden it where she doesn't dare go because once she goes in, there is no escape. So learn the the truth and be imprisoned forever, or let it go and stay free.
@omnixius A Hard rock and a hard place. But, as a chosen, couldn't she commit suicide to get out? Just leave her equipment with her friends. Teleportaion too, if they exist. Unless none of those would work?
@CrypticalFlint The prison helps explain why some people didn't respawn when they died. Once she goes in, she can't die, or use magic per say. She would need a method to evoke the visitors themselves to act and open the door for her.
@omnixius That's a good way to go insane.
@CrypticalFlint It's also going to be a good way to showcase how ruthless Heather can be. She won't walk into the trap blind. She has a plan to get out before she even steps foot inside, but it requires somebody close to her to make a sacrifice.
Also if heather get her womb tattoo and has to suck undead cock. Does she stop to take time to wash them first, or is she such a whore that she eagerly sucks them grim and all?
@omnixius I hope it isn't one of the main casts. Maybe it could be a friend they made along the way(tho it wouldn't feel as emotionally intense as it could have otherwise been).
Edit: So, I did some editing, and I'm not sure you saw them, so I'm letting you know in just in case.
Its her skeleknight, isn't it?
After that several hrs long marathon bdsm sex, I doubt she'll care. Lets not forget she won't always have access to hygiene products. Frank and co. could maybe convince or train her to ignore it. Maybe her tastebuds will develop a "disturbing" love for it, maybe she can't taste it anymore, there's a lot that can be done. Maybe she gets a curse, a potion, or anything that lets her choose how & what a consumable material tastes to her. Of course, she could just honestly like it as is for various reasons outside of those stated. She may also have developed a taste for it after sucking off Frank by thinking that she should love all of him, or something... Not so sure about the last one.
Just had an idea with very uses but maybe something you can play around with.
Some players have chosen a niche class for pure fun, some in malignant(which never works out). This class lets one use an ability called hypnosis. Hypnosis only works on willing subjects. Players subjected to hypnosis can get either their senses, perception of reality, and in some cases, biological responses, changed. They are offered standard choices, some not standard, and some custom(Basically give the AI an idea of what the hypnotist want to do and creates a passable(Heavily filtered and altered to fit guidelines) option.
Ex. Player may choose how somethings tastes to them.
Ex. Players may lose the ability to register certain players(They're basically invisible, can still touch them and all)
Ex. Players may trigger a biological response such as adrenaline through triggers(A signal of type, could be an object, a person, etc).
@CrypticalFlint
This is a good point. I might write some of her training and conditioning for fun. As frank uses his ghoul paralysis to immobilize her then uses her himself before strapping her into something and leaving her for a small army of undead.
@omnixius
U know, technically speaking, undead don't have stamina, do they? Couldn't one zombie theoratically keep on banging her for the rest of eternity and not be bored?
@CrypticalFlint
Yes, I already thought of that. So I will have Frank order them to stop once they have cum so a fresh one can take its place. After all, in Heather's case, she needs numbers not duration. Once they have cum, she needs them replaced by one who still has something to deposit.
@omnixius
Could still be something fun to do. Maybe as "punishment", or "Reward". Maybe a zombie orgy?
@CrypticalFlint
well he could leave a zombie or ghoul pounding between her legs while the hoard lined up at the front to feed her. Its really only the ones it the front that have to be replaced.
@omnixius
I wasn't exactly thinking in line of feeding, just pure sexually depraved fun. Tho she certainly won't be bored. Maybe she'll associate undead cock and cum with pleasure as a pavlovian response. Tho, maybe Frank will line up behind her.
@CrypticalFlint
oh, thats going to happen. Once Heather is his slave he's going to tie her up and leave her being used by several undead for hours. checking on her every once in awhile. The ones in her two lower holes won't change they will just go on, pounding her for hours, maybe dauys. , but the ones at her mouth will. They will keep coming in their hundreds until Heather is drunk on thier seed and craves the taste of rotting cock. She won't be able to see a zombie d*ck without feeling the need to suck it. it will reach the point where frank needs to keep her on a leash so he can pull her away from trying to suck every undead cock she sees.
@omnixius That's mighty concerning, I hope they've got pants.
I was expecting her to get wetter faster than a flood at the sight of them, not Suckslut extraordinaire. I like it, but I hope it isn't like pulling away a dog who can't stop sniffing poop.
@CrypticalFlint
Oh she will. frank will see to it that she can't see undead and not be driven mad with need. She aslo cant replenish her mana normally anymore. She needs undead to fill her womb up with cum to act as her mana reserve. A few weeks of bondage and training and Heather will be addicted to rotting cock. Frank might even put her in a coffin with two zombies commanded to f*ck her and bury her for a few days
@omnixius
Well, I just hope she'll still be useful as a necromancer. Isn't exactly great for a necromancer to focus more on sucking rotting cocks then being a great teamplayer. Maybe she'll get a skill to ignore her lustful desires and keep calm. Ah, is there a need to worry about hostile necromancer or undead?
@CrypticalFlint
Heather always did have trouble focusing. Maybe frank needs to get some chastity equipment to force her to focus and complete her tasks Get her addicted to being f*cked endlessly by undead until she never wants it to stop then lock her in chastity and give her a task to complete. The coffin thing can be a reward completing a goal, a couple of unbroken days of endless sex
@omnixius
Hey, she's also an oral addict now isn't she? Get her a gag. Hmm, maybe she can find a removable cursed ring that deadens her lust or disasociate herself from it, like she knows she wants to do it, but can ignore it. Like you know where your arm is and can actively feel it, u just don't think about it.
@CrypticalFlint
I think the key would be to write the story where she can do her tasks most of the time just fine, but just seeing undead makes her crave it. She will sneak off when time permits for quick feedings, but when she does break down to feed her lust she always goes big and keeps going until frank puts a stop to it. After battles where she has spent cum she will turn to frank to replenish her supply, if he isn't enough she will summon a few undead to help top off
@omnixius
Will the rest of the girls receive similar treatment from him?
@CrypticalFlint
I don't see why not. I am writing the new heather chapter now. I suspect this is a good place to start sowing the seeds for this. The ogre wanting to buy Breanne is an excellent reason to open the conversation.
@omnixius
Oh? Are you keeping the ogre and Breanne relationship? Or am I misunderstanding?
@CrypticalFlint
I am cutting it off. I am going to use it as a tool to have a conversation about these kinds of relationships and have heather admit she would have one with frank if she could. This will lead to an encoutner with Roric and his group as they travel to find the succubus to get the womb tattoo for Jaina. Thus Heather will learn about the power of these things, and that maybe they could barter with the succubus themsevles. She will get a womb tattoo in trade for Frank getting an extra class so he can pick a slave master one.
@omnixius
This probably won't matter because its near impossible to tell anyway, but is the succubus an NPC, or a player? If you think about it, granting a class slot is a bit more of an NPC's repotoire.
Also, how many do you think are peeking into this story's comment section to find what's gonna happen?
@CrypticalFlint I was thinking of making her a very high level player. something in the range of two hundred and she has learned from the necromancers how to manipulate the rules to a certain degree. However an NPC might work better. A sort of arch demon style character offering contracts in exchange for the burden of the tattoo.
@omnixius I rly gotta catch up now.
Btw, are the rest of the ladies also getting tattoos for an extra class slot or something similar?
@CrypticalFlint
I am thinking about it. The way I am going to write the story Roric is looking for the succubus known as Azzazain the hex witch. He wants to trade a tattoo on Jaina to gain a bonus class for himself. I am thinking of either calling it beast master, or pack master. Either way I want it to grant him the ability to summon large numbers of animals like wovles and cats to fight for him. Plus he can tame a monster level beast or two to keep as a pet. They will meet Heather, make them aware that such a thing is possible and start Heather on the road of considering bartering a tattoo on herself for a class for frank. Thus he can take the conqueror and then she can wear his collar.
@omnixius
If you are, have you decided on their tattoos yet?
@CrypticalFlint
Nope, not at all.
@omnixius Gonna add some new tattoos till then?
@CrypticalFlint
If you think of any intersting combos or new ideas feel free to suggest them. Like what would you give breanne?
@CrypticalFlint Well, we have met Roric and his girls, implanted the suggestion of how Heather can get Frank another class, and set the wheels in motion.
@omnixius That's got top tier difficulty Omni.
Breanne
To me, Breanne gives a feeling of calm, experience(knowledge) and devotion(and willingness to experiment). And I was thinking, maybe that one part should break her calm, another to effect this "experience", and the third to reflect, well, devotion(Or anything, really). Unfortunately, that ain't easy.
Combo?: Passion Pool...
1. On Timer: The idea is that she will get hornier, and more sensitive as time passes since the last man orgasmed inside her.
2. Amnesia: For every 3 hrs since she last had sex, she'll lose 25-50% worth of levels. Her strength will be restored once she has had s*x x times. X is equal to the hrs total since she she had her last partner.(A really mean thing would be to count the hrs before she got it)
3. Not Mine: Cannot cum unless she has received permission from the first individual to f*ck her after having received the tattoo.
4. In A Crowd: 10% increase to sensitivity For every individual within 10 meters whilst having sex.
5. On Request: Once every hr must perform a sexual deed or action if asked of them.
6. On The Brink: Experiences surges of pleasure enough to be pushed to the edge, but never over, every hr. For every hrs since she last had sex, add one more surge to be experienced within the hr.
7. You First: Can only cum once her partner has cummed.
Quinny
Initial thoughts? Stuffed, Necro, and cum vampire(Nr.4 below maybe). Alas, I'd have really liked to see Frank having romantic lovey dovey s*x with Quinny in private.
Combo?: Variant(Or Cum Vampire), Bondage Addict, Weak Willed
Ideas?
1. Superior: Must have s*x with an individual lower levelled than they once a day/or hr.
2. Inferior: Must have s*x with an individual higher levelled than they once a day/or hr.
3. Equal: Must have s*x with an individual 5 levels within range once every 3rd hr.
4. Whore of the dead: Once a day, at a random point of time, forces every undead within the area to copulate with the wearer of the tattoo.
5. Opportunity: Must perform at least one sexual act within 1 hr after the end of combat.
6. Sisters in joy: Can only cum once a female participant has cummed.
7. Soulmate: Can only orgasm by the first individual to have s*x with them once every 24 hrs.
8. Home Alone / Safe At Home: May only have s*x within familiar territory with familiar people. (Familiar Territory: An Area or Location they've spent at least 2 weeks at, or something. Familiar People: Individuals they've lived and spent time with as neighbors or party members for several days).
Taking from that source raw?
Vibrancy: Sexier?
Gaze: I'd love it if it could somehow be restricted to specific individuals.
Task: Why not?
Breedgasm: I'm kind of curious how a spectral baby would be born. (Maybe she could be weaker unless pregnant?)
Not so sure about tattoos that makes it so they can only orgasm and stuff like that from undead tho, since Heather wasn't technically undead.
I don't have anymore ideas at the moment, and I don't think they'd fit in with your current ones. Still this took me over 2 hrs, and I don't exactly like them...
@CrypticalFlint I had to run out and go shopping. But I made some of my own.
Breanne
Maddening need – For every hour you go without an orgasm you feel an ever increasing desire to have one. If 24 hours go buy without an orgasm you suffer terrible screaming pains instead. These last for one hour and the cycle resets.
Exibitionist- you will seek out people to watch as you have sex. The more people who witness the event the more powerful the orgasm.
Painful- You can’t orgasm unless you have first been bound and thoroughly whipped the s*x must occure while you are still bound.
Thus Breanne is driven to have s*x and goes to the city where horny men tie her to a post and lash her before the crowd then ravage her body to thunderous orgasms.
Quinny
Anal magnet- People who wish to have s*x with you will always choose your ass over your pu**y. They will only choose the other places if your ass is already in use.
Phantom Chastity- Magical chastity devices appear on your body. These will vanish at random and so long as you are penetrated within 60 seconds they will remain gone. For every man who cums inside you they will remain gone for one additional hour. Belts might not vanish for a year or more.
Stuffed - Can’t orgasm unless there is a cock in every hole.
Thus Quinny is locked in chastity but the second the belt vanishes she becomes a voracious whore, desperately trying to f*ck enough men to buy her some time. To buy her more time and so she can orgasm she tries to ensure all her holes are in use continuously for as long as she can.
@omnixius
Ooh. Nice. But does it count for Breanne's tattoo if she is watched by undead or friends in their bdsm dungeon? I mean, they could whip her too. Also, can Quinny stuff her holes with vibrating s*x toys and thus be in use? In fact, could Breanne turn incorporeal and stuff or f*ck Quinny with toys by turning them incorporeal too and phasing them inside her?
Personally, I'd prefer if they mostly devoted their s*x life to each other and their mindless undead minions. You know, keep their crazy sexy shennanigans mostly private with the occasional side swing. But personal preference aside, those are some great ideas with "poetic" words.
@CrypticalFlint
For Breanne I would say yes to friends, no to undead.
For quinny I would say no toys. It has be real.
@omnixius
I'm guessing that includes phantom fisting. Safe to bet Quinny's gonna be stuffed and carried around 24/7 by "usable" undead?
@CrypticalFlint
Yeah some of these are a little extreme. I am not sure people want characters with such stringent requirements. I will certainly try to find ones that are exciting to the story. Like Heather needing to swallow cum to eat, and have it injected into her womb to cast spells works. So does limiting that cum to undead because she has easy access to them. Her big thing will be the period necessary to train her to be able to get that cum easily. She will have to reach the point where she can suck an undead cock without so much as a second thought, and be willing to bend over and let them train her to refill her power pool. If Frank spends her slave points on making her orgasm too freely she might just end up addicted. Oh, goodness Sexual escalation will be terrible for her. If a zombie can keep going for days, or weeks that would count as one long s*x session with Heather's orgasms always getting more powerful. She would be out of her mind at some point,.
Breanne can be managed with a little BD but the timer on maddening need might need to be longer.
Phantom chastity might be a little too much for quinny. It creates spontaneous scenes of s*x that are encouraged to go on for a long long time.
@omnixius
If you're not sure about Chastity, you could replace it with Chaos. You could explore all the options that way and narrate in new ones. Will Heather still be unable to cum from anything but undead? Also, I must have been born under a mean star because I kind of want to see how far that escalation can go.
And concerning possible addiction, you could give her a skill from that devil race or her necromancer class that allows her to retain piece of mind at the cost of some MP regen to maintain it or something. It could maybe cause a disasociation, so she would be perfectly aware of what her brain really wanted to do, but her ego is saying no.
@CrypticalFlint
Yes she still requires undead to orgasm
Also I thought of a better desciption for Breeder
Breeder –You seek out wild versions of creatures and offer yourself up as a breeding cow. Creatures will sense your need and willingly breed you continuously. Once bred you always become pregnant and in two weeks produce an NPC version of the creature breeding you. You always feel pleasure while being bred but will never be able to orgasm. During birth you have an orgasm for every creature who bred you, making giving birth the most pleasurable experience in the world.
@omnixius I fear for those who chose swarm or pack animals. Oh, should Evalynn get this? I mean, filthy animals, right? Speaking off Evalynn, are you gonna release Jaina's next chapter today.
@CrypticalFlint
You know I could write a whole story around an area suddenly being attacked by large numbers of trolls or something. And when the heroes investigate and fight their way into a troll cave they find a woman cursed with breeder continuously making more.
@omnixius You could also turn this into an Arc for Jaina's Adventure too. They could meet this woman on their journey, and perhaps learn from this screaming puddle of the tattoos. Roric could enslave her because A) He could tame her children, and make those children make more, B) He wanted to try breeding her, C) She was exotic, ETC)...
@CrypticalFlint I could do that. It could be how Roric learns about the tattoos and why he is looking for them in Heather the necromancer.
@omnixius If only I could read novels from the future.
@CrypticalFlint
I still like the idea of a coffin big enough for three people. it has cuffs at the two ends to chain her hand and feet and she is gaged, laid on her side with two zombies who are told to f*ck her going at her from the front and back. Then the coffin is buried and she is only meant to be in it for a few hours. but something happens and they can't dig her up for like five days. By then sexual escalation would bee off the charts.
Of course you can alter the story and say Heather decided to be kinky and ties herself into the coffin, giving the two zombies the order the f*ck her. She assumes Frank will find her in an hour or so but the coffin is beside an open grave and all the f*cking causes it to fall in. Then the walls collapse and its buried maybe for weeks.
Though honestly I I like the idea of Frank addicting her to sucking zombie cock.
@omnixius
I do too(Well, mostly to undead cock in general, be it f*ck or suck). I just hope it won't be an all consuming need. It'd be great if she had options if it proved hard to manage.
You could have Frank bury her with those as a reward for succeeding in her suck and f*ck conditioning(or maybe he became worried or annoyed by her constantly almost choking herself to death). Of course she's nervous about it, she's literally being buried alive with live corpses, but she trusts Frank. What happened next, well, who knows? Maybe they'll find her bloated and incoherently begging for more.
In terms of getting her addicted to sucking, maybe wandered around town in search of an alchemist to buy something that could help, and maybe it worked too well?
@CrypticalFlint You know I love all these ideas but the reality is I am not sure I can put it on royalroad.
@omnixius I figured. Kind of why I suggested moving to scribblehub. I mean, if you can write Jaina here than you can probably write a sexually supercharged Heather the necromancer here too.
@CrypticalFlint Maybe, I have to say writing jaina has really given me new enthusiasm. And I feel like I really wanted Heather to go this route, but didn't because I was afraid people would reject it. Now I regret not doing it but feel like it's too late. also I am going afk for 2-3 hours
@omnixius I don't think its not too late. Write it if you want.
Maybe Heather never seriously reflected on her sexuality before because she was certain of it due to her own naivity. Perhaps she felt uncomfortable speaking or thinking deeply about it because she was insecure and afraid of it not fitting the mold she's grown up in. Maybe she couldn't really understand why. Maybe she was afraid she'd be isolated, treated differently in a way she didn't want. She could never be too sure, because she's aware emotions doesn't have clearly defined lines. Or something.
Should also add sexuality tag(Rr) or adult genre tag, and harem tag(scribble). Since it comes up pretty late in the story, u can warn that these things won't happen deeper into the story.
Also, I kind of expected bondage addict for Quinny(Stuffed too, but...private, romantic l.d. s*x to embarrass her wouldn't be available).
@omnixius Have you seen this novel?
New-life-as-a-lewd-hermaphrodite-succubus
It was basically s*x every chapter on scribble, not sure about rr since I didn't read it there.
Can Heather still eat normal food? If not, will she try to eat something like omelette with cum ketchup? Despair at the utter lack of taste in mundane food and try to bake pizza on cum?
@CrypticalFlint ummm, that story is on royal road!!!! How bad is it?
@omnixius Read the one on scribble hub. The one in royalroad has probably been extensively edited because you could expect a d*ck, pu**y, and even tail s*x on scribbles in the first few chaps. About 10 to 15 and you're nearing the part where the mc realize she's a dad/mom. Heck, an enemy turned traitor bc she was unhinged masochist. Maybe its a bit exaggerated but its the gist of it. You haven't even started the s*x in your story.
@CrypticalFlint I already read five chapters of it. NO s*x happens what so ever and the chapters are tiny. I can tell these have been heavily edited and are missing like 80% of their content.
Also I can't find it on scribblehub
@omnixius Yeah. Those 80% is probably where the s*x was. Also, I got the name wrong. Well, I stopped reading 320 chapters ago.
New Life As An Ecchi Girl With A "Big Surprise"
@CrypticalFlint Much better, that name worked, thank you
@omnixius Have fun. Maybe you'll get some ideas.
@CrypticalFlint I will work on all this when I get closer to needing it. Right now I need to establish Roric and Jaina and prepare for slave number three. Who I already have picked out.
@omnixius Will be fun to see what kind of personality she has.
@omnixius Man, in my opinion everything goes as long as it does not look like you're punishing your characters. They're supposed to be characters, not ragdolls to throw at the walls. My 2 cents that I never paid.
BTW, this is Shadros, I just can't change my name on this website.
@Insignificant finally someone else comments on this rabbit hole of a thread, just took a year and a half.
@CrypticalFlint I read this on Literotica first and that's how I discovered Omnixius. This story was way too good for Literotica. But there it ends with the first forest still under fire. And I contacted Omnixius on Disco, he told me where to read forward and I did. Now I'm re-reading here. Sorry it took me so long :)
After reading DKP by Omnixius I changed my name on all websites from Insignificant to Shadros. But this is one of the few websites that do not allow for a name change. You probably know who Shadros is: The only male dragon to meet Omnixius story and learn how to feel :) Some other dragons knew before meeting the story, some were females.