Hey everyone, Den1al/Denial here. I'm gonna just speak my mind on this fic for a bit.
I initially made this as something to cure my boredom. This means I didn't focus too much on planning and just wrote whatever the hell I wanted.
Still, for some unknown reason, you degenerates actually like the shit I wrote. This did put a bit of pressure on me as I now felt like I had to cater to an audience.
In the end, I tried to satisfy everyone, and well as you can see it didn't really go the best.
I never planned on making the harem as big as it turned out to be but well shit happened. Thanks to this there was very little screen time for any of the girls.
I have learned from this. Hence why I am writing a new one.
My new fic will have an mc who is given absolutely no cheats or golden fingers. All he will be given is something that will after some time transport him to worlds, not of his choosing. (Multiverse)
He will have to work for everything he will get.
The harem for this fic will not exceed 6-8 members. I am serious this time. All characters will be fleshed out as much as I can. I plan to truly put in some work when I write to make it enjoyable.
However, I am still planning the general layout of the story so it won't be begun until some time.
Until then, I'll be regularly updating my other fic, Rom-Com Fusion. It's exactly what it sounds like so if you are interested check it out.
Alright, I can't think of anything else so im out. Thanks for reading.
Keep up the good work🥴
I will just say one thing, the MC of this story would make a ok antagonist if you want to in your new story.
So Akio as antagonist,then Vegeta as protagonist?
For any story with a Harem, it is essential to make the flow of the characters conversations clean and flowy (meaning not abrupt, cringe, unnecessary, etc) each member adds something unique to the group, and that none of the characters drag each other down.
I could go on, but just be careful, and Goodluck to you Author-Sama!
Huzzah!
You should continue. Kill off on essential characters as motivation for MC to grow, it would also have the same effect for the ladies who survived as you could use it to flesh them out more. Even though the main wife is a super goddess it's fine. Anyway I will look forward to your next work. But I enjoyed this one.