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'Hi everyone, author Keanu here.
Sorry about the delays but...I hate tournament arcs, and I needed to take my time with the Horizon VS Deku chapters since you've all waited 300 chapters for it.
I hope it didn't disappoint, but if it did feel free to hop into discord or the comments here to let me know. Or you can just tell me what you liked about it.
Before the next volume, 'VOLUME 9:Horizon- Super Hero', goes public on Webnovel and Scribblehub I'll be only publishing it on Pa.treon for a couple of weeks since I won't be able to upload at the current monday-wednesday-friday schedule.
Uploads will be erratic for a while until I really get back into the flow of things, and I also want to rebuild my pa.treon to its 30+ chapters ahead glory, they've been supporting me this entire time and I think it's about time I be better for them.
Regular uploads will resume as soon as I've got that sorted out, hopefully 2-6 weeks.
The next volume will have, at least judging from the comments, a lot of things people have on their wishlist for this story and will take place after a short time skip, so I hope you're all excited for that.
Feel free to leave any questions or concerns you have in the comments or come chat in Discord.
Seeing comments and answering questions etc is actually a big motivation for writing, especially as I sell my soul and pull my hair out to come up with 300 chapters and give each a unique chapter title, now onto the next 150 chapters, that's just a rough estimate.
Thank you all for the support, and I'd appreciate a review if it's not too much trouble.
Now, onto the next adventure...'
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My rating about the last chapters it's 9.5/10 the last 0.5 it's just because i think Deku vs Horizon could be better, as example we don't really get anything about Deku and horizon REAL fight we just get a Crowd POV mixed with some "Author's notes" (By Author's notes i'm refeering of moment like Eraser head comments of the battle and his comments about horizon way of thinking, i feel that comments were more the author giving 3rd POV information than 2A- Teacher Eraser Head ). I think it could be better more 1st POV about Deku punching "there" or doing "that" in a attemp of doing "this" and horizon's response maybe even a little trash talk while they were trading fist.
I recall once again, this is my opinion it can be wrong but that's what i think
Totally understand, and you're not wrong, it's just a different view. Putting in Deku's POV would make things more intese for him, but I put it in the view of the world to showcase that these two are just that far above almost everyone else, even among Pro Heroes only a few people were able to keep track of what's going on...
You are writing one of the best fanfictions ever, my sincere thank you for this masterpiece.
My criticism is that you need to think about how characters address each other, and how not everybody refers to each other the same way.
Like how both the narrator and Endeavor referred to Nejire as "Nejire-chan" which is cringe.
Momo says quietly. "Shoto, Bakugo, and Deku will likely move first,
I don't think Yaoyorozu calls Todoroki "Shoto" or Midoriya as "Deku"
Also Horizon just refers to Gigantomachia and the Nomus the same way the villains that created them do, their name. Which from Horizon, I expected him to be like Bakugo where he just makes up his own names for things and calls things/people whatever he likes.
Nejire-Chan is her official Hero name which is why Endeavor and the narrator uses it, Shigaraki and the villains namedropped Gigantomachia hence the heroes using the proper names, at this point most of 2A is on a first name basis, even Yaoyorozu who is more rigid, hence most of them being more casual. And they've accepted that 'Deku' is who Midoriya really wants to be, so they use it.
The names change depending on perspective, so Horizon is only 'Horizon' when the visor is on as you've noticed, otherwise, he's just Law. And for this Sports Festival, the narrator didn't use 'Deku' since that's his Hero Name, and this is a public broadcast of Izuku Midoriya, even Horizon made sure not to call him Deku.
Horizon also doesn't care for giving people made-up names, he just uses the most efficient(Shortest) one they have, which he explained when he met Momo.
The name stuff is a bit odd to explain in the story but there is a reason why I have characters refer to each other in certain ways, like you'll never hear Horizon speak to 'Enji', even when Endeavor 'Enji' isn't in costume, since he doesn't care about Enji Todoroki, small stuff like that.
But yeah the names and familiarity between characters is well thought out, just maybe not well explained since that would slow down to story or add unnecessary scenes for the greater plot.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and thanks for the feedback...
When next chapter?
I’m loving it Keep it up champ
Drop?
Damn, I really thought he had already mastered his power. Deku got me excited for nothing.
But still goes to show how overpowered All might was in his heyday to casually use such power without repercussions.
Also it seems like Deku already has power far surpassing all current pro heroes, can Kacchan keep up. I don't even see it possible for Todoroki to reach that level of power, elemental types aren't just busted enough at their core to allow such stupid levels of power
Oh man, things on our wishlist? Author, you spoil us