I just wanted to let all you know that i'm currently working on a second draft of this story, one that clears up a lot of loop holes and issues that i've found while going back and re-editing chapters. Overall i'm not happy with the direction i went with this story, i feel like i fell into a dark place and brought my characters along with me. I wanted to tell something a little more wholesome, and more cohesive. My second draft will make a lot more sense, and give you a gripping, yet not oppressive, atmosphere with lovable characters throughout. I will probably keep this original draft as it is, in case you want to revisit it, but submit a new version of the story soon. So keep an eye out for more works from me. 

Don't worry you'll see a lot more of Lorelei and Theo soon, and this time it'll be a lot better.

thank you :)