"Then you're fired," Damian said, smiling at her.
"W-what?" Sophia asked puzzled.
"That's right, you will no longer be a maid or a housekeeper, you will be my adoptive mother and therefore you will be able to do all the things you already did and you can call me Damian, isn't that better?" Damian said as he smiled victoriously at her.
"Foster mother?" Sophia asked hesitantly.
''Yes, so as my servant this will be your last task, contact the lawyer and tell him to prepare some adoption papers'' Damian said smiling.
Sophia saw him smiling and couldn't help the tears falling again, although she always thought of him as her son never dared to say it out loud until today, after all, she was just a servant who took care of him, and she also didn't want to seem like she wanted to be his mother to have power over his possessions.
Although Damian's grandfather always gave her the greatest trust since she was raised from a young age as a servant and housekeeper for the family, she also did not believe that he would allow her to adopt Damian, so he could only be her son in her heart.
"Okay, I'll do it, Damian," Sophia said as happily hugged him.
"Why do you smell like Ana?" Sophia asked with a sweet smile.
''...''
Damian didn't see that coming, is this woman a dog?
"Could it be that they have that kind of relationship? Well, Ana does work fast, although when I saw that you seemed to have changed a little, I sent her with you and seeing that you changed, I thought it was natural that something would happen between you, after all, it is a very beautiful girl'' Sophia said before looking at him angrily and saying.
"But don't you have a girlfriend? Don't tell me you're playing with both" Sophia said.
Damian felt really in a bind and wasn't sure how to answer her questions so he could reveal the truth of their relationship.
''Carol agreed to share me with Ana, don't worry, they both agree'' Damian said quickly.
'' Why would a woman share the man she likes? There is something fishy with that woman, I should investigate her,'' Sophia said seriously.
Sigh.
Damian really was at his wit's end.
'' They share me because I am very good in bed and they can not stand me alone '' He said and quickly escaped to the bathroom a little amused.
Sophia blanked before a blush appeared on her face.
''You cheeky brat,'' she muttered under her breath.
Sophia saw dirty clothes in the basket so she picked them up and took them to the laundry, while she was carrying the clothes in her hand she saw that they were a bit damp so she touched the part and smelled her hand in bewilderment and couldn't help cursing under her breath, as a mature woman, of course, she knew what it was so she quickly left it in the laundry.
''Lucky brat'' she couldn't help but mutter at the thought of Ana, after all, it's not easy for a woman to get to that point and it seems that Damian really has skill.
Sophia couldn't help but stop for a moment and think that for her Ana and Damian are like her children, and that wouldn't do?… It's better not to think about it.
Sophia shook her head and she went to do something to clear her mind of those kinds of thoughts.
Damian went in to bathe without worrying about the bomb he threw outside, he really felt happy to have one more person he could trust and find love with, he had already noticed it before but the incongruity in his memories makes him yearn for relationships with people.
He also thought that since he was here he should visit the shrine in New York and meet the Ancient One and was really considering saving her, after all that Strange did it really makes me feel concerned with him as sorcerer supreme.
He thought of visiting the sanctuary tomorrow morning, he had to have dinner and take Ana to get used to her body, he wondered how many things she broke in the bathroom.
A newborn vampire doesn't have Familiars immediately, she has to wait a few years for them to wake up, he was really curious how many familiars she would have, but he doesn't think it's more than six.
After getting dressed for dinner, he felt really happy eating with two important people for him, on the one hand, his mother, and on the other hand, his partner who by the way her eyes were red but Sophia decided not to ask. After a happy dinner, Sophia withdrew first as she had to make arrangements for the adoption process with the lawyer.
So he ends up taking Ana to an isolated place.
"Then let's test your physical ability," Damian said as his gravity created a large mass of compacted earth.
The hardened earth weighed about 5 tons, so by changing gravity he threw it slowly at Ana.
Ana panicked and instinctively put her hands in front of her face, the weight of the earth plus his inertia made the force behind her much greater and she ended up being dragged several meters.
Ana realized that she was able to stop the ball of earth and her hands, apart from being a little dusty, she did not feel pain, she tried to lift it and was able to do it with relative ease, it felt really surreal to lift something of that size, seeing Damian looking at her she couldn't help but feel annoyed at throwing something so heavy directly at her so she used all her strength to throw it at him.
The ball shot out quickly but Damian easily stopped it with gravity before piling up more dirt and making it grow twice her size.
'10 tons should be the limit for her, not bad seeing as she's just turned into a vampire, over time she'll slowly get stronger' Damian thought to himself.
He slowly dropped the ball on top of Ana indicating for her to receive it.
Ana put her hands on the ball and Damian stopped holding her, immediately felt the pressure and her arms and legs began to burn, she soon began to tilt her body, clearly, 10 tons is her limit.
Vampires also have magic power with which they can further strengthen their body so having 10 tons of strength without magic enhancement is really good, as expected of an older vampire.
After Ana played jumping, throwing, and breaking things they went home.
After everyone went to sleep, Damian arrived at Ana's room without anyone noticing.
'' How do you feel being a vampire?'' Damian asked Ana.
"Is really great, the best thing is that I can be with you forever," She said and showed that obsessive look again.
"Don't worry as we will be together forever" Damian said as he hugged her against his chest.
"Yes," Ana replied softly with happiness in her voice.
Damian leaned down and licked her neck asking if he could drink, Ana responded by nudging his head into her neck and Damian tasted vampire blood for the first time.
He must say that she still tastes of Ana but she feels slightly different, and this difference is increasing, it is as if her blood has not finished changing yet, he decided to observe this phenomenon later and concentrate on drinking since Ana was a vampire he could be quieter and drink more blood.
Ana as always, had the best time of her life while Damian drank from her, although the pleasure was great, she was really excited by the feeling that Damian needed her and wanted to drink her blood, she quickly had a great orgasm as she felt Damian's hands kneading her butt and lightly brushing her crotch.
''Is really delicious as always'' Damian said to Ana, although Ana had a really satisfying face she looked very lucid, clearly being a vampire increased her resistance to the pleasure induced by the bite.
''Feels great as always'' She said with a calm face but her completely red cheeks and satisfied eyes gave her away.
"Remember to tell me when you want to drink blood," Damian said seriously.
''Yes, that feels good too'' Ana said with a serious nod.
''Good girl'' Damian said laughing before kissing her ''Let's go to sleep''
''Sure'' Ana said as she hugged him wanting to tell him that they would sleep together.
Damian took her in his arms before covering himself with the sheet. Ana was really sticky but since her skin was fresh it felt nice to hug.
Soon the next day came and Damian woke up, he still had Ana on top of him and looked like an octopus, as if she was afraid that he would leave her in the middle of the night.
"Ana wakes up," Damian said softly in her ear.
He soon saw her pretty red eyes widen at her and gave him a big smile.
''I'm glad it wasn't a dream,'' Ana said as she rubbed against him.
''Get up, there are things to do, do you need to drink blood?'' Damian asked.
At the mention of drinking blood Ana's eyes lit up and she exposed her neck as she moved closer to Damian's neck.
Damian could only smile wryly at her enthusiasm, but soon he sank his fangs into Ana even though she was the one who should drink, soon he also felt Ana sinking her fangs into him, this time it felt more comfortable and not so much like a prick.
After several drinks Damian gently patted her head indicating that it was enough, he believed that Ana might want them to drink from each other for eternity.
Being separated from her favorite drink Ana couldn't help but show a slightly annoyed face even with her usual indifferent face.
"Let's have breakfast," Damian said.
''Why do we keep eating when we really don't need it?'' Asked Ana a little bewildered.
''Although we are vampires, we must not forget that we were human besides being nice to be able to taste delicious food there are reasons like accompanying Sophia or doing it so they don't start investigating why we don't eat'' Damian said patiently.
''You're right'' Ana said thinking about it.
After going downstairs and having breakfast with Ana, the lawyer arrived with the papers and with a quick signature the process was done, the rest had to be handled by the lawyer.
''Well then, take care of me from now on mom'' Damian said a bit jokingly and a bit seriously, after all, it didn't feel natural to tell her mom so quickly.
The next thing he knew, Sophia was holding him tightly as he felt wetness on his shirt.
"Come on, it's supposed to be a happy day, don't cry," He coaxed gently as hugged her.
"I know, I'm just so happy, thank you," Sophia said to Damian.
''I'm the one who should say thank you, after all, now you're my mother, surely you'll have to take care of many daughters-in-law and grandchildren'' Damian said, bothering her.
"It will be great if the kids run around this old house again," Sophia said happily at the thought, purposely ignoring the mention of many daughters-in-law.
''Now I don't want to see you in that maid dress again, even though it looks good on you'' Damian said with a wink.
''Don't bother your mother, now I can send you to your room'' Sophia said laughing while bothering him.
''Go shopping for clothes with Ana, and go to the spa or do whatever you want to do'' Damian said, smiling at her.
''Are you going somewhere?'' Ana asked.
"yes, I have to meet someone," Damian said.
''Is a woman?'' Sophia asked curiously.
''Is a woman, see you later be careful and enjoy '' Damian said without going into details.
''Good luck to you'' X2
''Then where are we going?'' Asked Sophia excitedly, she hasn't had a good day off for a long time, and unlike her emotion, Ana was with her typical indifferent face, although she felt happy going out with the closest thing to her mother that she had if she was sincere would rather spend the whole afternoon drinking Damian's blood.
''Come on cheer up and let's get some nice clothes for you to show Damian, even those types of clothes that are worn at night'' Sophia said, tempting Ana, as she expected Ana's eyes to light up.
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'' Why would a woman share the man she likes? There is something fishy with that woman, I should investigate her,'' Sophia said seriously.
And Damian suddenly realized that the monster in the room wasn't him. It wasn't Ana. It was his new mom that he just created.
A real "momster"
@TehFoxFire And that's without powers, if mc ever converts her how much more terrifying momster will she be.
her son never dared
She never dared
as happily
As she happily
that they have
Unless she's talking to someone else in the room, it's "that you have"
I saw that you seemed to have changed a little, I sent her with you and seeing that you changed
"I saw that you changed and seeing that you changed" is doubled unless she was drunk and having double vision
after all, it is a very beautiful girl
Calling a girl an IT is just derogatory, idek how this happens in translation
Sophia couldn't help but stop for a moment and think that for her Ana and Damian are like her children, and that wouldn't do?… It's better not to think about it
This contradicts her earlier thought that she sent Ana with him for "something to happen because she's a pretty girl" so either this thought shouldn't exist or the earlier one shouldn't.
bomb he threw outside
The line is "bomb he dropped" as in dropping the bomb on your parents that you lost your virginity, you don't throw the bomb on your parents.
who by the way her eyes were red
This is just all kinds of backwards, "whose eyes were red by the way" was what I think you were going for
physical ability
Physical capabilities, unless he's talking about one physical power like flaming punches or something he means physical capabilities.
she did not feel pain
"She did not injure" or "did not sustain injuries" is what you mean
annoyed at throwing something
I presume she's annoyed at him throwing not annoyed at the idea of throwing something, "annoyed at him throwing"
holding her
Holding it, I'm pretty sure he was holding the ball not her
immediately felt
She felt
older vampire
This term just seems odd, perhaps you still consider her old despite being a newborn but I believe you meant that she's the offspring of a progenitor and therefore a higher or more pure vampire
being a vampire
Redundant, little excess words like this make the dialogue clunky, we know he's not asking how she feels about ice cream for dinner so specifying the vampire part is just unnatural
'Is
You meant "its" but I'd just remove the word and have it say "delicious as always" instead
satisfying
Satisfied
of him and looked
I think it's "and she looked" since this makes it sound like he looked like an octopus
Ana wakes up
Ana wake up
her pretty red eyes widen at her
Widen at him and she gave him a big smile
indifferent face
Indifferent facade or mask
human besides being nice to be able to taste
Human, besides it being nice
natural to tell her
To call her
who should say thank you
Who should thank you
Damian said, bothering her
It doesn't seem to bother her so I think you meant teasing her
while bothering him
Okay yes you definitely mean teasing
[quote]Is a woman[/quote]
Is it
[quote]Is a woman[/quote]
Yes, it's a woman
[quote]Good luck to you[/quote]
This is meant to be goodbye or have fun but if you insist on using "goodluck" remove the to you, in English we don't say "hello to you" or "nice to meet you to you" because the to you is implied when we talk to you
[quote]Then where are we [/quote]
So, where are we going
[quote]hasn't had a good day off[/quote]
Hasn't had a day off, this makes it sound like she has had lots of days off but no good ones
[quote]Ana was with her typical[/quote]
"Ana was wearing her typical" "Ana had her typical" "Ana, with her typical" all work
[quote]closest thing to her mother that she had[/quote]
Closest thing she had to a mother, unless Sophia was really close with Ana's mother then the original is correct
[quote]if she was sincere would rather[/quote]
If she was being honest
[quote]even those types of clothes that are worn at night[/quote]
This entire sentence is just wrong, maybe she would say "maybe we can even look at nightwear"
[quote] as she expected Ana's eyes to light up.[/quote]
As she expected, Ana's eyes light up.
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Alright that's all I found this chapter, I hope that even if the author doesn't implement these changes they atleast takeaway the fact that this is the amount of mental editing an English speaker has to do to enjoy a novel like this. Clunky dialogue or entirely incorrect phrases and pronouns mean you've gotta spend more time doing mental gymnastics to figure out the intended message than you spend enjoying the story.
Alot and I mean ALOT of the most popular novels i've read are mediocre at best story and character wise but only so popular because they have atleast mostly fluent english translation, people find it much easier to tolerate insufferable characters or disliked plot decisions than translation issues.
Thanks for the chapter
Sophia couldn't help but stop for a moment and think that for her Ana and Damian are like her sons, and that wouldn't do?… It's better not to think about it.
Sons -> children
''Well then, take care of me from now on mom'' Damian said a bit jokingly and a bit seriously, after all, it didn't feel natural to tell him mom so quickly
Him -> her
Thanks
I give up. I can't read this any longer. I will return if/when it gets properly looked over and corrected.
thanks for the chapter
Is he going to make Kamar-Taj a den of vampires fighting to keep humanity safe?
That would be so f*cking cool; ngl