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Hello everyone ShirooYuki here~, first of all I want to say a big thank you for following this novel from the beginning until now and without me realizing it, more than 1M people have seen this novel!!. I am really grateful for that.
And next, I'm in quite a confusing situation because of the comments you sent and I really appreciate this because I always read all the criticism and suggestions you give via comments and from there I learn a lot about how to write novels better.
However, there were several comments that made me a little confused because they were related to suggestions for future stories. I read that some people want to delete the F*ta part that the previous MC did on the grounds that the current MC is a woman and I see that is quite reasonable and I agree with it but on the other hand, there are those who want to make an incident that the first pregnancy will be experienced by the MC herself to complete the wish from Kuroka herself. And I agree with that but what keeps me at a standstill is how to make the MC pregnant without making things F*ta related?
Actually I already have some thoughts but I still want to hear the thoughts and desires that you guys have before I cause more disappointment from all of you XD
Please give your opinion about this~~
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Try combining two magic auras
Magic can be a solution for the pregnancy & futa part, like a magicly induce pregnancy with the magical power of both parents as the genetic makeup could work.
the complain I have is that the smut didn't fit in that well with the new chapters, it has few relation with the plot you trying to build right now and came out like it was a fan service. It would be better to seperate them into their own chapter with a Mark (seg) and became dedicated fan service chapter that can be skip without losing the plot so the story' can flow better.
The futa thing is quite the Niche tag and kink so when the main focus of the plot is not the smut it became irrelavant and take the backburn for awhile, then when it became relevant it came as a surprise to some reader and a turn off for few, a constant reminder of the futa part like "I'm getting a girl boner" is necessary for reminding reader that the character is a futa so they aren't feeling betrayed when a Mark chapter happens.
Though this story' works well with it's GL part, too well in fact that someone has to complain about the futa part.
wow I didn't expect that thing you mentioned at the end. thank you very much for the suggestion and in the future I will probably follow your suggestion to put a (+18) mark at the end of the chapter title to warn readers
@ShirooYuki i agree with @bINd47 (i also hate f*ta and drop novels who have it 99% of the time)
anyway is this dropped or getting a rewrite or just on hiatus?
Kuroka seemed to have a desire to have children, and not give birth to them, so you can even just adopt someone.
that's not how the thing works lol
The inclusion of futanari in a fanfic may not align with the intended tone, themes, or audience preferences, potentially disrupting the overall narrative cohesion. It's crucial to consider the appropriateness and reception within the specific context of the fanfic you're creating.
I don't really mind the futa or no futa but I kinda read this story cuz I saw that tag.
There are stories where the more smuty parts are set in spoiler boxes as a "your choice" kinda thing, but in the novels I enjoyed the most have designated 18+ chapters for the first times with the characters or if it's special in some way... or as a bit of fan service... but usually they just mention or hint about what happened to not mess with the flow of the plot, for example, mentioning that they look refreshed from the nightly activities and stuff like that.
I'm just giving things I've seen other writers do but I honestly don't have any complaints for your writing style or story. Frankly I wouldn't mind if the whole futa and pregnancy thing happen at the same time. Again, not a demand, just enjoying your storytelling.
Just explain it away with some magic
1 million view? Thats liked at leas 100,000,001 eyeballs
Yeah, you can support me on webnovel too. Thank you~
I don't have anything against futa in series, but this one doesn't fit well with this one... It would be interesting if she gave birth herself :D It's rare that in the GB series the main character gives birth to offspring. But do it after some time, not now, develop the story properly and then do it :) I really like this story, please keep writing :)
hmmm... I was thinking about making her pregnant in the next few chapters XD because I had a story for mc to move to the next world but after you said this (you can see on my webnovel in the MC picture + harem member to see the spoiler for next world) . but i think i need to think about it more. Thank You!