I swear to the gods never to piss Holly off again, my body feels live I've been smacked 10 times by a dragon, understandable though since my favorite neighborhood dwarves have fucked me harder than truck-kun could ever bang me.
I heard a creak at the door to see Josline peeking in with worry in her eyes, I swear I just saw an arrow go straight through my heart~ Sure enough angels can heal your soul, Ignoring the pain in my body I sat up. "Lin~ why are you hiding from big sis? Did big sis scare you?" I said with a fake pout, which surprisingly works well with children, "No!! I was just worried about big sis and didn't want to disturb you... Big sis didn't scare me, please don't be sad, okay? Big sis isn't scary at all." Josline ran in and held my hand.
I think cupid's arrow just hit my heart again, I want to pinch her cheeks so much, but it's a shame she doesn't like having them touched.
"Big sis?" Josline's little voice snapped me out of my thoughts, "You the strange smile on your face again..." Josline slightly backs up and covers her cheeks. "Big sis won't pinch my cheeks again will she?" I think I might have slightly traumatized her from my first attempt when she was only two years old, I honestly don't even know how she remembered that.
*Knock Knock*
Josline and I turned towards the door to see Holly standing there with a slightly embarrassed look and David standing beside her with a smug smile.
"*Ehem* Lin, sweety, why don't you go outside and play with Fencer for a while." I slightly flinched hearing the name of their pet Wolfdeer named Fencer, and exactly as the name suggests it is a deer with a long fluffy tail, the legs of a wolf and a long snout with two rows of sharp teeth. Wolfdeers are largely domesticated as guard dogs since they're easier to take care of and such.
Anyway the first time I'd met Fencer was around 4 years ago when they had only reached my waist in height, I had been out hunting wen suddenly a baby Wolfdeer came out of practically nowhere and started chasing me. Now don't misunderstand me or anything since even newborn baby Wolfdeers can overpower a single peak D-rank adventure themselves, so with only me being a peak F-rank adventurer I wasn't taking any chances. That said I ran like hell till I bumped into David who was looking for his "sweet little harmless" Wolfdeer. After that I kinda had a fear of Wolfdeer, Understandably so.
My flinch didn't escape the vision of David whom chuckled at my internal affairs, to which I threw a glare at him, I still wasn't going to forgive him for that time either, they were in it together I tell you.
After Josline went outside Holly sat next to me and looked down while David did the talking. "So-"
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Welp f*ck had a long ass comment but got f*cking distracted by instagram comments f*ck…. So no commas and periods sry but not sry lmao u did ask for ideas and i want to see this story continue so either you copy and paste this comment or edit it idk but imma try to throw this into one comment spoiler thing on here.
how do you want sona to be she isnt shy anymore but is she confident and strong i know she is stronger then her bully but is she really strong that she can fight monsters is there monsters in this world will she be weak then become strong either through a system where she can keep an eye on her status or a blessing will she get equipment maybe enchanted or enhanced will she get living armor at all like a special slime or special parasite that lives off her body liquids and other things she slays maybe the living armor eats her sh*t or goes into and plugs her holes and goes transparent so the holes can still be used but still eats her sh*t will there be beastiality or just demihumans and beastmen will there be a race war maybe demons or monsters trying to f*ck her and she has to either fight her way out or f*ck her way out will there be magic since you mentioned runes already maybe gyphs or enchantments i forgot what they are called but magic circles for traps or other rituals will there be curses and blessing from gods maybe outergods and she has to fight against the outer gods control by helping a lustful god a curse vs blessing will she fight bc i want to read her fighting at somepoint bc she is the hero’s granddaughter maybe she goes to war to avenge her grandfather and she does it incognito with a mask and the king or queen finds out about it she is fine being a slut but a hero is a no go for her and she accepts being blackmailed or she finishes fighting the gods and is weakened and saved by the queen and decides to serve under her as a hidden blade for the queen maybe she gets hired as a maid bc of her reputation but also her linage and gets played around before being trained to protect the queen while being a plaything lol just imagine the queen put a slime or parasite on her to wear while serving her and she is constantly being played with by the queen bc the living clothes goes into all her holes or the queen has a queen slime or queen parasite to control sona’s slime or parasite lmao just so you know both living armor or clothes can be used for combat and be upgraded by feeding specific monsters demons demihumans and humans giving different characteristics could be used as a weapon but small ones since there will be less to cover her lmao she could use a great sword but she has to fight naked lmao twin or single sword makes it into a short skirt and tshirt of course maid style bake bikini maid style lmao will she have magic as well could go for the physical type and just buff her or magic style like a spellsword idk dont think a range mage would work kinda boring but could be interesting lmao now are there guns at all in this world or just flintlock with a chance of missing most of the time or is there cultivation and they train to get stronger against some bullets but havent gone past some of the other bullets maybe the queen is evil and implants an lustful slime in her ear causing her to be more lustful but stronger for a price maybe a controlling parasite idk is the queen single or is there a king is there a prince or princess that can act as the rival either for attention for the queen or rival in combat having sona fight the prince or princess in a mock battle while wearing and being played by living armor is kinda funny will she be sent on missions or errands throughout the lands or escort the queen through the lands is the queen an evil queen or really good queen but lustful is the king alive or dead bc of war is her grandfather alive or dead bc of war is sona good or bad at doing maid things like cleaning and cooking does sona spar with the soldiers in the castle how is the world in technology wise is it futuristic or in the past do they have trains and boats that cross continents or just horse and carriage maybe not a horse since you got a wolfdeer could be centaurs lol now im imagining sona being strapped to the bottom of the queens horse and being rode around town obviously there is horse armor that drapes over and cover the bottom of the horse is the queen gonna have sona act like furniture while the queen plays with her will there be inflation play either with food that the queen will eat directly or she is just stuffed not to make a bulge but enough to make it hard to act normal what kind of attitude and play does the queen like will the be a spell to make sona or the queen into a futa and one of them has to carry a child if there is no king or heir to the throne and the queen is the only royalty and her harem is the maids until she actually picks one to be a consort what kind of guilds are there adventurer guild a merchant guild seamstress guild or blacksmith guild idk how big is this town took awhile for her to finish everyone is it a town city is the queen in the same city does sona get captured by rival kingdom and gets turned into a slave then maid after being used or same country lmao comments really long so im not going back and forth between chapters and synopsis so im just throwing things to see what sticks does she have other siblings other than the brother thats getting a sword from her is the country under threat and her family loses a member so she goes out for revenge and gets stronger and the queen hears about it lmao idk if im repeating lmao maybe the world is advance enough to travel to different worlds or just gates that open to dungeons and there is a world gate that opens every couple years and she gets a training arc in that other world and comes back or she goes to find a missing sibling or family member stuck in an unknown place or figures to be able to ask the queen for a favor she decides to work for the queen or there is a deal the queen wants fulfilled before helping sona maybe a contract is signed and the queen wants to just train sona to want to serve the queen is the queen sadistic will sona get captured by goblins and gets used and gets rescued by the royal family after awhile bc of chance and she was only known to be missing until they find her doesnt have to be goblins could be bandits slavers with a slave collar that controls her or maybe orcs maybe giants that want to play with her or is sona experimenting with random partners and she bite off more then she can chew will she get accosted by the people she f*cked in town dragged to a corner for a quick f*ck will there be bondage is she a dom you know for the first f*ck or sub for her beginning personality did her personality change at all or did she just gain more confidence honestly i want to see her fight as a maid with either equipment from the queen like a buttplug or vibrator or living armor that plays with her during the fightwill she get f*cked by a wolfdeer lmao her greatest fear is there photography and video capabilities in this world will she work in the redlight district for awhile hopefully an adventure with a few f*cks and either acquiring living armor maybe curses or blessings you kinda set it up for revenge with the hero grandfather just gotta add the hero grandpa dying in battle was she favored in the family or was the brother since he will probably take over the family unless its flipped and she takes over the family or maybe a sister takes over … well i did put slime as living armor but its special slime or maybe special parasites thats been modified by an ancient or the royal family lmao incase u want go down the living clothes and armor route and the queen has the requirements to take it off sona or put it on sona obviously sona cant take off the living clothes or armor maybe the slime acts as a pet that survives off her body liquids and excrements or she gets pets like other monsters well now that im thinking about living armor and clothes wouldnt mimics work too they would just copy the clothes and armor and could be used like a slime but more detailed and more structures available like a pillory lmao slime would just stick to one color and become transparent and have to be hidden under armor or clothes or they will be slime colored same for the parasite but a mimic could copy the texture and color maybe a slime can change color actually by reflecting light differently but a parasite definitely cant change color and has to be hidden ya lets go with that parasite just cant be different colors but can change texture and be used in the ear to influence the mind while slime can be change color and texture but cant be used to influence the mind lmao she talks to the parasite in her head and gets played or filled by a slime the parasite might be able to send different signals to parts of her body like make her stronger physically last longer stamina or make her cum or with hold the cumming chemical signals to send it all at once and mimics can do all the slime things but better stronger but add structures as well and the ability to talk without going into her head a parasite could be used to enhance her body and a slime could be living clothes but still a jelly substance and weak and a mimic could be an improved slime either by upgrading the slime or birthing enough slime to make the slime stronger or be concentrated to evolve into a mimic could be multiple slimes with different effects or a mimic with all the effects lmao i really want a story with living clothes kinda works if the queen and control the living clothes to an extent or sona becoming bonded to the living clothes the parasite might work but now that i think about it could be used for either a god or an evil god to communicate with sona and the parasite could be used to connect her nerves to a parasite d*ck or heal her quickly and make her almost impossible to kill maybe make her stronger or just make her more horny while a slime and mimic could be used for both armor and weapon or maybe companions to fight with while also play with since she is human i think lmao is she human???????? Dont have a description for her family just her grandfather is a war hero is the queen human????? Havent met her in the story yet what does sona look like i dont remember her being described at all unless you did which i either forgot or didnt see idk i only know she is tall like 6’2 i think idk is she bulky or just a tall beauty or is every but that one bully tall how many different races are there how many continents are there will the be dragons that will mark her as a bride and give her a lustful tattoo or demons that give her that tattoo maybe an evil god that gives her that tattoo idk an ancient civilization could create a monster that still lives augments her body with a tattoo or they just created the living clothes maybe the gods created the living clothes lol when every i mention living clothes i mean parasite slimes and mimics just dont want to repeat all 3 names lmao maybe she can be a necromancy or get f*cked by the dead kinda gross but there is that kinda hot kinda gross kinda weird i wont judge ill read it anyways but ill be something she could be a warlock with a patron god that modified her body to their needs outer gods might or might not have a gender do they even need to procreate lmao will there be tentacles lol cathulo could be interesting will there be ghost that take over her body or will she just piss herself scared lmao are there mikos japanese lore will this world or country be based on eastern or western culture bc i dont remember any building description will there be dungeons under ground or through gates will there be war or battles of varying sizes is ther any flying either through vehicles mounts or magic will there be underground ruins or castle maybe a dawarvern kingdom are there forest cities where the buildings are in the trees on the trees made of trees either on the ground near a giant world tree or in giant trees high off the ground elf kingdom will there be dragons and subversion of dragon people near actual dragons i guess a dragons home would be a mountain or just deep underground near magma and the entrance is either a cave and the dragon can exit through the cave or through a volcano are there sea creatures will sona get f*cked by sea creatures lmao eels or fish idk it is a smut sona could go missing and have a whole arc trying to get back home and she either has to fight her way out or bide her time maybe get rescued by accident by the royal family or she just has to give birth to a dragon lmao and gets marked by the dragon does she need anything from the royal family does she need access to the forbidden library in the castle or just their regular library bc they are the only ones with all the books available to cure her curse does she get involved with the royal family through a contract or does she want something from the royal family is she blackmailed into being a maid does she want to be a maid does she want to hide and protect the queen by being a maid is it an honor for her to serve the royal family is her family part of the royal family or just subjects that serve the royal family is she allowed to be a soldier but chooses to be a maid to protect the queen or is it only the guys allowed to be soldiers honestly if you want i can compile a list of things to read where i got these ideas but its gonna be a while for you to read through all of it umless you already did idk just comment on here i might or might not even see your reply
God damn man, why I knew you said it was long but i didn't expect that much!
I TOTALLY DIDN'T FORGET THAT I WROTE A BOOK!!
Queen is not gonna be evil, nor is the king since [not telling]. But i will say that grandpa didn't die to the demon queen that's something for later tho. And as for skills and appearance.... Uh I was just lazy and forgot, oops :) as for gods, well now, im just making sh*t on the go, thank you for your long, hard support (im too lazy to type more)
@FuyuThePillowFox lol told ya been going back and forth on scribble and royal road and kindle for that last year and a half so i just threw all those ideas into one comment and probably missed alot of them lmao hope to read more of your story before my firefox tab throws this into inactive lmao and i gotta go looking for it
lmao you definitely forgot
that's actually a really big spoiler lmao especially with the royals and gramps
hope to see future updates for this series lmao totally forgot how much i put into that comment i dont even want to read it
Are you picking it up again
Never dropped it just got distracted by other things, though I might be updating more or less when summer swings around, also need more ideas to go off on