"So why are you really here?" Jon asked Rias with a displeased look on his face as he sits next to her. He had to admit to himself that he was still very much attracted to Rias, he had his first special kiss with her and also apparently lost his virginity with her since he was a virgin and so was she when they had 'sex', however, was it all even true?
'Did we even have sex? I remember everything going black when she was on top of me. Did she put something in my drink before we went to my room to have sex? Or did she use her system powers on me? What even is Rias System? Damn, there is so much I need to know about this world of systems. Actually how the fuck was everyone born with a system but me?' Jon thinks about his past as he continues to hold Rias's smooth rosy smelling hands and cringed. For a very long time, he was outshined by so many people in this world called 'Earth', even the average joe had a system. Many people were born with weak 1 tier systems to high tier systems ranging from 5-9 tier, the rich and successful of course had higher tier systems. No one in history was ever recorded to have a tier 10 system in this world. Jon may have gained a tier 1 system, but the Netori System was very powerful for its low tier. What if... The tier was higher than what it really impiled>?
"Um hello? Earth to Jon? Are you there?" Rias cutely said while waving her hands over Jon's face. She had a cute concerned experience on her young pale maiden face. Up close her sapphire eyes were as blue and gorgeous as the ocean. She was an otherworldly beauty in every way possible. She at the moment was wearing a classy crimson sweater dress and a tight black Knee Pencil Skirt that was pressing tightly against her thick shiny white thighs. She really had an ample goddess body frame.
"Yeah. Answer my question," Jon replied as he drinks some water and gives Rias a cold glare. The golden eyes of a devil.
Asura and Emerald both look at each other, they can't help to not be jealous of Jon's girlfriend. They were also blown away by his new overly handsome face and perfect muscular body, he looked like a godly supermodel wearing average clothes which were a black v-neck shirt and black jeans. His Apex Fighter body frame made him look buffer than Hercules.
"Well, I am here to invite you to come to join my Peerage. That's if you pass the ceremony," Rias said with a bright vexing smile.
"Why would you want someone who has no system into our Peerage?" Aneko says with eyes furrowed and thick pale slender legs crossed, she was Rias advisor, at the moment she was wearing an expensive white Bussiness snow fur coat. It was slightly breezy and snowy outside, today was Thursday at noon.
"Because he is my boyfriend.Duh. And I could use some extra brains in my committee. Jon actually has outstanding grades. As the Class President, it is tough to keep the hierarchy all in balance in Prestige Academy." Rias flips back her long flawless scarlet hair.
'In hell, I will join your corrupt hierarchy. No, I never will. I destroy the hierarchy in Prestige Academy. In this world.' Jon gritted his teeth as he hears Rias foolish words. The 'Ceremony' is when every student in Prestige Academy shows the power of their systems and abilities, it was to show every student in school each individual's feats and accomplishments. Some 'higher-ups' from high tier colleges and companies would be at the ceremony watching. After the ceremony there also a huge sparing event next week. A tourney.
"Hah! Jon passing the ceremony that is a joke! He doesn't even have any special powers!" Emerald said with a loud snobbish chuckle. She was so stuck up.
"..." Jon doesn't even respond to his older sister, cause he doesn't care about her at this moment, he wanted to shove his huge cock deep down in her mouth to make her shut the fuck up. Jon tilts his head over towards Rias.
"Let's just see what happens at the Ceremony. I am getting tired and need some rest. See you tomorrow," Jon stands up and doesn't even touch his ramen. He was too pissed off right now. He really wanted to slap Rias and Emerald at the same time and torture them. But he had to hold it in. He had to plan everything if he was going to take everything from everyone. He would have to do it right.
"Tch I told you this was a waste of time," Aneko huffed with a big sigh as she crossed arms and leans back on her chair, her big supple boobs jiggle a little.
"But big brother you barely have eaten anything? Are you okay?" Asura follows him upstairs.
"WAIT! Y-you are not going to give me a goodbye kiss before you sleep?" Rias mutters as her pale cheeks turn a beet-red color, she looked all flustered as she holds her heart. Her hands softly touch her massive bosoms.
"No," Jon quickly says without any hesitation. Rias goes to hug Jon before he goes upstairs.
"Don't fucking touch me!" Jon slaps Rias right in the face and she falls on the floor. He then quickly goes upstairs and slams the door to his room.
"BROTHER!?"Both yell out Asura and Emerald in shock of what just happened.
"How dare you hit the Class President like that! Let's get out of here! You don't deserve this!" Aneko's alluring silver eyes flickered with rage as she growled and stood up for Rias.
Rias sighs and stands up and rubs her cheeks, "Thank you for the meal. I will be leaving." She said with a disappointed face as does a polite bow to Jon's mom. She really wanted a kiss from Jon.
'What the fuck! Did she really just say that!? After what she did today!? She is insane! She is playing games with me!' Jon clenched his fist so hard to veins were popping out from his knuckles. He quickly activates his Netori System and gets straight to planning his revenge.
Asura knocks out Jon's door, "Can we talk?" She softly says with her big chest pressed up against the door. She sadly holds the necklace Jon had given her. Something was bothering her. Her feelings for Jon had 'changed'. She didn't want to hide the truth from him any longer, but she knew she must. For her own safety.
Jon sees all of the new skills in the Netori Shop and then spots out the Truth Seeker skill. "I am going to the bottom of this. I am going to find out the truth today," He clicks on the Truth Seeker to buy it and then opens the door for Asura to come in. It was time.
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A/N: This chapter needs to be edited. Let me know of any grammar mistakes. Review and rate if you can.
Uff why is the plot so messy
It's wierd but if there's skills involved it could all still make sense.
Let's assume he is not the only one with a brainwashing skill and a conpulsion skill.
What if she was forced to say those things in front of everyone and made to forget?
Her behaviour would make sense because she wouldn't remember she made everyone beat him up.
What is wierd is the s*x part... what skill was involved there or was it of her own free will?
He clicks on the Truth Seeker to buy it and then opens the door for Asura to come in. It was time.
Did you forget the 24 h memory wipe?
the f*ck where did DxD come from.
sh*t isn't making sense, and not in a good mysterious kind of way.
Why would you mix high school dxd into the story?
he wanted to shove his huge cock deep down in her mouth to make her shut the f*ck up.
thats a mood right there.
Asura knocks out Jon's door
Knocks on*
I'll stop the comments here (well try lol), as pointing everything out take ages. Im going keep reading and hope later chaps get better
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It really does need a thorough Edit to fix it etc-
There is grammar problems, but The BIG thing isnt the grammar -
Its the the completely messed up continuity of ppl, thoughts, events, clothing etc, with alot of inconsistencies that arise from it & make it confusing.
This is where it needs to be properly straighten out.
Considering how many chapters ahead of here, you prob reached a "canon" on what happened during these chapters ==> Thus editing it to corret this & put it in line with what you intended for here & leading to current chapters.
By this I'm not including the secrets to be revealed later though- just how it WAS thought to have happended, ppl acted etc
I am reading your comments and fixing things up. Maybe you should take a look at my other novel called Hentai God System just click on my profile and you will find it!
@GhostyZ - Will do :) - Im still reading & giving it some time work itself out etc.
Here big thing obviously is whole Memory Wipe debacle on what is & isnt wiped.
At first it seemed intentional he only wiped the room incident; following the decription of Power.
This Chapter - its now entire day. Yet tries question her?
Leading to =>
Next Chapter- despite gettng Truth Seeker in prev one to Question her - which makes no sense as he thinks entire day gone now - he then immediatel start next one acting shocked she does remember day.
He then only theorises about it just wiping sexual incident etc- instead of 1st time seeming to intend this on purpose
@Sektos To answer your question his Memory Wipe last only for a day or certain period of time depending on the tier and power of the person you use it on, remember the MC is still a low tier.
@GhostyZ - Problem is with the descriptions affects, what he intended & later thought, & how he then expected to Question her about truth if whole day is gone (What he later thought would in this Chap).
Chapter 10-
[Memory Wipe]- Wipe anyone's mind for one day. It can be used once a day.
Effects can grow stronger and last longer dephending on your level. [5,000 NP]
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Then-
[How to use Memory Wipe skill: Simply place your hands on the forehead of the person's memory you want to erase.
The memory you want to erase from their minds will be erased and forgotten for a day. The memory will soon resurface next day]
IE - "the memory you want", not the whole thing, and he picked at time to just wipe the s*x etc in her Room, not the full day. It'd be these memories she'd remember; the s*x stuff, by about the same time tommorrow
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It also brings up issue of if whole day DID get forgotten, how then would she not notice entire day gone & suddenly in completely different place, situation etc
Plus her reaction to Rias at table if she did remember day.
@Sektos - What ever it is etc, its something that probably in edit would be good to make clearer , not confusing reader about everything with PWR's affect on Rias & what MC intended when using etc. Then how was he meant to question her then with Truth Seeker if the day was indeed meant to have been forgotten (His POV on her here).