Just in case the reader would like to check out the ranking system or get an explanation on certain things that might be a bit confusing later on. If you have anything you want to ask me, feel free to comment it below.
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'Total Battlepower / TB' = HP + MP
[Example: 50 HP + 50 MP = 100 TB]
Mortal Rank: 1-50 TB
Earth Rank: 51-2.000 TB
Lord Rank: 2.001-50.000 TB
King Rank: 50.001-1.600.000 TB
Saint Rank: 1.600.001-50.000.000 TB
Angel Rank: 50.000.001-1.600.000.000 TB
Heaven Rank: 1.600.000.001-50.000.000.000 TB
God Rank: 50.000.000.000- 1.600.000.000.000 TB
???
(God rank isn't confirmed as the highest rank).
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Sub-realms:
- Early (1-25% of total TB allowed in selected rank)
- Middle (26-50% of total TB allowed in selected rank)
- Late (51-75% of total TB allowed in selected rank)
- Peak (76-100% of total TB allowed in selected rank)
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[Advancement Unavailable / Available]
[Evolution Unavailable / Available]
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Advancement:
When advancing, Lucifer will advance to another stage:
Baby (1/5) → Child (2/5) → Young Adult (3/5) → Adult (4/5) → Elder (5/5)
Also whenever Lucifer advances, he will obtain double the TB he had before advancing.
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Evolution:
When evolving, Lucifer combines multiple bloodlines creating a new one.
[Example: Demon Dragon + Demonic Deer → Giant Demonic Dragon (a + b → c)]
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Energy:
Energy of different types (Nature's Energy, Earth Energy, Fire Energy... etc.) is used by higher-ranked entities such as wild animals or beasts to absorb and further develop towards a path of power. Some lower-tiered entities have skills allowing them to make use of Energy of different elements to get a temporary boost in strength.
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(More will be added in the future)
Oh the system is similar to Reborn: Evolving from nothing, well the system is good hope the story will be different though.
I haven't read the story yet, but "Total Battlepower" seems a misnomer. At best, it seems like Battle Capacity. Battlepower implies that you have the skill and ability to use the capacity of your body, even if most of it will probably be wasted and ill spent.
Think about it. You have a skinny, malnourished street kid and a body builder in a ring fighting one another. On paper, according to your chart, the body builder would have a fully developed body with age so his HP and MP will be much higher. In reality, most people who hit the gym don't know how to use their bodies other than bursting out to lift weights. A skinny kid living on the streets has learned how to scrap and fight for their meals. They fight dirty and will easily overwhelm the body builder who has no practical experience.
Should you ever revise this story and setup, please consider this. You should change it to something like "Life Level" or something where a person's Energy/Vitality accumulation and intensity are used to determine their classification all the way up to "God". "Battlepower" implies something different, and is very subjective, situational, and reliant on health and mental states.
Good system, keep the good writing ~ Read a lot of classi8l books for inspiration ~
I don't want to heart it, because it's at 69...
Mendel is good
ok ok