My townā¦
is home to magical girls.
Here in Kagoshima City, weāre beset by attacks by space monsters, by kaiju! Giant monsters emerge from the depths of outer space, from the deepest ocean, even from the caldera of Sakurajima. Even when theyāre defeated, their bodies birth forth countless smaller monsters, kaijin who threaten humanity!
Um, itās less dangerous than it sounds, honest. But itās still not great! No oneās ever died from a monster attack, but thereās tons of injuries, property damage, lost work hours, transit interruptionsā¦itās awful!
Itās thanks to the magical girls that fight so tirelessly to protect our everyday happiness that we can continue living comfortable lives here in Kagoshima Prefecture! Theyāre powerful! Theyāre beautiful! They can sing! They can dance!Ā Magical girls!
Theyāre all goddesses when they transform! AbsoluteĀ queens!Ā Yes, demigods all!
The Swords of Moonlight, the warriors of the gods! The Sante Quintetto, heirs to the ancient magic! The Darkmoon Blades, hunters of monsters! The Deck Masters, keepers of the mystical arts! Rock Lobster, a melody to save the world! The Princess Pure, guardians of the world of miracles! And the Warriors of Love ā
Oh! Iām sorry! I didnāt see you there! I was so rudeā¦
My name is Nabeshima Shiori! Iām from the island of Yakushima, and I take a fast ferry every day to attend Fujisaki Junior and Senior High School, where our story begins, right now! Present day, present time!
Er. Sorry, Iāve been doing reports for my ludonarrative and media studies blocksā¦all this stuff gets a bit jumbled up sometimes!
Oh, I know I was told I should be studying more closely, listening properly in class, but I canāt concentrate on that right now! Iām drawing the Phantom Renegade, the phantom thief of the Swords of Moonlight! With her beautiful tuxedo and cape, her mysterious domino mask, her short dark blue locksā¦
Ah, I always get so excited about the magical girls. Theyāre so pretty and lovely, and so strong, and they work so hard. Even right now, as we speak, far in the distance, I can see them battling against the kaiju! I think it might be the Sante Quintetto, the Saintsā¦
Theyāre such brilliant stars, shining lights. Beacons of hope for the turbulent Reiwa era, rising from the ashes of the East Sea War! And I admire them so deeplyā¦
theyāre like idols, celebrities, and public servants all at once. I have all the magical girl CDs and merchandise I could get my hands on! E-except the costumes, Iām not pretty enough for that! I think about them all the time! I wish I could get close to them, even if itās selfish of meā¦
Itās hard to believe Iām the only one watching them, but I guess even this kind of thing can become routine for people, huh? Admittedly, itāsĀ veryĀ hard to see at this distance, but ā
āShiori!ā
āA-ah! Karasawa-sensei!ā I yell, quickly slamming my notebook shut! Oh dear, oh dear, I hope no one caught me staringā¦
āShiori,ā Karasawa-sensei says, brushing some of her short dark blue locks back as she flutters her eyes at me. Oh gosh, sheās making me blush! āCould you read the next passage for us?ā
āUm, of course!ā I quickly put on my glasses, flip my textbook open, and miraculously land on the right page! āāIn the aftermath of the demise of the American state in the 2020s, the once-powerful nation splintered into dozens of small successor states who claimed legitimacy over small parts of its territoryā¦āā
Well, never mind the history class, weāll just skip over that part. Itās not important, Iām sure youāve all heard far too much about the Collapse! Sure, Iād love to talk about history with you sometime, but history isnāt as important as the magical girls āĀ orĀ as Karasawa-sensei!
Karasawa-sensei, or rather Karasawa Haruna, has been my homeroom teacher ever since I started attending Fujisaki. Iām in my third year now, but my feelings for her have only grown strongerā¦
First off, sheās absolutely beautiful, of course. I could almost imagine her turning into a fox in the night, then coming to seduce me in the dayā¦even if she turned into a fox, I would still love her, honest! Sheās got a kind of handsome appeal, you could say. She rides a classic Kawasaki Ninja EV to work, she wears a leather jacket and these low-cut shirts, and I hear sheās a fencing instructor in her spare time. How sheās single, Iāll never knowā¦
But sheās still a traditional lady, too! Sheās a history teacher with a strong passion for the subject, and Iāve learned so much about Japanese history from talking to her after classes! And I remember, last year, on our school trip to Ibusuki, Karasawa-sensei wore this absolutely gorgeous yukata, and when she tied my obi I could barely sleep all week, thinking of her slim fingers and how easily she couldāve pulled me in, touched my breasts, had her way with meā¦aah, itās no good, but I canāt help itā¦
Yes, I have a completely incorrigible crush on her. Sheās so beautiful, she couldĀ easilyĀ be one of the magical girls! Er, not that Iād know even if she was, because of their anti-recognition magic and all ā
āSorry Iām late.ā
Ah. I was wondering when Asuka would get back!
āAre you feeling any better, Horii-san?ā says Karasawa-sensei. Asuka needed to head to the nurseās office for a bit earlier; I guess itās understandable, she has a weak constitution like I do.
āYes, much better, thank you,ā says Asuka, walking back to her seat as she brushes back her long black hair in a flourish. Aah, itās almost sparkling! Like a ravenās feathersā¦how did she get it looking so great? Especially in such little time ā
Oh, right! Um, that pale, intimidating long-haired beauty is Horii Asuka. Sheās one of the few friends I have here at Fujisaki, though thereās still more distance than I would like. Itās awkward, trying to make friends, you know? But I really was getting along with her! Thing is, though, sheās had a bit of an image change latelyā¦
She used to wear glasses, and she wore her hair in a braid like mine. She also fumbled a lot in gym, which is part of why we got along ā we both have trouble with the whole āphysical educationā thing. But I hadnāt seen her over spring break at all, and since school started a few weeks ago, it was like sheādĀ transformed!
(I want to transform, too. Like the magical girlsā¦a girl canĀ transform!Ā But Iām so weakā¦)
Sheād no longer had any trouble with gym class, and her grades had gone up too. Sheās even stopped wearing glasses! And, worst of all, sheās been pretty distant from me.
Sometimes, and I know Iām not very good at understanding people (no matter how much my parents and doctors and Karasawa-sensei try to help), but I think she looks kind of sad? Sometimes I even think I catch her looking at me, but Iām probably just being paranoid.
Well, itās not anything to worry about. This is our last year of middle school; itās not that strange for someone to change their image a little. Sometimes I think sheās been avoiding me, but Iāve been told by my doctor that I should trust peopleās intentions! So Iām going to hope that whateverās troubling her passes quickly!
Anyway, to make a long story short, Karasawa-sensei continued to have us read out of our textbook for a while, untilā¦
āSo it might be tempting to think of all this as ābefore your timeā, but even here in 2043, those who cannot remember the past are condemned to fulfill it. You kids are the future, after allā¦ā Karasawa-sensei laughs. āItās up to you to make the future a brighter place āā As often happens when she gets passionate, the bell soĀ rudelyĀ interrupts Karasawa-sensei! āAhah, it seems like weāre out of time again. Remember, whatever you did today, it is now a part of history. Have a safe trip home!ā
The other students quickly start packing up and talking among themselves, vacating as fast as humanly possible. Iām going to have to go too, I want to catch the first ferry home ā
āShiori. Could we talk for a moment?ā
O-oh. Oh dear, Iām in trouble with Karasawa-sensei again! Oh, this happens too often this year. I need to work harder to make her proud of me!
As much as I want to run away, I nervously walk up to my beloved teacher, tugging my braided hair a little. Aah, itās still too messy and tangled, but if I comb it too much it goes all frizzyā¦
āI-Iām sorry, Karasawa-sensei,ā I say, bowing to my teacher. Itās still so hard to look her in the eye, no matter how often Iām toldā¦āI was just, distracted by the magical girls and their battle outside by the window.ā
āI understand your fascination with the magical girls,ā Karasawa-sensei says, her face going all stern, hands folded in front of her. (S-sheās hot when she does that. Well, sheās always hot. But.) āWith how hard they work to protect people, itās not strange to admire them the way you do. But your own future is important too, you know? You need to work hard like they do on your own battles, in this case your classes. Especially after your troubles last year.ā
āItās okay. Iāve been working hard, honest!ā I bow again as I ask forgiveness. I-I would even dogeza for Karasawa-sensei if I needed to! Iād kiss her feet, if she asked! āIāll do my best! Iāve even got my presentation and book report ready for literature class tomorrow!ā
āReally? Iām happy to hear it. I look forward to seeing it!ā Karasawa-sensei laughs, and oh, sheās so cute when she laughs, tooā¦āI thought you might be late again, but Iām glad to hear youāre taking this seriously.ā
āOh, of course, sensei!ā I bow yet again! āIāve been studying the Taisho era novelist, Yoshiya Nobuko! Iām sure Iāll get a good grade this time!ā And maybe, maybe I can communicate my feelings to my beloved Karasawa-sensei, too!
āIām happy for your enthusiasm, Shiori!ā Karasawa-sensei has such a gentle smile, it makes me feel happy. āItās important for you to fight for yourself. Do you have a dream for the future, Shiori?ā
āā¦I do.ā The last time Karasawa-sensei asked, I was too nervous to say it, but Iāve known ever since I was a child. āI want to see outer space with my own eyes, Karasawa-sensei.ā
Yes, itās been my dream for all my life. On the island of Yakushima, on a clear day, you can see all the way out to the Tanegashima Space Centre. My earliest memory is of watching one of the JAXAās H4 rockets launching from there, and from that moment on, I wanted to reach the stars.
The magical girls are beautiful and amazing, but Iām still so fascinated by space! Every day, I read about the latest space news out of cities like Southern Sun and all around the world! Ever since I saw the final International Space Station missions in the 2030s, with EVAs performed in Alphonse Industrialās new shiny, rubbery black space activity suits, Iāve ā
wait, no, itās embarrassing! I shouldnāt talk about that! Iām definitely not a bad girl, honest! I wouldnāt look at anything bad online! D-donāt tell anyone!
āItās a good dream, Shiori,ā says Karasawa-sensei, after a moment. āBut it takes lots of hard work to become an astronaut, you know? Thatās your own personal battle. Just like the magical girls, you need to fight for your dream.ā
āAh, of course!ā I bow yet again! āIāll fight as hard as I can, youāll see! But um, I need to go, Iām worried about missing the ferry homeā¦ā
āRight. Donāt let me keep you any longer, Shiori.ā Aah, Karasawa-sensei waved at me with her little fingersā¦she shows me so much more attention than the other students! She must really like me! Iām glad I have a friend like herā¦
Waving back, I quickly pack everything back into my bags and hop out of the classroom (not literally, that sounds like a bad way to leave a room), and start to walk away. Yes, Iāll be home quickly, and then I can gush over the magical girls even more ā
āNabeshima Shiori.ā
and then a voice calls out to me from behind. As if waiting to pounce. Waiting to attack me. And itās a voice I know all too well, and Iād hoped wouldnāt be used in anger.
āā¦Asuka?ā
That anti-recognition magic must be pretty strong or Shiori is just too scatterbrained to notice. I mean come on girl. You even formed a sentence with her, transformation and magical girl in it.
It's EXTREMELY strong. More details will come later, but you can literally look at two pictures of them side to side and the best you'll do is, 'Wow, I didn't realize Karasawa-sensei and the Phantom Renegade looked so much alike!'. The latest stuff on Fiction.live is even more absurd than that, but it's all in the service of drama and/or a good laugh.
š¶just repeat to yourself, it's just a show, I should really just relaxš¶
Cameras also just, straight up don't work for this. Gotta be directly told in person or see it happen right in front of you.
@queenfiona Wow thatās really strong. But then how is the typical trope of finding out going to work? Or wonāt that be a thing?
man when i read the Synopsis the first thing i thought of was Mahou Shoujo ni Akogarete is it inspired by that?
Yes. Which I already mentioned in the description.
@queenfiona oh MahoAko and Mahou Shoujo ni Akogarete is the same?? didnt know xd
With her beautiful tuxedo and cape, her mysterious domino mask, her short dark blue locksā¦
Karasawa-sensei says, brushing some of her short dark blue locks back as she flutters her eyes at me.
I see
no f*cking way, you made a f*cking magical girl yuri story where all the titles are queen references and i only find out now
maybe is should just go to fiction.live so i can get the earliest chomp at such things in the future
@gogo7966 If you like! š¤
Do you mean queen references or Queen references?
@WiseHamster the band