"Sigh. Why do you tell me mysterious words and then disappear like that?" A beautiful young woman squatted, watering flowers while sighing with a hint of irritation.
The beautiful young woman was Hu Wen, who had several encounters with Gu Ning. However, every time she thought about getting closer to him, Fang Xue's words echoed in her mind, causing her to hesitate.
"I've tried hard to find any flaws in Big Brother Ning, but I haven't found anything. Did Sister Xue lie to me?" This thought crossed Hu Wen's mind, but she quickly pushed it away."Young Miss, Young Master Gu has come to visit again." A young and gentle voice sounded from behind Hu Wen, who turned around to identify the owner of the voice.
"Little Su, tell Big Brother Ning to wait for me in the usual place. I'll be there quickly." Hu Wen gave an order to her servant.
"It's not good to keep your boyfriend waiting." Little Su teased and stuck out her tongue upon noticing Hu Wen's shy and annoyed look.
"Hmph, are you mocking your Mistress? Aren't you afraid?" Hu Wen said in a threatening tone, but Little Su had been her servant since childhood, so she knew that Hu Wen was very kind and wouldn't do anything to her.
"Yes, yes, Miss." Little Su replied in a falsely serious tone and hurried off to inform Gu Ning.
Hu Wen sighed again but didn't mind her servant's behavior. After all, she had been with her since she was young, and Hu Wen saw her as more than just a mere servant; she saw her as a friend.
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"Tsk, why hasn't this woman fallen for my charms yet?" Seated in a chair in a beautiful outdoor garden, Gu Ning thought with a hint of irritation.
"System, are you sure this girl possesses the Yin Maiden Physique?" Gu Ning asked his system, which served as his guide in this world.
[DING! Affirmative, the individual Hu Wen possesses the Yin Maiden Physique, but it is dormant within her.] A cold and mechanical voice resonated in Gu Ning's ears. He wasn't bothered by the tone, but let out a sigh of frustration.
Suddenly, the sound of footsteps echoed, and Gu Ning turned towards them, spotting Little Su approaching.
With the gentlest smile possible, Gu Ning observed Little Su's cheeks turning pink as she got closer.
"Young Master Gu, Miss Hu is getting ready and will be here soon." Little Su said, trying to calm the nervousness in her voice, especially after seeing Gu Ning's beautiful and kind smile.
"No problem, I'll wait." Gu Ning replied in an amiable tone capable of warming anyone's heart.
Little Su just nodded, too timid and nervous to respond, and hurriedly ran off again.
Observing the servant walk away, Gu Ning's gentle smile transformed into an indifferent expression.
Taking a sip of tea, Gu Ning began to reflect on everything that had happened to him so far, from his life on Earth to the current moment.
Gu Ning was an ordinary and average worker in Earth's society, but he knew that he was anything but ordinary or average.
Gu Ning was familiar with the darkness in his heart, his desire to do things that were not accepted by society, but he kept those thoughts under control until the fateful day that led him to be reborn in another world.
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"Where am I?" Gu Ning thought, somewhat confused to find himself in an empty place with several transparent figures around him.
Trying to recall his last memory, Gu Ning remembered seeing a colossal finger advancing towards him, annihilating everything in its path until his vision darkened, and he found himself there.
Suddenly, a completely white male figure appeared, introducing himself as a God named Samsara and casually explaining that they had died and would be reincarnated in another world. However, that wasn't what caught Gu Ning's attention.
It was one of Samsara's phrases: "Basically, you died because of a fight between two Gods, and as that was unfair, I will reincarnate you in a new world. A world where it's possible to reach the same level as us, Gods, immortal beings, and destroy stars, planets, and worlds with a simple move."
The thought of becoming a God, being immortal, and destroying stars, planets, and worlds with a simple move made the dark thoughts in Gu Ning's heart emerge like never before.
"If I become a God, who can stop me?" This thought began to dominate Gu Ning's mind even more, until his vision darkened again, and he found himself lying in a bed.
I wasn't expecting this guy to have a system, it makes it all the more interesting for the Queen to slowly break him down and save second waifu
No second waifu just a bunny-chan for her
And she shouldn't take her time with taking him down as systems are bullsh*t by the time she makes her mind to end him he will burn the half of the world and rule the other half
Wish the mc has soul corrosion skill like Artoria from TESN has
plus I'm thinking of occasionally writing chapters from from Gu Ning's vision (as long as he lives), to show you the difference between Fang Xue's reincarnation and other people on Earth.
Great idea I'm down
and also I guess it will apply to the other reincarnated individuals she'll clash with in the future
(I'M THINKING ABOUT FIXING THE FIRST CHAPTERS AS THEY HAVE A LOT OF ERRORS AND INCONSISTENCIES, TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT THAT.)
Well sure but in my honest opinion there's nothing wrong with it unless it'll be conflicting with your future ideas and chapters then by all means, thank you for the chapter again
Thanks for commenting, it won't change anything, it's just fixing grammatical errors and inconsistency in some aspects, and if there are any changes I'll let you know.
Might be an unpopular opinion but I personally don't like it when a story breaks away to too many different perspectives or at the very least focuses too much on the other perspective especially if I don't like the character and you have already made me hate his guts
, but it is your story write it how you want to. As always keep up the good work!
Usually other perspectives are needed to build the other characters up properly else this will just end up being another run of the mill face slapping and main characters starting forest fires from an insignificant spark, from other's perspectives there will be a great deal of development, but I get your point if it's too much it ends up harming the story but how this chapter was written is excellent imo
(as long as he lives)
Sounds like a flag...
What do you think? Is it a good idea or not?
I like that, just makes his down fall feel even more savoring.
Author will she end up as complete Asura or
At the moment, she is an Asura, but in the future she....