Once upon a time, in a galaxy far, far away, though not far enough to have dozens of movies, TV shows, and cartoons based on it, our story began nonetheless.
On the edge of the stratosphere and the open space of a really titanic planet appeared a small ball the size of a baseball. This little ball, shining in all the colors of the visible spectrum, compared to the space around it, was comparable to a grain of sand in the desert, so inconspicuous from a distance, yet so beautiful up close.
Not many would be able to recognize in this ephemerally-beautiful wisp of beauty in the midst of soulless-living, scalding-cold, deafeningly silent and terrifyingly beautiful space a strong soul, preparing for reincarnation. Actually, none of those few strongest entities who could recognize it was strong enough and as foolish enough to interfere in a special reincarnation initiated by the SYSTEM itself. This phenomenon, though rare, is not too significant in the SYSTEM-controlled part of the multiverse to risk absolute oblivion.
The soul has been unconscious for some time, but this could not last long in the current variation of reincarnation. Gradually waking up from the most pleasant and restful dream that the soul in question could remember, it became aware that something was wrong. Gradually, somewhere on the border of the still sleepy consciousness, their highnesses Confusion and Panic began to let out their subtle, but no less dangerous claws. As the soul awakened, these two emotions intensified, but when the consciousness was fully awakened it suppressed any manifestations of these emotions and immediately began to try to understand what had happened. Well... almost.
"What the. Fuck. Demon is going on here?" - That wasn't exactly the beautiful first thought of the hero of our story.
After the soul had fully come to its senses and was finally able to think clearly, though not quite ethically, a small, translucent, blueish panel appeared in its mind that had the following on it:
[Attention! Thanks to a great deal of accumulated karma, you have been given the opportunity to change your reincarnation! To start the reincarnation menu, mentally recite the key phrase Strange Ceiling]
"Oh gods, blue screen, it's definitely time for you to change the person in charge of jokes, because the reference to an anime from almost a century ago is so unfunny it makes you want to laugh."
[... To start the reincarnation menu, mentally utter the key phrase Strange Ceiling.]
"Huh, so you can react to my thoughts not directly related to the topic, too. Interesting... All right, you'll have a clichéd Strange Ceiling," the soul pronounced with barely perceptible amusement in her thoughts.
After this action(?) the panel disappeared, and in its place appeared a darker and richer screen with various inscriptions, more similar to the main menu in ancient games.
[ User Menu ]
[ - Status - ]
[ - Creating an avatar - ]
[ - Restore avatar - ]
[ - Place of appearance - ]
[ - Social standing - ]
[ - Reincarnation - ]
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Not bad actually Votes: 66 84.6%
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A little bad Votes: 15 19.2%
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Where's the option "very good"? Or how about, "so good I didn't even start looking for errors, let alone find any"
Thanks for the chapter
Where's the option "very good"? Or how about, "so good I didn't even start looking for errors, let alone find any"
There are no such options because I don't think my writing is good enough for them. Personally, I would rate the prologue as "very bad" at the moment.
Other than grammar issues it looks pretty good.
"What the. f*ck. Demon is going on here?" - That wasn't exactly the beautiful first thought of the hero of our story.
I think here, you were going for either:
"What the f*ck is going on here?"
Or,
"What the hell is going on here?"
Other than that,
[ - Place of appearance - ]
Could just use [ - Appearance - ]
Your translator is doing surprisingly well @I_H_I
@Vesperal
Your translator is doing surprisingly well
It's a machine translation. I almost didn't even look at the way it translated. I've been meaning to do a complete rewrite of the prologue and chapters, but I can't even get my hands on just writing.
Thanks for the chapter
Thanks for reading 🍪
Not "Strange Ceiling"
Status
It was just a dumb joke from me. In the anime, when a character loses consciousness for a long time, they are most often transferred to the infirmary, and when they wake up, they say "Unfamiliar ceiling"
@I_H_I ooooh, i get it now. I guess i was biased because you said machine translated. Sorry
@strangewaraxe Everything is fine. This is still a machine translation, but I'm not a complete zero in English and I look through the chapter before posting. True, I am a complete zero in grammar))
@I_H_I grammar is okay, not perfect, but legible.
@strangewaraxe this is mainly the merit of the translation from "DeepL" for his translation. Because I don't even try to check the grammar of the English translation)) I'm not very good even in the grammar of my language)) Should have studied better...
@I_H_I Deep L is working really well. At least for me it does when I use it. German<->English
@StrykerM11 I want to try to translate through a neural network, they say the results are awesome.If you like the translation, then I will translate the first chapters