hey guys, Zog here. i just wanted to let you all know that this story was an in between. my brain is coming up with a blank on all the next plot points that i keep trying to put in. BTBHOT is coming in again. or, if you guys want anything else, just let me know.
@Zogsalken I could just say cookie again buuuuuuuut that could be confusing so instead here. I don’t care what you write as long as you’re writing because so far I haven’t found a story of yours I haven’t at least mostly liked. Cookie is just my way of saying I’m still reading aka if I haven’t commented a cookie yet I haven’t got there yet. Also
Well I can think of a few plot threads you could look at in the future (if you want to).
- the mech left outside the city
- other races on their planet targeting the little city state of the ice elves. Like a siege plot? Maybe have MC pilot mech and blow them all away? Idk. There were those dragons too.
- Something related to the intergalactic empire her biological dad was from. I mean if the universe is something like out of warhammer 40k or something, you'd think even a random stray enemy, soldier or piece of tech could shake things up.
Just some suggestions. Idk what I want really. A wedding maybe lol. This really should have had some sort of romance tag I think.
Just do an interlude until you get some ideas for the plot
I mean, what is that answer supposed to mean? Like are you good with me going back to btbhot or no?
@Zogsalken I could just say cookie again buuuuuuuut that could be confusing so instead here. I don’t care what you write as long as you’re writing because so far I haven’t found a story of yours I haven’t at least mostly liked. Cookie is just my way of saying I’m still reading aka if I haven’t commented a cookie yet I haven’t got there yet. Also
Ok
Well I can think of a few plot threads you could look at in the future (if you want to).
- the mech left outside the city
- other races on their planet targeting the little city state of the ice elves. Like a siege plot? Maybe have MC pilot mech and blow them all away? Idk. There were those dragons too.
- Something related to the intergalactic empire her biological dad was from. I mean if the universe is something like out of warhammer 40k or something, you'd think even a random stray enemy, soldier or piece of tech could shake things up.
Just some suggestions. Idk what I want really. A wedding maybe lol. This really should have had some sort of romance tag I think.
I thought of all of those. When I next need a break from other works I shall return to this.