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Version 2.0 [DONE]
I finally have the time to start fixing my older chapters' grammar and stuff. It will take a while of course.
Useful marks to understand what happened to a chapter:
- [E] for Edited: This means that this chapter has only been edited and not much change happened to the story Chronology.
- [U] for Updated: This one will mark a chapter that will have some changes for some parts of within it.
- [R] for Rewrite: This is a chapter that undergoes a complete overhaul. Of course, a complete Arc overhaul will have its own announcement added here like the Version 1.0
- Newly edited Chapter will be titled like this " [E] / [U] / [R] Chapter X - Bla bla bla.
Version 1.0 [DONE]
Sorry for the inconvenience, but I have decided to starts rewriting a small portion of chapter 13 and the entire Victorian Academy Arc.
There are several reasons, namely:
- I had overestimated myself.
- Nyx doesn’t really mesh in well with Academy life, she would work better as a temporary instructor. She is good enough as a chess piece, as she was always intended to be in the future.
- She had gotten entangled by too many things without sufficient footing, which should have warranted her too many problem too handle.
- Several Arknights lore interpretation that had gone way too much off.
- Not enough build up for the major event there, specifically the “Walk in the Dust” event.
- Realistically, even though Nyx is too much of an unknown, the nobles should have been more aggressive in their approach on political chessboard.
- The interactions between characters are way too forceful, to the point that I pulled over characters that shouldn’t have been in Victoria.
- Since I realized this many problems, you may give me an input on how to make things better and more manageable lest I made the same or even worse blunder.
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I don't like how the author withdraws from what he wrote, it's a pity that you didn't finish it, you started writing, I liked it. Nyx in school was interesting, you could have developed her in a different direction...
Noted, I'll try better.
The idea of using Nyx as a chess piece actually got me interested considering her usage as a War general then a politician since that doesn't seem to be her field of expertise. But oh, Gracious author may you correct me if I'm wrong. tftc so far
I actually only framed her as a sword so to speak, but i might be able to make your input worked in the future.
This is just my opinion but it would be cool if Nyx snapped and decided to "f*ck you old fart, I'll do it myself". In short became leader and moving the pieces by herself
noted, we'll see