Hello everyone, I wanted to drop in and see how you're all feeling. I've been working on this story without a concrete plan, and I'm just as surprised by some of the events as you are. I'm curious to know your thoughts on the scenes and story arcs so far. Any ideas or feedback would be greatly appreciated. How do you envision the story progressing? (disclaimer, I can't promise to follow the results of the poll)
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What do you hope to see next in Anon & Nova's journey? (multiple choice)
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Appreciate your feedback. I am now trying to make sure that my chapters are always at least about 1500 words long. I am still new to writing webnovels. What would be your preferred length for a chapter? Of course longer chapters also mean less frequent updates.
I kinda want to see them end up on a habitable,unpopulated planet,if I'm being honest. That way,the Stockholm syndrome Nova is probably beginning to experience could kick in fully. After all,with her petite stature,she probably wouldn't be able to fend off any dangerous creatures that may inhabit said planet.
Hmmm at the moment since we are still at the introductory phase I choose 1,2,3. For now, I think they would need to struggle then I think it would be better if they like find a broken part of a ship that they can use to resupply their dwindling supply.
Like for example, the enemy spotted them in their radar then they shoot them and left them alone thinking that they killed the pod. Then they would need to struggle to survive then stumble upon a broken part of the ship that the enemy destroyed then try to fix the pod in there...something like that...I mean, they need to survive first instead of just tada they survive
- What if the Epsilon Consortium discovers them and makes their escape pod a more permanent fixture turning them into an art display of the conquest/conquered.
- What if they try cyro sleep and it fails but takes an awful long time to recover their senses.
So, this is one of, if not my favorite smut Fics of all time. I normally don't like dub/con, but this just manages to scirt the edge of deniability. I have a lot of ideas to continue this past the food/drink phase.
So, they are floating around in zero g, right? well that has deleterious effects long term in the form of muscle atrophy and plummeting bone density, on the ISS they manage this with exercise, with elastic straps binding them to a treadmill. The pod has to do this too, even while the occupant is hibernating. Via electro muscular stimulation of course! : ) automated and uncontrolled thrusting, For several hours at a time, if not constantly.
For the arc after that. Preventing the onset of hibernation. The basic concept is this, the hibernation is automated but putting the occupant under when their arousal is above a certain threshold is dangerous, thus the pod will wait until the heart rate has fallen below that level to induce hibernation. This is fine when they are both awake because it is measuring their combined heartrate, but heartrate slows down when asleep. So, they will have to sleep in shifts with the awake one keeping an elevated state of arousal the entire time.
Needless to say, Cockblocking the pod from doing its job like this makes it resort to pumping a series of drugs in order to get their vitals normal again. you can go wild with these, just remember to complicate it with the fact that there are two of them. its basing the dosage on the larger of the two. it may be concentrated in the process of filtering through Anons body. It may resort to stimulants (aphrodisiacs), in the event that depressants don't work or work too well.
That should be three arks worth of plot, Now get too writing.
I just want you to have a chapter leasting longer then 500 words 😑😑😑.
Appreciate your feedback. I am now trying to make sure that my chapters are always at least about 1500 words long. I am still new to writing webnovels. What would be your preferred length for a chapter? Of course longer chapters also mean less frequent updates.
I kinda want to see them end up on a habitable,unpopulated planet,if I'm being honest. That way,the Stockholm syndrome Nova is probably beginning to experience could kick in fully. After all,with her petite stature,she probably wouldn't be able to fend off any dangerous creatures that may inhabit said planet.
Thanks for the chapter!
Hmmm at the moment since we are still at the introductory phase I choose 1,2,3
. For now, I think they would need to struggle then I think it would be better if they like find a broken part of a ship that they can use to resupply their dwindling supply.
Like for example, the enemy spotted them in their radar then they shoot them and left them alone thinking that they killed the pod. Then they would need to struggle to survive then stumble upon a broken part of the ship that the enemy destroyed then try to fix the pod in there...something like that...I mean, they need to survive first instead of just tada they survive
i had the same votes for 1, 2, and 3
hmm.. then i will just anticipate what Author would do about it.
Terrible thoughts:
- What if the Epsilon Consortium discovers them and makes their escape pod a more permanent fixture turning them into an art display of the conquest/conquered.
- What if they try cyro sleep and it fails but takes an awful long time to recover their senses.
Thank you! I appreciate both of these concepts; they effectively keep Anon and Nova trapped while injecting a refreshing twist into the scenario.
So, this is one of, if not my favorite smut Fics of all time. I normally don't like dub/con, but this just manages to scirt the edge of deniability. I have a lot of ideas to continue this past the food/drink phase.
So, they are floating around in zero g, right? well that has deleterious effects long term in the form of muscle atrophy and plummeting bone density, on the ISS they manage this with exercise, with elastic straps binding them to a treadmill. The pod has to do this too, even while the occupant is hibernating. Via electro muscular stimulation of course! : ) automated and uncontrolled thrusting, For several hours at a time, if not constantly.
For the arc after that. Preventing the onset of hibernation. The basic concept is this, the hibernation is automated but putting the occupant under when their arousal is above a certain threshold is dangerous, thus the pod will wait until the heart rate has fallen below that level to induce hibernation. This is fine when they are both awake because it is measuring their combined heartrate, but heartrate slows down when asleep. So, they will have to sleep in shifts with the awake one keeping an elevated state of arousal the entire time.
Needless to say, Cockblocking the pod from doing its job like this makes it resort to pumping a series of drugs in order to get their vitals normal again. you can go wild with these, just remember to complicate it with the fact that there are two of them. its basing the dosage on the larger of the two. it may be concentrated in the process of filtering through Anons body. It may resort to stimulants (aphrodisiacs), in the event that depressants don't work or work too well.
That should be three arks worth of plot, Now get too writing.