1st of March, the Year 1202
11:08
City of Invicta, Northern Gate
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Arkham, commander of the Heavy Division, was stationed at the head of the North Gate, taking 15 stealth operatives of the Intelligence Department and 50 of his own subordinates to reinforce the area. Being placed on a Level 1 alert, the city was even more eerie and silent than usual. Having the majority of your population trained in the military had its perks as the citizens followed the lockdown quickly, stalking the streets of Invicta cautiously with their weapons brandished.
His huge, bulky frame towered over the ordinary guards as he supervised the gate security with silent dedication, keenly scanning over the cityscape from up on the tall walls. They were meticulously cared for and was 40metres tall and 10 metres thick. Furthermore, they had a plethora of traps and windows on the outer side to combat not only monsters but humanoid invaders. Cordelia had stressed heavily about the city's security which resulted in this, in an outsider's opinion, overkill defence. There was no doubt that such a wall took a lot of resources to maintain but thanks to Walker's external efforts, it was managed well.
At first, the man was rather confused when first told about his deployment on the North Gate as the intruders had attacked far, far away from his position. Being on the outer areas of Invicta, it leaned especially towards the South Gate which was one of the most heavily defended entrance points of Invicta since it was the one which faced towards the Withering Heights where much of the monsters originated from.
It would make sense if the elves tried to escape through the South Gate, even if it was well defended, as trying to manoeuvre through the streets of Invicta would be hard since the citizens would all fight them on sight. Though, Arkham couldn't see many, if any citizens at all from where he was standing. Sneaking through the rooftops was out of the question also, as Summoners had already evoked their spells and sent up their partners cloaked with Light Magic to search for them, with Diviners placing eyes all over the city.
Yet, the general had stationed him at the furthest away area, the North Gate. Unbeknownst to Arkham, all other gates and vital entrance points had already been sealed and reinforced by numbers more numerable than his own. He had just not been informed of the movements as Cordelia was wary of interception Diviner spells that could intrude on their messages. Hence, many in her own army were unaware of circumstances outside of their own.
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The well organised and rapid response of the Auster military had gone unnoticed by the elves as they were too distracted by the Third Squadron who was harrowing them for quite a bit of time now. Annoyingly, the elves had to keep on running away as the darted through the city, jumping over rooftops and dashing through the streets.
"Galia, we can't shake off these pursuers! We've been running like this for 10 minutes already!"
One of the leading elves, the one who was in the auction to be specific, yelled towards his superior who also ran behind him. There were 15 elves fleeing from the chasing human soldiers who stalked them with admirable agility and skill. So far, none of the elves had been terribly injured, but some light ones were inevitable.
"Keep running towards the North Gate."
Unlike many elves, Galia was rather toned and large for an elf. Traditionally, elves were slim and wiry with an air of grace and elegance that couldn't be reproduced by any other race. On the other hand, Galia was born much like a human and was thus, disdained for much his life. Fortunately, he had prodigious talent in commanding troops and archery, so he shook off the prejudices and rose within the Elven Epoch as an officer. However, threatened by this, the nobles often sent him on suicidal missions and assignments. Of course, he not only lived but completed those missions with resounding success, so now, they send him on very easy ones so that he doesn't get as many achievements or merits.
"Captain, they've had Diviners and Summons spying on us for a long time now."
"Ignore them. We cast masking spells once we're outside the city."
Galia said so with aloof confidence but inwardly, he was alarmed. His subordinates had been casting interception spells periodically as data collected on Invicta suggested that their military made extensive use of telepathy just like they did. Yet, not much important information had been siphoned from their network. Additionally, their pursuers, despite clearly having the ability to catch up to them and engage in combat, had only been chasing from behind...
And then it all clicked. But it was already too late.
"Captain, we can see the North Gate! Heh, these humans can't catch us." One of the elves shouted out with evident relief and mockery as they turned the corner, entering the courtyard of the North Gate.
"Wait!"
As those words left Galia's lips, swarms of darts from all around them flew from the shadows of the surrounding buildings. Instantly, 9 elves crumpled in a mass of bodies as the darts inserted themselves into their flesh. He could see how they only fell unconscious and did not die, which only heightened his caution. Saving us for interrogation? Not good...
Undeterred by their failure to hit the rest, 15 humans slinked out of the darkness, brandishing daggers and kunai before streaking over to them, flashing hand signals to each other as they did so. Simultaneously, the pursuing humans arrived with their swords in hand, coordinating with the attack.
Arkham launched himself into the fight as well, gripping his battle-axe tightly with both hands and bringing it down. Infusing mana into his arms, the force created was so great that it sent fissures and cracks through the ground, halving the battlefield. In this way, the elves were separated from their comrades and the intelligence operatives would be able to pick them off.
Clang!
He blocked a slash from Galia who had pinpointed him as a priority target after his entry attack. Truly, elves were powerful; they had higher base dexterity, speed and vitality than humans and their long lifespan allowed them to learn a surplus of skills; Arkham was finding it difficult to ward Galia off with his quick and nimble swordplay as he exploited his openings mercilessly and slipped in subtle attacks in each gap with remarkable precision.
Unfortunately, Galia's efforts were for nought; having triple their numbers, the humans separated into groups of three and fought each elf in that fashion. Consequently, they were rapidly taken down. Galia watched with wide eyes as he was nipped in the neck by a dart, his vision growing dark in the afterwards. He was able to kill quite a few humans but after the rest of his men and women were subdued, he was quickly overwhelmed.
Just as he was about to blackout, there was only one thought on Galia's mind: is this really a lowly human dukedom, abandoned by its empire, as the report said?
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1st of March, the Year 1202
14:47
Auster Manor, Cordelia's Study
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"General, the elves have been apprehended. Affiliation to the Elven Epoch has been confirmed by their medallions. Stolen items from the Trade Union have been retrieved and handed back to Mark Kaelin."
Cordelia opened an eye.
"Give them to the Intelligence Department."
"Affirmative, General."
The telepathy spell terminated. She hummed slightly, crossing her legs and placing them on top of her desk as she stretched her arms from its stiffness.
"I overestimated the Elven Epoch. Maybe I should go and train..."
Cordelia was rather disappointed with the performance of the elves. They had played right into her hands and never managed to figure out the plan fully to trigger her backups. That was too easy.
In truth, Cordelia had just set her standards too high. Her life was spent learning from her mistakes and regularly losing to her brother in chess matches. For sure, she was a prodigy in many aspects. Her Perfect Memory skill granted her eidetic memory in all aspects, even for subtle things like movements. For that, she could imitate martial arts or swordsmanship of any kind if she studied it for a few minutes. But it would be mistaken to think that this was all without effort. She had shed more blood, tears and sweat than anyone else in these eight lonely years. Her successes were built on her countless failures.
Her plan was multi-faceted with several subsidiary factors to cover up glaring flaws and avoid suspicions. First, her territory's reputation; Auster was known to be an abandoned ducal house with no favour from the Escadan Imperial Family. It was barren and although had large territory, could only survive on its selling of expensive monster materials. The only fact that mattered to the elves though was the Auster military's reliance on a weakly defended telepathy network, a fact that Walker and Cordelia had left open to outsiders on purpose. Why? It was for the sole purpose of manipulating unsuspecting invaders through information.
They would instinctively try to intercept telepathy messages and from this, Cordelia can feed information to them and control their movements through prediction and intelligence. Hence, when information that the North Gate had been sent the least soldiers, the elves ran over there so they could break through and escape. Her deception was covered up by the fact that the North Gate was the furthest away from the Trade Union Branch so it would be 'logical' that it would be lightly defended. There was also the possibility that the Diviner would be able to break through their Diviner barrier spell and look into the 'real' telepathy network so she circumvented this by simply isolating her pawns from each other, stopping any important information from flowing to them. Obviously, that was unneeded as the elves were too confident that their information was correct.
Second, the elves were lulled into a false sense of security and complacency through the Third Squadron, their pursuers. They were ordered to deliberately act exhausted and on the verge of collapse as if they were barely able to keep up with the elves. The spread of misinformation that the Auster House was weak also attributed to this fact as well. Cordelia even factored in the elven pride that naturally flows through their veins and bolstered it even further, blinding their judgement with arrogance. As such, their ability to see through her thoughts and plan would be limited. Not only that but she asked Mark to order his guards to let them pass with little resistance to inflate the elves' ego.
Third, the elves would fight in an area which she controlled. The Third Squadron also served the purpose of chasing the elves to the North Gate so that they would not think of any other gate to run too. By being close to it already, they would automatically choose that gate and thus, Cordelia had sealed off any means of escape. Sure, there was a possibility that this would not happen, but the civilians, which were supposed to be out patrolling as a Level 1 alert dictated, had already been ordered to hide outside the main street which the elves were being chased on. Again, this was unnecessary. By walking into the North Gate courtyard of their own volition, they had already sealed their fate. The Level 1 alert was more of a precaution as if the situation arose that the elves would go to a different gate, she wanted her citizens to at least stall them slightly.
They were like puppets on a string.
Knock, knock~
"E-excuse me, General. I am here to deliver the reports on our elven prisoners." The muffled sound of a young man, perhaps near the end of his puberty, came through the door.
"Come in."
This was his first time ever entering the Young Miss', rather, General's office. She held full control over all military affairs in the Auster House and was the ultimate authority next to her older brother, Walker Auster. Despite being a full four years older than her, he couldn't help but tremble at her stare. He knew there was no malicious intent or bloodlust but her eyes made it so unsettling... like the eyes of a demon.
Cordelia shifted in her seat, her posture long since fixed before he had entered.
"Why are you the one bringing the reports today?"
"Apologies General, I was only informed that we were running low on manpower."
He bent over at the waist, explaining his presence. Even so, he was only met with a pregnant pause. A cold sweat ran down his back at her next words.
"Wong answer."
In his panic-induced terror, he roared while raising his right arm up, the glint of a knife making itself known. Widening her eyes, Cordelia leap out of the way before her innards could be spilt across the floor. In return, her chair was split apart, falling over into two clean halves. Grabbing her perched katana along the way, Cordelia crouched low and slipped into an iaido stance, ready to bisect him the moment he moved closer. She took notice of his ears which had fallen out of his hair, displaying his elven heritage in all of its full glory.
Just like she was, the young man, now elf, lowered himself cautiously as he contemplated over his chances. He had already botched the first strike and landing another was almost impossible at this point. Her overall stats were lower, but he had seen how she had dodged his slice. There was no doubt that she was as trained as any soldier in the human army, maybe even more so, and the sword she gripped at her waist was no joke either. There was a gut feeling that told him to keep away from that blade, that he would forever regret his flesh ever coming in contact with it. Smiling bitterly, the elven spy begrudgingly realised he had no way out unless he killed the girl, the killer of his comrades, right now and escape.
"Give up."
There was only really one reason why she even gave him this offer; she didn't want to spill blood in her own office. It would be a hassle to clean up, not to mention it was disgusting.
"Don't patronise me, human. I'll end you right here and now, even if I have to kill myself!" He snarled viciously before throwing daggers towards her. Breathing steadily, she lifted her body in a diagonal motion, her sword arm flinging out towards the projectiles with unrivalled accuracy. They were instantly intercepted and fell out of the air, only for the elf to jump forward in the small window of time that she had left open.
I got you! His pale, childish face contorted into glee before being replaced with abrupt horror as his arm was now half-submerged into a black hole that had ripped itself into reality. Space-time magic! But how?! T-there was no spell circle! At 13 years old! I... I... Before he vanished into the Void for all time, he saw the girl's lips move, curling into a smirk at the end.
Checkmate.
He was sucked in, his body shredded on the subatomic level, leaving no trace of his existence behind. All that was left was silence in the office, apart from the rustling of papers flying about and Cordelia's heavy breathing. Her body slumped against the wall, her face paler than ever and her mana running extremely low. Her pants were becoming shallower and shallower as her body tried to compensate for mana exhaustion. Space-time magic was powerful when the situation was correct but not only was this application of magic difficult to pull off, it was also unbelievably taxing on your mana. She was not only ripping a hole in the fabric of reality but also sending her victim into the Void, a faraway dimension said to be the origin of all things.
"P-partial Status."
Name: Cordelia Auster
Age: 13
Race: ?̵̙̱͙̎̈́̇͐͒̓̑͛͜!̸̞͇̥̤̿́#̷̨̨̩̦̟̯͔̠̯͑͌̃̾#̴̧̛͕̖̗̪́̈́͠ ̸̨̨̩̞̲͈̹͊ͅ*̵͎̞͌ͅ@̷̢̧̦̳͇̜̮̕!̶̪͉͍͛́̏̌͊͜?̵̖͐̄͐͜#̴̢̧͉̖̰̈͊͋̽́̊
Class: Swordswoman
Health: 110/122
Mana: -550/198 > /210
Stamina: 75/86
Although her body might be able to compensate using the ambient mana, that wouldn't be possible with how much she was in debt. I might die... Her chest heaved, feeling like it was on the verge of caving in from an invisible pressure. Looking at the abysmally low number again, she gritted her teeth and clenched her fist. I can't die here. Not when... I have so much to do! The last vestiges of her consciousness were slipping between the gaps of her fingers, her vision already incomprehensible. She could do nothing to stop the pulls of exhaustion taking over as her eyes closed inevitably.
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"That's my girl!"
"Ehehe!"
It was distant. The voices of a man and a girl carried over to my ears, but it seemed muffled and murky to me. I couldn't quite pinpoint the source of the sounds but for some reason, my chest hurt. Unbearably. Even though I felt like I shouldn't belong here, I continued to walk, trying to find the man and the girl.
"Oh, so this was where you both were? Dinner is ready."
"Mommy! Look, look! I made a flower crown!"
"Ooh, that's very good,"
"Hey mommy, can I put it on your head?"
"Of course you can, my darling."
Clutching at my breast, I staggered at the burning within the depths of my heart. My eyes stung as if the sight of the happy family was a sore sight. Why?... Why did it hurt so much? A fire consumed me from inside, a voracious beast that ravaged everything in its sight.
Falling to my knees, I curled up in a ball. The previously white landscape became black, blacker than lacquer, which slowly encroached upon the happy family of three. Droplets scraped at my tear ducts while I stretched out an arm towards the three. They were naively unaware of the impending doom that crept behind them, so gullible and innocent... it was so familiar.
. I watched with morbid horror as the darkness congealed into a hulking blob, towering over the unsuspecting family. Wait, no! No! NOO-
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"NOOOOOO!"
"Cordelia! Are you okay?!"
Her scream had immediately woken up her big brother who had been lying at her side, her hand in his palms. His eyes opened fully when he saw her crying streams down her cheeks, her entire body drenched in sweat. Walker promptly took her into his arms, caressing her damp hair as he whispered softly to her in a soothing tone.
"Shhh, shhh... Your big brother is here... shh..."
Walker bit his lip behind his sister's back, closing his eyes in pain. Sometimes, he forgot that Cordelia was only a 13-year-old girl. She was still supposed to be having fun with her friends, carefree of the worries and hardships of life. In spite of that, he wasn't strong enough for her. When she had gone through her darkest days, he wasn't able to comfort her fully. Deep inside, Walker knew he wasn't the same as their parents. He was not Alexander Auster, the former Duke of Auster. He was not Lillith Auster, the former Duchess of Auster, either. However, he was Walker Auster, the Duke of Auster and the older brother of Cordelia Auster, the sole daughter of the Auster House.
Father and Mother had been ripped ruthlessly from both of them, but it was only Cordelia who was still reeling from the pain. That was why he needed to be with her, to be the older brother that he needed to be.
Cordelia's sniffles and hiccups had subsided, tears and sweat the only remnants of her terror. Unlike before, she was stuck to Walker, her arms and legs wrapped around his torso like a stubborn koala, with her face buried in the crook of his neck. He did not desist in his gentle coaxing, his large palms stroking her back with the tenderness that only a big brother could ever hope to create.
The two siblings leaned into each other, residing in their thoughts as they revelled in each other's presence. They understood each other on a whole different level. They were more than just 'big brother' and 'little sister'. They were partners, fellow souls intertwined together so deeply that it couldn't just be a normal sibling relationship. Forged through experiences and trials, they were two halves of one whole. It stayed like this for hours on end, neither caring for the quickly passing time until Cordelia broke the silence.
"Brother?"
"Hm?"
"How long was I out?"
Walker mused for a moment.
"Four days. The doctor predicted that your mana veins would die from magicule deprivation, you know?"
She had the courtesy to look embarrassed, even if only slightly.
"...sorry."
"Hmmm? What was that?"
The pink dust on her cheeks intensified at his teasing. Refusing to back down, she shouted with all the gusto she could.
"I said sorry!"
Her brother sighed resignedly, unable to resist her cute pouting face and patted her head lightly. She had promised to him that she wouldn't use her space-time spells like that yet this had already happened. Had he pampered her a bit too much?
A silence ensued, Cordelia having buried herself in the bedsheets to hide her red cheeks. Next to her, Walker felt slightly troubled with the situation. The subject of her nightmare was delicate and he didn't want to approach it recklessly, so he was waiting for her to breach the topic first but clearly, that wasn't going to happen. So, he took a deep breath and gambled.
"Cordelia?"
No response.
"Did you have a nightmare?"
This time, her body visibly stiffened. He placed a palm on her shoulder, gripping it assuredly.
"...it was mother and father. I saw myself young too."
He didn't reply. Instead, he spoke through his actions; Walker hugged her tightly from behind, allowing her to relax her stricken frame as it loosed into his large chest. Like his father, he had a substantially bigger physique than normal humans though not to the point of being excessively macho. It allowed him to fit her into his embrace snugly without a problem, despite being only 15 years old.
The rest of the night flew away and with it, their worries and stress. They fell asleep in the other's arms.
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Honestly, I don't think you have double standards at all, vaexis. I think large age gap relationships at that age are unhealthy for several reasons. Also, I sincerely believe that brother/sister romantic relationships can be beautiful, and something to view with joy, rather than as a taboo.
Let me explain.
First off, the reason I dislike large age gap relationships at that age. The biggest problem there is the emotional maturity level. If an 18 year old were to (assumedly legally) be in a relationship with a 13 year old, it would be practically impossible to have a healthy relationship due to the extreme difference in both physical and mental maturity. You'd most likely end up with the older person completely driving the relationship, with virtually no mutual ground to stand on. I believe that in a good, lasting romantic relationship, the two people involved need to be close to equals. They certainly could fill different roles, and I believe that they should, but there has to be something close to a balance or the relationship will collapse.
On the subject of brother/sister incest, I believe it can be an extremely beautiful thing. Of course there are many times it isn't, and I'd go so far to say that it would be nearly impossible to find a real example of what I believe a beautiful incestuous relationship to be. But that's the great thing about fiction :)
Take, for example, a brother and sister that are close to each other. They're already close to each other in a familial sense, and presumably have grown up together, so they already know each other inside and out. That right there is a special relationship that I believe is entirely impossible to replicate. Just imagine how incredible it would be if two, involved in what was already a perfectly unique relationship, grew into a romantic relationship.
Yeah sure, I realize I'm an idealist, but that's the great thing about fiction. You can meet people unlike any you'll ever see in real life, ponder conflicts that you'll never face, and see beautiful things that you may never find in your lifetime.
On a different note, thanks for your stories, vaexis :) Your writing quality is much better than most stories I've read on this site, and it really is a pleasure to read.
Well, to be honest, mental maturity only matters when the partners aren't adults yet so sometimes, you can see a couple with one partner being 20 years old and another being 30, and there wouldn't be much of a problem. However, I can see your point and thank you for replying to my authors note. I wasn't planning for anyone to actually talk about it since it was written on the fly but you gave me another perspective on this.
And thanks for complimenting my story. I've written a few before and they were pretty bad, so maybe I've progressed a bit after all
I keep wondering why she used time/space magic. The only explanation was to dramatize this event and show her character traits. I felt that she was a lil bit arrogant, not willing to dirty her office but almost killing herself to stop that elf. If she had a lot of mana as stated previously she wouldn’t need to state ” give up” and subdue the elf right away. Her mere presence caused the elf to be intimidated, at less extremely cautious. Perhaps that elf was really skilled idk. For those reasons I kinda zoned out from the story lol. Now, this didn’t ruin the chapter, I just easily get fixated on plot holes ???
In previous chapters said she was 15, now she is twelve so the time she mentioned she trained for 8 yrs means she was 4 yrs old, also due to her memory guards that came into her room she would remember right? So just hearing his voice should have triggered something before entering his voice cracking might have covered things but still... Also why use a spell like that which could kill her makes no sense since she is naturally cautious. I remember a story of an overly paranoid instructor in an evil organization dude had traps galore, contingencies on contingencies on contingencies dude was that paranoid, she also seemed that way till elf got in her room... Dispite her age she is respected so that lapse at the end vs a scrub elf seems off...
Also why no guards posted outside her room a d where was walker to be so conveniently nearby?
I am reminded of star trek when the vulcan ears are disguised under a hat.. Space age tech got nothing on the good old hat...if that elf was a good spy he would cut his ears! Or better yet use a real human spy instead...
Okay so, I said that she could 'pass off' as being 15 because of her physical maturity. She is actually supposed to be 13, something that I changed a few chapters in the future for the sake of romance. I probably forgot to change '12' to '13' somewhere in the story so that's my mistake.
Secondly, the elf that came into her room was a messenger and she clearly questioned why he came into the room because he wasn't familiar.
Thirdly, the spell that she used was out of panic. Don't forget, she's only 13. Her mental state isn't exactly stable all the time, especially when she's about to die. Your point about her being paranoid is correct and this scenario was rather rushed and haphazardly thought out. Cordelia would be the type of person to always have a backup plan.
Walker wasn't so conveniently by. She was unconscious for 4 days so he managed to get back to the manor and take care of her.
The elf was enraged by his supposed comrades' death because he wasn't with them at the time. He was supposed to be outside the city, waiting for them to leave so he could extract them (that wasn't mentioned in the chapter so once again, my fault). As a result, he rashly tried to assassinate Cordelia. Also, his ears are a sign of pride for him; he would never cut them off because that would mean spitting on his identity as an elf. I've decided that elves are very arrogant anyway.
Tbh, there were a lot of things that I didn't think about in this chapter and many of your questions have a point. I could just say that there wasn't a guard posted outside her room but that would just be me bullshitting. I'm glad you posted this comment because it opened my eyes to a lot of things I looked over.
"I've changed the city name from 'Hel' to 'Invicta' ..."
"City of Hel, Northern Gate"
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Oops, that was my mistake. I'll fix it!