A dank cave, in a swamp.
Carlos had no idea WHY the Circle always met in swamp caves. But it did, and so, here he was.
The God of the Draconids, Lizardfolk, And other Dragon-kin had done something MASSIVE, pulling in the other gods, and that power left a mark on the world. So Naturally, the Circle of Haden HAD to take advantage.
He made his way into the cave, meeting the others. Clyde, Asha, Tate, and Cyrus. Carlos formed the fifth point of the Pentagram, standing at the point. Five Hooded Humans, standing on THIS: ⛧. At the center was a rams Horns, Bat wings, two melons, and a peach, floating in a cauldron full of Blood.
Clyde spoke. "The ingredients are prepared. The magic is Ambient. The moons are full. Now is the time. I shall speak the words, And the ritual shall complete! Summoning our very own pet SUCCUBUS! JOIN HANDS!"
We joined our hands together, overlaying the drawn Pentagram with a second formed of crossed limbs. And Clyde spoke, chanting: "Voo Lay Vouse Couch Air A Vec Moy. Arise Daughter of Lust."
The chant continued for over an hour. Before Cyrus had had enough. "Clyde, give me that spell, please. Now." Unlinking hands, Clyde handed over the spell... and Cyrus Laughed aloud. "CLYDE, you moron. This is in Gnomish!"(French, btw. Cajun Style) "You were saying it wrong. It's "Voulez Vous Coucher Avec Moi!"
And the Cauldron exploded.
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"Ugh... my head." Carlos Woke... then froze at the voice. "What the!" The voice saying his thoughts. But that's not his voice. His was deep, with a twang like a Banjo being strummed. This was High, soft, and very Feminine. "Oh shit, don't tell me... Aaaa. AAAAAA. aaaa. Do Re Mi Fa So La Ti Do! FUCK. It's ME making this voice." He tried to stand, and an unfamiliar weight caused him to fall on his tail. "OH SHIT! THAT HURTS. WAIT... SINCE WHEN DO I HAVE A..." He glanced back, and sure enough, waving back and forth behind him was a thin tail with a ♥ shaped tip. He Reached his hand up, and felt two Curled Ram-like Horns sprouting from the upper forehead, and curling back to the sides. Moreover, he saw Steel-gray Hair. "Oh Hell no. Those Fuckers did NOT..." He loled down... and saw two, perky breast with Pink nipples. Dark, almost Chestnut skin. And beneath a small patch of Steel colored Fuzz... an opening where his 'Wizards Staff' should be. Long, shapely legs. And Strangely Shaped Hooves. They looked like those Uncomfortable Shoes the Prostitutes Wore.(In other words, Natural Stiletto Heels) Glancing back again, only higher, ge saw a pair of Bat-like wings.
"OKAY. SOMEBODY IS DYING. WHERE ARE THOSE FUCKERS. {Candlelight} "
As the spell ignited... Carlos Almost Hurled. His Fellow mages were still there... but Stone. On four points of the Pentagram Stood Statues of three men and one woman... But not whole... each face contorted in pain, their Stone Ribs jutting out of HUGE Holes in their backs... the walls Painted with their insides.
He turned toward his spot... and almost screamed. Standing there, rather than a man, was a stone egg... it too had an opening, toward the center. Carved in Flame, letters were on the surface. Glowing.
/To Seal the Truth until time comes, I cast my child away. To save her from the human Scum, I cast my child away. The time shall rise, the moons align, four Fools their souls she'll Reap. And when their blood and bones to fly, Awaken from her sleep. -Lay-d marma-Lahd, Succubus Queen. Good Morning, Daughter./
"What. The. Fuck." Carlos was dumbfounded. He knew one thing, though. He had to leave Haden. Hell, he had to leave The Country of Nawlins completely, before the Demon Hunters of the Church in the capital, Creol, learned an unbound Demon was in their territory.
"Shit. I know, I'll head to the Dragonmount in Wyveria. They'll shield me. Sigh. Turned into a succubus, my friends killed abd their souls eaten, on the run... This is the worst Tuesday EVER. Shit, I'll have to change my damn name, I can't call All This Carlos. Fuck it. I guess I'm Charlotte now. I always did like the name... just thought it'd be for a future daughter, rather than myself. Wait, why am I rambling, who the fuck am I even talking to. And do these wings actually WORK?"
She stepped outside the cave, and learned that yes, the wings DO work. She clumsily flew to the north... toward Wyveria, and the dragonmount.
Hey, im back. Got a couple other things im working on, one which is VERY personal, so updates will continue to be slow... but they will continue. In other News, i have Heard that SOMEONE i used to work with on my account, shortly before his betrayal, commented a LOT of potentially Harmful garbage on several sites, so while my passwords are all changed, i Apologize if anyone was offended by any of what STUPID f*ckING EUGENE said. -Matt (ps, if you see anyone posting under the name ExceedKillsDeltagardPlus, That's The f*cker, or at least it WAS. HE STOLE A COMPLETED STORY I ASKED HIM TO UPLOAD FOR ME. so yeah... he dosent seem to be ON Scribblehub, but if you see him elswhere, with a story about a demon-girl named Etra Flaune, just know its stolen.)
My condolences.
Would he really be stupid enough to publish it while keeping his own nickname and the MC's name unchanged?
Do you still intend to publish the story he stole?
He loled down... and saw two, perky breast with Pink nipples. Dark, almost Chestnut skin. And beneath a small patch of Steel colored Fuzz... an opening where his 'Wizards Staff' should be. Long, shapely legs. And Strangely Shaped Hooves. They looked like those Uncomfortable Shoes the Prostitutes Wore.(In other words, Natural Stiletto Heels) Glancing back again, only higher, ge saw a pair of Bat-like wings.
This is a beautiful and rare color scheme for a succubus.
What are the colors of Charlotte's iris and sclera?
Can these Natural Stiletto Heels be used as backclaws in combat?
/To Seal the Truth until time comes, I cast my child away. To save her from the human Scum, I cast my child away. The time shall rise, the moons align, four Fools their souls she'll Reap. And when their blood and bones to fly, Awaken from her sleep. -Lay-d marma-Lahd, Succubus Queen. Good Morning, Daughter./
...does this mean that it wasn't part of "Lay-d marma-Lahd's" plan for Carlos/Charlotte to be transformed or reincarnated into her succubus daughter? ...or was this a merger?
Thanks for the chapter
Eyes will be explained in the next Charlotte chapter.
Title is "Succubusessful Stealth"
And Carlos was always Charlotte, in a way... Her bloodline, as Carlos, Bore the Mark of The Queen... A blood curse. Charlotte, or more specifically A royal succubus, would have ALWAYS been born from the bloodline... and become the replacement for the many daughters of the Queen That bloodline Had slain in the distant past. This too will get more detail soon.
It didn't have to be Carlos, he was just the one it happened to. Why? Just Lucky. I mean, Details in an upcoming chapter. Also, corruption of a Priest, and accidental murder.(and some smut.)
@Darkakuahebi Will the length and diameter of Charlotte's tail also be explained in the next chapter?
And Carlos was always Charlotte, in a way... Her bloodline, as Carlos, Bore the Mark of The Queen... A blood curse. Charlotte, or more specifically A royal succubus, would have ALWAYS been born from the bloodline... and become the replacement for the many daughters of the Queen That bloodline Had slain in the distant past. This too will get more detail soon.
By chance, does this blood curse only afflict the bloodlines of those responsible for slaining the daughters of the succubus queen?
Was the succubus queen's bloodline slain just because of racism or did they do something to justify it?
Now that I think about it, Charlotte doesn't seem at all uncomfortable with her nudity. Do the succubi have nudist tendencies or is she just too concerned about her safety to care?
@Gin_Otamegane all this will be explained soon...
As for the nudity, She's forgotten about it. In this world, Succubi essentially have adhd. They Tend to Hyperfixate on things, in this case, Oh crap, I gotta avoid Demon hunters.
And short answer: yes and no. Racism was part if it, but... Most was just Succubi doing what they do, to the exact wrong person. Piss off a "grand cardinal" of the order, and bam, Crusade.
As for the tail... the ♡ tip Is 2mm thick, widening to 6 inches at the Base. The actual Tail is half an inch in diameter at the ♡, and a full inch at the Base of the spine. Around 3 feet long, strong as steel yet velvety soft(also has fur, btw.) And the ♡ has a (retractable) Spiked ridge down the center, and along the Edges. It is very much a Weapon... with other uses.
@Darkakuahebi
As for the nudity, She's forgotten about it. In this world, Succubi essentially have adhd. They Tend to Hyperfixate on things, in this case, Oh crap, I gotta avoid Demon hunters.
I see. And as a result she also forgot related things, such as that clothes could help hide her demonic traits and thus make it more difficult for demon hunters to notice her.
Now that I stop to think about it, if this country is full of demon hunters why did she and her dead friends go and try to summon a succubus right there?
Did they at least prepare a disguise and hiding place for the succubus?
And short answer: yes and no. Racism was part if it, but... Most was just Succubi doing what they do, to the exact wrong person. Piss off a "grand cardinal" of the order, and bam, Crusade.
ADHD was one of the main causes of succubi choosing their targets poorly, right?
Are the succubi in your story the type that need to suck vitality or mana or sexual energy to live?
As for the tail... the ♡ tip Is 2mm thick, widening to 6 inches at the Base. The actual Tail is half an inch in diameter at the ♡, and a full inch at the Base of the spine. Around 3 feet long, strong as steel yet velvety soft(also has fur, btw.) And the ♡ has a (retractable) Spiked ridge down the center, and along the Edges. It is very much a Weapon... with other uses.
Is the tip a ♡-shaped bulb or spade?
So her tail is 90cm long.
How tall is Charlotte?
..."with other uses." Does this include sexual uses?
@Gin_Otamegane the ♡ is actually Flat, with a ridge of Cartilage Inside, much like an Ear. Also, three Small Spines of bone on either "face" and two Curved Spines on either edge.
It's like a manticores Stinger mixed with a Ankylosaurs club, Only heart shaped and flat(and prehensile, strong as an adult male ogre, and completely Fireproof. Succubi and Incubi are VERY popular amonst the Fire Elementals.).
And to answer the other question...
The Spines contain an aphrodisiac poison, it's as warm as bag of fresh cooked popcorn, and can vibrate AND roll into a blunt Tube... so you tell me if that includes Sexual Uses.(spoiler: definitely does)
@Darkakuahebi
and completely Fireproof. Succubi and Incubi are VERY popular amonst the Fire Elementals.).
If Succubi and Incubi are so popular among Fire Elementals, it must have become much more difficult for spiritual mages in this country and especially for demon hunters and clerics to make contracts with Fire Elementals after they started with this policy of exterminating succubi and incubi, right?
The Spines contain an aphrodisiac poison, it's as warm as bag of fresh cooked popcorn, and can vibrate AND roll into a blunt Tube... so you tell me if that includes Sexual Uses.(spoiler: definitely does)
It certainly has many uses, including sexual ones. But unlike most succubus tails I've seen in the past, as if to compensate for its versatility, Charlotte's tail doesn't have reproductive functions to impregnate other women, right?
@Gin_Otamegane nope. No Yuri Succubi Pregnancy. Incubi exist for that purpose... thats not to say they are the same species, though. Both are Lust Demons, but... well, there's more detail coming soon. Basically, there's such a thing as a Male Succubus and a Female Incubus... but only when formed by a union between the Two species.
Because All Succubi Birth Succubi. All Incubi Father Incubi... So when the Generic Code Wars with itself, Sometimes These happen.
And yeah, the Church of the Nawlins Religion is definitely not liked by Fire. It's why their entire Country is all marshland... No Fire Element to Dry up moisture and harden earth. Naturally, they blame the dFools. the fools.
@Darkakuahebi How about the birth of futanari between the succubi and incubi?
..."dFools"? Do you mean demons?
@Gin_Otamegane yeah... my auto fill glitches out at times... why it cut emons and replaced it with the last word in the sentence, but left the d, I have no idea... heh... Dfools...sounds like a yugioh card. Buncha demon jesters... wait, how is that not a thing?
@Darkakuahebi Because they were more focused on the c