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Announcement
I started writing this story in January of 2018... It started out as just a LitRPG about a male character who gets turned into a female futanari demon. It evolved from there to become a video game that was being played by a female main character. I made the pieces fit together despite drastically changing what the original idea behind the story was, but I have always felt like it felt a little... forced. After discussing with my editor, I have opted to change much of the first arc to make it so that Allie starts playing the game as a female character. This not only removes the "problematic" gay male scene (le gasp! Oh noes! Two guys having sex!), but it also makes everything flow quite a bit better. I will be uploading the edits either tonight or tomorrow along with the 2nd weekly release. I am truly curious to see what you all think of the changes and if you feel like it fits the overall theme better. Thank you all so much for your continued support! How I became the Empress of Hell has become something I am passionate about, and I am absolutely thrilled to be able to share it with you as it evolves and grows.
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As long as Allie remains a female futanari demon after the corruption I'm perfectly fine with her having her pre-corruption self changed to a female angel.
That won't change. She is still gonna have her "magic demon cock."
@Roseofblades Yup!
I can see it being called problematic because of the rape, but just because it's m/m? Good grief.
Still, your story; do what you want with it.
Though may I ask if Nialla is going to receive a similar update?
Nope. Nothing problematic about Nialla. Her originally playing a male character still mirrors Allie's own typical preferences and it was Allie who did the corrupting.
I personally agree with your sentiment regarding the m/m stuff. But people's delicate sensitivities and antiquated views on what is and isn't "appropriate homosexuality" do sadly impact impact reader count.
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@Roseofblades Which is annoying. Don't get me wrong, lesbian scenes are hot, but where's a bi guy supposed to find any m/m content? Or even mmf threesomes where the guys play with each other as well as the woman?
@lightdefender I completely agree. I may be a lesbian... but two guys going at it is HOT AF. Which is why I originally left the beginning the way I did...