By _OVERLORD_
As the night falls, a man sits alone, lost in thought and mourning the loss of his parents on his birthday. He takes a swig from his bottle, trying to numb the pain. However, when he wakes up the next day, he finds himself in a completely new worl
The idea is promising, the story has some inconsistencies (before the rewrite, dunno if it has been rewritten yet), but only one, that really stood out to me. Otherwise, I didn't notice anything major wrong with it, other than grammatical mistakes here and there, and sometimes the sentence just doesn't make sense.
Still though, at lest this one isn't overly dramatic, and pls don't involve gods, had enough of those types of mysteries.
I also think, that this also has a slice of life element to it.
The story starts of strong, then becomes kind of stagnant after a while, and becomes a slice of life story, then we switch pows, and a bit of fun again, then once more, pow switch. Right now the story is stagnant, but it still has potential and I can kind of see where this is going, but I'm more interested in the journey to get there.
Also, please have a monster eat her, I wanna see the reactions.
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I am reviewing this at ch. 11There is not much to like about this story apart from the rather based ending of mc's execution at the start. However the rest of the novel is akin to a inner monologue of a mentally deranged person. There is not "plot" just a string of circumstances and monologue. In addition to that ch 8/9 do not appear to exist in the same timeline? She kills the twins and betrays them (somehow this is cut in a inner monoluge?) next chapter shes at the army again, the very same one she just betrayed. It is probably among the most confusing novels ive ever read. Worst is once you unwrap the confusion, read the chapters a few times to try and understand them you realize that there is no plot in this novel, nothing just senseless rambling. By ch. 11 ive had enough of this. Should this change later on then blame me for my lack of patience. Best wishes go out to mr. Author and gl for continueing this, at least a few people seem to enjoy it. Cant figure out why tho.
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So, honestly, my problems with this story come down to one thing: the main character has about as much personality as a soulless doll.
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This novel absolute S tier. I hope this doesn't go down the slope
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