Overall the writing is good, and the characters are pretty interesting. The weakest parts are the type of thing that's expected to be weak in this sort of novel, and even then some of them still exceed expectations.
However mostly I'm writing this because I think it probably deserves a few warnings. I'm a bit amused to find myself saying that, but here we are. The setting, and some of the main characters, are pretty damned dark. And they don't exactly let up and repent immediately just because MC showed up either. That's fine, and makes sense honestly, but... still. It certainly won't be for everyone.
So, the main things that the prospective reader should probably be aware of going in are rape, snuff (standard cultivation draining to death kind of thing), and at least a twist of NTR (combined with the aforementioned rape and snuff, naturally). I'm sure some people will gladly argue there is zero NTR, and technically they might be right, but whatever. If it's not, it's all but. I'll just spoil it below if you're on the fence.
Spoiler
So if you can't accept a love interest in a s*xual but undefined relationship getting jealous and then going and raping another man to death, this might not be for you. And all it really leads to is some switchy powerplay... so fair warning.
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An 18-year-old poor college student tried to apply for a job as a tutor but his life almost ended as demons’ meal. In his last
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Overall the writing is good, and the characters are pretty interesting. The weakest parts are the type of thing that's expected to be weak in this sort of novel, and even then some of them still exceed expectations.
However mostly I'm writing this because I think it probably deserves a few warnings. I'm a bit amused to find myself saying that, but here we are. The setting, and some of the main characters, are pretty damned dark. And they don't exactly let up and repent immediately just because MC showed up either. That's fine, and makes sense honestly, but... still. It certainly won't be for everyone.
So, the main things that the prospective reader should probably be aware of going in are rape, snuff (standard cultivation draining to death kind of thing), and at least a twist of NTR (combined with the aforementioned rape and snuff, naturally). I'm sure some people will gladly argue there is zero NTR, and technically they might be right, but whatever. If it's not, it's all but. I'll just spoil it below if you're on the fence.
So if you can't accept a love interest in a s*xual but undefined relationship getting jealous and then going and raping another man to death, this might not be for you. And all it really leads to is some switchy powerplay... so fair warning.
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