Grammar is passable but could use a good editor/proofreader to really clean it up and make it shine.
The story itself is not new but is still under-utilized in its mix of western-eastern storytelling and logic.
The writing is nice, and is mostly consistent, except for where grammar becomes a minor issue.
Overall, I really like this story and will definitely continue to follow it unless it takes a sharp turn for the worst in either grammar or storytelling.
Aren’t you tired of the typical cultivation story, where an isekai’d person comes into the world and becomes a brutal or selfish person? I know I am. So instead of being fully changed by the world, I want this protagonist to stick to t
I was reading sh*t before this one
Nice good fantastic
Great
Hope you keep uploading
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Solid so far. A very enjoyable read.
Some minor grammar and spelling issues, but nothing that can't be ignored.
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This is a pretty nice story thus far.
Grammar is passable but could use a good editor/proofreader to really clean it up and make it shine.
The story itself is not new but is still under-utilized in its mix of western-eastern storytelling and logic.
The writing is nice, and is mostly consistent, except for where grammar becomes a minor issue.
Overall, I really like this story and will definitely continue to follow it unless it takes a sharp turn for the worst in either grammar or storytelling.
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