The way the author has the characters express themselves makes my reader brain happy.

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This is by far my favorite fic. It has a great mix of lighthearted moments and funny misunderstandings. The misunderstandings are well set up and planned out, seeming like actual misunderstandings and not far-reaching theories.

Writing quality- The quality is great. The sentences flow smoothly from eachother and I almost never have to reread any sentences mire than once. Any errors that are found are usually fixed by the end of the day.

Updating stability- The novel has had some difficulty with updating stability but the author seems to have found their rythm and it doesn’t look like there will by any issues going forward.

Story development- The story is very slow paced at the start. The first 3 volumes covering the introduction to the diffrent characters and the main character, with some slice of life in between. We also get to know more about the main characters situation and their powers. The end of the 3rd volume marks a bit of a speed up in the story. The main character begins to grow and attempts to come to peace with themselves and their situation.

Character design- The characters are well designed and fleshed out. As you read more you will notice just how much thought has been put into each character. Each character that has apeard has been interesting and 3 dimensional. The characters from the original show have been more fleshed out and some original characters have apeard that seem very interesting

World background- The world is based upon the world of ‘Steven Universe’. But this novel also expands upon the original shows world building. Answering many questions and adding some lore of their own. But it is also a slice of life novel and is mostly working on fleshing out the characters.

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The history starts interesting, a lone frail being in a place forgoten by time, the history develops with a good speed, not fast nor slow, the emotions is well written and so is the pace, the characters are memorable and very much likable, all in all this history for me is a masterpiece being make just for us, so stop reading this and go give it a try, yyou won't be dissapointed.

Good work, luck and health to you author, you deserve this much for what you wrote for us.

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The book is a bit a rough in the beginning but you can tell the author is trying and it gets better over time even though its not my cup of tea due the gender bender tag im still giving it 5 stars out of respect for the effort the author puts into it. Keep going author no matter what you have a good story even if it doesnt mesh well with me

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